unit 9 Can you come to my party?单元写作
1.写作话题
本单元话题是“邀请”。该“邀请”可以是各种场合的邀请,比如:聚会,毕业典礼,婚礼等
2.话题分析
当别人邀请你而你谢绝邀请时,语气也应该委婉而不失礼貌。在本单元话题作文的命题过程中,命题人设题常以发出、接受或拒绝邀请的信函为主。写这类应用文时,应注意其格式,一般包括称呼语、正文、结束语及署名等。人称多用第一人称,时态主要为一般将来时。
3.经典例题
亨利(Henry)写了一封电子邮件给凯特(Kate),邀请凯特下周和他一起去爬山,但凯特下周的日程已经排满,没有时间和他一起去。假如你是凯特,请根据下面的日程表,回复一封电子邮件给亨利,谢绝他的邀请,并通过说明你下周的日程安排告诉亨利你谢绝邀请的原因。
要求:格式正确,中心明确,要点齐全,行文流畅,书写规范。词数不少于 80。
Sunday go shopping in the supermarket
Monday go to Mary's birthday party
Tuesday go to the doctor
Wednesday play tennis with the school team
Thursday have a science test
Friday go to the movies with some friends
Saturday do some washing
思维导图
参考句式
(1) We'd/I'd like to invite you to ... (2)I am looking forward to ...
(3) Thanks for … (4)I'm sorry. I'm not available ...
高分例文
Hi Henry,
Thanks for inviting me to go climbing next week. I'm sorry. I'm not available.①I am really busy next week.② On Sunday I am going shopping in the supermarket, and on Monday I will go to Mary's birthday party. On Tuesday I'll go to the doctor. On Wednesday I am going to play tennis with the school team and I will have a science test on Thursday. I will go to the movies with some friends on Friday. On Saturday I will have to do some washing. Oh, it is late. I must stop now.③ I hope you will have a good time.④
Write back soon.
Yours,
Kate
例文解析
①学习这两句拒绝别人邀请的说法,委婉而不失礼貌。
②先总述下周的活动,然后在下文中细说具体的活动,层次鲜明。
③借此收笔,构思巧妙。
④学习此处主从复合句的表达,以此句表示祝愿,不失礼貌。
易错提醒:
A. thanks for …中, for为介词,其后接名词、代词或动词-ing形式。
B. 表示“希望某人做某事”时可以用‘“hope+从句”,而不能用 hope sb. to do sth.。
4.实践练习
Tom 邀请 Lily 参加他这周日的生日聚会,但 Lily的父母出差要到下周才回来,爷爷又卧病在床,需要人照顾。况且数学考试即将来临,因此,Lily无法前去参加生日聚会。Lily 感到很抱歉,只好写信婉拒。
请根据以上提示写一篇80词左右的短文。
参考答案
Dear Tom,
Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party this Sunday. I'd love to go, but I can't. My parents are away on business. They won't come back until next week. So now I have to look after my grandpa because he is ill in bed. I also need to study for my coming math exam. I'm very sorry that I can't go to your birthday party. I hope you will have a good time.
Yours,
Lily