生活类（亲情、友情、趣事篇）（解析版）
目录
读后续写10 生活类（亲情、友情、趣事篇）（解析版） 1
Part 1命题解读 2
Part 2思维导图 2
Part 3 一、友情和亲情 2
核心技巧1：矛盾塑造（尴尬+紧张） 2
核心技巧2：快乐结局塑造（感激+开心） 3
Part 4 二、人与动物 3
套路一：可爱型动物故事情节 4
套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节 5
套路三：主题升华设计 6
动物描写词句积累 7
第一部分 7
第二部分 10
Part 5习题精讲 12
1. 【精讲习题】 12
2. 【精讲习题】 14
3. 【精讲习题】 16
4. 【精讲习题】 18
Part 5 高考真题再现 20
1． 小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】 20
2． 拍照北极熊遇险【2020年7月浙江卷】 23
Part 6 模拟演练 25
1． （2022·江苏·苏州市苏州高新区第一中学一模） 25
2． （2022·江苏·模拟预测） 28
3． （2022·江苏·南京市第一中学模拟预测） 30
4． （2022·重庆·礼嘉中学一模） 33
5． 读后续写模拟专练01 35
6． 读后续写模拟专练02 39
Part 7名师精讲 43
1. 01—父亲的百万奖赏 43
2. 02---父母旅行后 46
Part 1命题解读
生活类故事的核心就是体验生活，体验感情：友情，亲情，人与动物之情等。
Part 2思维导图
Part 3 一、友情和亲情
核心技巧1：矛盾塑造（尴尬+紧张）
So nervous was he that （他太紧张了）he dropped the electric carving knife.（2021.04 台州高三调考）
I got into a panic（ 陷入惊慌之中）as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. （2021年1月浙江高考）
3. Sweating and nearly tearing（汗流浃背，眼泪差点流下来）, I could imagine how silly and strange I was at that moment based on the continuing laughter from my parents and Jason. （2021年1月浙江高考）
她立刻涨红了脸，感到尴尬几乎把她整个包围起来。
Blushing scarlet instantly, she felt embarrassment almost wreathed her entirely.
核心技巧2：快乐结局塑造（感激+开心）
1. 他们耸了耸肩，咧着嘴笑，这就驱散了她的一切烦恼，给了她安慰。
They shrugged and grinned, which dissipated all her distress and consoled her.
2.谢谢。她紧紧抓住打开的袋子，充满了感激和温暖。
‘Thanks.’ Clinging her hands to the bag opening, she was overwhelmed by a surge of gratitude and warmth.
3.这两个强壮的陌生人点亮了她的一天。
The two strong strangers undoubtedly lit her day up.
4. We all jumped to our feet, dancing and screaming with joy（开心得欢呼雀跃）. （2021.04 台州高三调考）
5. Though I was dissatisfied with my ugly gesture and stupid image, I was satisfied with the happiness and fun that I brought to others（对我带给别人的快乐和乐趣感到满意）. （2021年1月浙江高考）
6. 她停了下来，心中洋溢着欢快的心情，拿出一把硬币，扭头把它们攥在他们的手里，尽管两个男人的表情都很惊讶。（2021嘉兴二模）
Brimming over with bright feeling and joy, she stopped, fished out a handful coins and tuned around to squeeze them in their fists despite two men's astonished expression.
Part 4 二、人与动物
从历年高考的读后续写话题中可以看出人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。试题文本一般从两个角度展开，一个就是人和动物和谐相处, 要么是人类帮助动物解决问题，要么是动物帮助人类解决问题；另外一个就是，人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。例如：人狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶，脱险经历（2017年6月浙江高考）；人战：北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇polar bear追赶的惊险经历（2020年6 月浙江高考）；人狗和谐：父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴，帮助Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江高考）；人猫和谐：作者的丈夫从讨厌猫到向猫求助，赶走土拨鼠的故事（2021年3月临沂市一模）。
套路一：可爱型动物故事情节
可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。
They were glad to see Poppy coming back to her usual self（他们很高兴看到Poppy又回到以前的自己）, guiding the little dog on daily walks and even introducing to it her favorite toys.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
Smiling ever so bright（笑得更加灿烂。）, he called out to his parents, who tugged him in for a long hug. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）
Her parents watched them playing around and smiled with relief（轻松地笑了）–Poppy was back to her old cheerful self!（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
【关于狗的神态描写】
How to make the dog in your writing vivid andeye-catching
1.Uponhis master’s arrival, the dog leapt tohis feet ，snorted happily and bounded forward.(高兴狗狗)
2.The dog curled into a wet lump and lay shivering on theground. (可怜狗狗)
3.Aware of the immense danger, the crippled dog was doing impression of a corpse. （胆怯狗狗）
4.He stretched, shook himself and circled several times before dropping to the ground.（伸个懒腰抖抖身，保证有个好睡眠）
5.With pricked ears, he watched for a moment and then yawned. （警觉狗狗）
6. Lying on the ground，the dog kept his eyes wide open, ears flat,a vibrating growl deep in his chest.（别惹我，后果自负）
7.The dog wandered off to rest her noses in her paws.（我想静静，不想理你）
8.Dogs take much pleasure in rolling andrubbing their necks and backs with their paws.（调皮狗狗）
9.Seeing the meat in the master’s hand, the little dog wagged its tail and watched with hopeful eyes.（馋狗狗）
10.At the sight of a stranger approaching the house, the dog watched him, ears up, head slightly cocked. （高度戒备狗狗）
11.The dog, when intently watching and slowly approaching the prey, kept one of its fore-legs doubled up for a long time, ready for the next cautious step.（伺机一扑,成败在此一举）
12.Little puppies enjoy playing growling and biting each other’s faces and legs.（天真烂漫小可爱）
13.The dog got worried, crawling up around the old man’s feet as if to seek for safety and warmth. （好怕怕，别过来）
套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节
凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。
