专题五
第1讲
跟踪训练
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A
1.三档作文
2.7分
3.本篇文章基本完成了试题规定的任务;漏掉一些内容,但覆盖大部分要点;应用的语法结构和词汇虽然简单,但基本能满足任务要求;语言错误较多,但半数句子基本正确;应用了简单的语句间连接成分,衔接较为流畅
B
1.五档作文
2.14分
3.很好地完成了试题规定的任务;覆盖所有要点,内容充实;表达流畅,语法结构多样,词汇丰富,显示出很强的语言运用能力;基本没有语言错误;有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑;卷面整洁,书写工整
第2讲
随堂演练
Ⅰ.1.an increasing number of 2.are keen on/are fond of/are interested in 3.Aimed to enhance/With the purpose of enhancing 4.sign up for 5.focus on 6.of great importance ;convey/show/express our gratitude 7.hold the view 8.greatly delighted;would like to 9.On behalf of
10.scheduled
Ⅱ.1.which will allow participants to experience the beauty of the city’s parks and gardens while promoting eco-friendly transportation
2.after which we’ll have a discussion about ways to sharpen English skills
3.What I stress is that each participant is required to recite a Tang poem or a Song lyric poem within 5 minutes.
4.It is required that the students interested in the contest (should) sign up for it before July 3.
5.As long as everyone plays team spirit well,our club will be better and better.
6.Although/Though/While we became exhausted halfway,we managed to get to the finishing line.
7.It is my Chinese teacher that/who gives me encouragement whenever I meet with difficulty.
8.Through the hands-on experience,not only do I gain a sense of achievement,but I also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth.
9.At the foot of the Mount Yuhuangshan lies the fruit farm.
10.The exhibition will be held in the gallery hall of our school on Saturday afternoon.
Ⅲ.1.while 2.As for me/In my opinion/As far as I’m concerned 3.For one thing/First of all 4.Therefore
5.however 6.For another/Secondly/Besides 7.In conclusion/All in all/In short/In brief 8.First of all 9.Secondly 10.Besides/What’s more/In addition 11.Last but not least 12.All in all
第3讲
第一组 跟踪训练
1.I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty with the scientific experiment class,so I’m writing to give you some tips/suggestions/advice.
2.When it comes to the suggestion of the club activities in your school,I strongly recommend giving students more free choices in selecting and exchanging their own favorite books.
3.Last but not least,having a face-to-face talk with your parents peacefully and listening patiently is a better choice.
4.I do hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you./I really hope you will find these suggestions useful.
5.I’m writing to invite you to go on a trip to the countryside this weekend.
6.It is a great privilege/honor for me to invite you to participate in the speech contest to be held in the lecture hall of my school on October 1st.
7.I do hope you can come and enjoy the charm of playing table tennis.Looking forward to your reply.
8.The advertisement is very appealing to me,so I’m writing to you in the hope of filling in the job vacancy.
9.Besides,I have taken the part-time job as an English editor,from which I have gained relevant experience.
10.I would appreciate it if you could take my application into account/consideration.
第二组 跟踪训练
1.I’m terribly/awfully sorry I couldn’t reply to your email in time.
2.I’m awfully sorry for the sudden change of the plan and feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity.
3.Shall we put it off till this Sunday morning?We can go earlier so that we can have more time to read and choose books.
4.Learning that you are keen on the folk culture of Henan and want to experience it in person,I’m writing to recommend Mount Song in Zhengzhou.
5.As for the topic,I’d like to recommend Chinese traditional culture,as it introduces a real treasure of human history.
6.I do hope you can take my recommendations into account/consideration and make a final decision.
7.With the deepest gratitude,I’m writing to you to express my appreciation for your help with my English all these years.
8.I would like to take this opportunity to express my thanks for your timely help and assistance.
9.Thanks for your generous help,without which I wouldn’t have made such great progress.
10.Thank you again.Wish you a pleasant journey home and all the best for the future.
第三组 跟踪训练
1.The reason why I am writing to you is that I quarreled with my friend and I need your help now.
2.I have some difficulty in learning English grammar,which bothers me a lot.So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.
3.I would appreciate it if you could spare some time to polish my application letter and résumé.
4.I’m writing to you to ask about how you spent your May Day holiday.
5.As for the money you charge,I’m wondering if it covers the entrance fees for visiting the places listed.
6.I wonder whether/if it is convenient for you to inform me when and where the course will be given.
7.I’d appreciate it if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.
8.I’m writing to inform you of some relevant arrangements about the visit this Sunday.
9.Please let me know if you need further information.
10.I sincerely hope the information mentioned above will be of some use to you.
第四组 跟踪训练
1.The person I admire most is not a famous person but my father.
2.In fact,my father is a stubborn man—so stubborn that once he is determined to do something,nothing can change his mind.
3.It is his stubbornness that enables him to overcome all kinds of difficulties.
4.In a word,all of us young people should learn from them and shoulder our responsibility.
5.In recent years,the rapid development of AI technology has attracted many students’ attention,so a lecture with the theme “AI and Tomorrow’s Education” is scheduled to be held in our school auditorium from 1:45 p.m.to 3:00 p.m.on June 20th.
6.The purpose of this event is to encourage everyone to explore the history and culture behind the artifacts and appreciate their beauty.
7.Tired as we were,we felt very happy.We realized happiness lies in making others happy.
8.I feel motivated to continue challenging myself in future school activities to gain valuable experience.
9.Such activities attach great significance to the growth of Chinese students.We can gain many labor abilities and increase our sense of social responsibility from them.
10.I believe this festival will surely enable you to gain a better insight into traditional Chinese culture since you always have keen interest in it.
第五组 跟踪训练
1.I’m Li Hua,chairman of the Students’ Council.It’s my great honor to be here and extend a warm welcome to you on behalf of the whole students.
2.Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation.I shall be speaking about environmental protection.
3.It is known to all that good living habits are important to our physical and mental health.
4.In conclusion,we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient.
5.Moreover,as is known to all,setting too much time aside just for watching TV is a waste of time.
6.The purpose of the campaign is to mitigate the consequence of such a traffic accident and reduce the death rate in an accident.
7.My appeal is that everyone riding electric bikes should wear helmets for the safety of themselves and other people.
8.I’m very honored to have the chance to introduce the great achievements made in China.
9.We take pride in living a better life,having enough clothing and sufficient food.
10.In conclusion,China is no longer an underdeveloped country and it has become a prosperous nation.
第六组 跟踪训练
Ⅰ.1.An activity,whose theme was protecting the environment/with the theme of protecting the environment,was held by the Students’ Council.
2.Teachers and students who are interested in traditional Chinese culture joined in/participated in/took part in the activity.
3.Everyone thinks highly of this activity,for it is a good chance to get close to nature.
4.It was through this activity that we fully realized that the awareness of respecting the old should be raised.
5.With the popularity of smartphones,more and more young people are suffering from eyesight problems.Therefore,I advocate protecting eyes.
6.As we know,we obtain about 80% of the information by looking so you can never protect your eyes too much.
7.In order to enrich students’ extra-curricular activities,our school will hold a Sports Week on the school playground.
8.The Sports Week,which is aimed at building up our bodies,will last from March 16 to March 22.
9.During the week,you will have a large variety of activities to choose from,ranging from rope skipping to different races.
