Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came?写作练习

unit 5单元写作
写作主题：如何写过去发生的事情的相关文章
1 话题分析
本单元的话题是"过去发生的事情"，此类话题多以记叙文为主，时态常用一般过去时和过去进行时。写人时，要注意介绍人物的身份和经历等；叙事时，要写清事件发生的前因后果及发展过程。
2经典名题
(天津中考)假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟了英文专栏，征集发生在大家身边的感人故事。请根据以下提示，为该专栏投稿。
1.在一个寒冷的早晨，你买早餐时看到前面的女孩买了面包和牛奶。
2.女孩要离开时，发现树下有一个老年乞丐，他看上去又冷又饿。
3.女孩走到乞丐身旁，把食物递给了他。
4.乞丐向女孩道谢，女孩微笑着离开。
5.你很感动……
参考词汇:乞丐 beggar ；感动 be moved
要求：
(1)词数:80——100 个。
(2)开头已给出，不计入总词数。
(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
On a cold morning, while I was
3.写作思维导图
审题 体裁 记叙文 话题 身边的感人故事
时态 一般过去时和 过去进行时 人称 以第三人称为主
段落 布局 介绍时间、 时间:On a cold morning 人物 人物:a girl; an old beggar When the girl was about to leave...介绍事情 He looked cold and hungry... 的经过 The girl came up to the beggar... The beggar... 介绍我的 I was moved by... 感受 I think...
参考词汇
buy breakfast 买早餐；in front of me 在我前面；give sth. to sb.把某物给某人；say thanks to sb.感谢某人；decide to do sth.决定做某事；
be about to do sth.准备做某事
参考句子
1. She/I was... when...当……时,她/我正在……
2. While I/she was..., she/I...当我/她正在……的时候,她/我……
3. I found...我发现……
4. I was moved by...我被……感动。
4.高分例文
①On a cold morning, while I was buying some food for my breakfast, I saw a girl standing in front of me buying some bread and milk. ②When the girl was about to leave, she found an old beggar under the tree.He looked cold and hungry. ③The girl came up to the beggar without thinking twice and gave the food to him.The beggar said thanks to the girl. ④But the girl said nothing and went away with a smile on her face.
I was moved by what the girl did. I think it was the warmest thing on that cold morning.
例文分析：
文章根据事情发生的先后顺序，完整、连贯地叙述了事情的经过，条理清晰，内容完整。
①②句均为含有时间状语从句的复合句，且两处使用了不同的从属连词(while 和 when),这使得文章的句式更加多样化。
③句使用了 came up to the beggar 和 gave the food to him，体现了女孩善良和乐于助人的品质。
④句使用了了作者深厚的语言功底。
5.佳句集锦
1. All this happened, more or less.所有的一切,或多或少都发生过。
2. History is the memory of things said and done.历史是说过和做过事情的记忆。
3. Let bygones be bygones.过去的事就让它过去吧。
4. Enrich your life today; yesterday is history;tomorrow is the unknown.
充实今天的生活,昨日已成历史,明天还是未知数。
6.实战练习
(济宁中考)近年来，使用手机引发的事故越来越多。某英文报纸开辟了" Mobile-related Accidents"专栏，征集案例，警示大众。请你根据下图用英语写一篇记叙文,叙述 Liu Mei 和 Li Dong 放学路上发生的事情。
提示词汇:1.路边 roadside；2.耳机 headphones；3.撞上 bump into/hit
4.鸣喇叭 honk the horn；5.喇叭声 honk
注意：1.短文应涵盖前三幅图片中的主要信息，并对第四幅图片中可能发生的情况做出合理推断和简要评述。
2.词数：100 左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
3.文中不得出现可能透漏考生真实身份的任何信息。
One day, Liu Mei and Li Dong were on the way back home.
参考答案:
One day, Liu Mei and Li Dong were on the way back home. Liu Mei was chatting on We Chat with her friend while Li Dong was listening to music on his mobile phone happily.
Suddenly Liu Mei bumped into a tree by the roadside and she gave a painful cry. What's worse, Li Dong didn't notice what had happened with his headphones on. He went on listening to music. Soon he moved onto the middle of the road. A car was coming from behind. The driver honked the horn loudly, but it was too late!
In the end, Li Dong was sent to hospital. Luckily the doctor saved his life, and he was out of danger. What a lesson!