1、害怕
Terrified（非常害怕）, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. （2020.7高考浙江卷）
Seeing the approach of the polar bear, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch（被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
My wife Elli grasped my clothes and trembled, swallowing hard（抓住我的衣服，颤抖着，使劲吞口水）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
A numbing chill gripped me（一种麻木的寒战擢紧了我）.（2020.11金华十校）
Thinking of the wolf’s bloody mouth, Mac was nearly dead with fright（几乎给吓死） （2017年6月高考浙江卷）
I was seized by a strong sense of horror（被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制）, my palms sweating.（山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）
2、求助与获救
1. At the sight of it, Elli waved her hands wildly（疯狂地挥手）, screaming, “Help!” （2020.7高考浙江卷）
2. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot （惊奇地发现）that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. （2020.7高考浙江卷）
3. Having pulled the massive body out of the stump, Brian cleaned the wounds （清洁伤口）and then gave him careful treatment. Becky knelt down and tended to the wolf（蹲下来照顾狼）together with Brian. （2020.11金华十校）
4. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy（擦干小狗） till he had become dry. （山东模拟）
5. Using a rock as the supporting point, I unlocked the chain and set the wolf free（放走这只狼）. （山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）
套路三：主题升华设计
可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。
凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。
1. Elli and I learned our lesson（学到一个教训）: Be aware of a bear with a toothache.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
2. Despite the chill autumn wind, their home was filled with the warmth of love and reunion（充满爱和团聚的温暖）.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
3. The rain that came that day was a miracle（那天下的雨是一场奇迹）, saving our farm, just like my boy saved a life.（202103宁波十校）
4. Appearing to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Becky’s hand as if to express thanks（好像在表达感谢）. What a warm scene! （2020.11金华十校）
动物描写词句积累
第一部分
1. The bear snarled at them (对……低声吼叫), inching closer (小心翼翼地靠近).
2. The bear bared its enormous teeth and growled (露出巨大的牙齿吼叫着).
3. The bear was pacing back and forth, sniffing (嗅) the ground.
4. Their howls and cries filled the air (空中飘荡着嚎叫声).
5. The bear rose up and roared at me (对……吼叫), baring its enormous teeth (露出巨大的牙齿).
6. At any moment (随时) the monster would leap up and tear/rip me to pieces (会一跃而起将我撕成碎片).
7. It looked around, and stopped short (突然停下).
8. It stood there, ready to attack (准备攻击).
9. The enormous grizzly bear (灰熊) roared with rage (生气地嚎叫) and its dripping jaws were open wide (张开它滴着口水的嘴).
10. The polar bear let out one last roar and then scampered off (跑了).
11. The dog leapt and wagged its tail in excitement (跳起来，兴奋地摇着尾巴).
12. The dog suddenly started barking at us like crazy (疯狂地对我们汪汪叫).
13. The dog let out a string of roaring barks (发出一连串咆哮的吠声)
14. The dog was biting, growling and wagging its tail (撕咬着，咆哮着，摇晃着尾巴).
15. The dog curled up next to him (蜷缩在他身边).
16. The dog licked his hands (舔了舔他的手) and pushed its head against his leg (用它的头推他的腿). Then the dog sat down and looked up into his eyes, barking as if telling him help was on the way (好像告诉他救援马上就到). He bent down (弯腰) and patted it on the head (拍了拍它的头).
17. But before he could grab the dog, it let out a ferocious bark (发出猛烈的叫声) and rammed (撞) its body against him, almost knocking him down (几乎要撞倒他).
18. A mother crocodile was carrying their babies in its wide-open jaws (在它张开的大嘴里).
19. The dog sat patiently with its tongue hanging out of its mouth (它的舌头从嘴里伸出来). He threw/wrapped his arms around (抱住) his dog, burying his face in his fur (把脸埋在它的毛皮上).
20. The wild boar (野猪) grunted and snorted (发出哼声) as it stared at him with beady (圆溜溜的) black eyes. Suddenly the monster charged (猛冲), its sharp tusks (獠牙) aimed right for his stomach.
21. Monkeys were screeching (吱吱地叫着) in the trees.
22. Owls hooted (鸣叫) and fireflies shimmered (闪烁).
23. The chicken gave a startled squawk (发出嘎嘎的惊叫声).
24. A robin was perching (落在……上停留) on the fence.
25. He turned around just in time to see a robin hopping around (跳来跳去) on the path.
26. The sparrows were pecking (啄) at whatever they could find.
27. The swan flapped its wings and flew away (拍打着翅膀飞走了).
28. The shark was right behind him, its huge jaws wide open (张开大嘴巴), and its white sharp teeth gleaming in its mouth (在嘴里发光).
29. Little by little, the beast came closer and closer (逐渐逼近) until I could see its eyes.
30. The gigantic shark, bigger than Tom himself, came toward him, the black eyes staring up through the water (从水里向上盯着看).