10.Every student is expected to take an active part in the Sports Week for health.应用文写作是考查学生语言综合运用能力最直接和最有效的形式。它不仅考查学生词汇和语法的运用能力,也考查学生的总体分析能力、观察能力、逻辑思维能力、篇章结构的组织能力和表达能力等。其话题覆盖范围广,涵盖了学校生活、社会生活、旅游、文化习俗、课外活动等方面,这些话题与学生生活密切相关,既符合学生的认知水平,也贴合学生的实际,让学生有内容可写。新课程标准中要求学生能在应用文写作中有条理地描述自己或他人的经历,阐述观点,表达情感态度;能描述事件发生、发展的过程;能描述人或事物的特征、说明概念;能在表达过程中有目的地选择词汇和语法结构,确切表达意思,体现意义的逻辑关联性。
年份 卷别 体裁 主题 命题方式
2023年 新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ 建议信 人与自我:给外教的分组方式提建议 中文提纲
浙江1月 报道 人与自然:“认识我们身边的植物”活动 中文提纲
2022年 新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ 邀请信 人与社会:节目访谈 中文提纲
浙江6月 邀请信 人与社会:邀请一起前往小组学习室 中文提纲
2021年 新课标Ⅰ 投稿 人与社会:庆祝Youth创刊十周年 中文提纲
浙江6月 宣传稿 人与社会:学生国画作品展 中文提纲
应用文写作选材依旧贴近学生生活,并关注德智体美劳等各个方面,常涉及语言学习、活动开展、人际关系等话题,特别重视中国元素,如:学习汉语、剪纸艺术、中国结、中国节日、茶文化等,未来仍会以半开放命题形式为主。文体仍会以常考的书信、邮件、通知、发言稿、报道等为主。
第1讲 评分标准解读
评分原则
1.评分时先根据内容和语言确定所属档次,然后根据要求调整最后给分。
2.评分时,应注意的重要内容为:内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。若遗漏其中一个要点,最高打10分。
3.单词拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
4.如书写较差以致影响交际,将其分数降低一个档次;抄袭或部分抄袭前面阅读理解该题判0分。
5.词数少于60,酌情扣分;字数多,不扣分。
评分档次
档次 特征描述
第五档 优秀13-15分 很好地完成了试题规定的任务 —覆盖所有要点,内容充实; —表达流畅,语法结构多样,词汇丰富,显示出很强的语言运用能力; —有个别语言小错误,但不影响意思的表达; —有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑; —卷面整洁,书写工整。
第四档 良好10-12分 完成了试题规定的任务 —覆盖所有要点,内容较为充实; —表达基本流畅,语法结构较为多样,词汇较为丰富; —少量语言错误,基本不影响意思的表达; —应用了简单的语句间连接成分,使全文结构较为紧凑。
第三档 及格7-9分 基本完成了试题规定的任务 —漏掉一些内容,但覆盖大部分要点; —应用的语法结构和词汇基本能满足任务要求,表达较为准确,语言错误较多,半数句子基本正确; —应用了简单的语句间连接成分,衔接较为流畅。
第二档 差4-6分 未适当完成试题规定的任务 —漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,思路混乱,呈现了一些无关内容; —语法结构单调、词汇项目有限; —有一些语法结构或词汇方面的严重错误,影响了意思的表达; —较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性。
第一档 极差1-3分 未完成试题规定的任务 —明显遗漏主要内容,呈现了一些无关内容,或产出相关的只言片语; —表达不准确,有很多语法结构或词汇方面的严重错误,严重影响了意思的表达; —缺乏语句间的连接成分,内容不连贯。
0分 未能传达给读者任何信息:内容太少,无法评判;呈现的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
(2023·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ)
假定你是李华,外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.说明问题;2.提出建议。
注意: 1.词数80左右;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Ryan,
I’m Li Hua from Class 3.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
示例1
三档作文 及格(马马虎虎) 名师点评
Dear Ryan, Yours sincerely, Li Hua 本篇文章基本完成了试题规定的任务 1.漏掉一些内容,但覆盖大部分要点; 2.应用的语法结构和词汇基本能满足任务要求,表达较为准确,语言错误较多,半数句子基本正确; 3.应用了简单的语句间连接成分,衔接较为流畅。如:as we all know,however,on the one hand...on the other hand...,in my opinion等。
示例2
五档作文 优秀(漂漂亮亮) 名师点评
Dear Ryan, Yours sincerely, Li Hua 本篇文章很好地完成了试题规定的任务 1.覆盖所有要点,内容充实; 2.表达流畅,语法结构多样,词汇丰富,显示出很强的语言运用能力,如高级词汇randomly,pair up,lead to,hinder,advanced,motivated,get along with,have difficulty (in) doing,be based on和高级句式:省略that的宾语从句I think...;现在分词作状语leaving...;状语从句的省略if paired...;定语从句who they don’t...; 3.有些许语言错误,不影响意思的表达; 4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑,如:to begin with,besides等; 5.卷面整洁,书写工整。
目前,大部分考生的写作水平在第三档和第四档,与第五档的差距就是应用的语法结构和词汇虽然能满足任务的要求,但是未能使用较复杂的结构或较高级的词汇,无增分亮点;虽使用了一些语句间的连接成分,但是过于简单,未能达到高效紧凑的标准。所以,此专题就从这几个方面阐述如何提升作文档次,以获得高分。
请阅读下面两篇学生习作,根据评分标准评出档次。
(2023·湖北天门5月适应性考试)
假定你是李华,上周五你校英语俱乐部举办了“校园好声音”英文歌唱比赛。请你给校英语报写一篇关于该活动的报道,内容包括:
1.比赛的时间、地点和目的;
2.比赛的过程和结果;
3.学生的感受和收获。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.标题已给出,不计入总词数。
An English Song Singing Competition of
“Campus Voice”
学生习作
A
An English Song Singing Competition of
“Campus Voice”
我来批阅
1.作文档次:
2.作文得分:
3.评分理由:
B
An English Song Singing Competition of
“Campus Voice”
我来批阅
1.作文档次:
2.作文得分:
3.评分理由:微技能 善用高考英语应用文“懒人”模板
高考英语中的应用文写作,很多结构安排是固定的形式,很多套语也是固定的,所以如果考前能记住一些写作模板和常考句式,会起到事半功倍的效果。尤其是对于英语程度不好的考生,也能写出一篇不错的作文,得到一个理想的分数。下面归纳整理了一部分常考的应用文写作模板。
一、感谢信:
Dear ,
I am writing to extend my sincere gratitude for (感谢的原因).
If it had not been for your assistance in (对方给你的具体帮助),I fear that I would have been (没有对方帮助会产生的后果).Everyone agrees that it is you who (给出细节).Once again,I would like to express my heartfelt thanks to you!
No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
二、道歉信:
Dear ,
I am truly sorry that (道歉的原因).I will be very grateful if you are kind to listen to my explanation.The reason for my delay/absence was/is that (解释原因).Therefore, .Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience I’ve caused.Would you mind (弥补的措施) another day
I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
三、邀请信:
Dear ,
I’m writing to invite you to (发出邀请).
There will be a/an (内容) at/in (地点) on (时间).We would be honored to have you there with us.The occasion will start at (具体时间).This will be followed by a/an (进一步的安排).At around (时间),we will have (另一个安排).
I would appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
四、建议信:
Dear ,
You have asked me for my advice with regard to (要建议的内容),and I am writing to share some that will be of great benefit to you.
I think it would be a good idea to (具体建议),because (给出此建议的理由).Furthermore,you’d better (具体建议),which can (此建议的益处).Last but not least,you should (建议的内容).
I would appreciate it very much if you could take my suggestions into consideration and I hope you will find these proposals useful.Good luck with your (祝愿).
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
五、申请信:
Dear Sir/Madam,
I write this letter to apply for the position that you have advertised in (信息来源媒体) on (广告发布时间).
Not only do I have the qualifications for this job,but I also have the right personality for a (职位名称),because (原因).Should you grant me a personal interview,I would be most grateful.If you need to know more about me,please feel free to contact me at any time at (联系方式).
I would be grateful if you could take my application into account.Looking forward to your earliest reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
六、咨询信:
Dear ,
I am (自我介绍).I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information regarding (要询问的内容).
First of all,what are ? Secondly,when will ? Thirdly,is ? (要咨询的问题罗列) I would also like to inquire .Could you be so kind to send me some relevant booklets on the above-mentioned aspects?(附加问题)
Thank you for your kindness,and your prompt attention to this letter will be highly appreciated.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
七、求助信:
Dear ,
I’m writing to ask for your assistance in the hope that you can help me (写信的目的).
I’ve found that my problem lies chiefly in two aspects.For one thing, .For another thing, .(求助的具体内容) Hardly do I have any experience in coping with the situation due to the fact that I am a green hand.So difficult is the situation that I don’t know how to face it.
I would be more than glad if you could consider my request./I would be grateful if you could take my request into consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
八、投诉信:
Dear ,
My name is/I am (自我介绍).I am writing to you for (说明写信缘由).Firstly, .Secondly, .Thirdly, .(列举投诉原因) Therefore,I require that you .(表明诉求)
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
九、演讲稿:
Boys and girls/Ladies and gentlemen,
It’s a great honor for me to stand here and give my speech.(表示荣幸) My name is______(自我介绍).The topic of my speech is (提出演讲主题).To begin with,many people suggest that .Secondly, .Thirdly, .(话题或现象列举) What I want to stress is that (重申主题).For one thing, .For another, .Besides, .(原因或重要性列举) In a word, (总结).
Thank you for your listening/Thank you.
十、通知:
Notice/Announcement
A/An (活动内容),which is aimed at (目的),is scheduled in/on/at (地点) at/on/in (时间).
There will be various ,including (活动介绍).Firstly,we plan to (活动介绍).Besides, (活动介绍).What’s more,you need to be informed of the following requirements. (注意事项).
Everyone is welcome.Looking forward to your active participation.
(落款:发通知的单位)第3讲 文体分类突破
备考应用文写作,常见的书信(建议信、申请信、邀请信、推荐信、求助信、告知信、感谢信等)是不可忽视的一部分,虽然近几年写作命题相比之前灵活了许多,但是从近几年高考的命题来看,书信/邮件类命题依然频繁出现。具体情况如下:
考查类型 年份 卷别 命题形式 话题
建议信 2023 新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ 提纲式 给外教的分组方式提建议
2023 北京 提纲式 给“绿色北京”社团活动提建议
申请信 2023 天津 提纲式 申请教别人做中国传统的东西
邀请信 2022 新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ 提纲式 邀请外教做访谈
2022 北京 提纲式 邀请英国好友做线上交流
2022 浙江6月 提纲式 邀请留学生体验新的小组学习室
2020 浙江1月 提纲式 邀请外国朋友参加中文演讲比赛
询问信 2021 全国甲 提纲式 询问外国友人感兴趣的中国文化
2020 浙江7月 提纲式 询问因病休假的外教的近况
求助信 2020 全国Ⅲ 提纲式 请外教指导英语短剧
2020 北京 提纲式 请外教推荐一名外籍教师
普通信件 2022 浙江1月 提纲式 回忆活动经历和分享个人收获
道歉信 2021 北京 提纲式 因故不能赴约外出而道歉
告知信 2020 天津7月 提纲式 介绍成人礼活动及感受
第一组 建议信、申请信和邀请信
题型1 建议信
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议,让对方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题的一类信件。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确,具有合理性和说服力。写作结构如下:
常用句式
◆首段常用句型
1.I am writing to share some advice with you.
我写信是想和你分享一些建议。
2.You have asked me for my advice about...
你向我征求关于……的建议。
3.I am writing to express my views on...
我写信是想表达我对……的看法。
4.Here are some suggestions,which I hope will be of benefit to you.
这里有一些建议,我希望能对你有好处。
◆中间段提出建议时常用的句型
1.The first thing I would suggest is...
