中考英语热点话题作文讲解与练习
1.Introducing a museum
假如你是一名导游,你将带领一批外国游客参观我国唯一以茶和茶文化为主题的中国茶叶博物馆。请根据下面表格中的内容提示,写一段介绍该博物馆的导游词。
写作要求:1.须包含提示中的所有内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2.条理清楚,语言流畅,语句通顺,标点正确;3.100词左右。
【思路点拨】
第一步:审题
1.找关键词:博物馆 导游词2.确定以下内容体裁:应用文时态:一般现在时人称:第三人称
第二步:列出写作提纲
开头部分:致欢迎辞,引出要参观的博物馆主体部分:介绍博物馆的相关信息结尾部分:谈谈参观时需注意的事项或致结束辞
第三步:选词组句
1.描述博物馆可能用到的一些词location 位置 exhibition 展览rule 规则 sign 指示牌symbol 标志 character 特色floor 楼层 view 景观opening hours 营业时间exhibition room 展厅 ticket office 售票处ticket price 门票票价 free 免费的charge 收费 contact 联络transportation 交通方式 guide 导游
2.提炼可能用到的句型开头部分:
● Good morning/afternoon, everyone.Welcome to ...
● Nice to meet you, everyone! I’m glad to introduce ...to you.
● Hello, everyone.Here we are standing in front of ...
● Ladies and gentlemen, welcome to ...
● Welcome to ...It’s a great honour to be your guide.
● I am truly honoured to have this chance to show you around ...
● Hello, everyone! I’m glad to be your guide to show you around ...
● It’s such a great pleasure to have this chance to show you around ...主体部分:
● be located in / lies in / in front of / by the side of / near /...
● ...stands at the foot of / on the top of /...
● ...has / covers an area of...
● ...takes up ...square kilometres
● It’s one of the … museums.
● It has a history of … years.
● ...with a history of ...
● People built it … in …
● The museum’s opening hours are …
● The museum is open from … to … every day except …
● The museum has four floors: …
● There are … different parts / sections in the museum.
● You can see … between … and … / across from … / in front of … / on the left of …
● You can learn a lot about …, including …
● You can also enjoy …
● You will have the knowledge about …
● … is one of the most wonderful / best … of all.
● You can get to the museum by bus or underground.结尾部分:
● I sincerely hope every one of you enjoys your stay here.
● Please remember that …
● I believe all of you will love it as much as I do.
● Let’s start our pleasant trip right now!
● Now enjoy yourselves!
● Have a good time!
● I hope you all have a great time at the museum.Let’s go!
第四步:连句成篇
这是一篇导游词,要将表格中关于博物馆的内容介绍清楚,还要注意主体部分与开头、结尾的衔接要自然、流畅,内容充实。
【参考范文】
Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to Hangzhou, a paradise on earth! I am truly honoured to have this chance to show you around China National Tea Museum.Being the first of its kind in China, the museum opened to the public in 1991.Now it’s open daily except Monday.And guess what! We can visit it for free.With an area of about 45,000 square metres, the museum consists of four groups of buildings.To well exhibit the culture and history of tea, the museum sets 5 halls in Building 1.Building 2 is used for cultural and academic exchange.If you want to taste different kinds of tea, Building 3 is the right place.As for Building 4, it provides fantastic pared with other museums, this museum has no external walls, which means everyone is welcome to come.In a word, you can not only learn about tea and tea culture but also enjoy the beauty of nature.I hope you’ll enjoy yourselves here.
