外研版九年级英语上册Module 3Heroes模块话题满分范文必背

Module 3 Heroes
模块话题满分范文必背
一、材料作文
1 ．每个人都有自己心中的学习榜样。钟南山院士是我学习的榜样。下面是关于他的一些简要信息。
根据这些信息，写一篇 80 字左右的英语短文。
1.钟南山出生于 1936 年 10 月 20 日。他 85 岁了，每天坚持锻炼身体。
2.他是个医生，勇敢，有爱心，知识渊博……
3 他的主要事迹：
A ．新冠 Covid-19 开始传播的时候，他奔赴最危险的地方。
B ．对抗疫情。不放弃病人。
4. 我从他的身上学到了许多东西……
(
【答案】例文
Everyone has his own role model. Dr. Zhong Nanshan is my role model. Zhong Nanshan was born
on
October 20,
1936. Although he
is
85 years old, he still keeps exercising
every
day.
He
is
one
of
the most
famous
medical scientists in the 21st century. He is brave, warm-hearted
and know
ledgeable.
When Covid-19 began to spread, he went to lots of
dangerous places to help
others. He
defeated
the
epidemic
bravely and did not give up rescuing patients.
I learned a lot from him. First of
all, we
should keep
doing
exer
cise to keep
ourselves
healthy.
Secondly,
we
should be always ready to
help others.
【详解】
[
总体分析
]
①
题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般现在时
”
和
“
一般过去时
”
；
③
提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏
信息，以第三人称为主。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，整体介绍钟南山的基本信息；
第二步，阐述在疫情期间，钟南山的事迹；
)
(
第三步，最后说明从钟南山身上学到的优点。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
Although
尽管
②
keep doing sth
一直做某事
③
give up
放弃
[
高分句型
]
①
He is one of
the most famous medical scientists
in the
21st
century
.
（
one
of+
最高级
+
名词复数
“……
中最
……
之一
”
）
②
First of
all, we should keep doing
exercise to keep
ourselves healthy.
（动词不定式作目的状语）
)
2．袁隆平被称为“杂交水稻之父”。由于他的努力， 中国的水稻产量大幅度提高。请根据以下提示对他
进行介绍。
提示： Father of Hybrid Rice ，finished university in the 1960s ，developed hybrid rice in 1973
要求： 1）语法正确，表达流畅； 2）拼写正确； 3）词数： 70 左右。
(
_________
【答案】例文
Yuan Longping is one of
the most famous
scientists in
Chin
a.
People call him “Father of
Hybrid Rice”. In the
1960s, he finished univer
sity.
Since then, he has
spent plenty
of
his time developing the new type of
rice. In
1973, together with other scientists, he
developed hybrid
rice
.
It
was a great success. Because of
his hard work, China now produces
enough rice
every
year to
f
eed
its people.
His
achievements have encouraged all the Chines
e people.
What a great scientist Yua
n
Longping
is!
【详解】
[
总体分析
]
)
(
①
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般现在时
”
；介绍袁隆平做的事要用
“
一般过去时
”
③
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，总得介绍下袁隆平；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了袁隆平的事迹和成就；
第三步，书写结语。感叹袁隆平的伟大。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
plenty of
大量的
②
developed
培育，发展
③
achievements
成就
④
encourage
鼓励
[
高分句型
]
①
Since then, he has spent plenty of
his time developing the
new
type
of
rice.
（本句使用了现在完成时；
spend
some time doing sth
.“
花多长时间做某事
”
）
②
What a great scientist
Yuan Longping is!
（感叹句）
)
3 ．一个有希望的民族不能没有英雄，一个有前途的国家不能没有先锋。每个人心中都有自己的英雄。
《ABC Kids》 报社正在举行“ 心中的英雄”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你写一篇短文投稿。
内容提示：
1. What does a hero mean in your opinion
2. Who is a hero in your heart
3. What can you learn from him or her
注意：文中不得透露个人真实信息；词数 60~80；开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Everyone has a hero in his or her heart.
___________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________
(
【答案】例文：
Everyone has a hero in his or her heart. I t
hink a hero must be
a
good
example
for
others.
The hero in my heart is called Li Lanjuan.
