Mainly Revision on Writing
学情分析：学生为初三学生，经过了一阶段的写作训练，对写作的策略有初步的了解。
三维目标剖析：1）知识与能力：掌握写作的方法，策略。
2）过程与方法：小组学习与合作学习
3）情感态度与价值观：培养学生英语表达能力。
教具及信息技术设备设置说明 ：PPT
Ⅰ.Steps of writing a composition
Ⅱ.How to get a high score
in writing
Ⅲ.Topics on composition
Ⅳ.Useful conjunctions
Ⅴ.Practice on writing
Step One: Steps of writing a composition
1.分析、确定题目提供的信息及主题。
2.确定文体：记叙文 说明文 应用文
3.依据提示找关键词。用自己熟悉的、有把握的词、短语和句型来连词成文。
4. 将词语扩展成文。详写重要信息、次要信息略去。
5.整体检查（1）主谓一致（2）自然恰当的开头和结尾。（3）书写美观大方。（4）单词拼写、大小写、标点符号准确无误。
Step Two: How to get a high score in writing?
1.要有题目，主题句要突出 2.写作层次要清楚 3.注意句与句的连贯性
4.句式和时态要多样化 5.表达思想要清楚准确 6.书面整洁
Step Three: Topics on Composition
Topics on Composition
About
Introduction
Self-introduction
2.Introduction of your friend, a film star and a writer
3.Introduction of a place of interest, your city and your country
4.Introduction of an activity, a programme and a sports meeting
2.About Life
1.Modern social life
2. School life
3.Life as a student
4.Habits and health
3.About Social Focuses
1.Olympic Games
2.Help others
3.Environmental pollution and protection
4.Surfing on the Internet
Step Four: Useful Conjunctions
应用文和说明文
开头常用词语
衔接转折常用语
章段结尾常用语
as everybody knows 众所周知
as far as we know 据我们所知
at present 目前
first of all 首先
of course 当然
to tell the truth 老实说
by the way 另外
for example 例如
from now on 今后
on the other hand 另一方面
thanks to 多亏了,因为
what is more 此外
however 然而
as well as 除…之外还
in my opinion在我看来
therefore 因此
especially 特别是
after all 毕竟
at last 最后
in a word 总之
finally, we hope that…
最后,我们希望…
记叙文
开头常用词语
衔接转折常用语
章段结尾常用语
one day 一天
first of all 首先
of course 当然
on one’s way to 在…的路上
on a sunny/rainy/ windy day
在晴朗的/雨/刮风天
for example 例如
At the same time与此同时
thanks to 多亏了,因为
too…to..太…以致于不
so that…为了
so/such…that…
如此..以致于…
however 然而
as well as 除…之外还
especially 特别是
at last 最后
finally, we hope that…
最后,我们希望… it’s important/
necessary that/to
…是重要的/必要的
Step Five: Writing Practice
北京即将于2008年举行第29届奥运会，假如你校与澳大利亚某中学是友好学校，对方校刊来信想了解一些北京的情况 ，请你从地理、人口、名胜古迹、气候等几个方面用英语写一篇报道.
NOTE: 1.短文需要的时态： 一般现在时。
2.报道需包括提供的所有内容。
3.字数：80左右。
Sample:
As we know, Beijing , the capital of China, is one of the largest cities in the world. It lies in the north of China and has a large population that is over 17 million. There are a lot of places of interest such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace. The climate is comfortable in autumn when it is neither too cold nor too hot. What’s more, modern buildings can be seen everywhere. Beijing is famous for Peking Opera and. Finally, the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing.
课件32张PPT。Mainly Revision Writing 中考复习专题之写作 Ⅰ.Steps of writing a composition
Ⅱ.How to get a high score
in writing
Ⅲ.Topics on composition
Ⅳ.Useful conjunctions
Ⅴ.Practice on writingWhat will we learn today?
1.分析、确定题目提供的信息及主题。
2.确定文体：
记叙文 说明文 应用文
3.依据提示找关键词。用自己熟悉的、有把握的词、短语和句型来连词成文。
Step Ⅰ Steps of writing a composition 4. 将词语扩展成文。详写重要信息、次要信息略去。
5.整体检查（1）主谓一致（2）自然恰当的开头和结尾。（3）书写美观大方。（4）单词拼写、大小写、标点符号准确无误。Step Ⅰ要有题目，主题句要突出写作层次要清楚句式和时态要多样化注意句与句的连贯性表达思想要清楚准确书面整洁Step ⅡHow to get a high score in writing?Step ⅢStep ⅢTopic two: About Life
1.Modern social life
2. School life
3.Life as a student
4.Habits and health
Step ⅢTopic three: About Social Focuses
Olympic Games
Help others
Environmental pollution and
protection
4.Surfing on the Internet
Step ⅣWhat are the useful conjunctions? Brainstorm 开头衔接
转折结尾常用于开头转折结尾的连接词？Step ⅣUseful conjunctions应用文和说明文 记叙文Writing practice Step Ⅴ北京即将于2008年举行第29届奥运会，假如你校与澳大利亚某中学是友好学校，对方校刊来信想了解一些北京的情况 ，请你从地理、人口、名胜古迹、气候等几个方面用英语写一篇报道.NOTE:
1.短文需要的时态：
2.报道需包括提供的所有内容。
3.字数：80左右。
一般现在时Discuss the key
words in groups.Task One
populationothersplaces of
interestclimateBeijing city location
Report your result
of discussion
Task Two locationthe capital of China;
one of the largest cities in the world;
lie in the north of China; populationa large population;
over 17 million;places of interestthe Great Wall;
the Forbidden City;
the Summer Palace;climatefour seasons;
warm in spring;
hot in summer;
cool in autumn;
cold in winter;
Othersmodern buildings everywhere;
be famous for Peking Opera;
the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing.
Use the above key words
to write a compositionTask Three Correct the compositions
in groups
Task Four As we know, Beijing , the capital of China, is one of the largest cities in the world. It lies in the north of China and has a large population which is over 12 million. There are a lot of places of interest such as the Great Wall,the Forbidden City and the Summer Palace.The climate is comfortable in autumn when it is neither too cold nor too hot. What’s more, modern buildings can be seen everywhere. Beijing is famous for Peking Opera and. Finally,the 2008 Olympic Games will be held in Beijing.samples 你校与英国某中学结成为友好学校，英方
来信了解你校的课外活动情况及你们的建
议，请你根据表格中提供的内容用英语写
一篇短文。（80字左右）Writing Exercise Two
From 4:50 to 5:50 p.m.
rich colourful
take part in basketball and football activities
join in painting,dancing
and computer
in the interest groups
be interested in
English corners
spend more time on
less homework
samples We have rich activities after class from 4:50 to 5:50 p.m.every day. Some of the students take part in basketball and
football activities. Some join in painting,
dancing and computer in the interest
groups. Some are interested in activities
in English corner. Our school life is rich
and colouful. We hope we can spend more time on different kinds of act ivies and less time on homework.请你根据以下图表和提示写一篇关于我国手机拥有量变化的报导，并阐述手机给人们生活所带来的利与弊。HOMEWORK:
Advantages: convenient,communicate with parents
easily
Disadvantages:
influence study,
cost too much,
play games
