unit 3 I’m more outgoing than my sister 单元写作
1.写作话题
本单元以“人的个性特征”为主题,学习如何描写身边熟悉的人,是中考常涉及的—个写作话题。
2.话题分析
命题人通常会把这一话题作文设置为提示性命题作文。写这种说明文时要先确定说明的顺序,一般会按照从外貌到性格,再到爱好等方面的顺序对人物的个性特征进行描述。写这种作文往往需要用到形容词/副词比较级、最高级的结构,因此需要熟悉该语法知识。
3.经典例题
请你比较一下你和你的好朋友 Alice之间的异同,可以从外貌、性格、爱好及学习等方面进行对比。 词数不少于 80。
思维导图
参考句式
(1) In some ways, we are the same. However, ...
(2) She/He is ... than ...
(3)A good friend likes to do the same things as me.
(4) It's (not) necessary to be the same.
高分例文
I have a good friend. Her name is Alice.① We are in the same class. In some ways, we are the same, but in some ways, we are different.② I am as tall as③ Alice. But she is heavier than me. We both have black hair. But my hair is longer than hers. Alice is more outgoing than me. She likes sports. But I like music. She exercises every day and she is stronger than me. I am smarter than her. And I am better at English than her. I don't think differences are important in a friendship.④
例文解析
①开门见山介绍朋友的姓名。
②学习本文巧妙过渡,介绍与朋友的相同和不同之处。
③as…as和比较级的应用使文章更加自然、流畅。
④文章最后一句阐述了作者的朋友观。
易错提醒:heavy的比较级是 heavier,不能写成 more heavy 或 heavyer。、
4.实践练习
假设你叫Lucy,你的朋友Mary写信向你介绍了她的好朋友的情况,同时希望你给她回信,并要求你在回信中介绍一下你的好朋友的一些情况。
要求:1.80词左右。2.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Mary,
Thank you very much for your letter.
Yours,
Lucy
参考答案
Dear Mary,
Thank you very much for your letter. Let me tell you something about my best friend. I like to have friends who are different from me. My best friend is Ann. She is very popular in our school. She has long brown hair. We are both twelve years old. She is a little taller and stronger than me. She is also smarter than me. But I am funnier than her. She is better at English than me and she often helps me with my English. We are different in some ways, but I don't think that's important in our friendship. Do you want to make friends with her
Yours,
Lucy