She is
a
doctor
from Zhejiang.
The reason
I
like
her
is
that
she,
as
well as her team, saved a lot of
patients during
the pandemic.
She
is
not
only brave
in
th
e
face
of
the
virus but
also
very
professional
.
After
taking
her
advice
,
thousands
of
people
were
saved
.
Maybe I cannot be a doctor like her but I will try my best t
o
contribute
to
human
society.
【详解】
[
总体分析
]
①
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般现在时
”
和
“
一般过去时
”
；
③
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏
“
内容提示
”
中的关键信息，写短文介绍自
己心中的英雄。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，介绍在自己看来英雄意味着什么；
第二步，介绍自己心中的英雄；
第三步，介绍自己从这个英雄身上学到了什么。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
not only
... but also
...
不仅
……
而且
……
②
in the face
of
面对
③
thousands of
数以千计的
[
高分句型
]
①
I think a hero must be a good exampl
e
for
others.
（省略
that
的宾语从句）
②
Maybe I cannot be a doctor like her but I wil
l try my best to
contribute
to
human
society.
（
but
连接并列句）
)
4 ．假如你是某中学学生李华，最近你班观看了《感动中国 2021 年度人物》，失聪女孩江梦南的事迹
深深触动了你。请根据以下要点写一篇短文，描述江梦南的经历，并表达你的想法。
要点如下：
（1）江梦南在六个月大的时候失去了听力。
（2）她父母鼓励她学习唇语、练习开口说话，这让她能够与人正常交流。
（3）有时候，学会一个单词可能要练习上千遍。
（4）她努力学习，终于在 2018 年被清华大学录取。
（5）你的想法 ……
要求：（1）词数： 80~100 个
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
参考词汇：失去听力： lose one’s hearing 唇语： lip-read
清华大学： Tsinghua University 录取： be enrolled into
Jiang Mengnan was born in Hunan Province in 1992.
She
(
【答案】例文
JiangMengnan was born in Hunan Province in
1992.
She
lost her hearing when she was
a
six-month-
old girl.
Her parents encouraged her to learn to lip-read and practise speaking. This
made
i
t possible
for her to
communicate with common people. But this was also a very difficult
journey.
Sometimes it might t
ake
her
thousands of
times to learn even a word. However, Jiang Mengnan never thought
of
giving up.
She
studied hard
and was finally enrolled into Ts
inghua University. It seemed
impossible, but
she
did
it.
We
all
should
learn
from
her bravery and persisten
ce.
【详解】
[
总体分析
]
①
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般过去时
”
；
③
提示：写作时应用第三人称形式来叙述；时态用一般过去时；可通过文中提示的五个方面以观察者的视
角来描述江梦南幼年时期的遭遇、父母在她生活和学习中对她的帮助以及她通过自己的努力最终考上清华
大学的事迹；表述中条理应清晰。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，表明写作主题。引出需要赞扬的对象；
第二步， 具体阐述写作内容。描述江梦南幼年时期的遭遇、父母和她自己在生活和学习上遇到的挫折和坚
持，最终如愿考入清华大学；
)
(
第三步，书写结语。根据以上描述总结我们应该向江梦南学习。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
encourage sb. to do sth.
鼓励某人做某事
②
communicate with sb.
与
……
交流
③
it takes sb. some time t
o do
sth.
做某事花费某人多长时间
④
think of
doing sth.
考虑做某事
[
高分句型
]
This made it possible for her to communicate with common pe
ople.
（
make it+
形容词
for
sb.
to
do
sth.“
使做某
事对某人来说变得
……”
。
it
是形式宾语，真正的宾语是动词
不定式。）
)
5 ．疫情三年中，涌现出了许多英雄，如钟南山院士、李兰娟院士、张继先医生等。他们当中谁最让你钦
佩呢？请你以“My Favourite Anti-epidemic Hero”为题写一篇短文。
内容要点：
1. 你最钦佩的抗疫英雄是谁？
2. 谈谈你钦佩他（她）的原因。
3. 你从他（她）身上学到了什么？
注意：
1. 内容必须包含所给要点；
2. 文中不得透露个人信息；
3. 词数 80 左右。
参考词汇： anti-epidemic（抗疫）；COVID-19（新冠肺炎）；admire sb. for sth./doing sth. （敬佩、佩服）
My Favourite Anti-epidemic Hero
(
【答案】
My Favourite Anti-epidemic
Hero
There are millions of
anti-epidemic heroes. Among them, the anti-epidemic hero in my heart is
an
excellent
doctor, Zhong Nanshan.