31. The horse snorted, tossed its head and then galloped away (打了个响鼻儿，晃晃脑袋，然后飞奔而去).
32. Alan took hold of the reins (抓住缰绳) and the small horse started trotting (开始慢跑起来).
33. The horse seemed restless (坐立不安), too, stamping its feet (跺着脚), and snorting.
34. He got up and stroked its fur (抚摩着它的毛), resting his cheek against (将脸颊靠在) its warm head.
35. The horse nosed him in the chest, looking at him nervously (紧张地看着他).
36. The horse reared in terror (受惊后腿直立), throwing its rider.
37. The cat sat licking its paws (坐着舔爪子).
38. The cat suddenly jumped up and yowled (突然跳起来，哀嚎着). It stood there with its fur standing straight up (毛发竖起来).
39. It pushed against Harry’s arm with its nose (用鼻子拱Harry的手臂). It looked as if it wanted to roll Harry off the bed.
40. They could watch herds of zebras and giraffes strolling (溜达) through the grass. At night, roars of lions echoed through the darkness (狮子的吼叫声在黑暗中回响).
41. He turned around, and in the dark distance he saw two glowing eyes (看到两只发光的眼睛).
42. Flames reached out of the windows, like bright orange arms (像明亮的橙色手臂) trying to grab the houses all around it.
43. Poisonous black smoke rushed up his nose and down his throat (冲上鼻子到喉咙). He cried
out for help, but his words were smothered (扑灭) by the terrible noises all around. He clawed
his way across the floor, gasping for breath (气喘吁吁). He could feel the building would be
burnt to the ground any second (随时烧成灰烬).
44. Any second/minute (随时), the ceiling would collapse (倒塌).
45. It looked as if the house could crash down any second (随时倒塌).
46. He stood on the steps, knowing that he could lose his nerve any second (随时失去勇气).
47. There was fire everywhere now — raining from the sky (从天上如雨水一般落下), rising
from the ground.
48. Smoke swirled all around him (在他周围浓烟盘旋). He rose to his feet (站起来), gasping for breath.
49. I heard a commotion (听到喧闹声) and went to see what was happening (看看正在发生什么事情).
50. Shouts and screams rang out (响起) from the house.
51. They ran into buildings filled with blazing orange flames and choking black smoke (呛人的黑烟).
52. There was no way he could kill the monster. 他不可能杀死这只怪物。
53. There was no way he would be able to move the enormous tree. 他不可能移动那棵大树。
54. There was nothing he could do to help his sister. 他帮不了妹妹什么忙。
55. There was nothing he could do but sit there like an idiot. 他毫无办法，只能像白痴似地坐在那里。
56. It seemed as if there was no way out. 看情形似乎无路可逃了。
57. But no matter how she searched, she saw no signs of John (=John was nowhere to be seen.)
但是无论怎样寻找，她也没有找到约翰。
58. For a split second (一瞬间), he seemed frozen, staring at the rising water.
59. And then he caught a glimpse of (瞥见) something in the water, just a few feet away (就几英尺远). He had no idea (不知道) what it was. For a second (一会儿), he imagined it was a whale.
60. He hit the ground hard, but within seconds (几秒钟之内), he was back on his feet.
61. In a flash/blink (立刻，一瞬间), the boy disappeared around the corner.
62. Out of nowhere (不知从哪里), a car zoomed (疾驰) into view.
63. He looked up just in time to see (正好看见) a massive tree crashing down on top of him.
第二部分
01. The bear snarled at them(对…低声吼叫snɑ l), inching closer(小心翼翼地靠近 nt ).
02. The bear bared its enormous teeth and growled. (露出巨大的牙龇吼叫着ɡra l)
03. The bear was pacing back and forth, sniffing (嗅sn f)the ground.
04. Their howls and cries filled the air. (空中飘荡着嚎叫声)
05. The bear rose up and roared at me(对…吼叫r d), baring its enormous teeth(露出巨大的牙龇).
06. Any second (随时)the monster would leap up and tear/rip me to pieces(会一跃而起将我撕成碎片)
07. It looked around, and stopped short(突然停下).
08. It stood there, ready to attack(准备攻击)
09. The enormous grizzly( gr zli灰熊) roared with rage(生气地嚎叫re d ) and its dripping jaws were open wide (张开它滴着口水的嘴).
10. The polar bear let out one last roar and then scampered off. ( sk mp d跑了)
11. The dog leapt and wagged its tail in excitement(lept跳起来，兴奋地摇着尾巴w ɡ).
12. The dog suddenly started barking at us like crazy(疯狂的对我们发汪汪叫).
13. The dog let out a string of roaring barks(发出一连串咆哮的吠声)
14. The dog was biting, growling and wagging its tail. (这条狗撕咬着，咆哮着，摇晃着尾巴。)
15. The dog curled up next to him. (蜷缩在他身边k l)
16. The dog licked his hands (舔了舔他的手) and pushed its head against his leg(用它的头推他的腿上). Then the dog sat down and looked up into his eyes, barking as if telling him help was on the way(好像告诉他救援马上就到). He bent down (弯腰)and patted it on the head(拍了拍它的头).
17. But before he could grab the dog, it let out a ferocious bark (发出猛烈的叫声f r s) and rammed [r m]撞its body against him, almost knocking him down(几乎要撞倒他).
18. The dog looked up at Barry with a thank you kind of look on his face(脸上带着那种感恩的表情).
19. The dog sat patiently with its tongue hanging out of its mouth(它的舌头从嘴里伸出来). He threw/wrapped his arms around (抱住)his dog, burying his face in his fur(把脸埋在它的毛皮上).20. The snake coiled up and bared its gleaming fangs, ready to strike(盘绕k l起来，露出发光的毒牙f ).
