unit 9单元写作
写作主题:如何写介绍某一地方的相关文章
1 话题分析
本单元话题是"有趣的地方",与之相关的写作内容通常是介绍自己曾经去过的旅游景点或自己的家乡等。在写这类文章时,可先介绍景点或家乡的基本情况,然后具体描述该地方,最后谈一谈自己的感受。
2经典名题
假定你叫李华。你的笔友 Peter 发邮件说他打算暑假来四川旅游。请你用英语给他回复一封邮件,从游玩、美食等方面介绍四川。
参考词汇:景点 place of interest 火锅 hotpot
注意:1.内容必须包括所给信息;
2.词数:80 左右(邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3.可适当增加细节,不得出现个人真实信息。
Dear Peter,
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
3.写作思维导图
审题 体裁 应用文 (电子邮件) 话题 介绍四川
时态 一般现在时和 现在完成时 人称 以第三人称为主
段落布局 引出话题→ I'm glad to hear that you're planning to visit... …many places of interest... such as... 介绍四川 many delicious Sichuan dishes... Sichuan Opera is a typical local opera... 表达期盼→I'm looking forward to seeing you soon.
参考词汇
have been to 去过……;local opera当地戏剧;Sichuan dishes 川菜
参考句子
1. Have you ever been to... 你曾经去过……吗
2. I have been to... many times. 我去过……许多次。
3. I fell in love with it when... 当……的时候,我就喜欢上它了。
4. I hope you can have a great time here.我希望你能在这儿玩得很开心。
5. I'm sure you'll like it.我确信你会喜欢它的。
4.高分例文
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear that you're planning to visit Sichuan during the summer vacation. I hope you'll have a great time here.
①Have you ever heard of anything special in Sichuan Many places of interest in Sichuan are very famous,②such as Mount Emei and Jiuzhaigou National Park, where you can enjoy different wonderful natural scenery. There are many delicious Sichuan dishes for you to taste. Hotpot is the most famous. Besides, Sichuan Opera is a typical local opera in Sichuan Province. ③It is well worth watching.
④I think Sichuan is a good place for you to spend your summer vacation. I'm looking forward to seeing you soon.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
例文分析:
范文紧扣题目要求,介绍了四川的美景、美食等,并在文章最后表达了自己的感受与期待。范文简明扼要,结构清晰,语言表达到位。
①使用现在完成时引出后面对四川的特色的介绍;
②运用 such as 列举了四川的著名景点;
③使用了 be worth doing 结构,表明了川剧值得观看。
5.佳句集锦
1. If you don't go traveling, what you miss will be more than scenery.
如果你不去旅游,你错过的将不只是风景。
2. A traveler without knowledge is like a bird without wings.
没有知识的旅行者就如同没有翅膀的鸟儿。
3. For the youth, travel is part of education; for the elderly, it is part of experience.
对年轻人来说,旅行是教育的一部分;对老年人来说,它是阅历的一部分。
6.实战练习
(2019日照中考)假如你是李华,你的外国朋友 Jack计划今年暑假来日照旅游度假。请你根据以下提示,给他写一封信。
1.介绍日照地理位置、气候环境等;
2.向他推荐一至两处景点;
3.询问具体计划,以便做好准备。
要求:1.根据提示内容,不要逐字翻译;
2.文中不能出现真实的人名和校名;
3.词数90 左右。
Dear Jack,
I'm glad to learn that you are coming to Rizhao for your summer vacation.
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案:
Dear Jack,
I'm glad to learn that you are coming to Rizhao for your summer vacation. Rizhao is in the southeast of Shandong. It's a very beautiful and clean city. The weather here is very perfect. It’s not cold in winter or very hot in summer. It is a good choice to go to the beach in Rizhao. There you can lie on the beach and enjoy the beautiful sunshine. You can also pay a visit to Wulian Mountain. The air is very fresh there. What's your travelling plan Please write to me soon so that I can get ready for it.
Yours,
Li Hua