Unit 6 I'm going to study computer science.写作（含答案）

unit 6 I’m going to study computer science 单元写作
1.写作话题
本单元以“生活目标”为话题，主要围绕将来的目标和实现此目标应采取的措施展开。
2.话题分析
与之相关的话题作文一般是谈论未来的理想和今后的打算，写作时多用第一人称，时态主要为一般将来时。学习用一般将来时写作，可以在各种类型作文中运用，写作时要注意对短文进行整体布局，做到详略得当。
3.经典例题
寒假即将来临，请根据以下提示写一篇短文，谈谈你的寒假计划。
1. 好好休息和放松；
2.读书，因为读书既能开阔我的视野，又能使我学到很多知识；
3. 陪父母聊天，帮他们做家务；
4.参加社会活动，认识更多的人。
要求:1. 80 词左右;2.可围绕主题适当发挥。
参考词汇:knowledge 知识; social activities 社会活动
思维导图
参考句式
(1) What do you want to be when you grow up
(2)I want to be ...
(3) How are you going to ...
(4)I'm going to ...
高分例文
The winter holiday is coming. I'm going to do what I want to do.①
First②,I'm going to have a good rest and relax. I will read some good books. Reading books is useful because③ it can not only open up my mind but also help me get more knowledge. Next, I'm going to spend more time talking with my parents. I will also try my best to help them do some housework. Then, I'm going to take part in social activities so that I can get to know more people.
What do you think of my holiday I hope you will have a happy winter holiday.①
例文解析
①学习本文“开门见山，表明写作目的”的写法。
②first 与下文中 next、then 的使用使文章条理清晰,层次分明。
③because、so that等连接词的巧妙运用使行文更加流畅。
④最后一段中的问句拉近了作者与读者的距离。作者还表达了自己的祝愿，是我们可以学习的一种结尾方式。
易错提醒：
A. come、leave等表示位置移动的词用现在进行时表将来。
B.在含有宾语从句的主从复合句中，宾语从句用陈述语序
4.实践练习
假如你是汤姆(Tom)，昨天收到哥哥戴维(David) 的来信，信中问你新学期有什么打算。请你根据来信内容给他写封回信。
Dear Tom,
I miss you a lot. How is everything going The new term is starting. What's your plan for the new term
Write to me soon.
Yours,
David
提示：1.努力学习，不再玩电脑游戏；
2.业余时间多读书；
3.保持健康的饮食习惯，多做运动。
要求：1.语意连贯，符合逻辑，可适当拓展；
2.70词左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear David，
I miss you ，too.
Yours,
Tom
参考答案
Dear David，
I miss you ，too.I am going to work harder this term and I will not play computer games any more. In my spare time, I am going to read more books. I know that reading is a big help when learning a language. Reading can also open my eyes to the world. For my health, I will keep a healthy eating habit and take more exercise.
What about you
Best wishes!
Yours,
Tom