我将要建议的第一件事是……
2.Another thing I would suggest is...
我将要建议的另一件事情是……
3.I suggest that you should...
我建议你应该……
4.I advise you to...
我建议你……
5.I think it would be a good idea to...
我认为……将是个好主意。
6.You may consider doing...
你可以考虑做……
7.Furthermore,you’d better do...
此外,你最好做……
8.The most important is that you should...
最重要的是,你应该……
◆末段常用句型
1.I would appreciate it very much if you could take my suggestions into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。
2.I will be glad if you can consider my advice.
如果你能考虑我的建议,我会很高兴的。
3.I hope you will take my advice into account.
我希望你能考虑我的建议。
典例展示
(2023·北京)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动, 他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复, 内容包括:
1.活动形式;
2.活动内容。
注意:1词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Dear Jim,
Delightedly hearing that you are planning a club activity themed “Green Beijing”,I am writing to share my suggestions for the event with you.
To begin with,I suggest that you should organize a walking tour around the city to explore the green spaces in Beijing,which will allow participants to experience the beauty of the city’s parks and gardens while promoting eco-friendly transportation.Another effective activity is planting trees to contribute to the city’s green efforts.This could be a collaborative effort with local volunteers or environmental organizations that are committed to the preservation of Beijing’s natural environment.
I would appreciate it very much if you could take my suggestions into consideration.Looking forward to participating in this event and promoting environmental awareness together.
Best regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
题型2 申请信
申请信是指写信人想申请某个职位或某个项目而向收信人提出请求的信件。申请信是非常正式的信件,所用语言也应该正式、简洁和准确,语气要礼貌。写作结构如下:
常用句式
1.I’m writing to apply for the position of...
我写信申请……的职位。
2.I’m now writing to you in the hope of filling in the job vacancy.
我写信给您是希望能够填补这个职位的空缺。
3.Having learned that your office needs...,I would like to apply for the post.
得知贵公司需要……,我想申请这个职位。
4.I’m looking for a job as...and would be grateful if you could consider me for such a post in your firm.我正在找一份……的工作,如果您能考虑我在贵公司担任这个职位,我将不胜感激。
5.I am interested in...and wish to enter this significant program.
我对……感兴趣,并希望加入这个重要项目。
6.I won the first prize in...competition.
我获得了……比赛的一等奖。
7.As an outgoing...,I get along well with my classmates.
作为一名外向的……,我和同学们相处得很好。
8.I’m an excellent student...
我是个优秀的学生……
9.I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have listed.
我认为我有能力满足你所列的要求。
10.With good academic performance and working practical experience,I feel I’m the right person you’re looking for.
我有很好的学习成绩和工作实践经验,我认为我就是你要找的人。
11.I have been learning...with a good command of...,which enables me to communicate/interact with...fluently.
我已经学了……,……都掌握得很好,这使我能够流利地与……交流。
12.Being outgoing as well as warm-hearted,I’m always ready to help those in demand,which makes me feel good in return.
我性格开朗、心地善良,随时准备帮助有需要的人,相应地,这让我感觉很好。
13.Not only am I able to help others,but I can also accumulate social experience.
我不仅能帮助别人,而且能积累社会经验。
14.I would be grateful/I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into account/consideration.Looking forward to your earliest/earnest reply.
如果您能考虑我的申请,我会不胜感激,期待您可以尽快/认真答复。
15.If you consider me appropriate for the job,please call me at...
如果你们认为我适合这份工作,请致电……
典例展示
(2023·天津6月)
假设你是晨光中学的李津,作为交换生去英国学校,此学校要办一个促进中英文化交流的活动,名为Chinese Workshop。活动内容包括:中国美食、手工艺品和书法,活动有一项是教别人做中国传统的东西。请你写一封申请信,内容如下:
1.阐述这个中英文化交流活动的意义;
2.你想教什么;
3.为什么想教这个。
注意:1词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:手工艺品handicrafts;书法calligraphy
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Dear Sir or Madam,
How are you doing?I am an exchange student from China.Learning that a cultural communication activity called Chinese Workshop will be held,I can hardly wait to write to apply to you for my access to this activity.
Initially,not only can locals have a precious chance to appreciate the unique charm of splendid Chinese traditional culture from different perspectives,but also we exchange students can fulfill the role as culture ambassadors to bridge the communication between UK and China.Additionally,considering such far reaching significance of this activity,I have a burning desire to apply to participate in it.Eventually,as a Chinese student,what I intensely intend to instruct UK natives to learn is how to knit Chinese knot,because I hold the belief that Chinese knot is one of the typical representatives of Chinese traditional culture and also a symbol of love and peace,which I think are greatly essential for UK and China to promote the bilateral development.
I’d appreciate it if you could take my application into account,and I look forward to contributing to a successful and enriching event.
Sincerely,
Li Jin
题型3 邀请信
邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的信件,包括展览、节日聚会、聚餐、担任比赛的评委或在讲座上发言等。在写作时,语气要热情、真挚,不要强人所难;叙事要清楚、明白。写作结构如下:
常用句式
1.I am writing to invite you to.../I’m writing to tell you that there will be a...
我写信邀请你……/我写信告诉你将有一个……
2.I am very pleased to invite you to participate in...to be held in...
我很高兴邀请你参加将在……举行的……
3.It is a great privilege/honor for me to invite you to participate in...to be held in...
能邀请你参加将在……举办的……是我的荣幸。
4.I am sure that you must be very interested in...For one thing...For another...
我相信你一定对……很感兴趣。一方面……另一方面……
5.If you are interested in it,please let me know and I’ll send you more information.
如果你感兴趣,请告诉我,我会发给你更多信息。
6.I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision soon.
我想在那里见到你,请尽快告诉我你的决定。
7.You can reach me through my phone number...at your convenience.
你可以在你方便的时候给我打电话,号码是……
8.I would appreciate it if you could accept our invitation.
如果你能接受我们的邀请,我会感激不尽的。
典例展示
(2022·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ)
假定你是校广播站英语节目“Talk and Talk”的负责人李华,请给外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内容包括:
1.节目介绍;
2.访谈的时间和话题。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
[满分范文]
Dear Caroline,
How’s it going?I am writing the letter to invite you to an interview held by “Talk and Talk”,which is an English programme in our school broadcast station.
As you know,our programme starts at 10 a.m.and ends at 11 a.m.every Tuesday.Besides,the topic is about how to improve our spoken English.You can give us some suggestions about it.It is certain that all students will benefit much from your speech.
I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into account.Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
翻译句子
1.我很遗憾听说你在科学实验课上有困难,因此我写信给你一些建议。
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2.(2023·广东深圳大湾区一模)关于贵校俱乐部活动的建议,我强烈建议给学生更多的自由选择,选择和交换自己喜欢的书籍。
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3.最后但同样重要的是,与你的父母心平气和地面谈并耐心倾听是更好的选择。
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4.我真的希望我的建议对你有用。/我真的希望你会发现这些建议有用。
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5.(2023·河北张家口三模)我写信是想邀请你这个周末去乡下旅行。
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6.我很荣幸邀请你参加10月1日在我校讲堂举行的演讲比赛。
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7.(2023·安徽合肥一检)我真的希望你能来享受打乒乓球的魅力。期待你的回复。
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8.这则广告非常吸引我,所以我写信给您希望能够填补这个职位的空缺。
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9.(2023·安徽阜阳质检)此外,我还做过兼职英语编辑,从中我获得了相关经验。
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10.如果您能考虑我的申请,我将不胜感激。
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第二组 道歉信、推荐信和感谢信
题型4 道歉信
道歉信是因为自己的过错或有事无法赴约而给对方带来了麻烦和不利影响,因此向对方道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。要向对方诚挚地解释自己的不当行为或者无法应约对方的原因。写作结构如下:
常用句式
1.I would like to express my deepest apology/regret for my failing/not being able to...
因为没能……我向你表达最深切的歉意。
2.I’m awfully sorry for...and feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity (to do sth).
对于……我感到非常抱歉,错过这个(做……的)机会我感到十分遗憾。
3.The reason is that I have got to...
原因是我不得不去……
4.As you know,...is of vital importance for me.你知道,……对我来说至关重要。
5.I am terribly sorry for any inconvenience I will cause/I have caused.
对于我(会)造成的不便,我非常抱歉。
6.Anyhow,I sincerely hope that we can fix another time for...Will you be available this Sunday morning
无论如何,我真心希望我们可以再找一个时间……这个星期天早上你有空吗?
7.Would you mind doing...another day
你介意改天再做……吗?
8.I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.
我衷心希望你能宽容地接受我的道歉。
典例展示
(2021·北京)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你和英国好友Jim原定本周末一起外出,你因故不能赴约。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达歉意并说明原因;
2.提出建议并给出理由。
注意:1词数100左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
[满分范文]
Dear Jim,
I’m awfully sorry to inform you that I can’t go out with you this weekend.I’ve just been told that I have to go and visit my sick grandfather in the countryside,who was suddenly admitted to the hospital.I feel it a great pity to miss the opportunity to go out with you and hope the change won’t cause you too much trouble.
Would you mind going out next Saturday morning?If it’s convenient for you,let’s meet at the school gate at 9:00.Please let me know what time suits you best.I should be available anytime next weekend.
In addition,next Saturday,there will be a flower show in Beihai Park.Then we can go to see the flowers together.
I sincerely hope that you will kindly accept my apologies.