21. Monkeys (Owls) were screeching in the trees(猴子在树上吱吱地叫着skri t ).
22. Owls hooted and night bugs shimmered(鸣叫hu tid闪烁 m ).
23. The chicken gave a startled squawk(鸟发出嘎嘎的惊叫声skw k).
24. A robin was perching on the fence(一只知更鸟落在篱笆上p t 停留)
25. He turned around just in time to see a robin hopping around on the path(正好看到一只知更鸟在小路上跳来跳去)
26. The sparrows were pecking at whatever they could find.
27. The swan flapped its wings and flew away(天鹅sw n拍打着fl p翅膀飞走了).
28. The shark was right behind him, its huge jaws wide open(张开大嘴巴), its white sharp teeth gleaming in its mouth(有嘴里发光).
29. Little by little(渐渐地), the shark/beast came closer and closer until I could see its eyes.
30. The gigantic shark, bigger than Tom himself, came toward him, the black eyes staring up through the water(从水里向上盯着看).
31. The horse snorted, tossed its head and then galloped away(马打了个响鼻儿sn t，晃晃t s脑袋，然后飞奔而去 ɡ l p =suddenly broke into a gallop/took off in a gallop)
32. Alan took (hold of) the reins and the small horse started trotting [tr t]. 艾伦抓住缰绳re nz，小马开始慢跑起来。
33. The horse seemed restless, too, stamping its feet, snorting(似乎也坐立不安，跺着脚，打着响鼻儿).
34. He got up and stroked its fur, resting his cheek against its warm head (抚摩着str k它的毛，将脸颊靠在它温暖的头上).
35. The horse nosed him in the chest, looking at him nervously(用鼻子拱它的胸部，紧张地看着他).
36. The horse reared in terror, throwing its rider(这匹马受惊后腿直立r (r)，将骑手摔下).
37. The cat sat licking its paws(那只猫坐着舔爪子)
38. The cat suddenly jumped up and yowled (ja l猫、狗哀嚎). It stood there with its fur standing straight up(毛发竖起来), then started pushing against
39. Harry’s arm with its nose(用鼻子拱harry的手臂). It looked as if it wanted to roll Harry off the bed.
40. They could watch herds [h dz] of zebras and giraffes strolling溜达str l through the grass. At night, roars of lions echoed through the darkness(狮子的吼叫声在黑暗中回响).
41. A mother crocodile was carrying their babies in its wide-open jaws(在它张开的大嘴里).
42. The wild boar(野猪b ) grunted and snorted (发出哼声 ɡr nt d) as it stared at him with beady(圆溜溜的 bi di) black eyes. Suddenly the monster charged(=lunged猛冲[l nd d), its sharp tusks (獠牙t sk) aimed right for his stomach.
Part 5习题精讲
【精讲习题】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
It was one of the hottest days of the dry season.We had not seen rain in almost a month.The crops were dying.Cows had stopped giving milk.The streams were long gone back into the earth.If we didn't seesome rain soon we would lose everything.
I was in the kitchen making lunch for the family when I saw my six year- old son，Billy，walking toward the woods.I could only see his back.He wasn't walking in his usual way.He was obviously walking with a great effort，trying to be as still aspossible.Minutes after he disappeared into the woods，he came running out again，toward the house.
Moments later，however，he was once again walking in that slow and purposeful step toward the woods.This activity went on for over anhour：walking cautiously tothe woods，then running back to thehouse.Finally，my curiosity got the best of me.I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.
He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked；being very careful not to spill thewater he carried.Branches and thorns slapped(拍打)his little face but he did not try to avoid them.He had a much greaterpurpose.As I leaned against a tree to spy on him，Isaw the most amazing site.
Several large deers appeared threatening in front of him.But Billy walked right up to them.I almost screamed for him to get away.AndI saw a baby deer laying on the ground，obviously suffering from heavy loss of water and heat exhaustion，lift its head with great effort to lap(舔饮) up the water in my beautiful boy's hand.
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When the water was gone，Billy jumped up to run back to the house.
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When the water was gone，Billy jumped up to run back to the house. My curiosity once again drove me to follow him back.After he reached the kitchen，heturned on the tap.As he was trying hard to cup both hands to receive the water，it was still running away through his fingers.And he also had great difficulty turning off the tap with hands occupied.He seemed to be so sorry and selfcondemned for his wasting of water.Wearing a note of upset on his face，he carried it carefully toward the woods.
And later I knew whatwas going on.It began to make sense to me why he wasn't walking in his usual way.I stood on the edge of the woods watching the most beautiful heart working so hard to save a life.As my tears began to hit the ground，they were suddenly joined by other drops...and more drops.It was as if the nature itself was moved by the great effort made by my son and began to weep with pride.
【精讲习题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Little snow had fallen this winter. For Reuven the frier(皮衣制作工) it was a bad year, and after long hesitation he decided to sell Zlateh the old goat. The town butcher had offered eightsilver coins for the goat. Reuven told his oldest boy, Aaron, to take the goat to town. Aaron understood what it meant, but he had to obey his father. Hissisters cried loudly.
Aaron took along two slices of bread to eat on the road. He needed to deliver the goat by evening and return the next day with the money. While the family said goodbye, Zlatch stood as patiently as ever. Zlateh trusted human beings.
The sun was shining when Aaron left. Suddenly the weather changed, and after awhile it began to snow. Soon their path was completely covered and Aaron got lost. Beneath the snow Aaron’s boots touched the softness of a plowed field. He realized that he was no longer on the road. Zlateh bleated (哀鸣) as if asking to be taken home. Aaron looked around hoping to find a farmer driving a sleigh(雪橇) along the way. But he could see nothing.
Aaron knew that if they did not find shelter, they would freeze to death. Suddenly he made out the shape of a hill. When he came near it, he realized that it was a large haystack (大干草堆)covered by snow. Aaron knew that they were saved. When he reached the hay, he dug a nest for himself and the goat. It was always warm in the hay. And hay wasfood for Zlateh.
