新教材2024高考英语二轮专题复习专题通关必测40分写作规范练(6份打包,含答案)

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40分写作规范练(二)
写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
[2023·长郡中学模拟试卷(二)]假定你是学生会主席李华,下周学校要接待来自澳大利亚的交换生,你将作为学生代表致欢迎辞。请为此写一篇发言稿,内容包括:
1.表示欢迎;
2.介绍活动安排;
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[2023·石家庄市教学质量检测(三)]I had been working in a game reserve (野生动物保护区) in South Africa for many years. Though a part of me longed for the busy familiarity of Paris, I knew my life was in South Africa.
One night there was a sharp knock on my door. I wasn't expecting a visitor. “Francoise It's me,” a woman whispered. I threw open the door. “Amanda What's wrong?”
Amanda, a thin young woman, was our chef. She motioned for me to come outside. “There's a baby Ellie here.”
“An elephant?”
“She's right over there, tiny and terrified.”
“It must be ET's baby daughter,” I said.
Amanda explained that she'd heard a noise outside her room. She'd taken her flashlight, opened the door and shined it across the garden. A tiny elephant stared back at her, eyes in terror. Not knowing what to do, Amanda had closed the door and climbed out of a back window to call me.
Elephants are fantastic mothers—ET would never leave her baby unattended. Apparently, the baby elephant had somehow slipped under the fence.
Amanda and I had to get her inside the house to keep her safe until we could get her back to her mother. Her frightened eyes stared at us through the leaves. I walked slowly toward the Ellie. She watched me but as soon as I was within touching distance, she ran behind the house. Amanda and I ran after her. Finally, we managed to corner the Ellie in the parking area. She stood completely still, head down and eyes flashing anxiously at any movement or sound. I tried approaching her again, and this time she didn't resist, allowing us to gently get her into my home.
I kept talking to her, telling her she was safe and that we would get her back to her mum. Then I called the reserve center for help and, to our relief, they promised to come right away.
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Realizing the Ellie might be thirsty, I told Amanda to get her some milk.________________________________________________________________________
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40分写作规范练(二)
第一节
答案:
Dear Australian friends,
On behalf of our school, I feel greatly privileged to convey warm welcome to you. We are delighted to have you with us.
To make your stay here memorable, various activities will be arranged to enhance our mutual understanding and experience different culture. As planned, we will hold a talent show where everyone can show their outstanding performances. Classes on traditional Chinese culture are also scheduled, such as paper cutting, Chinese opera, calligraphy, etc, followed by a gift exchanging activity. Additionally, you're invited to pay a visit to surrounding tourist attractions.
Finally, I sincerely hope that you can enjoy yourself and wish you a pleasant journey. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节
【语篇解读】 本文以人物线索展开,讲述了一天夜里,阿曼达发现了走丢的小象惊恐地躲在花园的树叶丛里之后来找我帮忙。为了保证小象的安全并把她带回她妈妈身边,阿曼达和我经过了一番努力,终于把她带回家并打电话给了保护中心。
解析:1.段落续写
①由第一段首句内容“意识到艾莉可能渴了,我让阿曼达给她拿些牛奶。”可知,本段可以写小象在家里的一些情况。②由第二段首句内容“不久,我们听到一辆卡车在土路上行驶的声音。”可知,本段可以写我们和工作人员一起把小象送回到象妈妈身边。
2.续写线索:给小象牛奶——她紧张不敢喝———我们安慰示好——小象喝了牛奶并信任我们——听到救援人员的声音——一起护送小象找妈妈——找到象妈妈——我感到宽慰
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RealizingtheElliemightbethirsty, ItoldAmandatogethersomemilk. After Amanda poured the milk into a bowl and put it near Ellie, however, so nervous and frightened was Ellie that she stepped backward, hungrily looking at the milk. In order to relieve Ellie of her tense, we softly called her and drank some of the milk, signaling it was safe and tasty. When we placed the milk on the ground again and hid away, Ellie ate it up with caution. Knowing that we were safe and kind, Ellie gradually calm down when we approached her.