2.Giving advice
假如你是某英文报Problem & Advice栏目的编辑Jessica,你的读者Anna给你写了一封电子邮件,向你寻求帮助。请你根据下面的邮件内容,给Anna回一封邮件,帮助她分析问题并提出自己的想法和建议。
Dear Jessica,I have a serious problem now.My parents made a new rule for me after I became a student in the ninth grade.They ask me to spend all my evening studying because they want me to get better grades.I’m not allowed to watch TV, chat with friends or even play the piano on school nights.To them, good grades are everything.I’m really stressed now because of the rule.What should I do Can you help me Yours,Anna
写作要求:1.针对Anna提出的问题,至少提出两条实用性的建议,可适当发挥;2.条理清楚,语言流畅,语句通顺,标点正确;3.100词左右。
【思路点拨】
第一步:审题
1.找关键词:分析问题 提出建议2.确定以下内容体裁:应用文时态:一般现在时为主人称:第一人称和第二人称
第二步:列出写作提纲
开头部分:引出对方提出的问题主体部分:对提出的问题进行分析并给出建议结尾部分:总结观点以及表达愿望
第三步:选词组句
1.与提建议有关的词汇advice, suggestion, advise, suggest, hope, expect,wish, reason, consider, solve, deal with, useful, helpful
2.建议类连接词首先 first, firstly, first of all, in the first place, to begin with, to start with其次 besides, next, in addition, what’s more, moreover, furthermore最后 finally, above all, last but not least (最后但同样重要的)总结 after all, all in all, all things considered, as a result, by and large, in any case, in brief, in conclusion, on the whole, in short
3.提炼可能用到的句型开头部分:
● I’m sorry to learn that ...
● I’m sorry to learn about your problem.
● After reading your email, I’m sorry to know that …
● I know you have trouble in ...
● I’m glad to receive your email asking for my advice on …
● You have asked me for my advice.It’s my pleasure to tell you my opinions.
主体部分:
● Here is my advice.
● My advice is that …
● It would be wise to take the following action.
● I think / In my opinion, you should …
● I suggest that you (should) …
● If I were you, I would …
● There are several things you can do to solve the problem.
● First / Second / Third, you should …
● Last but not least, …
● It’s best for you to …
● It’s a good idea to …
● Why don’t you / Why not …
● You will be happy if you …
● Your parents will be happy if you …
● In my opinion, you should look at the problem in a different way.
● You’d better tell them that you …
结尾部分:
● I hope the advice is helpful / will help you.
● I hope you find my advice / suggestions useful / helpful.
● I will be happy if you find my advice / suggestions useful / helpful.
● Good luck to you!
● Wish you all the best.
第四步:连句成篇
习作要求我们就某个问题进行思考并提出自己的观点或建议。首先,必须认真分析邮件内容,弄清征询建议者的困惑所在,然后给出合理的建议。
【参考范文】
Dear Anna,I’m glad to hear from you.Don’t worry.You’re not alone.Many students have the same problem.Now I’m glad to give you some advice on how to solve this problem.First, you should explain to your parents that you won’t mind spending more time studying.However, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.You still need to do some activities, such as watching TV or chatting with friends, to relax.Or you will be too tired to learn well.Second, tell your parents how much you love playing the piano and that it helps you relax.Besides, try to make them believe that the piano well is good for your future development.Last but not least, you should promise to work harder at your lessons.Your parents care about your grades.If you get better grades, they won’t put much pressure on you.I hope these suggestions are useful to you.Yours,Jessica
3.Introducing a book
假如你是李辉,你校英文校刊新设Reading Classics栏目为学生们推荐值得阅读的一些中外名著。请你根据以下提示信息,写一篇书籍推荐稿,向该栏目投稿。
参考词汇:destroy v.摧毁 foster father 继父
写作要求:1.须包含提示中的所有内容,语句通顺,意思连贯,可适当发挥;2.100词左右。
【思路点拨】
第一步:审题
1.找关键词:推荐书籍2.确定以下内容体裁:应用文时态:一般现在时人称:第一人称和第三人称
第二步:列出写作提纲
第一部分:引出要推荐的书籍第二部分:介绍故事梗概第三部分:对书籍进行评价第四部分:推荐该书籍
第三步:选词组句
1.与推荐有关的词汇:recommend (推荐), recommendation, reason, be sure, introduce … to …, have a try
2.书籍推荐稿常用的词汇
● 介绍作家:be written by, was born in / on, grow up, be famous / well-known for, popular, works, writing career, be influenced by, all one’s life
● 介绍背景:be set in, take place, happen, in the 19th / 20th century
● 介绍人物:the main characters, the hero of the book, be described as, consider … as …, live in /with, live a … life
● 介绍情节:plot (故事情节), describe, tell about, at the beginning, after that, later, at last, finally
● 介绍故事特点:my favourite part, be different from, be written in, simple language, beautiful pictures
● 对书籍的评价:interesting, exciting, fantastic, moving, helpful, touching, meaningful, wonderful
3.提炼可能用到的句型开头部分:
● I have read a wonderful book named … by ...
