Unit 8 How do you make a banana milk shake?写作 人教版八年级英语上册

unit 8单元写作
写作主题：如何写文学和音乐的相关文章
1 话题分析
本单元的话题是"文学和音乐"，和该话题有关的书面表达通常以学生们较为熟悉的内容为切入点，如要求学生用一般现在时、现在完成时介绍或谈论一本书、一个乐队、一个歌手或一个作家等。 写作时，可先介绍想写的人/物，然后具体谈谈其相关情况或喜欢该人/物的原因，最后可表达自己的感受或愿望等。文章要层次分明、感情真挚。
2经典名题
(2020·盐城中考)学校网站英语栏目将组织读书分享征文活动，请根据提示，写一篇短文投稿。
注意事项：
(1)词数：100 词左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)；
(2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
(3)文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
My favourite book
Good books are valuable treasures. Among all the books I've read
3.写作思维导图
审题 体裁 说明文 话题 最喜欢的一本书
时态 以一般现在时 和现在完成时为主 人称 以第一人称为主
段落 布局 介绍书名 Among all the books I've read, I 及其梗概 like... best. The book is about... First, I like... 喜欢的原因 Second, the book teaches me to... ..... 整体评价 the book not only gives me... but also tells me...
参考词汇
treasure 珠宝;财富；main character 主角；fight against/with 与………作斗争;与………进行搏斗；be in trouble 处于困境中；give up 放弃；
be afraid of害怕……… ；in the end 最后
参考句子
1. My favourite... is.../I like... best. 我最喜欢的……是……
2. I like it/him/her because... 我喜欢它/他/她是因为……
3. I have learned a lot from...我从……中学到了很多。
4. I like it so much that I have read it many times.
我是如此喜欢它以至于我已经读了许多遍。
5. It not only gives me... but also tells me...它不仅给我……，而且告诉我……
4.高分例文
My favourite book
Good books are valuable treasures. Among all the books I've read, I like Journey to the West best. The book is about four men's trip to the west. On their way,they meet many bad people and fight against them.
①I like it so much that I have read it many times. ②First, I like Monkey King very much. He is the main character of the book. ③He can make 72 changes and he is brave enough to fight with any bad person and he can always win the fights at last.④Second, this book teaches me never to give up when I am in trouble.⑤If we are brave enough and not afraid of difficulties, we will succeed in the end.
All in all,⑥the book not only gives me a lot of fun but also tells me what to do when I have trouble.
例文分析：
本文结构清晰、层次分明、衔接自然，既包含题目所给要点，也有自行发挥。其中亮点词汇和句型有：
①使用 so... that...结构,表达了作者对《西游记》的喜爱之情；
②④处分别使用 First 和 Second,清晰地点明了喜爱这本书的原因；
③句使用 brave enough to do sth. 、fight with 等结构和短语，点明了美猴王的勇敢；
⑤句使用含有if引导的条件状语从句的复合句，丰富了文章的句式结构；
⑥句运用 not only... but also...结构,对该书作了整体评价。
5.佳句集锦
1. Reading good books is like talking with many noble people.
读好书就像和许多高尚的人谈话。
2. Reading makes a full man.阅读使人充实。
3. A good book is like a good friend.好友如挚友。
4. In the world of music, I can be free and speak freely.
在音乐世界里，我可以自由自在，畅所欲言。
6.实战练习
(金华中考)假如你应邀参加一个国际读书会，并将分享自己读过的一本好书。请根据下列表格中的要点，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你要分享的书。
Key points (要点) Words and expressions for reference (参考词汇)
What the name is The Old Man and the Sea ···
Who wrote it Ernest Hemingway, America ...
What it is about fisherman, fight against fish and nature ···
Why I like it meaningful, never give up, well-known sentence:"Man is not made for defeat(失败)."... interesting, helpful.. well-known sentence:.··
注意：
(1)可选择使用所给的书名及内容，也可另选书籍；
(2)短文内容可适当增加；
(3)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(4)词数:80——100;
(5)短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
The book I'd like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea
参考答案:
The book I'd like to share with you is The Old Man and the Sea, written by the American writer Ernest Hemingway. This book tells about a fisherman who is lucky enough to catch a huge fish at sea, but finds it hard to take it home. On the way home, he has to fight against the fish and the sea as well.
What I like most about the book is that the fisherman never gives up when meeting with difficulties. I still remember one of the most well-known sentences from the book:Man is not made for defeat. This tells us that nothing seems terrible as long as we have a strong will and a brave heart.