乐山市高中2025届教学质量检测
英语参考答案及评分意见
2024.1
第一部分 听力（共20小题；每小题1.5分，满分30分）
1-5 CCAAB 6-10 BAACA 11-15 BCCBA 16-20 ABCBC
第二部分 阅读（共两节，满分50分）
第一节（共15小题；每小题2.5分，满分37.5分）
21-23 BCD 24-27 DCAB 28-31 ADBC 32-35 DACB
第二节（共5小题；每小题2.5分，满分12.5分）
36-40 CFGEA
第三部分 语言运用（共两节，满分30分）
第一节（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）
41-45 DABCC 46-50 ACCAD 51-55 BABDD
第二节（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
56. importance 57. have inspired 58. leaves 59. but 60. making
61. of 62. to improve 63. which 64. a 65. hugely
第四部分 写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节（满分15分）
（一）评分原则
1. 本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 词数少于80和多于130的，从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
（二）内容要点
1. 介绍社团基本信息（5分）
2. 介绍社团活动（8分）
3. 恰当的开头和结尾（2分）
（三）评分标准
第五档(13-15分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的
覆盖所有内容要点。
应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致;具备较强的语言运用能力。
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
第四档(10-12分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的
虽漏掉次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
第三档(7-9分)：基本完成了试题规定的任务，整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的
虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
第二档(4-6分)：未恰当完成试题规定的任务，信息未能清楚地传达给读者
漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
语法结构单调、词汇知识有限。
有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
第一档(1-3分)：未完成试题规定的任务，信息未能传达给读者
明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
语法结构单调、词汇知识有限。
较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
不得分(0分)：未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；所写内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
（四）One possible Version
第二节（满分 25分）
评分细则
（一）续写主题
人与社会——人际交往：该话题主要讲述人际沟通和交往。主人公再经历了一系列事件后，通常会对人家关系产生心得感悟、或建立心新的人际关系。
（二）续写背景
1. 因搬家而转学到新学校
2. 离开了熟悉的环境和朋友想要逃避却又渴望友谊
（三）表达技巧
采用第一人称视角叙述，语言平实自然，充满强烈的个人主观色彩
（四）给分点位
1. 续写第一段：Sharing the love for art, Jessie, Emily and I quickly developed a close bond.
（1）他们的友谊是如何得到进展，共同经历了什么（对应前文伏笔：爱好艺术）（6分）
（2）共同经历对我们的影响（衔接下文思乡消散）（7分）
2. 续写第二段：As time passed, the pain of leaving Texas began to fade.
（1）我的改变（对应前文伏笔：我的纠结）（10分）
（2）升华主题式结尾：我的成长（结尾点题）（2分）
（五）评分建议
1. 与原文的连接：续写内容在逻辑上与原文相连，延续了关于艺术、友谊和主人公从德克萨斯到亚利桑那的转变的主题。
2. 人物关系和发展：新段落深入探讨了角色之间的关系，特别突出了通过对艺术的共同热爱而形成的纽带。
3. 过渡和进展：有效地传达了时间的推移，展示了主人公情感从痛苦到接受的演变。段落之间的过渡流畅，有助于整体故事的连贯性。
4. 风格和语气的一致性：写作风格与原文的语气和风格一致，保持了怀旧、乐观和主人公个人成长之间的平衡。
5. 创造性和描写语言：段落包含创造性元素和生动的描写语言，增强了读者对不断发展的叙述的参与感。使用隐喻（例如，“生活变成了一幅画”）为叙事增添了深度。
（六）One possible version
Sharing the love for art, Jessie, Emily and I quickly developed a close bond. Our shared passion for creativity led to countless afternoons spent drawing, painting, and exchanging ideas. We explored the art fairs, local exhibitions and museums in Arizona. These shared experiences not only developed our artistic growth but also deepened our friendship, making this new place feel a bit more like home.
As time passed, the pain of leaving Texas began to fade. Jessie expanded our tight group by introducing me to their inner circle of more new friends where I found an even stronger sense of belonging in this new place. The memories we created together not only made me feel more at home, but also brought me closer to the people who had become a whole part of my life. Arizona, once a source of uncertainty, had transformed into a place I proudly called home, and it was all thanks to the unbreakable bonds I had formed with these incredible people.
附：听力原文
Text 1
M: Excuse me, can you tell me the title of this oil painting
W: Sorry, I don’t know for sure. But I guess it’s an early 18th century work.