Soon, weheardthesoundofatruckonthedirttrack. Out came two men after the truck pulled off. They reminded us that if her mother couldn't find her, she would attack people and village around and the best way was to send Ellie back as soon as possible. After toughly searching for Ellie's mother, we finally caught the glimpse of her figure, who was extremely unsettled and upset. Meanwhile, Ellie had already run off for her mother joyfully. We all relieved, seeing Ellie went out of sight with her mother.40分写作规范练(六)
写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
[2023·浙江省杭州市高三一模]假定你是某国际学校学生李华,你的爱尔兰笔友Kelly对你提到的学校“多元文化日”(Multicultural Day)活动很感兴趣。请回信告知他关于该活动的相关信息。内容包括:
1.活动时间;
2.活动目的和内容。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Eggs, bacon, bagels, and croissants (羊角面包)—her favourite meal of the day sat right in front of her telling her to have more, probably just this one day. Her hand reached out for the last croissant. “ STOP,” said her mind; “PLEASE,” begged the nineteen year old heart. Annie could feel the tyres around her waist, weighing her down, emotionally and physically. She pulled her hand back, eyeing the inviting croissant, which would have been hers, if only she had not decided to follow her dream, a dream which seemed beyond her reach.
But there she was. She wanted it, and wanted it badly, a fantasy of a teenager to fit into the beautiful peacock blue swimsuit. A trip had been planned, to the sunny beaches, by a group of friends, and the trip included her. She used to sit depressedly, listening to her slim friends discuss about the kind of clothes they purchased, and how smart each of their skirts was, and how beautiful they looked. She wanted to see their expressions change from surprise to admiration, so she decided to go on a diet and take fitness courses.
Weeks passed, and her patience started to die away. The fat was stubborn and refused to melt fast, but the time went fast. No matter how less she ate, she still looked awfully plump (胖乎乎的), which annoyed her, and she was ready to call it quits. She sat on her bed and wept the entire evening, ignoring her dinner. Her tears dried up, and she lay down on her bed staring at the ceiling, letting random thoughts pass through her mind. Then she heard two women talking outside her window. She heard one woman saying, “My child is special, and every child is a gift. It doesn't matter what's on the outside, and the inner self is what matters. ”
注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式作答。
Curious, Annie got up and looked out of her window.________________________________________________________________________
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40分写作规范练(六)
第一节
答案:
Dear Kelly,
Knowing that you are interested in Multicultural Day of our school, I am writing to introduce it to you. It is designed to increase the students' understanding of different cultures all over the world. We celebrate it on July 1st every year, when we organize a variety of activities such as dance performances, exhibitions and fashion shows and so on. It is through these activities that we can have a deeper understanding of different cultures around the world. For example, during the dance performance, we can enjoy dances performed by students from different countries.
Yours,
Li Hua
第二节
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了安妮对自己的身材不满意,一直梦想着减肥之后去沙滩穿漂亮的泳衣,但是一位女士的话激起了安妮的好奇心。这位女士认为,每个孩子都很特别,是一份馈赠,并且真正的美不在于外表,而在于心灵。
解析:1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“安妮好奇地起身,看着窗外”可知,第一段可描写窗外的场景。
②由第二段首句内容“安妮把视线从这个场景移开,在镜子里看到了自己的身影”可知,第二段可描写安妮看到自己丰润的体态,最终感悟到女孩真正的美不在于外表。
2.续写线索:观看——互动——微笑——照镜子——回忆——感悟
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Curious, Anniegotupandlookedoutofherwindow. There, sitting by the woman's feet, was a boy playing with a Rubik's Cube, his face twisting with each turn of the cube and his eyes fixed on the colourful object. Despite his plain face, there was something angelic about this boy when he showed his mother the finished cube. The mother smiled at him as if he had been the most handsome boy in the world.
Annieturnedhereyesawayfromthesceneandsawherownfigureinthemirror. Yes, she was plump and her face was chubby. But she was healthy and her skin was rosy. With loving starry eyes and curly hair, she looked almost like some lady from a classic portrait. Mum once said when she played Beethoven on the piano in her purple dress, she looked like a real princess. She smiled at her reflection, first uncertainly and then with more confidence. She made a new decision. She would throw her “dream” into the dustbin. After all, a girl doesn't have to fit into a swimsuit to be beautiful.40分写作规范练(三)
写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
[2023·南京市高三年级第二次模拟]假定你是校学生会主席李华,外教Mike被评为本学期“最受欢迎教师”。请写一份颁奖词,内容包括:
1.回顾Mike的工作;
2.简述他获奖的理由。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[2023·江苏省徐州市高三考前模拟]Mama and Papa were like most parents. They wanted the best for their kids. Jeff and Jenna were like most kids. They wanted the best for themselves—the best place in front of the TV, the biggest piece of cake and the most candies.
One night, when the noisy kids were sound asleep, Mama lay awake worrying. She sighed a big sigh, thinking how to teach Jeff and Jenna to mend their selfish ways. Lecturing didn't work.
As Mama lay there, she thought about how kids learn. Kids learn by doing. They learn to walk by walking. That's the answer, thought Mama. The kids will learn to help others by helping others. But questions of who, when, and where went unanswered as she drifted off to sleep.
