Unit 8How do you make a banana milk shake写作学案 人教版八年级英语上册

unit 8 How do you make a banana milk shake 单元写作
1.写作话题
本单元的话题是“食物制作”，写作内容常围绕美味佳肴的制作程序或产品使用说明展开。
2.话题分析
写这种说明文时应注意以下几点：
1. 表达要准确。如一些材料用量，切忌表述含糊。
2.表达要有逻辑性。多使用表示顺序的词,如 first、next、then、finally等,便于读者实践。
3.表达要细致。工序说明不颠倒、不遗漏。只有这样，才能指导读者进行合理的操作。
写该类作文，时态一般通用一般现在时，该话题类型的作文在中考中出现的概率较小，但话题贴近生活，而且通过学习写作此类话题能提示学生英文的表达能力
3.经典例题
根据所给提示写一篇短文，描述怎么制作牛肉三明治。
Ingredients(原料): 2 pieces of bread; 1 spoon of cheese; 1 green pepper; 1 onion; some mushrooms;2 pieces of beef; 2 spoons of relish(佐料)
思维导图
参考句式
(1) Do you know how to make ... (2) Here is one way to make ...
(3) To make ..., we need ... (4) First, ... Next, ... Then, ... Finally, ...
(5) One more thing, don't forget to ... (6) It's time to ...
高分例文
Do you know how to make a beef sandwich ① Now, let me tell you.
First②, put a spoon of cheese on a piece of bread.③Next, cut up a green pepper and an onion. Add these to the bread. Then, put some mushrooms and 2 pieces of beef on the bread. Put two spoons of relish on the beef. Finally, put another piece of bread on the top.
Now you can enjoy it. It's very delicious.④
例文解析
①学习本文用疑问句开头，点出写作话题，为下文作铺垫。
②学习本文对 first、next、then、finally的运用,使对制作过程的描述条理有序。
③学习文中祈使句的用法。
④此结尾显得亲切、自然，容易引起读者的共鸣。
易错提醒：祈使句要以动词原形开头，莫要用错！
4.实践练习
假设你叫杰里(Jerry)，你非常喜欢吃三明治，并且也会做三明治。请你写出你做三明治的过程。要求: 80词左右。
参考词汇: relish 调味品;佐料
参考答案
My name is Jerry. My favorite food is the sandwich. I can make a sandwich in a few minutes. Here is a recipe（秘方） for a great chicken sandwich!
First, put some butter on a piece of bread. Next, cut up a tomato o and an onion, and put them on the bread. Then put some lettuce and the chicken pieces on the bread. Put two spoons of relish on the chicken. Finally, put another piece of bread on the top.
The sandwich is delicious. I think you will like it.