Zlateh,sat down and seemed to have regained her confidence in man. Aaron ate his bread, but after the difficult journey he was still hungry. He looked at Zlatehand realized that he would not be starved to death. Goat’s milk was sweet.Zlateh ate frequently and her body gave forth an animal warmth, and Aaron hugged her tightly. The snow fell for 3 days and the windquieted down.
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Onthe morning of the fourth day, Aaron heard the ringing of sleigh bells.
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【分析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。
【详解】这是一篇记叙文。通过阅读所给文章可知，文章讲述了父亲Reuven为了度过艰难冬季，决定卖掉家里最老的山羊—Zlateh，长子Aaron负责将Zlateh送到屠户那里换钱，在途中，他们遭遇了风雪天气，Aaron寻得了大堆干草堆，又饿又冷的情况之下， Zlateh的羊奶给与了Aaron温饱。历经三天的风雪天气终于停了下来，在一位过路农民的帮助之下，他和羊一起回家与家人团聚。
续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：On the morning of the fourth day, Aaron heard the ringing ofsleigh bells. (第四天早上，Aaron听到了雪橇的铃声。)所以应该写Aaron从干草堆里出来后发生的事情，由首句的“Aaron heard the ringing if sleigh bells”，可知，要描述的内容应该是Aaron和羊如何获得雪橇主人的救助，比如大声呼喊；同时，由于前文提供的线索“Goat's milk was sweet. Zlateh ate frequently andher body gave forth an animal warmth, and Aaron hugged her tightly.( 羊奶是甜的。Zlateh频繁地吃干草，她的身体发出动物般的温暖，Aaron紧紧地拥抱着她。)可知，本段还应该描写Aaron在与羊建立了深刻感情之后的不忍分离等；第二段开头是The news that Aaron and Zlateh were coming upthe road was a great joy in the family. ( Aaron 和Zlateh在回家路上的消息，使全家人都非常高兴。) 本段应该描写家人的反应，情节和细节上要回应上文，尤其突出描写父亲的反应和变化，比如父亲改变的对羊的态度，不再卖掉或给与羊奖赏等，文末要进行主题升华。
还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：
1.高级词汇：get out of; make up one’s mind; point out; rushout; in tears; think of
2.复合句式：
Aaronshouted loudly to the peasant who drove the sleigh for help. (who引导定语从句)
Aaron told them in tears how he had found the haystack and how Zlateh had fed him with her milk in the past few days. (how 引导宾语从句)
Nobody ever again thought of selling Zlateh, who had been an import family member tothem. (who引导非限制性定语从句)
【精讲习题】
人与麻雀
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It's getting hot. It's time to put on lighter clothes and open up the windows. I can't wait to do so. Yesterday, an unforeseen visit to the kitchen happened during the brief time we were out. Two daring sparrows (麻雀) had risked landing on our territory to enjoy the freshness in our sink and some other breadcrumbs (面包屑) on our kitchen counter.
Actually, sparrows are everywhere. The tiny, gray -and brown birds are found on every continent except Antarctica, flying or jumping around cities, picking up leftover food on side-walks, and sometimes chasing with native bird species. These small creatures have adapted to living alongside humans- similar to pet dogs.
When you come across such sudden callers, you are likely to sense it as an unwanted visitor into your comfort zone, or you might receive it as a lovely angel of life. I chose the second option, with no hesitation while my husband preferred driving them away. After all, I've never come to stop to feel the relationship with sparrows.
I recalled when I was a little girl living in the city, I lived in an apartment with a flat roof viewed from our kitchen window. Every day my mom and I would go out to feed the sparrows. She taught me how to call them with a clicking sound she made with her tongue. I have loved sparrows ever since. So every day in my spare time, I can't stop observing and celebrating their dance from our window. I stuffed them with the leftovers on our tablecloth after every meal. And I have provided them with every kind of bases and stands of our house.
Undoubtedly, they feel at ease in our backyard. And that has led them to gather up courage and slide into our kitchen, bedroom or even reading room. Perhaps because they have the feeling that we don' t consider them trouble makers, but friendly neighbors. But I am slightly worried about their droppings (粪便).
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day, they left some droppings in my husband's reading room.
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About two weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my God!”
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One day, they left some droppings in my husband 's reading room. They happened to dirty his important work reports on the desk. He was so angry that he asked me to close the windows. I immediately did a thorough cleaning and promised that the doors and windows of the reading room will be closed tightly, and the sparrows can't break in again. My husband kept silent, and at last he calmed down. I know he is a caring person, who always loves animals.
About two weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my God !” Thinking something similar happened again, I ran over to have a look. He was looking out of the window and said excitedly, “Look! What a surprise! There are three eggs in the sparrow's nest! They 're going to have babies of their own!” He was happy, like a child and unconsciously opened the closed window. After that, there are always breadcrumbs on the window platform of the reading room.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，在作者生活之处有许多麻雀，作者欢迎它们的到来，在后院为它们准备了食物和落脚处，作者将它们当成了友好的邻居，只是有点担心它们的粪便。
【详解】续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：有一天，它们在我丈夫的书房里留下了一些粪便，所以应该写粪便落在书桌上给丈夫带来的尴尬和懊恼，要详细描述丈夫的动作和心理，与作者的反应及应对措施等。第二段开头是：大约两周后，我听到我丈夫说:“哦，天哪!”本段应该写丈夫的感叹、作者的好奇，并描述事情的原委，以及丈夫对于麻雀态度的转变等等。要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右，按要求完成写作任务。
【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：do a thorough cleaning，break in，run over，have a look等高级词汇；结果状语从句，如He was so angry that he asked me to close the windows；宾语从句，如I immediately did a thorough cleaning and promised that the doors and windows of the reading room will be closed tightly, and the sparrows can't break in again；定语从句，如I know he is a caring person, who always loves animals等高级句式。
【精讲习题】
A heroic dog
Like most dogs whose homes are situated on large plotsof land，one New Zealand dogregularly went off exploring through the farmland around his home forhours at a time.