)
(
He is a kind man with courage. Although he was old, he tried his bes
t to
fight
against
COVID-19.
Though he
was very tired, he never gave up his work. He saved millions of
people’s lives. And he has
moved
every
Chinese
people. I admire him not only for what he has done
to the
country but
also
for
his
courage.
I
will
study
hard
from
now on and become a person like him. He is
a
true hero
in
my
heart.
【详解】
[
总体分析
]
①
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般现在时和一般将来时
”
；
③
提示：写作要点已给出，学生应注意不要遗
漏
“
要点提示
”
中最钦佩的抗疫英雄、钦佩他（她）的原因
以及从中学到了什么的介绍。适当添加细节，并突
出写作重点。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，开门见山直接介绍最钦佩的抗疫英雄是谁。
第二步，具体阐述钦佩抗疫英雄的原因。
第三步，描述自己从最钦佩的抗疫英雄身上学到了什么。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
tried his best
尽他
最大努力
②
fight against
对抗，与
……
作斗争，为反对
……
而斗争；
③
gave up
放弃
④
from now on
从现在开始
[
高分句型
]
①
He is a kind man with
courage.
（
with
表伴随）
②
Although he was old, he tried his bes
t to fight against
COVID-19.
（
Although
引导引导让步状语从句）
③
I admire him not only for what he has
done to the
country but
also
for his
courage.
（
not
only…but
also…
用于
连接两个表示并列关系的成分）
)
6．“ 能吃苦， 肯奋斗， 有担当， 似一叶扁舟在激湍中逆流而上， 如一株小树在万木前迎来春光。 ”这就 是陆鸿，《感动中国》2022 年度人物之一。虽幼时高烧导致身体残疾，但他仍坚持学习。毕业后，由于身 体残疾， 陆鸿没有找到工作， 他开始自主创业， 从卖水、修自行车到最后成功开相册厂， 他帮助许多残疾 人就业， 实现人生价值……请以“永不言弃”为话题， 结合自身经历， 写一篇 90 词左右的英语短文， 讲述陆
鸿的成长经历以及他身上值得我们学习的优秀品质。
参考词汇：相册 album；坚持 persistence
注意：
1.短文条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2.短文中不得泄露个人信息；
3.词数 90 左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)
Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Award this year, Lu Hong left a deep
impression on me.
(
【答案】
Among all the people who were presented with Touching China Aw
ard this year, Lu
Hong
left
a
deep impression on me.
Lu Hong comes from Jiangsu. A high fever caused physical disability
when
he
was
young, but
he
still
persisted in studying. After graduation, due to his physical disability, Lu Hong
couldn
’t
find
a
job.
He
is
not
complaining, not depressed, and unwilling to become a burden to his family.
He
started his
own business,
from
selling water and repairing bicycles to successfully opening a photo album
factory. He
helped
many
disabled
people find employment and realize their value
in
life.
Lu Hong is not afraid of
hardship, willing to strive, responsible, and
never
gives up.
He
is
a
mo
del
for
all
of
pared to Lu Hong, there is nothing that canno
t be overcome
about the
difficulties
we
face
in
life
or
study.
【详解】
[
总体分析
]
①
题材：本文是一篇材料作文，讲述陆鸿的成长经历及他的优秀品质；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般现在时和一般过去时
”
；
③
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏
“
信息提示
”
中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重
点。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，总写，陆鸿给我留下了深刻印象，引出介绍的内容（文章已给出
）；
第二步，具体讲述陆鸿的成长经历。
第三步，最后写陆鸿值得我们学习的优秀品质，结束全文。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
leave a deep impres
sion on sb.
给某人留下深刻印象
②
come from
来自
)
(
③
be unwilling to do sth.