Text 2
W: Could you tell me the starting time for both performances
M: The first begins at 7:00 o’clock, and it lasts two hours. The second follows immediately.
Text 3
W: Jack, would you like to join the school tennis club It’s wonderful.
M: I should say I envy you. I just turned in my term paper and now I am collecting information for the school conference which is to begin next week.
Text 4
M: I need some cash for my trip to Macao tomorrow. I will run and get some.
W: I will go with you. I need some fresh air and exercise.
Text 5
W: Excuse me, sir. Could you tell me how I can get to the city library
M: Are you driving or taking public transportation
W: Well, I spent the whole day yesterday driving to see all the sights, so today I think I’d like to go by bus.
M: Why don’t you walk with me I’m heading in the direction where you can catch the first bus you’ll need to take.
Text 6
W: Excuse me, I’m looking for the …are you the manager
M: Yes, I am. What can I do for you
W: I bought this yesterday, but I didn’t look at the receipt until today — and I’m shocked that I didn’t get the discount that you were advertising. I thought that this item would be 25% off!
M: May I have a look Hmm…it says it was checked out on register four — that’s Heather. She is new on staff, so she probably didn’t know about the sale. I’m very sorry about that. I’ll fix the problem right away and get you some cash.
W: Thanks very much. I’ll just be waiting over there.
Text 7
W: Richard, what are you going to do during the summer vacation
M: I think I will work in the family business. My father runs a small building firm.
W: You are lucky. I haven’t found a job yet.
M: Finding a proper job is becoming more and more difficult.
W: If the worst comes to the worst, I think I’ll be a dishwasher.
M: You can teach children how to study and help them.
W: How can I do that
M: You can put an advertisement in the local newspaper to find some pupils or high school students.
W: OK, I’ll try.
Text 8
W: Hey, have you watched the new movie The Lost Treasure
M: No, I haven’t. Is it any good
W: Oh, you have to watch it! It’s an adventure-based film with incredible visual effects. What attracts me most is its fantastic plot. The storyline is interesting!
M: Well, What’s it about
W: It follows a group of treasure hunters who went on a dangerous journey to find a long-lost treasure hidden in a remote island. Along the way, they encounter thrilling and unexpected adventures.
M: Who are the main actors
W: Well, the lead role is played by Tom Johnson. He does a phenomenal job in this movie. The supporting cast is also impressive, with talented actors like Emily Stone and Michael Wilson.
M: Wow! I’m a fan of Tom Johnson’s work. He always delivers great performances. I’ll definitely check out this movie.
Text 9
M: Hello, can I speak to Miss Leaney
W: This is Leaney. May I know who’s calling
M: I’m Adam Watt from the Seven Star Insurance Company. Thank you for your interest in our company. I need some more information from your side.
W: Oh, sure, Mr. Watt. Please go ahead.
M: You’ve got a degree in finance. Why did you apply for this job
W: I read the job description and discovered a few interesting programs that I’d like to be a part of. They’re challenging yet rewarding. Just the sort of things I consider to fit me best.
M: I see. But given your educational background, wouldn’t you want to work for some bigger companies
W: I prefer smaller companies to bigger ones, because a smaller business has the ability to be more flexible in its service offerings. In a small company, we can provide our customers with the exact service that they need. By doing this, we can form a closer relationship with our customers as if they were our neighbors or relatives.
M: That’s very interesting. When will you be available for employment
W: In two weeks. I’ve promised my parents a ten-day visit. I can start work immediately after I’m back.
M: Great. I will call you back in a couple of days about our final decision.
W: Okay. Thank you very much.
Text 10
M: Hello, everyone. Today’s guest is just 14 years old, and he is protecting birds around the world. His name is Dessi Sieburth. His love of birds started when he made his first bird feeder about six years ago. Now, he has his own group called “Protecting Our Birds”. He has been making western bluebird boxes for about four years. Dessi hangs them up in trees and takes them down every week and looks at them to see if the bluebirds are nesting. He does that every year during the summer. He chooses the bluebird because they nest in dead trees, but a lot of dead trees are being cut down. Dessi makes these boxes to take the place of the trees. He does research about birds, runs a website to teach people about birds and how to help them, and builds boxes for birds. Dessi has interviewed biologists, written a lot of articles on birds for local newspaper. Dessi also recently spent 10 days in Alaska with his family where he did research on golden eagles in Denali National Park. So now let’s welcome Dessi Sieburth!PDF 文件使用 "pdfFactory Pro" 试用版本创建 www.
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