Yours,
Li Hua
题型5 推荐信
推荐信是向别人介绍人、事物或地方的信件。介绍时,语气要肯定,并对所推荐或介绍的人、事物或地方给予正面评价。写作时一般用第二人称或第三人称,时态以一般现在时为主。写作结构如下:
常用句式
1.I am both honored and pleased to recommend...
我很荣幸并且乐于推荐……
2.It is with great pleasure that I take this opportunity to recommend...
我很荣幸地抓住这次机会推荐……
3.Should this recommendation gain your favorable consideration,it would be highly appreciated.
如果这项推荐能得到您的认可,我们将不胜感激。
4.Learning that...,I’d like to recommend...to you.
得知……,我向你推荐……
5.Having learnt that...,I’m willing to recommend you...
得知……,我愿意向你推荐……
6.I’m more than glad/pleased/delighted to learn that you...,and I’d like to offer my recommendation.
得知你要……我很高兴,我想给你一些推荐。
典例展示
(2023·山东烟台一模)
假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Peter发来邮件,请你推荐一部中国电影。请回复该邮件,内容包括:
1.电影介绍;
2.推荐理由。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
[满分范文]
Dear Peter,
Learning you’re interested in Chinese films,I’m willing to recommend you one of my favorites.The Wandering Earth Ⅱ,which was released during the Spring Festival,is an awesome science fiction film starring Jason Wu and Andy Lau.
Personally speaking,it is the grand scenes and touching plots that appeal to me so much.Faced with the solar crisis,the Chinese government and scientists shoulder the responsibility of protecting the earth,making joint efforts to keep humans alive.The presented advanced technologies also impressed me and filled me with pride.
I hope my recommendation will be of benefit to you and wish you to enjoy the film which won’t let you down.
Yours,
Li Hua
题型6 感谢信
感谢信是用来向帮助、关心和支持过自己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信,感谢信应写得真诚、具体、及时。写作结构如下:
常用句式
1.I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt/sincere/earnest/cordial thanks/gratitude to you for...
在这封信中,我要为……对你表示衷心的感谢。
2.I’d like to express my thanks for your hospitality and kindness.我想感谢你的好客和友好。
3.I would like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely support and assistance.
我谨借此机会感谢你的及时支持和帮助。
4.Without your help,...couldn’t have been that successful.没有你的帮助,……不会那么成功。
5.It was because of your help that...
正是由于你的帮助……
6.Please do not hesitate to let me know if there is anything I could do to pay you back.
如果有什么我可以回报你的事情,请不要犹豫让我知道。
7.My true gratitude is beyond description./Words fail to express my gratitude deep in my heart./No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.
我的感激之情难以描述。/言语无法表达我内心深处的感激之情。/任何言语都不足以表达我是多么地感激。
典例展示
(2023·安徽淮北一模)
假定你是红星中学高三学生李华。近期,你校外教Steve做了一场关于读后续写的在线讲座(A Lecture on Continuation Writing)。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.表达感谢并简述你的收获;
2.说明你在读后续写中的困惑并寻求帮助。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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Dear Steve,
I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt gratitude to you for the wonderful lecture you gave on continuation writing.I’ve learnt really a lot. Without your help,I couldn’t overcome the bottleneck—how to increase the reading and writing speed.
However,I am still puzzled by some difficulties in it.For example,I find it hard to grasp the gist of the passages,and I also feel it hard to continue when confronted with new words.What can I do?Would you please give me some advice?I would be really grateful if you could help me out.
No words are strong enough to convey how grateful I am.Your earliest reply would be appreciated.
Yours,
Li Hua
翻译句子
1.十分抱歉我未能及时回复你的邮件。
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2.对于计划的突然改变我感到非常抱歉,并对错过这次机会感到非常遗憾。
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3.我们把它推迟到这个星期天早上好吗?我们可以早点去,这样我们就有更多的时间阅读和选择书籍。
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4.(2023·河南安阳一模)得知你对河南民俗文化很感兴趣,想要亲身体验一下,我写信给你推荐郑州的嵩山。
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5.至于主题,我想推荐中国传统文化,因为它介绍了人类历史上真正的宝藏。
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6.我真的希望你能考虑我的建议并做出最后的决定。
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7.我怀着最深切的感激之情写信给你,以感谢你这些年来对我英语的帮助。
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8.我想借此机会对你的及时帮助表示感谢。
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9.感谢你的慷慨帮助,要是没有你的帮助,我不会取得这么大的进步。
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10.再次感谢你。祝你回家旅途愉快,未来一切顺利。
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第三组 求助信、咨询信和告知信
题型7 求助信
求助信是针对自己目前遇到的困难写信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型,因此语气要委婉、真诚,并要向收信人表示感谢。文章应用一般现在时,当描述自己得到帮助后的进步时应用一般将来时。写作结构如下:
常用句式
1.I have some difficulty in doing...,which bothers me a lot.So I have no choice but to turn to you for help.我在做……方面有困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
2.What bothers me is that I don’t know what to do.困扰我的是我不知道做什么。
3.I’ve found that my problem lies chiefly in two aspects.For one thing,...For another thing,...
我发现我的问题主要在两个方面。一方面……另一方面……
4.But unfortunately,I encounter some difficulties in...
但不幸的是,我在……方面遇到了一些困难。
5.I have some difficulty not only in...but also in...
我不仅在……上有困难,而且在……上也有。
6.Hardly do I have any experience in coping with the situation due to the fact that I am a green hand.由于我是一个新手,我在处理这样的情况方面几乎没有什么经验。
7.So difficult is the situation that I don’t know how to face it.
情况是如此的复杂以至于我都不知道怎么去面对。
8.I wonder if you would like to give us some advice.不知您是否愿意给我们一些建议。
9.I believe I will benefit a lot from your valuable and timely advice.
我相信我会从你宝贵而及时的建议中受益良多。
典例展示
(2020·全国Ⅲ)
假定你是李华,你和同学根据英语课文改编了一个短剧。给外教Miss Evans写封邮件,请她帮忙指导。邮件内容包括:
1.剧情简介;2.指导内容;3.商定时间、地点。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.结束语已为你写好。
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Dear Miss Evans,
I’m writing to ask for your help with our English short play adapted from our English textbook.
The story starts with a boy named Huckleberry Finn,who ran away from home and lived with his friend Jim,a former slave,on a raft on the Mississippi River.Then Finn was cheated by two men,with his raft stolen and Jim sold to a farm.Finn and his friend Tom Sawyer made a plan to save Jim from the farm.At last they managed to free Jim.
I wonder if you would like to give us some advice.The vocabulary and grammar of the plot need to be adjusted,and we also need your guidance on our performance.If possible,shall we meet you in your office at 10 a.m. tomorrow
Looking forward to your early reply.Best regards!
Yours truly,
Li Hua
题型8 咨询信
咨询信,又称询问信,是写信人对不理解、不熟悉的事情或对某方面的信息感兴趣,希望了解详细信息的信件。写作结构如下:
常用句式
1.I’m writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with information on/regarding/concerning...
我写信是看你能否给我提供关于……的信息。
2.I’d like to acquire all the information relative to...
我想获得关于……的所有信息。
3.I wonder if you could tell me/provide some special information about...
我想知道你能否告诉我/提供一些关于……的具体信息。
4.I have seen...and am keen to gain more detailed information.
我看过……,很想得到更详细的信息。
5.Would you mind telling me some details about...
你介意告知我关于……的一些细节吗?
6.Another point I am not uncertain about is...
我还不确定的另外一点是……
7.Your timely attention to my inquiry would be highly appreciated.
你若能及时关注我的询问,我将不胜感激。
8.Thank you for your kindness,and I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.
谢谢你的好意,如果你能尽快回复,我将不胜感激。
典例展示
(2021·全国甲)
假定你是李华。你校计划举办介绍中国传统文化的主题班会,并在英文网站展示。请你写一封邮件给外国朋友Chris,向他了解哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人。邮件内容包括:
1.阐明写信事由;
2.征求建议;
3.表示感谢。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Dear Chris,
How’s everything going
A school-wide discussion whose theme is traditional Chinese culture is taking place in our school and the upcoming results will be displayed on the English website.I am wondering if you could tell me what might attract foreigners most among these topics,such as paper cutting,calligraphy,Beijing Opera,and Chinese painting.As you have a passion for traditional Chinese culture,your suggestions will be greatly helpful to us.
The activity is scheduled to be held on May 15 in the form of class meetings and the display will start on May 25,which will be a good opportunity to learn about traditional Chinese culture for both us and foreigners.
I would appreciate it if you could respond at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
题型9 告知信
告知信通常分为两类,一种是告知某人某事即将发生,另一种是回复某人关于某事的询问。写作结构如下:
常用句式
1.I have good news to tell you./Here is a piece of exciting news.
我有个好消息要告诉你。/这儿有一条振奋人心的消息。
2.Learning that you’re enthusiastic about...I’m writing to tell you that...
得知你对……很感兴趣,我写信是想告诉你……
3.This letter is intended to inform you that...
(写)这封信的目的是告知你……
4.You said in your last letter that...I’m writing to share with you some details/tell you some relevant information.
你在上一封信中提到……我写信是想和你分享一些细节/告诉你一些相关信息。
5.Some details regarding...are as follows.
一些有关……的细节如下。
6.The course is scheduled to start from...,which will last one month with one lecture each day from...to...
课程安排从……开始,为期一个月,每天从……到……都有一节课。
7.To start with,the opening ceremony will be arranged at...Following this...will be organized.Lastly,...
首先,开幕式将被安排在……,接下来将组织……,最后,……
8.By the way,...is just within easy reach of...,so it is convenient for us to go there by bus.