But as Louie，asheepdog rescued from a shelter when he was just a puppy，got older，his trips got shorter andshorter.Now that Louie is 12 years old，hechooses to stay close to home and hardly ever goes out to explore any more，which is why his family was soworried when he recently disappeared and didn't return home as usual.
“My mother was a little upset as he had stopped hiswandering，” said Marolyn Diver，whose parentsown Louie.“Wewere very concerned that he might forget where his home was.” But thankfully，Louie turned up at the house a fewhours later.“He looked so tired and had basically just collapsed(崩溃)，”Marolyn said.“We were concerned that someone might have hurt him.But then werealized there was a small noteattached to Louie's collar.After readingthe note，I felt complete reliefand relaxed，and then my heartmelted.”
“Louie is the hero of the day，” read the note，which was written by a neighborabout a mile away.“He led me to Maddy in distress stuck under a pile of branches．Cheers，Rob．” “According to Rob，Louie was waiting for him at hishouse and demanded to be followed.Rob said that he was 100 percent sure thatLouie knew what he was doing，and leading him to Maddywas his pure focus，” Marolyn explained.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Once Rob found Maddy，Louiehelped him dig her out.
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“That night we were very worried about Louie，” Marolyn said.
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Once Rob found Maddy，Louie helped him dig her out. According to Rob，Louie pulled at branches and dug her out of the ground.Rob said that as soon as Maddy was free，both dogs ran to a nearby pond and jumped into it and began to drink water.Then he gave Louie a huge handful ofdog biscuits as a thank-you.He knew that Louie might get introuble for being late for home，sohe thought he would write a small note to explain why Louie was absent.
“That night we were very worriedabout Louie，” Marolyn said.“He could hardlywalk and looked terrible.We were concerned that he might not make it through the night.” Thankfully，Louie was back to normal the next morning when Rob came by with Maddy for avisit.Marolyn said，“It has changed the way I look at him.And I think my parents feel the same way.I'm so proud of him.”
Part 5 高考真题再现
小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“I’m going to miss you so much, Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions (情绪) get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it.” he said. “I’ll see you back home in a month, okay ” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy’s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit, Poppy didn’t.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried, “What should we do to cheer Poppy up ” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let’s get a little dog for Poppy.”
It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy
welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on
it. Her tail began wagging (摆动) ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.
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Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog. She lowered her head to watch it curiously. Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box in an attempt to get closer. With the box tipping over, out came the little one, who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy. It didn’t take long before the two played around the house, cheerfully running after each other.
爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。波比一看到这只小狗就高兴地跳了起来。她低下头，好奇地看着它。然后她变得非常兴奋，她不小心撞倒了盒子，试图靠近。盒子翻了过来，小家伙走了出来，他并不害羞，立刻熟悉了波比。没过多久，两人就在房子里玩耍，高高兴兴地互相跑着。
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from the university. He had been missing his parents and the dog since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time. When the boy caught sight of Poppy, he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug. Suddenly, the boy noticed the little dog. “Oh my god, who is this ” His parents laughed at the look of surprise on his face. “It’s Poppy’s new companion.” said Mom. (155)
几周后，这个男孩从大学走回家了。自从他第一次离家这么长时间以来，他就一直在想念父母和狗。当男孩看到波比时，他冲向狗，弯下腰给她一个大大的拥抱。突然，那男孩注意到了那只小狗。“哦，天哪，这是谁？”他的父母嘲笑他脸上惊讶的表情。“这是波比的新伴侣。””妈妈说。
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Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.It was hiding in one corner of the box, with a curious look in its eyes. Wagging its tail, it tried to climb out of the box, but it fell down on its back, unable to stand up. Upon seeing this, his parents could not help laughing. Gently, Mom picked it up from the box and put it on the floor. "Poppy, isn′t it a sweet dog It's for you!" Mom said in a soft voice."It's your companion." Cheerful and yet a little nervous, Poppy kept running and barking at the new family member. But Much to the relief of his parents, they were like peas and carrots soon afterwards, and it seemed as if Ropp had forgotten her old friend.
爸爸打开盒子，一只可爱的小狗出现了。它藏在盒子的一个角落里，眼睛里有一种奇怪的神情。它摇着尾巴，试图爬出盒子，但背部倒了下来，站不起来。一看到这一点，他的父母就忍不住笑了起来。妈妈轻轻地把它从盒子里拿起来，放在地板上。“这不是一只可爱的狗吗？”这是给你准备的！”妈妈用一种温柔的声音说。“这是你的同伴。”波比很高兴，但又有点紧张，不停地跑着新家庭成员吠叫。但让他的父母松了一口气的是，不久之后它们就像豌豆和胡萝卜一样，罗普似乎已经忘记了她的老朋友。
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. Poppy threw herself at him and licked his hands and face excitedly, her eyes sparkling with delight and her tail wagging furiously. It took the boy for a long time to notice that there was a cute puppy beside Poppy,growling and sniffing at his feet.Immediately, he bent down,stroked its head and asked,"What an adorable puppy! Whose is it " His parents smiled and replied,"We got it for Puppy because.." Knowing what had happened to Poppy when he was at the university, the boy was so moved that he took the old girl in his arms.Tears burred his vision as he murmured,"Poppy,I miss you, too." And quietly, Poppy raised her head and watched the young teenager like xWaby in his arms.