● I want to recommend a book named ...to you.
● Recently I have read … and it touches me deeply.
● Today, I will introduce an interesting bookto you.It’s called …
主体部分:
● The book is about ...
● The story took place …
● The story is set in …
● Set in …, the book is about …
● … was written by … in the year of …
● The main characters are …
● This story has two / three /… main characters.
●… is the hero of the story.
● The story begins with ...
● It describes / tells us …
● My favourite part of the book is …
结尾部分:
● This story is full of fun.
● This is a book with beautiful pictures, simple words and ...
● This book is good for ...
● It is a truly great book!
● The book reminds us that we should ...
● From the novel, we can learn a lot, such as …
● The main character teaches me ...
● I have learned a lot about love, life and hope.
● Besides this, from the story I’ve also learned …
● The book is thought to be one of the greatest books.
● After reading the book, I was deeply impressed by ...
● This book is worth reading.
● It is more than a … story.
● I suppose everyone should read it.
● Reading makes a full man.— Francis Bacon
● Some books are to be tasted, others to be swallowed, and some few to be chewed and digested.— Francis Bacon
● Books are the ladder of human progress.— Golgi
● Reading for wisdom is like gymnastics to the body.— Edison
● Reading can help open our eyes and increase our knowledge.
● The reading of all good books is like a conversation with the finest men of past centuries.
第四步:连句成篇
这四个部分是相辅相成,连续递进的。在写作的时候,我们可以适当运用表示因果关系、递进关系的过渡词或句型将各个部分合理自然地连接起来,将书籍信息与自己的观点表达清楚。
NO.03
【参考范文】
Recently I have read a wonderful book named The Book Thief.It is a historical novel by Australian writer Markus Zusak.I’d like to recommend it to you.
Are you wondering who the “book thief” is Well, it’s a 9-year-old girl named Liesel, who loses her parents and brother.The story is set in Germany during World War Ⅱ.With the help of her foster father, Liesel learns to read.Later, Liesel becomes so interested in reading that she starts to steal the books that the Nazis want to destroy and shares the
power of language with others.
The moving novel tells us that we should not only love each other but also read more.It is thought to be one of the greatest children’s books and is really worth reading.Don’t miss it.I’m sure you will love it.
4.Introducing a sportsperson
你喜欢运动吗?谁是你最喜欢的运动员?运动员们手里金灿灿的奖杯与他们的努力和汗水是分不开的。他们所展现出的自律和刻苦精神激励着其他人去追逐和实现自己的梦想。
在本周五的英语活动课上,老师将会让同学们以My favourite sportsperson为主题进行发言。请你根据以下表格,写一篇发言稿,向大家介绍你最喜欢的短跑运动员葛曼棋。
写作要求:1.须包含表格中的所有信息,语句通顺,语意连贯,可适当发挥;2.100词左右。参考词汇: sprinter n.短跑运动员
【思路点拨】
第一步:审题:1.找关键词:运动员2.确定以下内容体裁:应用文时态:一般过去时为主人称:第三人称
第二步:列出写作提纲
开头部分:运动员的个人信息(出生年月、出生地等)主体部分:运动员的个人经历和主要成就结尾部分:对该运动员的评价及其未来职业生涯的展望
第三步:选词组句
1.相关的词
● 描述运动员技术、能力、品格等的词:ability, skill, gifted, talented, promising (有前途的), active, careful, confident, excellent, hard-working, fast, be good at, be strong in, do well in …
● 介绍成就的词:achieve, achievement, win a gold/silver/bronze medal, win first/second prize, win first/second place, hold the record, break the record, set a new record, a record holder …
2.提炼可能用到的句型
● …, born on / in …, is a Chinese female sprinter.
● My favourite sportsperson is Ge Manqi, one of the most famous sprinters in the world.
● Ge Manqi, who is from Sanming, Fujian Province, has become China’s new hope in women’s sprinting.
● Ge Manqi had a natural talent for … when she was young.
● Her ability in … was noticed by …
● Her life as a sprinter began in …
● Like many other successful athletes, Ge Manqi started to practise at a young age / when she was very young.
● When she was … years old, she was encouraged to train for ...