To her pleasure, those questions were soon answered. The next day, they happened to meet Mrs. Marie, the elderly widow who lived just down the road, at the checkout line at the supermarket.
Mama asked the kids to say hello to Mrs. Marie, about whom the kids were a little nervous. She was really old and kind of bent over. And there was that crooked cane she used when she walked. But the real reason they were nervous about her was that two days ago their ball had gone into her yard and knocked over some flowers in the garden and broke the glasses of the attic. They had never apologized.
When Mama and the kids were loading their groceries into the car, Mrs. Marie came out of the supermarket pushing her little collapsible shopping cart.
“Where are you going?” called Mama.
“To the bus stop,” she said, “The bus goes right by my house.” “So does our car,” said Mama.
注意: 1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Mama asked the kids to help Mrs. Marie into the car and put her things in the trunk (后备箱).
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40分写作规范练(三)
第一节
答案:
Dear all,
I'm honored to announce that this semester's “Most popular teacher” goes to Mike!
He gives our grade oral English, encouraging us to speak more. Besides, he is responsible for our Drama Club, where we rehearse together and present marvelous plays under his professional guidance.
Mike is worthy of this award. His exceptional teaching ability has greatly boosted our confidence in expressing ourselves. What's more, his passion for teaching and friendliness to students make learning with him a really enjoyable experience.
Now let's welcome our principal to present this award to Mike!
第二节
【语篇解读】 本文以事件发展为线索展开,讲述了妈妈着急不知道如何教给孩子要乐于助人,从帮助邻居老太太中得到了灵感,让孩子们从帮助邻居老太太做事中感受到了成长。
解析:1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“妈妈让孩子们把玛丽夫人扶上车,把她的东西放在行李箱里”可知,第一段可描写作者在与邻居老太太的谈话中,让孩子们感受到独自居住的不便之处。②由第二段首句内容“当汽车驶近玛丽太太家时,妈妈做了一个决定”可知,第二段可描写作者号召孩子们帮助邻居老太太做家务,她们帮助老太太搬东西、擦洗等,感受到了帮助别人的快乐。
2.续写线索:让孩子帮忙——老太太赞美——独居话题——感受到独居的不便——提议帮忙做家务——孩子们参与劳动——感受到帮助别人的快乐——感悟
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MamaaskedthekidstohelpMrs. Marieintothecarandputherthingsinthetrunk (后备箱). “My goodness, it must be wonderful to have such helpful kids.” Mrs. Marie exclaimed. When the kids realized they were being praised, they broke into a smile, leaning forward to hear better. Mama noticed their change. Here it was the chance. She asked Mrs. Marie, “Is it convenient for you to live alone?”, to which Mrs. Marie's answer was definitely not. Sometimes, it was really difficult for an old lady like her to get helpers.
AsthecarwasapproachingMrs. Marie'shouse, Mamamadeadecision. “Kids, shall we help Mrs. Marie do some chores?” Sensing Mrs. Marie was looking at them hopefully, the kids said yes though hesitant. Jenna helped Mrs. Marie into the room, while Jeff brought in all the items. Mama pitched in and helped. Under guidance, the two of them put the items in place. With Mama's company, they went upstairs to fix the broken attic window, and then downstairs to water the flowers in the garden. A smile flashing on her face, Mama felt relieved to see that kids had learnt to help others by helping.40分写作规范练(四)
写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
[2023·湖南省百所学校高三上联考]假定你是李华,上个月你去了长城旅游。请你就此写封电子邮件和外国网友Lucy分享此事,内容包括:
1.描述过程;
2.你的体会;
3.建议她去长城旅游。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Lucy,
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第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[2023·浙江省高三5月模拟卷]It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove us up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. “The day starts at dawn on my farm,” he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don't be late for supper,” Uncle Paul cried, “and keep to the track so that you don't get lost!”“OK!” my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoon sun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven (编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
注意: 1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。
Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.________________________________________________________________________
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第一节
DearLucy,
Howareyoudoing Last month, I went on a trip to the Great Wall with my parents.
There were a lot of tourists, among whom were some foreigners. I climbed for a few hours with perseverance and eventually reached the desired destination. I was struck by the height and glory of the Great Wall. I was full of admiration for the ancient people of China because they made a lot of efforts to build it.
I know you are eager to visit the Great Wall, so I recommend you enjoy its beauty in the near future. I'm convinced that it will bring you a different travel experience. Best wishes !