几周后，男孩从大学回家。波比扑向他，兴奋地舔着他的手和脸，她的眼睛闪闪发光，她的尾巴剧烈地摆动。男孩花了很长时间才注意到波比旁边有一只可爱的小狗，在他的脚边咆哮和嗅。他立刻弯下腰，抚摸它的头，问：“多么可爱的小狗啊！是谁的？” 他的父母笑了笑，回答说：“我们给波比买的，因为......”他知道波比在大学时发生了什么很感动，把那个老女孩抱在怀里。他喃喃地说：“波比，我也想你。” 然后静静地，波比抬起头，看着那年轻的少年在他怀里。
拍照北极熊遇险【2020年7月浙江卷】
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
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A few minutes later, the bear headed back to our camp. Then we realized that the spray had only angered him even more, for he seemed much fiercer this time and violently pushed the fence like mad. My heart raced wildly, not knowing what to do. At this critical moment, Elli grabbed several pieces of garlic bread and threw them over the fence. It worked! The bear stopped the attack and ran to the bread. But it wasn’t long before he ate up all the bread and came back again.
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At that very moment, the helicopter arrived. “Thank goodness we are saved!” Elli cried out. Once the helicopter landed, we got onto it in no time, excited and relieved. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. I quickly took out the camera and photographed the rare scene — we were robbed by a polar bear!
几分钟后，这只熊回到了我们的营地。然后我们意识到，浪花只是更激怒了他，因为这次他似乎更凶狠了，而且像疯了一样猛烈地推了推篱笆。我的心狂狂，不知道该怎么办。在这个关键时刻，埃利抓起几块蒜蓉面包，扔过了栅栏。它已经成功了！熊阻止了进攻，跑到面包边。但没过多久，他就吃完了所有的面包，又回来了。
第2部分：
就在那一刻，直升机来了。“谢天谢地，我们得救了！”埃莉喊道。直升机一降落，我们很快就上了飞机，兴奋而松了一口气。当我们安全地坐在直升机上时，我惊讶地发现这只熊终于撕掉了栅栏，向我们留下的食物跑去。我迅速拿出相机，拍摄了这个罕见的场景，我们被一只北极熊抢劫了！
Part 6 模拟演练
（2022·江苏·苏州市苏州高新区第一中学一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Snowflakes dancing in the sky, it was an awfully cold winter. Mary felt as gray as the sky outside. She struggled to get by the tough winter because her bills went up while her income went down.
Her refrigerator sat empty. Her only food consisted of peanut butter, bread and bananas, only enough for two sandwiches. Worse still, it would be four days before she got paid. As Mary prepared to sit down and eat half of her remaining food, she heard a knock at the door. Who could it be on such a freezing night Robbery scenes from films flashed across her mind. Then Mary shook her head and laughed at her foolish thought-no robber would choose her as a target. Opening the door, she saw a stranger standing outside, body trembling with cold.
“Madam, sorry to disturb you, but I'm lost and get stuck in the snow. Could you please spare a piece of bread " the stranger asked cautiously and politely in a weak but deep voice.
“I'm afraid not,” said Mary, “but I could make you a peanut butter and banana sandwich.”
“That sounds wonderful,” the stranger answered. "Mind if I wait here on the porch ”
“Yes, I do mind,” Mary replied, "but you could come in and eat it at the table.”
Not expecting both food and warmth, the stranger entered the house eagerly. Mary hurried off to the kitchen for the last four pieces of bread, peanut butter, and bananas. In a few minutes, she returned and invited him to sit down to eat what she could offer. After eating, the man thanked and said goodbye to her.
Looking outside, Mary hesitated a moment and said, "If you don't mind, you can sleep on the sofa.” "That would be good enough," responded the man gratefully.
Mary went into her room, and locked the door. The next morning, when she woke up, she remembered the man. "How will I tell him I have nothing for breakfast " she asked herself. She dressed, unlocked, and opened the door slightly.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To her surprise, the man was nowhere to be seen.
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Mary opened the envelope and found a letter.
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参考答案：
To her surprise, the man was nowhere to be seen. Looking for him thoroughly once again, she confirmed that the stranger had left, without saying goodbye. Apparently, the “robber” had left without taking plaining of the man's impoliteness, Mary collapsed on the sofa where she put him up the night before, getting a little bit annoyed. With nothing left to eat, she sighed, "Anyway, good luck to him!" She got down to tidying up the sofa when an envelope lying on it came into her eyes.
Mary opened the envelope and found a letter. It read, “It is harder to trust a stranger, especially when that stranger appears homeless. You have helped me restore faith in humanity so you deserve what you have received. "Mary had no idea what the stranger meant until she saw a cheque worth $ 10,000. Tears of delight welled up in her eyes. As it turned out, the stranger, who got stuck in the heavy snow and turned to her for help, was a successful businessman. Gazing at the warm light cast through the window, she decided to pay the kindness forward whatever the future would hold.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了在一个寒冷的冬天，玛丽度日艰难，这天晚上来了个陌生人说他迷路了，想让玛丽给他一块面包，还收留他过夜。结果第二天早上玛丽发现那个人不见了，但却留下了一封信。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“令她吃惊的是，那个人不见了。”可知，第一段可描写发现陌生人不见后玛丽的反应，她抱怨那个男人的无礼时，倒在了前一天晚上让他住过的沙发上，有点生气。
②由第二段首句内容“玛丽打开信封，看到一封信。”可知，第二段可描写信里的内容和信里的支票，以及玛丽的感悟。
2.续写线索：陌生人不见了——玛丽觉得对方无礼——玛丽发现信封——读信——发现支票——玛丽感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
看见：come into one’s eyes / catch sight of
提供：put up/ provide
求助于：turn to sb. for help/ ask for help
情绪类
无礼：impoliteness /be impolite
成功：successful /with success
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Looking for him thoroughly once again, she confirmed that the stranger had left, without saying goodbye. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Complaining of the man's impoliteness, Mary collapsed on the sofa where she put him up the night before, getting a little bit annoyed. (运用了where引导定语从句)
（2022·江苏·模拟预测）
阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落首句进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I grew up in a small town where elementary school was a ten-minute walk from my house and in an age, not so long ago, when we children could go home for lunch and find our mothers waiting. At the time, I didn’t consider this to be so important, although today it certainly would be. Actually, our lunch time together in the past years had had a great influence on my life before I realized it.