● It seems that nothing can stop her from training.
● Because of her excellent performance, she was chosen for …
● In my opinion, Ge Manqi is now one of the hottest Chinese sprinters.
● As an excellent sprinter, she has won high praise not only from China but also from all over the world.
● In my heart, Ge Manqi is a symbol of courage and success, and she is the person I admire most.
● There is no doubt that she will achieve more in the future.
● Her hard work has brought her great success.We all take pride in her.
● We believe that Ge Manqi will bring us more surprises in the future.
● Success belongs to the persevering.
● No opportunity for the lazy, but diligence can make the most common variable opportunity opportunity.— Martin Luther
第四步:连句成篇
在具体写作时,我们要根据时间顺序来展开叙述,运用一些表时间的连接词,从而使得文章清晰而又有条理。
【参考范文】
Hi, boys and girls,
I’m glad to be here to talk about my favourite sportsperson Ge Manqi.Born in Sanming, Fujian Province, in October 1997, Ge Manqi is famous as a sprinter.
Ge’s natural talent for running was noticed when she was young.Because of her excellent performance, she was chosen for the school track and field team at the age of 7.She was encouraged to train for sprinting by coach Liu Chaoxu in 2009.Ge trained so hard that she achieved great success.She won her first gold medal in the 2013 Asian Youth Games.In the 2019 National Indoor Track and Field Championships, she won first place in the final of the women’s 60-metre race and broke the national record by clocking 7.10 seconds.In 2020, she set her personal best time of 22.69s in the 200m, representing the fastest time by a Chinese sportswoman since 1998.
Ge is really the pride of China.In my heart, she is a symbol of courage and success, and she is the person I admire most.There is no doubt that she will achieve more in the future.
That’s all.Thank you for your listening!
5.Describing a festival
假如你是大明,你的新西兰朋友Harry在网上看到一段李子柒制作重阳糕的视频,他对视频中所体现的中国传统文化非常感兴趣。请你根据以下所给提示和要求,给Harry写一封邮件向他介绍重阳节。
参考词汇:
pray for 祈求
写作要求:
1.须包含提示中的所有内容,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.条理清楚,语言流畅,语句通顺,标点正确;
3.100词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
【思路点拨】
第一步:审题
1.找关键词:介绍重阳节;
2.确定以下几个内容:
体裁:说明文
时态:一般现在时为主
人称:第一人称
第二步:描述节日类文章常用的词汇
traditional, meaning, symbol, enjoy, admire, treat, delicious, popular, interesting, share with, play with, celebrate … by …, shop for presents, decorate … with …, have a party, get together, have dinner together, visit relatives/friends, eat out, dress up, have a good time / enjoy oneself / have fun, sweep / wash / drive away bad things, enjoy traditional food, family reunion dinner, bring good luck to …
第三步:提炼介绍节日的常用句型
● Hello, everyone! Now let me introduce … to you.
● I’d like to tell you something about a traditional festival in China.
● … is one of the most important traditional festivals in …
● … usually comes / falls on ...
● The festival is on / in ...
● The festival has a long history.
● The first … was celebrated … years ago.
● We celebrate it to …
● … is in memory of ...
● People celebrate it in different ways / There are many ways to celebrate the festival.
● The main activity during … is …
● … is another big part of the celebration.
● The celebrations of the festival include …
● This is how we celebrate the day.
● It is a tradition to … during the festival in my home town.
● It’s a time for a special dinner among family and friends.
● In a word, it is a very happy time of the year, with best wishes being given all around.
第四步:完成写作框架
【参考范文】
Dear Harry,
Thank you for your letter.I’m glad that you’re interested in Chinese culture.The Double Ninth Festival is celebrated on the ninth day of the ninth lunar month.This year, it falls on October 14th.There are many traditional ways to celebrate the festival.The main activity during the festival in my home town is going climbing with the family members.People climb mountains in order to pray for good health and good luck.Other activities include enjoying beautiful chrysanthemums, drinking chrysanthemum wine, eating delicious Chongyang Cakes and wearing dogwood.Since 1989, the festival has been named as Seniors’ Day, so another meaning behind the festival is showing love to old people.I love the festival because it’s a time for my family to get close to nature and have a big dinner together.
Best wishes!
Daming
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