Unit 7 What's the highest mountain in the world?写作（含答案）

unit 7单元写作
写作主题：如何写保护野生动物的相关文章
1 话题分析
本单元的话题是"世界知识"，要求学生学会写保护野生动物的文章。学生可以利用本单元学到的知识来介绍一种或几种珍稀野生动物的现状，并谈谈如何保护它们。在写作时，要正确使用基数词以及形容词和副词的比较级和最高级。
2经典名题
(2020遵义中考)2020 年 3 月 3 日是联合国第七个"世界野生动植物日"，我国提出了"维护全球生命共同体"的主题。我们的世界因这些生物而丰富多彩、妙趣横生。保护它们，就是守护我们的未来。下面，让我们一起来听听熊猫惜惜的倾诉吧！
假如你是熊猫惜惜，请根据以下信息给人类朋友写一封80 词左右的书信。
要求：1.信中包含所给信息内容；2.适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
注意：1.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
2.书信的开头和结尾已为你写出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇:symbol(n.象征)，destroy(v.破坏)
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi.
Yours,
Xixi
3.写作思维导图
审题 体裁 应用文(书信) 话题 保护野生动物
时态 以一般现在时为主 人称 以第一人称为主
段落 布局 I'm 13 years old. I come from Sichuan, China. About myself I am a national treasure of China and a symbol of China. I like to... I like... best. People often destroy my home... My problems My friends are fewer and fewer... My favorite food is getting less and less. My hope I hope human friends can...
参考词汇
one of... ..之一；a symbol of... ..的一个象征；come from 来自；
play with 和……玩耍；move around 四处走动；cut down 砍倒
参考句子
1. I am a national treasure of China and a symbol of China.
我是中国的国宝，并且是中国的一个象征。
2. The number of... is getting smaller and smaller.……的数量正变得越来越少。
3. People often destroy my home.人们经常破坏我的家园。
4. I hope you can give me more space to live in.
我希望你们能给我更多的生活空间。
5. If you can cut down fewer trees, I will....
如果你们能少砍些树木，我将会……
4.高分例文
Dear friends,
My name is Xixi. I'm one of your friends ——a panda. I come from Sichuan, China. I am 13 years old. I am a national treasure of China and a symbol of China.① I like to play with my friends in the tree. I like eating bamboo best. It's my favorite food.But I've had some problems recently. People often destroy my home and I don't have much room to move around. ②My friends are fewer and fewer and there is no one to play with me. I am very lonely. ②My favorite food is getting less and less. That makes me sad.
③ I hope human friends can protect the environment and give me more space to live in. ④If you can cut down fewer trees, my friends and I will be very happy.
Yours,
Xixi
例文分析：
本篇习作语句连贯、层次分明：第一段以熊猫的名义进行了自我介绍；第二段讲述了自己的烦恼；第三段表达了自己的愿望。整篇文章结构完整、思路清晰、语言表达准确。
①用 like to do sth. 、like doing sth.表达了自己的喜好；
②用 + and+ 比较级数量和竹子数量越来越少的现状；
③用 hope + 宾语从句境的期望；
④用含有if引导的条件状语从句的复合句表达了自己的期望。
5.佳句集锦
1. Many people fail to realize how close they are to success when they give up.
很多人没意识到当他们放弃时，他们距离成功是多么地近。
2. You just can't beat the person who never gives up.
你就是无法击败一个永不放弃的人。
3. Success is not final, failure is not fatal; it is the courage to continue that counts.
成功不是终点,失败也不是灾难，重要的是继续前进的勇气。
4. Our greatest weakness lies in giving up. The most certain way to succeed is always to try just one more time.
我们最大的弱点在于放弃，再多尝试一次，永远是最保险的成功方式。
6.实战练习
10 月4 日是世界动物日,你校组织以"I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals"为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以李明的名义写一篇英语演讲稿来参加比赛，内容要点如下：
你的品质 善良，善待动物
你的爱好 ……(至少两点)
你的事迹 为Save China's Tigers 筹款……(至少一点)
你的感悟 动物是人类的朋友；保护动物就是保护我们自己
你的打算 .....(至少两点)
要求:
1.词数100左右。
2.所写短文必须包括表格中的内容。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
参考答案:
I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals
Hello everyone，I’m Li Ming.I’m glad to make a speech here. I want to be a volunteer of protecting animals. I am kind to others, and I treat animals kindly. I like playing football and the guitar. I have ever organized an activity to raise money for Save China's Tigers. And I always keep some homeless little animals.
Animals are our friends. We should love them. I think protecting animals is protecting ourselves.
If I can be a volunteer, I will work harder and do more meaningful things to protect animals. I will advise more people to love animals like me. I must try my best to make the world more united.
Thanks for listening!