顺便说一下,……离……很近,所以我们坐公共汽车去那里很方便。
9.Through this activity,we can definitely gain a better understanding of...
通过这次活动,我们一定可以更加了解……
10.If you want to know detailed information/anything else,please don’t hesitate to contact me/drop me a line.你如果想知道详细信息/其他事情,请不要犹豫尽管联系我/给我写信。
典例展示
(2023·湖南永州适应性考试)
假定你是校学生会负责人李华。你校将于4月23日世界图书日举行“共享图书”活动,请写封邮件告知你校的英国留学生Chris参加活动,内容包括:
1.活动时间和地点;
2.活动意义及内容;
3.表达期待。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:世界图书日 World Book and Copyright Day;共享图书 book-sharing
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Dear Chris,
There will be a book-sharing activity and I’m writing to inform you of some relevant details.
The activity is scheduled to be launched at the school hall on the afternoon of April 23rd,which is named as World Book and Copyright Day.Aimed at making the most of unused books as well as motivating students’ enthusiasm for reading,it welcomes all students to participate.As required,each student is expected to voluntarily bring at least one book to share.Additionally,no restrictions on book categories and languages are set,but books to be shared must be in good condition.
If you want to know detailed information/anything else,please don’t hesitate to contact me/drop me a line.
Yours,
Li Hua
翻译句子
1.我给你写信的原因是我和我的朋友吵架了,我现在需要你的帮助。
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2.我在学习英语语法方面有困难,这很困扰我。所以我别无选择只能向你求助。
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3.如果你能抽出时间来润色我的求职信和简历,我将不胜感激。
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4.我写信给你是想咨询你是如何度过五一假期的。
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5.关于你收取的费用,我想知道它是否包含了参观所列景点的入场费。
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6.我想知道你是否方便告知我这项课程举办的时间和地点。
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8.我写信是想告知你关于本周日参观活动的一些相关安排。
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9.如果你需要进一步的信息,请让我知晓。
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10.我真诚地希望上面提到的信息会对你有所帮助。
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第四组 记人、叙事和议论
题型10 人物介绍
人物介绍属于记叙文的写作范畴,写作时要围绕人物组织材料。首先写人物简介,对人物的外貌、性格、工作性质等基本信息进行描述;然后再对此人进行详细介绍,可以举实例,切忌大而空;最后再总结。要做到主题鲜明,内容清楚,并注意结构的完整性。写作结构如下:
常用句式
1.The person I respect/love/admire most is...
我最尊敬/最爱/最钦佩的人是……
2.She/He is a...and she/he is always kind to/strict with others.
她/他是一个……她/他总是对别人很好/很严格。
3.She/He is devoted/dedicated to her/his work and once she/he is determined to do something well,she/he will...
她/他致力于她/他的工作,一旦她/他决定做好什么事,她/他就会……
4.Every time I am faced with difficulties,she/he will come to my assistance.
每次我遇到困难,她/他都会来帮助我。
5.He is not only friendly and helpful,but also very inspiring.
他不仅为人友善,乐于助人,而且十分励志。
6.It seems that he never feels tired of doing whatever he can to help others,which may be what makes him so popular among all of us.
他力所能及地帮助他人,似乎从不感到厌倦,这或许是使他在我们所有人之中如此受欢迎的原因。
7.He is a role model.Thanks to him,I determined to take up a job in the field of...
他是一位楷模。多亏了他,我才决定从事……领域的工作。
8.Such is...and I will...forever.
这就是……,我会永远……
典例展示
(2020·全国Ⅰ)
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介;
2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。
[满分范文]
The Person I Respect
There are many respectable people around us.They may be our teachers,parents or elders.As for me,my English teacher is the person I respect most.
She is a warm-hearted and dedicated teacher,who has won general praise.My English teacher is both strict with us and full of love at the same time.She has a flexible teaching method.When I encounter problems in English learning,my teacher listens to me patiently and explains them carefully,helping me overcome the difficulties.She has made great achievements in her work and has won respect from her students.
Such is my English teacher who is the person I respect most forever.
题型11 叙事短文
叙事短文属于记叙文的写作范畴,文章多以叙述已经发生的事情为主,并加上个人的感想。常考的话题有参加某场活动的记录或某次经历的叙述。写作时以一般过去时为主,按事情发展的先后顺序来进行讲述。写作结构如下:
常用句式
1.Yesterday,we went to...
昨天,我们去了……
2.With the aim to enrich/With the aim of enriching/To enrich our life and...,our school held...为了丰富我们的生活以及……,我们学校举办了……
3.On arriving at/in...,we began...
我们一到……就开始……
4.We started at...and it took us...to the...
我们从……出发,过了……我们到达……
5.Located in/at...,the...has beautiful scenery.
位于……,这个……风景优美。
6.At first,we did...,after which we did...
首先,我们做了……,之后我们做了……
7.It was...that we headed back to our school.
是在……时候我们踏上了学校的归程。
8.Tired as we were,we felt...
尽管很累,但我们感到……
9.Participating in...not only...,but also...
参加……不仅……,而且……
10.Without/If it hadn’t been for/Had it not been for their help,I wouldn’t have achieved success in...
如果没有他们的帮助,我就不会在……中取得成功。
典例展示
(2023·山东日照三模)
假定你是李华,上周你校举办了手工制作活动,活动用料全部来自生活中的可回收材料。请你为校英文报写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动内容;
3.你的感受。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.标题已给出,不计入总词数。
[满分范文]
A Handicraft Making Activity
Last week,our school organized a handicraft making activity,with the aim of promoting the awareness of environmental protection.The materials used in this activity were all from daily recyclable items.
During the activity,we were divided into groups and each group created different handicrafts.Some made pencil holders from empty cans,while others made photo frames from cardboard boxes.We also learned some basic techniques of handicraft making,such as cutting,shaping and sticking.
Personally speaking,through this activity,I not only learned some new skills but also realized the value of recycling and reducing waste.I believe that small actions,such as reusing recyclable materials,can make a big difference in protecting our environment.
题型12 说理议论
说理议论文有很多种,高中最常考的是社会现象类的议论文,就某一话题或热点问题阐述自己的观点和看法。在写作过程中,要态度鲜明,不能模棱两可。写作结构如下:
常用句式
1.Nowadays,there is widespread concern about the issue that...
如今,……问题被广泛关注。
2.In recent years,it has been noticed that the number of...is significantly increasing.
近几年,人们注意到……的数量在明显增加。
3.Recently,the phenomenon that...is becoming increasingly serious.
最近,……现象变得越来越严重。
4.With the development of science and technology,there is an increasing need for people to know how to...
随着科技的发展,人们越来越需要知道如何……
5.From my point of view/In my view/In my opinion/As far as I’m concerned...
我认为……
6.It is time that we did something to put this problem under control.
该是我们做些事情来控制这个问题的时候了。
7.To deal with the problem,there are several things that we must bear in mind.
为了处理这个问题,我们必须记住这几件事。
8.We should take a series of effective measures to deal with the problem.
我们应该采取一系列有效措施来处理这个问题。
典例展示
近几年,由于短视频平台的兴起,短视频越来越受欢迎,可是短视频的弊端也逐渐显现,请给某英语报写一篇短文,内容包括:
1.短视频越来越受欢迎;
2.说明短视频受欢迎的原因及弊端;
3.你的看法。
注意:词数80左右。
[满分范文]
In recent years,it has been noticed that the number of people watching short videos is significantly increasing.
The main reason behind the popularity of short videos is that people don’t have enough time to watch long ones because they’re so busy with their work and study.Besides,short videos contain information which is easy to understand.However,the accuracy of the information can’t be guaranteed and if people are absorbed in thousands of short videos they will waste much time.
From my point of view,watching short videos can be efficient but we should set a time limit.Moreover,we must be cautious about the content due to its occasional inaccuracy.
翻译句子
1.我最崇拜的人不是名人而是我的父亲。
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2.事实上,我的父亲是一个很固执的人——如此固执以至于一旦他决定了要做某件事,没有什么能够改变他的想法。
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3.正是他的固执让他克服了种种困难。
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4.(2023·湖南邵阳二模)总之,我们所有的年轻人都应该向他们学习,肩负起我们的责任。
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5.(2023·安徽合肥二检)近年来,人工智能技术的飞速发展吸引了许多学生的关注,因此,一场以“人工智能与未来教育”为主题的讲座将于6月20日下午1点45分至3点在我校礼堂举行。
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6.(2023·浙江杭州二模)这次活动的目的是鼓励每个人探索文物背后的历史和文化,欣赏它们的美。
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7.尽管我们很累,但我们感到很开心。我们意识到快乐的真谛在于让别人开心。
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8.(2023·广东佛山顺德区5月模拟)我有动力在未来的学校活动中继续挑战自己,以获得宝贵的经验。
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9.(2023·广东潮州二模)这些活动对中国学生的成长具有重要意义。我们可以从中获得许多劳动能力,并增加我们的社会责任感。
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10.(2023·江苏镇江4月学情调查)我相信这个节日一定会让你更好地了解中国传统文化,因为你一直对它有浓厚的兴趣。
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第五组 发言稿、短文投稿和宣传稿
题型13 发言稿
发言稿是参加者为了在会议或重要活动上表达自己的意见、看法或汇报思想工作情况而事先准备好的文稿。发言稿在语言使用上一定要准确简明、通俗易懂、层次清楚、条理分明。写作结构如下:
常用句式
1.开头部分常用语
(1)Good morning/afternoon/evening!
早上/下午/晚上好!