不愿意做某事
④
become a burden to
成为
…
的负担
⑤
be
not
afraid
of
hardship
不怕吃苦
⑥
compared to
与
……
相比，比起
⑦
due to
由于
[
高分句型
]
①
A high fever caused physical disability when
he
was
young,
but
he
still
persisted
in
studying.
（时间状语从句、
but
连接的并列句）
②
Among all the people who were presented wit
h Touching China Award this year…
（定语从句）
③
Compared to Lu Hong, there is nothing that can
not be overcome about the
difficulties
we
face
in
life
or
study.
（
there be
句型和定语从句）
④
He helped many disabled people find employment and
realize
th
eir
value
in
life.
（动词不定式作宾语补足语）
)
7 ．假如你校英文报正以“My hero”为题开展征文大赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文参赛，
介绍你心目中的英雄——颜宁。
要求：1.内容须包含所有要点提示，可适当发挥；
2.语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
3.词数不少于 100。
My hero
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
(
【答案】例文：
My Hero
Yan Ning is a hero in my heart.
She was born in Jinan,
Shandong. Yan Ning, 45
years old,
has been
one
of
the top scientists in the world. And she is the
founder of Shenzhen Academy
of
Medic
al
Sciences. I
admire
her
because she is a dream follower.
When
she was
a
little
girl,
she
dreamed
of
being
a
scientist.
To
achieve her
dream, she experienced a lot of
difficulties. But
she never
gav
e up her
dream.
Instead,
she worked
hard
to
fight
for
it. From her, I learned that the key to success is ha
rd work. No pains, no
gains. As
long
as
I
take
action,
I’m
sure
my dream will come true
one
day.
【详解】
[
总体分析
]
①
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作
文；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般现在时
”
和
“
一般过去时
”
；
③
提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，介绍颜宁的基本个人信息；
第二步，介绍她的成就；
第三步，介绍她成为你心目中英雄的原因以及你从她
身上学到了什么。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
be born in
出生于
②
dream of
doing sth
梦想做某事
③
give up
放弃
④
take action
采取行动
[
高分句型
]
①
I admire her because she is a dream
follower.
（
because
引导的原因状语从句）
②
When she was a little girl, she
dreamed
of
being
a
scientist.
（
when
引导的时间状语从句）
)
8 ．今年是学习雷锋六十周年纪念日，雷锋同志说过：“我要把有限的生命，投入到无限的为人民服务 之中去。 ”请写一篇意思连贯， 符合逻辑， 不少于 80 字的作文。在作文中， 简单表述你对雷锋的崇敬之情，
为什么向雷锋叔叔学习以及你在日常生活中是如何帮助他人的。
Learn from Lei Feng
Lei Feng was known as a pattern that offered help to others selflessly.
(
【答案】例文
Learn from Lei
Feng
Lei Feng was known as a pattern that offered help to others
selfl
essly. He
devoted
all his
life
to
his
beloved
career as well. I was totally shocked by his cha
racter.
Such is human nature: people trace the goo
d, water flows to low. Everyone
should
copy his
spirit
as
our
daily
life goes instead of
uttering a meaningless slogan “learn
f
rom
Lei
Feng,
our
decent
idol”,
so
that we
could
definitely see a lot more smiling
fac
es rather than
conflict.
To help others is not a hard thing, however, what you need is to
consist
doing
it.
Take
myself
as
an
example.
I am the representative of
math to collect homework is my daily task, however,
I would turn
them
to
the
right
page for shorten the time for teachers when correcting them.
I strongly suggest that if
each of
us takes Lei Feng
as
our role
mo
del
and
copies his
spirit,
we
shall
see
a
better world.
【详解】
[
总体分析
]
①
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般现在时和一般过去时
”
；
③
提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完
整表述内容。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，表达自己对雷锋的崇敬之情；
第二步，介绍向雷锋叔叔学习的原因，并讲述在日常生活中是如何帮助
别人的。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
instead
of
代替
②
so that
以便
③
take...as an example
以
……
为例
)
(
[
高分句型
]
①
I was totally shocked by h
is character.
（一般过去时被动语态）
②
I strongly suggest that if
each of
us takes Lei Feng
as
our
role
model
and
copies
his
spirit,
we
shall
see
a better
world.