Yours,
LiHua
第二节
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活,见父亲和叔叔骑马,儿子也很想骑,于是亲身上马体验的经历。
解析:1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“突然,一只小兔子跳到了我的马前。”可知,第一段可描写兔子出现后带来的反应扩展开,可以写马的反应,也可以写人的反应,但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。②由第二段首句内容“我们不知道自己在哪里,天黑了。”可知,第二段可呼应前文保罗叔叔的叮嘱——不要延误吃晚饭,可从如何寻路返回农场去写。
2.续写线索:兔子出现——马受惊——迷路——天黑——被叔叔找到——到达农舍
答案:
Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse. Its abrupt appearance scared my horse, making it run off the track wildly. I spared no efforts to hold on as hard as I could and my dad was trying to keep up, extremely worried about my safety. Fortunately, minutes later, the horse stopped before a river, out of breath. Relieved, we looked around trying to find the track. However, it was nowhere to be found. So aimlessly did the frightened horse run that we got lost unconsciously.
Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark. Nothing in sight was familiar and neither did we know where the farm house was. Just at the point of desperation, from the distance came a faint voice. “It must be Uncle Paul,” I exclaimed excitedly. That we didn't come back for dinner made him realize something unusual might have happened. So my uncle went out to look for us. Finally, we reached our uncle's farm house safe and sound.40分写作规范练(五)
写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
[2023·石家庄市部分学校二轮复习联考]2023年5月19日是濒危物种日(Endangered Species Day 2023),为提高保护野生动植物的意识,你校学生会向全校师生发布了一条征文信息,请你按要求写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.保护野生动物的重要性;
2.你校的宣传活动;
3.你的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[2023·山东省青岛市第三次适应性检测]I used to be the only child in the family. Everything changed when Tex was born, and I was ten at that time. It seemed to me that Tex got too much attention from Mom and Dad, and I constantly felt a sense of depression. However, my little six year old brother had no idea about that, sticking with me all day long, which sometimes really annoyed me.
Last week, I was creating a birthday book for Dad. I worked forever making each picture as perfect as possible. Every time I messed up, I started all over again, so the floor under the kitchen table was covered with half finished drawings.
“It's family chore time,” Mom announced. “And you're on laundry folding duty,” she told me.
“OK,” I said. “After that, I'll just put the finishing touches on Dad's present.”
“I can help, too!” said my little brother, Tex.
I felt a little uncomfortable. But Mom touched his head gently and said, “Of course, baby, you can.” Then she turned to me, “And, Anna, please always remember to move those papers from the floor to the recycling bin in the yard when you're done with your project.”
I folded the laundry as fast as possible. Just as I was about to get back to the birthday book, my friend showed up. After checking with Mom, we headed to the park. But as soon as we arrived there, the sky filled with giant gray clouds and rain started pouring down. I was upset as I headed back home, dripping wet. That's when my heart pretty much stopped. Right there, in front of the recycling bin, was a box full of wet through papers. And not just any papers ... I ran to rescue my birthday book drawings. But it was too late. As I picked up my once perfect pictures, they were totally ruined!
I cried, “Tex, how did they get out here in the rain?”
Nervously, he came out and said, “Sorry, but I meant to help. I heard what Mom said, and I did it for you. But I had no idea why your birthday book was in those papers.”
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Needless to say, I was going to explode.________________________________________________________________________
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Wildlife plays a vital role in maintaining the balance of nature and preserving biodiversity. Wildlife is also an important part of human culture. We humans need to live in harmony with wild animals and plants.
To celebrate Endangered Species Day 2023, we'll put up posters, create short videos, and hold lectures and knowledge contests to raise our awareness of protecting endangered species, which will be welcomed by teachers and students.
I think we should reduce demands for wildlife products by not purchasing them. More importantly, severe laws must be carried out to punish whoever destorys endangered wildlife.
第二节
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了作者从独子变成了有弟弟后的心路历程。故事展现了两个孩子如何一起为父亲制作一份特别的生日礼物,并且教会了女孩欣赏她的弟弟的善良和创造力。
解析:1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“不用说,我快要爆炸了。”可知,第一段可描写作者很生气,但是发现弟弟并不是有意的,道歉后决定一起给父亲制作了生日礼物。②由第二段首句内容“我们两个决定给爸爸做一份大礼物”可知,第二段可描写作者和弟弟一起制作的过程,发现弟弟很有创意,最终礼物得到了父亲的称赞及作者的感悟。
2.续写线索:生气——道歉——做礼物——惊讶——收集材料——感激——感悟
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Needlesstosay, Iwasgoingtoexplode. I couldn't help but feel frustrated when all my hard work on the birthday book was ruined in a matter of seconds. But as I looked at Tex's innocent face, I realized that he didn't mean any harm. I apologized to him for getting angry and explained why those papers were important to me. Tex smiled and suggested that we do something together for Dad's birthday.