(2)I feel greatly honored to stand here and give/deliver a speech.Today I’m going to talk about.../tell you something about...站在这里演讲,我感到非常荣幸。今天我要讲的是关于……/告诉你们一些关于……
(3)It’s my great honor to speak here,and I’m glad to share my speech with you.Today I’d like to talk something about...我很荣幸能在这里演讲,也很高兴能和你们分享我的演讲。今天我想谈一谈……
(4)Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation.I shall be speaking about...
我今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是……
(5)It is my great honour to share with you my opinions on...
很荣幸能和你们分享一下我的关于……的看法。
2.正文部分常用语
(1)As we all know,...plays an increasingly important role in...
众所周知,……在……中起着越来越重要的作用。
(2)What I want to stress is that...For one thing,...For another,...Besides,...In a word,...我想强调的是……一方面,……另一方面,……此外,……总之,……
(3)The first thing we can do is...As we all know,...What we can do next is...For example,...What’s more,...
我们能做的第一件事是……众所周知……我们下一步能做的是……例如……更重要的是……
(4)Above all/Most important of all,you should believe in yourself.
最重要的是,你要相信自己。
(5)The reason why...is that...
……的原因是……
(6)It’s important/necessary for us all to do...
对我们大家来说做……是重要的/必要的。
(7)It’s wise/advisable to do...
做……是明智的。
(8)It’s our responsibility/duty to do...
做……是我们的责任/义务。
3.结尾部分常用语
(1)That’s all.Thank you for your listening.
我的演讲到此结束,感谢你们的倾听。
(2)I hope I have made myself understood.
我希望我已经非常清楚地表达了我的意思。
(3)Thank you from the bottom of my heart for giving me this chance to speak to you today.我从心底感谢你们今天给了我这个机会在你们面前讲话。
(4)By way of conclusion,I’d like to quote what...once said.
我想引用……曾经说过的话来结束我的发言。
(5)In a word,...have a profound influence on everyone.Therefore,we must...总之,……对每个人都有深远的影响。因此,我们必须……
(6)I sincerely hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful to you.Thanks for your listening/attention!我真诚地希望以上所说的对你们有帮助。感谢你们的倾听/关注!
(7)I hope everybody finds your stay here an enjoyable experience and your visit will surely promote our friendship.Thank you!我希望你们每个人都觉得在这里的留宿是快乐的经历,而且你们的来访一定会促进我们的友谊。谢谢!
典例展示
(2023·河北邯郸一模)
假定你是校英语俱乐部的负责人李华。近期俱乐部将召开纳新大会,请根据提示写一份发言稿,内容包括:
1.俱乐部的宗旨;
2.往昔活动;
3.寄语。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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Good morning,everyone,
I feel greatly honored to stand here and give/deliver a speech.First of all,let me extend a warm welcome to all the new members on behalf of the club.Our club is aimed at developing students’ interest in learning English and enriching our school life.
In the past years since the club was founded,we have organized a variety of activities,such as English speech contest,English essay collection and communication with international students.I hope all the new club members will actively participate in the activities organized by the club,which will deepen our understanding and friendship.As long as everyone plays team spirit well,our club will be better and better.
I sincerely hope what’s mentioned above might be helpful to you.Thanks for your listening/attention!
题型14 短文投稿
短文投稿类文章一般都是就某个特定主题进行论述和描写,议论文和记叙文居多,写作结构如下:
常用句式
1.Recently we did a survey about whether...or not.
最近我们做了一个关于是否……的调查。
2.It has been...years since...was founded and it has been accompanying me all through my childhood.
自……成立以来,已经……年了,它一直陪伴着我度过了我的整个童年。
3.As we know,...is intended to draw students’ attention into...
众所周知,……旨在把学生的注意力吸引到……
4.In my spare time,I often read the newspaper which covers not only classic stories but also current affairs.
在业余时间,我经常读这份不仅包括经典故事,还报道时事的报纸。
5.By reading the newspaper,not only do I...but also I...
通过读这份报纸,我不仅……而且我……
6.I do expect...can have a promising future.
我真的希望……有一个有前途的未来。
7.I sincerely wish everyone would...
我衷心希望大家都……
8.I learned from the experience that whatever difficulties we meet,we should try our best to solve them.Only in this way can we have a better life.
从这次经历中,我学到了无论我们遇到什么困难,我们都应该尽最大努力去解决。只有这样,我们才能过上更好的生活。
典例展示
你校英文报“Teenage Life”专栏本期的主题为“Sports and Health”。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.运动的重要性;
2.你的运动建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.标题已给出,不计入总词数。
[满分范文]
Sports and Health
As we know,the column “Teenage Life” of our school newspaper is intended to draw students’ attention into “Sports and Health”,for which I am absolutely willing to share my perspectives.
It is a common sense that regular exercise benefits us in various ways.Not only can it serve as a chance for students to strengthen a good figure in face of increasing learning burden,but also it is central to promoting personal mental well-being.In the course of doing sports,it’s highly recommended that students should work out a reasonable timetable in compliance with their physical quality and curriculum arrangement.
I sincerely wish everyone would take an active part in sports and gain more insight into the benefits it conveys because of our endeavors.
题型15 宣传稿
宣传稿分为活动类宣传稿、表彰类宣传稿等。一般活动类宣传稿居多,主要介绍活动的时间、地点、形式、内容以及意义等。活动内容的介绍要主次分明,语言切忌冗长复杂,写作结构如下:
常用句式
1.In order to...we are required that/we are supposed to...
为了……我们被要求/我们应该……
2.With the aim of...,we are supposed to carry out a series of measures.For one thing,...For another...
为了……,我们应该采取一系列措施。一方面……,另一方面……
3.On the afternoon of...,our school’s...organized a wonderful...
……下午,我们学校的……组织了一个很棒的……
4.As far as I know,the...will last for...
据我所知,……将持续……
5.The...,whose aim is to...,will last for...
这次……,其目的是……,将持续……
6.The...include(s)...
这次……包括……
7.What attracted...most is...
最吸引……的是……
8....was also very impressive.
……也非常令人印象深刻。
9.I believe...will be a great success.
我相信……会是一次巨大的成功。
10.Not only does...widen my knowledge about...,but it also enriches...
……不仅拓宽了我的知识,而且丰富了……
11.If you want to have a better understanding of ...,grasp this opportunity without hesitation.
如果你想更好地了解……,一定不要犹豫抓住这次机会。
典例展示
(2021·浙江6月)
昨天你参观了学校举办的学生国画作品展。请给校英文报写一篇宣传稿,内容包括:
1.展览时间、地点;
2.观展感受;
3.推荐观展。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
[满分范文]
Yesterday afternoon,I visited an art exhibition with a theme of traditional Chinese paintings in the hall on the second floor of the school library.
The exhibition opens from 3:00 to 5:00 every afternoon this month.A huge number of Chinese paintings by students are on display,among which are paintings of birds,flowers,shrimps and so on.They are so vivid that I could hardly tell whether they are living or just painted.Not only does the exhibition widen my knowledge about Chinese culture,but it also enriches my after-class life.
If you want to have a better understanding of Chinese culture,grasp this opportunity without hesitation.
翻译句子
1.(2023·甘肃张掖一摸)我是学生会主席李华。我很荣幸能在这里代表全体学生向你们表示热烈的欢迎。
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2.今天我很高兴能有机会做演讲。我演讲的内容是环境保护。
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3.众所周知,良好的生活习惯对我们的身体和心理健康很重要。
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4.(2023·河南豫北名校三模)总之,我们应该对它的优点和缺点有一个很好的了解,并找到一个适当的方法,使我们的学习更有效。
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5.而且,众所周知,只为看电视而留出太多时间是浪费时间。
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6.这项运动的目的是减轻(mitigate)这类交通事故的后果,降低事故中的死亡率。
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7.我的呼吁是,为了自己和他人的安全,每个骑电动自行车的人都应该戴头盔。
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8.我很荣幸有机会介绍中国取得的伟大成就。
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9.我们为过上更好的生活而自豪,丰衣足食。
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10.总之,中国不再是不发达国家,它已成为一个繁荣的国家。
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第六组 活动报道、倡议书和通知
题型16 活动报道
活动报道是记叙文的一种,其特点是以事实为依据,所以首先要交代事件或活动的时间、地点、目的和参与者,然后叙述活动的过程,最后对活动进行评价。报道的应用较为广泛,实用性强。写作过程中要保持事件的真实性,语言要准确、 简练。写作结构如下:
常用句式
◆开头简要概况
1.On the afternoon of...,...was held by the Student Council in our school playground.
……下午,学生会在我们学校操场举行了……
2.In order to provide the students with a colorful school life,we held...last week.
为了给学生们提供丰富多彩的学校生活,我们上周举办了……
3.Aimed at enriching students’ school life,...was held in our school.
为了丰富学生们的学校生活,我们学校举办了……
4.Nowadays more and more people begin to realize/notice the importance of...
现在越来越多的人开始意识到/注意到……的重要性。
5.Recently the issue/problem of...has been brought into focus/brought to public attention.
最近……的问题已成为焦点/引起了公众注意。
◆中间活动过程
1.At the beginning of the activity,a short film was shown,helping us students know...
活动开始时,放映了一部短片,帮助我们学生了解……
2.The opening ceremony started at...,and the schoolmaster delivered a speech about...
开幕式从……点开始,校长发表了关于……的演讲。
3.A person who witnessed this incident photographed it and posted it on...一位目击这一事件的人拍下了照片,并将其发布在……
◆结尾评价、感受
1.By participating in the activity,we not only mastered some basic and practical skills,but also raised our awareness of safety.