（
that
引导宾语从句）
)
9．冬奥会上年仅 18 岁的中国自由式滑雪运动员谷爱凌成为了全世界的焦点。她参加了三项滑雪赛事， 获得了两金一银的骄人成绩。她不仅是优秀的运动员， 还是学霸和模特， 同时擅长篮球、芭蕾等， 她的成 功来源于她对滑雪的热爱和努力付出以及她骨子里的自信和永不放弃的精神。请大家根据以上的导语提示，
写一篇英语作文。
要求： 1. 字数 90-100 左右。 2. 不允许在文中出现自己的姓名和学校。
参考词语：
英文名字： Eileen Gu 自由滑雪者： freeskier 芭蕾： ballet
学霸： grade-A student 自由式滑雪： Freestyle Skiing
(
【答案】例文
At the Winter Olympics this year, Eileen Gu won two
gold medals and
one
silver
medal
for
China
in
the
women’s freestyle skii
ng.
First, Eileen’s success needs her deep love in the
skiing. It
’s known
that
interest
is
the best
teacher.
Second,
hardworking is the key to success.
Success needs us to devote our time. Fina
lly, her
confidence
enabled
her
to
perfectly show her skill. In final race she
even
tried
techni
ques which
she
never
successfully
completed
.
In a word, from this fantastic eighteen-year-old girl, we
can better understand passio
n, hard-working,
and
confidence.
【详解】［总体分析］
)
(
①
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，是一篇材料作文；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般现在时
”
和
“
一般过去时
”
；
③
提示：写作要点已给出，
考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内
容， 适当添加细节，
并突出写作重点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出介绍谷爱凌的个人成就；
第二步，具体阐述她取得这样成就的原因；
第三步，书写结语，总结可以从她身上学习的精神。
［亮点词汇］
①
In a word
总之
［高分句型］
①
It’s known that interest is
the best teacher.
（宾语从句）
②
In final race she even tri
ed techniques which she never
successfully
completed.
（
whicht
引导的定语从句）
)
10 ．榜样的力量是无穷的。众所周知，无数革命先烈的努力奋斗才换来了我 们今天的幸福生活，请 选择一个你心目中的革命先烈榜样，以 A Hero in My Heart 为题，并根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇
短文。
1.要点： 1）你心目中的革命先烈英雄是谁；
2）简述英雄事迹一二及影响；
3）为致敬革命先烈，新时代的青少年要怎么做才能成为对社会有用的人。
2.要求： 1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
2）词数 100 左右。
A Hero in My Heart
(
【答案】例文
A Hero in
My
Heart
A hero in my heart is Lei Feng. Lei Feng is
a model
soldier.
On
December
18,
1940, he
was
born
in
a poor
peasant family in a little mountain village of
Hunan Province. At the
a
ge
of
18,
he
worked
as
a
steel
worker.
He
)
(
was often praised for his good
job. On January 8,
1960, he
joined
the
a
rmy.
All
his
life,
he
was
selfless
and
kind
to
others. He constantly did good deeds for others. As
a
result,
he became
a
model
soldier.
After his
death,
Chairman
Mao called on the people to “Learn from Comrade Lei
Feng”.
The who
le
nation
was
moved by
his
deeds.
Lei
Feng’s spirit will live i
n
our hearts
forever.
As a teenager, we should learn from Lei Feng.
We
need
to
help
each
other
in
life,
and
more
importantly,
we
need to help those who need help. In this way, we can be useful to the socie
ty.
【详解】
[
总体分析
]
①
题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作
文；
②
时态：时态为
“
一般现在时
”
和
“
一般过去时
”
；
③
提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称和第三人称为主。
[
写作步骤
]
第一步，介绍你心目中的革命先烈英雄是谁；
第二步，简述英雄事迹一二及影响；
第三步，最后介绍作为一名青少年，要怎么做才能成为对
社会有用的人。
[
亮点词汇
]
①
be born in
出生于
②
join the army
参军
③
as a result
因此
④
help each other
互相帮助
[
高分句型
]
we need to help those who need help.
（
who
引导的定语从句）
)