备战北京2024年英语中考训练之书面表达25篇其二
6.根据要求完成大作文。
保持善良，传播爱心。我们都曾帮助过别人或接受过别人的帮助。请结合自身经历，以"The Spread of Love"为题，讲述一次你帮助别人或别人帮助你的经历，并谈谈你的感悟及今后的打算。
写作要求：
（1）语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯；
（2）书写工整规范；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
（4）词数：70 词左右。
7.你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题（theme）为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动，交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件，向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.—11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Center
Activities …
Purpose …
注意：
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80词左右（邮件的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday.
Yours,
Li Hua
8.假设你叫李明，你打算向某学生英文网站投稿，分享你做过的一个有趣的梦。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文。
注意：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
（2）不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名；
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
An Interesting Dream
By Li Ming
I have an interesting dream to share with you.
9.假如你是学生会主席田颖，请你给本校优秀毕业生杨洋写一封邀请函。请她于本周日下午一点回学校，在礼堂与大家分享一下高中（senior high school）生活。短文结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Yang Yang，
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Tian Ying
10.初中三年生活转瞬即逝，如今即将毕业离开母校，此时此刻，你是否还记得升入初中第一天的情景呢？请以"My First Day in the Middle School"为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下你入校当天的所见所闻、经历感受，再次体验曾经的美好时光，满怀信心地去迎接新的未来！
要求：（1）语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
（3）短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My First Day in the Middle School When I first walked into the middle school，_____________________
Now I will leave my school.I'm going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me.备战北京2024年英语中考训练之书面表达25篇其二
6.(2023·辽宁省丹东市·历年真题)根据要求完成大作文。
保持善良，传播爱心。我们都曾帮助过别人或接受过别人的帮助。请结合自身经历，以"The Spread of Love"为题，讲述一次你帮助别人或别人帮助你的经历，并谈谈你的感悟及今后的打算。
写作要求：
（1）语言表达准确，语意通顺连贯；
（2）书写工整规范；
（3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
（4）词数：70 词左右。
_______
【答案】The Spread of Love Everyone has different ideas about life.In my opinion，life is beautiful and full of love.Several weeks ago，my classmate Bob was badly ill.He had to be in hospital for a long time.But his family was too poor to afford it.So I decided to raise money to help him.When I sent all the money to Bob，he and his parents were deeply moved.【高分句型一】（一次帮助别人的经历） Helping others makes me happy.Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky，but we should believe that life is beautiful and love will be around us forever.And I will also help more people in the future.【高分句型二】（感悟）
【解析】【高分句型一】
When I sent all the money to Bob，he and his parents were deeply moved.当我把所有的钱都寄给鲍勃时，他和他的父母都深受感动。when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
Maybe sometimes we feel unlucky，but we should believe that life is beautiful and love will be around us forever.也许有时我们会感到不吉利，但我们应该相信生活是美好的，爱会永远在我们身边。that+宾语从句。
能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
7.(2023·广东省广州市·历年真题)你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题（theme）为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动，交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件，向他介绍活动的安排。
Theme Healthy You and Me
Time 8:30 a.m.—11:30 a.m.
Place Sports Center
Activities …
Purpose …
注意：
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80词左右（邮件的开头已给出，不计入词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday.
____________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Sam,
Thank you for joining us in our voluntary work next Saturday. Let me introduce something about the activity to you.
①The theme of the activity is "Healthy You and Me", and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. It will be held in the Sports Center. There are many interesting activities. First, there will be a sports history show. It will be held in our school hall. Besides, "Healthy You and Me" speech will be on, too. If you want to take part, please let us know before this Friday. There will be different kinds of after-school exercise classes, such as football, basketball, tennis and so on. You can choose the one you like.