通过参加这次活动,我们不仅掌握了一些基本的实用技能,而且增强了我们的安全意识。
2.It’s such a meaningful activity that students are all looking forward to the next...
这是一次很有意义的活动,学生们都很期待下一次的……
3.There is no denying that the activity is definitely meaningful to us students.
不可否认,这次活动对我们学生来说肯定是有意义的。
典例展示
(2023·广东广州天河区二模改编)
上周三你校举办了一场师生篮球友谊赛,由高三学生代表队对战教师代表队。请你为校英文报写篇短文报道这场篮球赛。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.标题已给出,不计入总词数。
[满分范文]
A Teacher-Student Basketball Friendly
Last Wednesday witnessed a friendly basketball match between students and teachers in our school,which is aimed at enriching students’ school life.
Bathed in sunshine,players from Grade 3 competed against their teachers in the basketball field surrounded by all the rest students,who were watching excitedly.Both teams were playing at their best in high spirits.Although the teachers took the lead in the game at first,the students did not lose heart and tried to catch up with their opponents.The match was filled with great excitement and passion,ending in a draw of 2:2.
Not only did the exciting game relieve the students’ intense pressure,but their relationship with the teachers was also strengthened.There is no denying that the activity is definitely meaningful to us students and teachers.
题型17 倡议书
倡议书属于应用文的一种,是为倡议或是发起某项活动而写的号召性的、公开提议性的专用文体。倡议书一般由称呼、正文、结尾和落款四部分组成,有时还根据需要加上适当的标题。写作结构如下:
常用句式
1.With the development/wide spread of...,more and more people...
随着……的发展/广泛传播,越来越多的人……
2.Currently,there is an unpleasant phenomenon of...in society.
目前,在社会上有一种令人不愉快的……现象。
3.As we know,...is of great importance for us.
正如我们所知,……对我们来说非常重要。
4.Besides,doing...is also beneficial/harmful to...
此外,做……对……来说也是有益/害的。
5.Only if we do...can we...
只有我们做……,我们才能……
6.It is high time we did/should do...Let’s take action right now.
是时候该我们做……了。 让我们现在就采取行动。
典例展示
(2023·山东济南一模)
假定你是校学生会主席李华,时值春暖花开,万物复苏,请你围绕“走进春天,锻炼身体”这一主题,在校英文报上发一封倡议书,要点如下:
1.倡议的目的;
2.具体内容;
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
[满分范文]
Dear friends,
Spring has come! Flowers are blossoming and everything is coming back to life.It is high time that we embraced the bright spring and built up our body.So it is strongly advocated that we go outdoors and take exercise regularly.
First,we are supposed to do more sports daily,which is definitely beneficial to our immune system.We can play ball games,jog or take a walk after school.Besides,at weekends,it is a good choice to go hiking with our friends or family.
Let’s act together now to strengthen our physical health and create a better life.
The Students’ Council
题型18 通知
通知是上级对下级、组织对成员布置工作、传达情况或告诉公众某件事情等情况时使用的一种应用文体。时间、地点、参与者、内容及注意事项都是通知的要点,应直截了当地给予说明。一般标题为Notice或Announcement。通常要有发通知的时间及落款;一般要告诉读者事件发生的地方,因此常用一般将来时,穿插使用一般现在时。写作结构如下:
常用句式
1.In order to...,our school will hold...
为了……,我们学校将举行……
2.The...,which is aimed at...,is scheduled on...
这场……,旨在……,定于……(时间、地点)举行。
3.In order to improve.../With the purpose of raising.../Aimed at strengthening...,our school will hold...
为了提高……,我们学校将举办……
4.There will be various...,including...
将会有各种……,包括……
5.What’s more,you need to be informed of the following requirements.
此外,还需要向你们告知以下要求。
6.Firstly,remember to do...
首先,记住做……
7.Secondly,you are expected to do...
第二,你应该做……
8.You’re required to do...before...
你一定要在……之前做……
9.Your effort really counts.
你的努力真的很重要。
10.Everyone is welcome.
欢迎每个人参加。
11.You’re warmly welcome to...
热烈欢迎你……
12.Looking forward to your active participation/involvement.
期待你们的积极参与。
典例展示
(2023·江苏泰州四调)
假定你是校学生会主席李华。下个月,你校学生会拟举行“Second-hand Books Donation”活动,请你为校英文报写一则通知,内容包括:
1.活动的目的;
2.活动的安排;
3.号召大家积极参与。
注意:词数80左右。
[满分范文]
Dear Fellow Students,
Next month,the Students’ Council will launch a campaign titled “Second-hand Books Donation” to gather second-hand books with a view to recycling used books.
The donation boxes will be placed in each classroom,which the volunteers will collect twice a week.Additionally,you can take donations directly to the office between 1 p.m.and 2 p.m.on weekdays.The books collected will be delivered to primary students in rural areas.
Looking forward to your active participation.There is no doubt that your kindness will be greatly appreciated.
Students’ Council
翻译句子
1.学生会举办了一场以保护环境为主题的活动。
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2.对中国传统文化感兴趣的老师和学生都参加了这次活动。
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3.每个人都对该活动的评价很高,因为这是一个亲近大自然的好机会。
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4.正是通过这次活动,我们充分认识到应该提高尊老意识。
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5.随着智能手机的普及,越来越多的年轻人出现了视力问题。因此,我主张保护眼睛。
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6.正如我们所知,我们通过视觉获得大约80%的信息,所以你再怎么保护眼睛都不过分。
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7.为了丰富学生的课外活动,我们学校将在操场上举办“体育周”。
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8.旨在强身健体的“体育周”将从3月16日持续到3月22日。
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9.在这一周里,你将有各种各样的活动可以选择,从跳绳到不同的竞赛。
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10.期待每个学生为了健康而积极参加“体育周”。
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______________________________________________________________________________第2讲 解题技法指导
亮化词汇三原则
根据高考应用文写作的评分标准,应用词汇的丰富性和准确性是作文能否取得高分的一条重要的标准。所以,在词汇的亮化上应遵循以下三个原则:
原则1 求新求变
同样意义的词语,要根据语境使用最新学过的而不是小学或初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现,要使用不同的表达方式。如:
1.Not only does the ocean offer us enough food,but it also maintains the balance of nature.Thus,it is very important to protect the ocean.(2022·全国甲)
→Not only does the ocean offer us sufficient food,but it also maintains the balance of nature.Thus,it is imperative to protect the ocean.
2.I asked my parents to allow me to have a piano lesson for beginners.(2023·全国乙)
→I asked my parents to allow me to take up a piano lesson for beginners.
3.With the wide spread of the Internet,more and more people become online learners.(2021·全国乙)
→With the wide spread of the Internet,an increasing number of people become online learners.
4.My suggestion is to group students by their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.(2023·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ)
→My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
5.Last weekend,many students who like gardening participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Council.(2023·浙江1月)
→Last weekend,various students who are keen on gardening participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Council.
6.Throughout the event,I was attracted by the wide variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes,and those that provide food and shelter for animals.(2023·浙江1月)
→Throughout the event,I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes,as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.
原则2 求准求精
写作时不一定每一句都要有复杂句式,有时准确使用一个单词就会让整个句子增色。
1.We believe that his teachings will remind us of the importance of integrity,compassion,and social responsibility.(2023·全国甲)
→We hold a strong belief that his teachings do remind us of the importance of integrity,compassion,and social responsibility.
2.In conclusion,we should find a way to study online better.(2021·全国乙)
→In conclusion,we should find a way to study online more efficiently.
3.I watched a live musical performance for the first time and the good players touched me.(2023·全国乙)
→That was the first time I had watched a live musical performance and the fantastic players made me touched deeply.
4.I think that it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.(2023·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ)
→I think it not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.
原则3 短语优先
恰当使用短语代替单词,不但可以增加词数,还有助于绕开不会表达的单词,使得行文更加流畅。
1.I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestion.(2023·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ)
→I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into account/consideration.
2.Initially,on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing,I began to love skating.(2023·全国乙)
→Initially,on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing,I became enthusiastic about skating.
3.And eventually,we can master what we desire to learn.(2021·全国乙)
→And eventually,we can have a good command of what we desire to learn.
4.Firstly,randomly pairing up students may cause imbalanced language abilities within the groups.(2023·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ)
→Firstly,randomly pairing up students may lead to/result in imbalanced language abilities within the groups.
