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先采意定档,后踩点给分。
使用较复杂的句子结构或高级词汇,根据所给信息或文章内容进行适当的拓展的,该作文可适当在同一文档中取较高分值。
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第五档(优)18-20分
很好的完成了规定的写作任务,内容涵盖完整并有拓展,语言流畅,句式多样,文章结构清晰,衔接自然,语法正确,词汇丰富,书写规范(如大小写、拼写、标点符号等)。 如有极个别非关键的单词错误(如名词单复数、冠词、大小写、拼写等错误),视数量扣分。
第四档(良)16-17.5分
较好的完成了规定的写作任务,文章结构清晰,格式正确,书写较为规范(如大小写、拼写、标点符号等)。内容完整,已合理补充作文要求的拓展内容,但句式单一或有少量语言错误。
第三档(中)12-15.5分
能使用合理的人称、正确的时态,所表达的内容基本完整,能够形成可读性的句子,基本能传递信息,有一定的可读性,但逻辑性不强,语句欠通顺,有较多的语言错误。
第二档(差)6.5-11.5分
能正确抄写所有提示内容,尝试使用正确的时态结构来表达,但文章内容残缺不全,只有个别句子有可读性,有很多语言错误,句子成碎片化堆砌,格式不够正确,书写欠规范。
第一档(极差)0-6分
能抄写提示内容;内容严重残缺不全,基本没有传递语言信息的句子,表达错误很多,书写极不规范。
M6 Animals
Hello, everyone! You can see many kinds of animals in the zoo, such as zebras, lions, pandas and so on.
My favourite animal is the deer. There is a deer called Meimei, it’s only three years old. I like it very much because it is very cute and clever. It comes from China, so it’s a Chinese animal. It eats leaves as well as grass for food, they are its favourite. But it doesn’t like meat, so it’s not dangerous. It usually lives in groups. It is brown and it has four strong legs, it is good at running.
I think the deer is very lovely and clever, so I like it best. What about you
M7 Computers
I am a student. There is a computer in my home, and my family shares it together.
I often use the computer to do my homework after school. I also search for information or listen to music on the Internet. I can play computer games at the weekend, but my mother doesn’t like it.
My father is a manager of a company, and he uses the computer to send emails to customers every day. He says the computer is very useful for his work. My mother is a doctor so she usually uses it to make documents for her work. Sometimes she learn to cook on the computer. She likes to download music on the Internet, but she doesn’t like to use it too much. She thinks it is bad for her eyes. My sister is a teacher and she often watches movies on the Internet. She uses the computer to make PPTs for her teaching almost every day. She likes using the computer because it is convenient(方便的).
This is the story of the computer and my family. What about you
M8 Presents
New Year’s Day is coming, and I would like to choose some presents for my family.
There are four people in my family, my father, my mother, my brother and I. My father likes watching football matches, and he usually watches football on television at weekends. So I will choose a football T-shirt for him.
My mother likes to stay healthy, but she sometimes buys chocolate. She always spends a lot of money buying expensive clothes. I would like to give her a silk dress because she likes wearing dresses in summer.
I want to buy a toy car for my brother because he likes it. He collects many kinds of different toy cars and he often plays toy cars with his friends.
I hope they will like my presents, I love them forever.
M9 At this moment
At this moment, in different places of the world, people are doing different things.
It's one o'clock at night in Paris and most people are sleeping. Some people are still working and some are driving home.
In Beijing, the time is different. It's eight o'clock in the morning, so people aren't sleeping. They are working. Students are having classes at school, but some people are having breakfast.
People in New York aren't working. They are having dinner because it's eight o'clock in the evening. Some people are shopping or watching TV.
How interesting it is!
M10 The Spring Festival
My favourite festival is the Spring Festival. It is an important holiday in China, and most Chinese families celebrate it.
It always comes in January or February. It is often cold at this time of year, but people are happy. A few days before the Spring Festival we clean our homes and sweep away all the bad luck a few days. On the evening before the Spring Festival, our family members get together and then have a big family dinner. After dinner, we usually watch TV. There is a great Spring Festival Gala on TV every year.
I have lots of fun in this festival, because my parents always give me presents. I always wear new clothes to visit my grandparents, aunts and uncles. I can also get a hongbao from them. It means lucky money.
I enjoy the Spring Festival a lot. What about you
七上总复习——翻译作文
Tony Smith是我的好朋友。Tony是他的名字,Smith是他的姓。他今年13岁,他来自英国的一个小城市,但他现在和他的父母一起在中国。这是一张他的家庭照片,站在他左边的是他的父亲,他是一个酒店经理,站在他右边的是他的母亲,她是我们学校的英语老师。
我们的学校很大,有六座建筑物:一座图书馆,一座办公楼,一座教学楼,一座餐饮楼,一座体育馆和一座科学楼。图书馆在体育楼的前面,里面有很多书、地图和电脑。在餐饮楼和科学楼中间的是教学楼,有24间教室。
早餐是Tony最喜欢的一餐饭,他喜欢牛奶和汉堡包,早饭后他和我一起去同一所学校,我们学校离家很近,所以我们走路上学。我和他在同一个班。我们8点开始上课,上午有4节课。他最喜欢的日子是星期三,因为在那天他要上历史和语文。历史和语文是他最喜欢的科目,他认为历史难但有趣,语文有用。但我最喜欢的科目是地理,我很擅长它。
我们在学校吃午饭。午餐,他喜欢吃鸡肉、米饭和梨子。我午餐喜欢吃西红柿、胡萝卜和桔子。我们的课在下午4:50结束。放学后,他喜欢和他的朋友打篮球。因为篮球是他最喜欢的运动。晚饭他喜欢面包、蔬菜和苹果。而我喜欢冰淇淋和香蕉。晚饭后他喜欢和父母一起去公园做运动,他喜欢保持健康。
他家里有一台电脑,他跟家人一起共用,他周末可以用电脑,他打游戏,查资料,发邮件,跟朋友聊天。他有时打电脑太久,他的妈妈不喜欢这样。我喜欢用电脑听歌或者看电影。
春节快到了,它是我们国家最重要的节日,所以我们一家都很忙。春节前,我妈妈总是打扫卫生,收拾东西,它意味着扫除霉运。我爸爸总是买很多食物,他还会去看望我的爷爷奶奶。我和我的弟弟会帮家人大扫除,我弟弟会做大红灯笼。除夕夜我们一家会以吃一顿传统大餐的方式来庆祝春节,晚饭后我们通常会看春晚。我们经常穿着红色的新衣服去拜访亲戚,我总是会收到红包,它意味着压岁钱。