②The main purpose is to increase students' interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively. I am looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文写作。话题是你是校志愿队队长李华。你校将于下周六组织主题（theme）为“健康你和我”的志愿服务活动，交换生Sam也报名参加。请你根据以下内容写一封电子邮件，向他介绍活动的安排。注意表述清楚，有条理。注意词汇时态等的合理运用。
【结构布局】
引言：表明写作意图，引出对活动的重点介绍；
中心：具体阐述写作内容；
结尾：介绍活动的目的并期望回复；
【亮点词汇】
①introduce...to...介绍……给……
②different kinds of各种不同的
③look forward to期待
【高分句型】
①The theme of the activity is "Healthy You and Me", and it will be held from 8:30 a.m. to 11:30 a.m. next Saturday. （and连接并列句）
②The main purpose is to increase students' interest in sports, and encourage students to take exercise actively.（不定式结构作表语和宾语补足语）
8.(2023·广东省·历年真题)假设你叫李明，你打算向某学生英文网站投稿，分享你做过的一个有趣的梦。请你根据以下思维导图内容提示用英文写一篇短文。
注意：
（1）可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
（2）不能照抄原文：不得在作文中出现真实校名、地名和考生的真实姓名；
（3）语句连贯，词数80左右。作文的标题和开头已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。
An Interesting Dream
By Li Ming
I have an interesting dream to share with you. _______________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】An Interesting Dream
By Li Ming
I have an interesting dream to share with you. In my dream, I became a scientist. The reason why I had this dream may be because I participated in Science Week activities. It had a positive impact on me, as it made me more interested in science.
①In my dream, I was conducting experiments in a laboratory and discovering new things that could help improve the world. ②Although it was just a dream, it has inspired me to pursue a career in science and make a difference in the world.
I am grateful for the Science Week event for sparking my interest in this field.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
【结构布局】
第一步，承接开头，介绍自己的梦境；
第二步，具体阐述做梦的可能原因；
第三步，最后介绍这个梦对自己积极的影响。
【亮点词汇】
①participate in参与
②have a positive impact on对……有积极的影响
③inspire sb to do激励某人做某事
【高分句型】
①In my dream, I was conducting experiments in a laboratory and discovering new things that could help improve the world.（that引导的定语从句）
②Although it was just a dream, it has inspired me to pursue a career in science and make a difference in the world.（although引导的让步状语从句）
9.(2023·辽宁省抚顺市·历年真题)假如你是学生会主席田颖，请你给本校优秀毕业生杨洋写一封邀请函。请她于本周日下午一点回学校，在礼堂与大家分享一下高中（senior high school）生活。短文结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Yang Yang，
_________
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Tian Ying
【答案】Dear Yang Yang，
How is it going？Are you busy recently？There will be an activity in our school hall at 1：00 p.m.this Sunday. 【高分句型一】And we want you to share the life at senior high school as the outstanding graduate.We'll really appreciate it if you can come.【高分句型二】
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Tian Ying
【解析】【高分句型一】
There will be an activity in our school hall at 1：00 p.m.this Sunday.本周日下午一点，我们学校礼堂将有一场活动。There be句型。
【高分句型二】
We'll really appreciate it if you can come.如果你能来，我们将不胜感激。if引导的条件状语从句。
能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
10.(2023·辽宁省抚顺市·历年真题)初中三年生活转瞬即逝，如今即将毕业离开母校，此时此刻，你是否还记得升入初中第一天的情景呢？请以"My First Day in the Middle School"为题，用英语写一篇短文，描述一下你入校当天的所见所闻、经历感受，再次体验曾经的美好时光，满怀信心地去迎接新的未来！
要求：（1）语意连贯，层次清晰，书写规范。
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
（3）短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My First Day in the Middle School When I first walked into the middle school，________.
Now I will leave my school.I'm going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me.
【答案】My First Day in the Middle School When I first walked into the middle school，I was excited as well as worried.I was excited because I was a student of junior middle school now.I was worried because I didn't quite know about the teachers and students in this school.I was afraid I couldn't fit in well.However，when I sat down at my desk and began to know about my teachers and classmates，I found everyone was really nice to me. 【高分句型一】Teachers were very kind and ready to help us.My classmates were active and easy to get along with.After class，I played soccer with my newly-made friends on the playground.Looking at the beautiful campus，I gradually forgot my nervousness.I felt at home.At the end of that first school day，I felt no more fear and I believed I would have lots of fun at this new school.【高分句型二】
Now I will leave my school.I'm going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me.
【解析】【高分句型一】
However，when I sat down at my desk and began to know about my teachers and classmates，I found everyone was really nice to me.然而，当我坐在书桌前，开始了解我的老师和同学时，我发现每个人都对我很好。when引导的时间状语从句。
【高分句型二】
At the end of that first school day，I felt no more fear and I believed I would have lots of fun at this new school.在学校的第一天结束时，我不再感到恐惧，我相信我会在这个新学校有很多乐趣。I believed+宾语从句。
能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