美化句式四诀窍
对复杂结构和含有非谓语动词的高级句式的灵活运用能够彰显考生对英语语言文字的驾驭能力。在使用这些句式时,一定要注意:高级但不造作,多变但不离谱,复杂但不晦涩。巧记以下四个诀窍会对你使用高级句式起到事半功倍的效果。
诀窍1 多种句型巧用
1.定语从句:Confucius,also known as Kong Qiu,was a Chinese philosopher and politician who lived during the Spring and Autumn Period.(2023·全国甲)
2.状语从句:However,at the very beginning,when I stepped on the ice,I stumbled over myself.(2023·全国乙)
3.名词性从句:I hope that by sharing my personal story,others will be inspired to find joy and growth in their own childhood hobbies and pursuits.(2023·上海)
4.with复合句型:This can hinder the progress of both students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation,with little room left for the other student to improve.(2023·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ)
5.感叹句: How thrilled I am to have the opportunity to share my own skills and experiences as part of this effort!(2023·天津)
诀窍2 非谓语动词若干
非谓语动词的正确使用能体现出学生的语法功底,相比于从句,非谓语动词更加生动简洁。
1.Last weekend,I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Council.(2023·浙江1月)
2.Initially,on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing,I became enthusiastic about skating.(2023·全国乙)
3.I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.(2023·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ)
4.Firstly,randomly pairing up students may lead to imbalanced language abilities within the groups.(2023·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ)
5.This allows students to collaborate with someone they are comfortable with,ensuring a supportive and productive learning environment.(2023·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ)
诀窍3 省略倒装强调可出现
特殊句型如省略句、倒装句和强调句等可以使整篇文章句式更加丰富。
1.While listening to the local botanist’s talk,I gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.(2023·浙江1月)
2.It is events like the Chinese Workshop that are crucial for promoting cross-cultural understanding and appreciation.(2023·天津)
3.So easily addicted to chatting online or playing games are they that they will forget to learn English by using them.(2022·全国乙)
4.From the learning experience,I fully understand that only by practicing diligently can we overcome many kinds of difficulties.(2023·全国乙)
5.Hard as I strive,I still fell over again and again.(2023·全国乙)
6.Such is the well-known figure in history I will respect all the time.(2023·全国甲)
诀窍4 被动适当露露面
如果一篇文章全都是主动句而且主语一致,文章就会显得单调,适当使用被动句能够避免这种情况。
1.He is widely considered one of the most important figures in Chinese history and his teachings have had a profound impact on Chinese culture and society.(2023·全国甲)
2.Confucius’ influence can still be seen in modern Chinese society,where his teachings continue to be studied and applied in daily life.(2023·全国甲)
3.The moment I thought of the athletes on the field,I was inspired by their powerful spirits.(2023·全国乙)
4.Paper-cutting is an art form that has a long history in China and is still widely practiced today.(2023·天津)
衔接过渡“起、承、转、合”
类别 常见词 经典句
用于“起”的过渡词汇(用在段落或文章的开头) first of all;at first;to start/begin with;recently/lately/currently;at present;in recent years;in general 1.To begin with,I suggest organizing a walking tour around the city to explore the green spaces in Beijing.(2023·北京) 2.First of all,what we can do is place importance on our daily actions.(2022·全国甲)
用于“承”的过渡词汇(用在段落中的第一个扩展句中) 比较/解释 as well as;in other words;similarly;likewise;that is to say;also;too 3.It is also a symbol of the skills that I developed through my childhood experiences.(2023·上海) 4.What’s more,if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements,what should I do?(2021·全国甲) 5.Therefore,I strongly recommend that all the students in our school should make use of their spare time to enjoy these wonderful works carefully.(2021·新课标Ⅰ,Ⅱ) 6.There are many influential historic figures in China such as Qu Yuan,Zhuge Liang and Li Bai.(2023·全国甲)
并列 what’s more;moreover; furthermore;in addition; besides;additionally
因果 therefore;so;thus; for this purpose
举例 for instance;for example;in this case;such as
用于“转”的过渡词汇(用在段落中的第二个扩展句中) though/although;in spite of;despite;even if/though;but;however;on the other hand;yet;on the contrary;whereas;nevertheless;in contrast;by contrast;what’s worse;worse still;unfortunately/fortunately;unluckily/luckily;in fact;as a matter of fact;actually 7.Although my fingers were painful after practice,I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.(2023·全国乙) 8.Even though I will not pursue it as my life career,I will still continue playing the piano as my hobby.(2023·全国乙) 9.However,those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12% respectively.(2022·全国乙)
用于“合”的过渡词汇(用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中) overall;in a word;in general;in short;above all;after all;generally speaking;to sum up;finally;in conclusion;at last;in summary;as a result;thus;eventually;hence;on the whole 10.Overall,it was a valuable and enriching experience.(2023·浙江1月) 11.And eventually,we can have a good command of what we desire to learn.(2023·全国乙) 12.To sum up,I wish you could live up to the expectations of our school.(2019·全国Ⅱ)
规避常见五错误
典例示范 常见错误 错误句子 改错
句子成分残缺或多余 (缺)There are many students support it. There are many students who/that support it.
(多)Because the planting process can bring me a sense of satisfaction and achievement,so I really consider it the best way to relax myself. The planting process can bring me a sense of satisfaction and achievement,so I really consider it the best way to relax myself.
主谓不一致 The survey show that most students prefer to text or give gifts to their mothers. The survey shows that most students prefer to text or give gifts to their mothers.
You can read the books which is on the shelf. You can read the books which are on the shelf.
时态、语态错误 The exhibition will hold next weekend. The exhibition will be held next weekend.
Knowing that you had a preference for flying kites,I sincerely invite you to go to the Kite Festival with me. Knowing that you have a preference for flying kites,I sincerely invite you to go to the Kite Festival with me.
词性不分 To raise the aware of caring for the disadvantaged groups,our school is to organize a charity donation. To raise the awareness of caring for the disadvantaged groups,our school is to organize a charity donation.
Paper-cutting is a tradition Chinese art. Paper-cutting is a traditional Chinese art.
I finally through the exam after several attempts. I finally got through the exam after several attempts.
中式英语 How are you going these days?I very miss you. How are you going these days?I miss you very much.
The hotel broke out a big fire last night. A big fire broke out in the hotel last night.
As you know,our programme starts every Tuesday at 10 am and ends at 11 am. As you know,our programme starts at 10 am and ends at 11 am every Tuesday.
Ⅰ.升级句中加黑词汇
1.With the development of technology,more and more people are fond of online payment.
→With the development of technology, people are fond of online payment.
2.(2023·江西5市重点中学联考)Knowing that you like Chinese culture,I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me.
→Knowing that you Chinese culture,I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me.
3.(2023·陕西咸阳一模)In order to improve the students’ awareness of body building,a hill-climbing competition,with the theme of “Health Is First”,was held last Sunday by our school.
→ the students’ awareness of body building,a hill-climbing competition,with the theme of “Health Is First”,was held last Sunday by our school.
4.(2023·河北唐山、保定一模)If you want to enter for it,please fill in the application form on the school website before October 5th.
→If you want to it,please fill in the application form on the school website before October 5th.
5.It will be about the history of Chinese paper-cutting and teaching some basic paper-cutting techniques.
→It will the history of Chinese paper-cutting and teaching some basic paper-cutting techniques.
6.(2023·郑州质检)After all,the Spring Festival is very important because it’s a new beginning which brings hope to us and it’s also a time to say our thanks and take our responsibility.
→After all,the Spring Festival is because it’s a new beginning which brings hope to us and it’s also a time to and take our responsibility.
7.(2023·兰州一诊)I think that what mothers really need is their children’s understanding and trust.
→I that what mothers really need is their children’s understanding and trust.
8.(2023·安徽淮南一模)I am very happy to hear from you,and I want to recommend you to do voluntary work.
→I am to hear from you,and I recommend you to do voluntary work.
9.(2023·湖南张家界二模)Representing my class,I’m writing to propose some ideas and confirm related details about it.
→ my class,I’m writing to propose some ideas and confirm related details about it.
10.(2023·四川凉山州一诊)The charity sale is arranged on our school playground next Saturday from 8:00 am to 11:00 am.
→The charity sale is on our school playground next Saturday from 8:00 am to 11:00 am.
Ⅱ.升级句式练习
1.(2023·北京)To begin with,I suggest organizing a walking tour around the city to explore the green spaces in Beijing,and it will allow participants to experience the beauty of the city’s parks and gardens while promoting eco-friendly transportation.(用定语从句改写)
→To begin with,I suggest organizing a walking tour around the city to explore the green spaces in Beijing,
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2.(2023·湖南株洲一模)With the intention of promoting interpersonal and cross-cultural communication,a lecture will be delivered in the morning,and after it we’ll have a discussion about ways to sharpen English skills.(用定语从句改写)
→With the intention of promoting interpersonal and cross-cultural communication,a lecture will be delivered in the morning,
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3.(2023·河北唐山、保定一模)Each participant is required to recite a Tang poem or a Song lyric poem within 5 minutes.(用what I stress把此句改为名词性从句)
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4.The students interested in the contest are required to sign up for it before July 3.(用主语从句改写)
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5.(2023·河北邯郸一模)Everyone plays team spirit well and our club will be better and better.(用as long as引导的状语从句改写)
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6.We became exhausted halfway,but we managed to get to the finishing line.(用状语从句改写)
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7.Whenever I meet with difficulty,my Chinese teacher gives me encouragement.(用强调句改写)
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8.(2023·江西上饶一模)Through the hands-on experience,I not only gain a sense of achievement,but I also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth.(用倒装句改写)
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9.The fruit farm lies at the foot of the Mount Yuhuangshan.(用倒装句改写)
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10.We will hold the exhibition in the gallery hall of our school on Saturday afternoon.(用被动语态改写)
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Ⅲ.用适当的过渡词汇填空
A
Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next month.Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress 1. Su prefers the school uniforms.
2. ,I would be happy to wear the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony.3. ,this is precisely what the British students are expecting.They come to learn about Chinese culture with their own eyes.4. ,their Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive.The school uniforms are fine;5. ,they are not special enough to give a unique Chinese flavour.6. ,the inconvenience is not a problem if our purpose is to share Chinese culture.It is just the so-called inconvenience that displays the richness,delicacy and great fascination of Chinese culture with a history of thousands of years.
7. ,the traditional Chinese dress will make the occasion attractive to the British guests.
B
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua,a student from Guangming Middle School.I am writing to ask some questions about the summer course.
8. ,I wonder when the course will begin and how long it will last.9. ,I want to know whether your school will offer accommodation for the students.10. ,how much will you charge for it?11. ,how many students will be there in one class
12. ,I would appreciate it if you could reply to me as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Hua