WetwodecidedtomakeonebigpresentforDad.We began to prepare and discussed how we could make Dad feel surprised and touched. Tex was really creative and came up with some unique ideas that surprised me. Working with him made the process much more enjoyable. We gathered suitable materials and started to create the gift. Throughout the process, I was happy that Tex and I could work together and complete the special present. In the end, Dad really appreciated the thought and effort we put into his present. I learned that working together as a family can create some of the best memories.40分写作规范练(一)
写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
[2023·安徽省名校联盟高三4月联考]你所在的国际学校近期将举办首届“校园劳动节”,请你代表学生会写一则通知,通知学生们参加活动。内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动内容;
3.注意事项。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Students' Union
November 28th
第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
[2023·武汉市高中毕业生四月质量检测]Maria and Peter lived in a coastal city. The greatest pleasure in summer for them was to swim at their local beach after school. But one day they started to lose their enthusiasm for swimming in the waters. More often than not, they would find plastic bags thrown on the beach. Worse sill, as they swam in the water, some plastic bags would float around them and even stick to their legs when they walked to the shore.
They were upset and decided something needed to be done to stop the beautiful sea becoming consumed by waste.One weekend,Maria and Peter brought a big bag to the beach and determined to clean it up. Sweat streamed down from their forehead while they bent down and picked up the plastic bags. To their disappointment, after a day's hard work, there were still many plastic bags lying on the beach or floating in the water. Going home with aching legs and arms, Maria and Peter were almost defeated by a strong sense of failure.
That night over dinner with their parents, the pair ate silently. Noticing their low spirits, Mother asked gently, “You two looked so down. What happened?”Exchanging glances with Peter, Maria replied in a low voice,“It's those annoying plastic bags. We tried to clean up but it was just impossible.”Understanding the pair's disappointment, their father patted them on the back and comforted, “Well, it's really hard for just two of you to fix such a big problem.” “Just two of us.” complained Maria and Peter, looking at each other.Suddenly, an idea flashed through their minds, their eyes shining with excitement.“Yes,that's the point! We should make more people aware of the problem and encourage them to take action!” the pair said in chorus.
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Quickly finishing their dinner, the pair went upstairs and started planning.________________________________________________________________________
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第一节
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Recently, in order to stimulate students' enthusiasm for labor and encourage students to actively participate in labor practice, our school is planning the first Campus Labor Day. As scheduled, it will be held on December 1st in the playground. By then, there will be many activities you can take part in, including sweeping up the fallen leaves on the playground, scrubbing exercise equipment and so on. It is important to note that participants need to prepare their own tools for cleaning. I hope that with everyone's efforts, our playground can become much cleaner and tidier.
Welcome to your active participation.
Students' Union
November 28th
第二节
【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了住在沿海城市的玛丽亚和彼得通过在网上制作视频、写文章来呼吁大家一起爱护环境。
解析:1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“两人很快吃完晚饭,上楼开始计划。”可知,第一段可描写Maria and Peter商量对策,决定在网上制作视频、写文章来呼吁大家一起爱护环境。②由第二段首句内容“他们既兴奋又紧张,在微信上发布了这段视频和文章。”可知,第二段可描写视频和文章在网上发布后得到的反应以及大家的行动和结果。
2.续写线索:商量——做视频——呼吁——反应——行动——沙滩变美
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Quicklyfinishingtheirdinner, thepairwentupstairsandstartedplanning. Maria and Peter decided to take advantage of the Internet. “Maybe we can write an article to arouse people's awareness.” Maria proposed. “Good idea! We can also make a video!” Peter added. The next few hours witnessed their heated discussion and growing confidence in a clean and beautiful coast. The next day, they went to the beach and filmed a short video showing plastic bags lying on the beach and floating in the sea. Peter, who was good at writing, wrote an article talking about the present situation of the beach and asking people to take part in the clean up.
Excitedandnervous, theypostedthevideoandarticleonWeChat. To their amazement, their post went viral online immediately. Countless comments flooded in saying how heartbroken they were when looking at the polluted beach and ocean. What amazed Maria and Peter more was that numerous people in their community, encouraged by their efforts, offered to join in their clean up. More and more people came to the beach to collect plastic bags and they also appealed to others to avoid throwing or using plastic bags. A year later, with their joint and continuous effort, the coast regained its beauty and Maria and Peter regained their long awaited pleasure.