Our lunch time when I was in the third grade will stay with me always. I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had painstakingly practised my lines with me. But no matter how easily I delivered them at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained patiently that she needed a narrator and had written a narrator’s part to the play, and asked me to switch roles. Her words, kindly delivered, still hurt me, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.
I didn’t tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my unease, and instead of suggesting we practice my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard. It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine(藤) was turning green. Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions(蒲公英) appearing unexpectedly through the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with small amounts of gold. I watched my mother casually bend down by one of the bushes. “I think I'm going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling a blossom up by all its roots. “From now on, we’ll have roses in this garden.” I immediately protested, “But I like dandelions. All flowers are beautiful — even dandelions.”
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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“Do you mean that every flower has its own beauty ” asked my mother thoughtfully.
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“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” Mom said.
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参考答案：
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“Do you mean that every flower has its own beauty ” asked my mother thoughtfully. I nodded without hesitation, as if a second wasted could deprive the dandelions of their life. “The same to you,” she added, her voice soft. “Not everyone can be a rose, and it is also an honour to be a dandelion.” Knowing that my mother had realized my pain, I took off the mask that I had worn for the whole lunch time and poured out my unease heartily. She listened to me patiently and patted me on the back tenderly. Suddenly she stopped, as if to say something.
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“But you will be a beautiful narrator,” Mom said. She reminded me of how fluently I could deliver my part at home. It was at that time that I understood that maybe I was more suitable for a role back stage like a narrator. From then on, I practiced my lines heart and soul with my mother at lunch time for weeks. And the performance approached ultimately. Standing backstage, nervousness came flooding in me. What encouraged me to overcome it was the inspiration from the beautiful yellow dandelions. The performance that night was eventually a big success. Hearing the thunderous applause, I took pride in my role and firmly believed that even a dandelion had its own beauty.
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者被选为学校话剧中的公主，但一上台，作者就忘词，老师就让作者做一名叙述者，回家后，作者妈妈看出作者的不安，妈妈提议把杂草挖掉，种蒲公英。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容““你是说每朵花都有它自己的美丽吗 ”母亲若有所思地问。”可知，第一段可描写妈妈举蒲公英的例子来安慰作者，作者敞开心扉告诉妈妈学校里发生的事。
②由第二段首句内容““但你会成为一名出色的叙述者，”妈妈说。”可知，第二段可描写经过妈妈的鼓励，作者受到了蒲公英也有自己的美这一事实的激发，成功地作为一位叙述者完成了幕后解说任务。
2.续写线索：陪走路——帮助——感谢——陪回家——拒绝——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
意识到：realize/ recognize
失去：deprive / lose
鼓励：encourage / pull for
情绪类
成功：a big success / successful
耐心：patiently / with patience
【点睛】
[高分句型1] Knowing that my mother had realized my pain, I took off the mask that I had worn for the whole lunch time and poured out my unease heartily. (运用了现在分词作状语和第二个that引导定语从句)
[高分句型2] What encouraged me to overcome it was the inspiration from the beautiful yellow dandelions. (运用了what引导主语从句)
（2022·江苏·南京市第一中学模拟预测）
Tim recently graduated from the university and was looking for a job. After searching on the Internet he found out that a famous online business company is recruiting a new office manager. Many candidates applied for the entry exam, but only one would be accepted in the end. Tim noticed the resumes (简历) of other candidates and was surprised to see that some of them held a Master’s Degree or even a Doctor's Degree .But Tim was only a Bachelor, and barely met the lowest requirement of the diploma. Tim felt a bit frustrated because he had no advantage over other candidates who were excellent students. All the candidates entered the exam hall after handing up their resumes. Tim scanned through the pages of the test paper and found out that the questions were very difficult for him. Tim tried to calm down and focus on the questions themselves instead of their difficulty level. He started with the easiest ones and moved on to the more difficult ones slowly.
There were two invigilators (监考人) in the hall , one of them was tall and thin , while the other invigilator was of the opposite: he was short and fat .They seemed to be quite confident about the honesty of the candidates and were absent. After about 10 minutes, one of the invigilators left to answer a phone call. The other invigilator soon went out too.
The atmosphere in the exam hall changed after the invigilators had left .Some of the candidates took out notes and books, some of them brought tablets to search for answers, and some even called others for help .Tim looked back, and he saw the candidate sitting behind him cheating too. The man winked to Tim, as if telling him to cheat in the test because everyone was doing so Tim shook his head and continued doing the difficult problems at a slow pace.
In about half an hour, the invigilators returned to the exam hall. Tim still had one question left blank at the end of the test. He was almost sure that he was not going to be accepted.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为120左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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The test result was to Tim’s surprise.
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Tim then understood everything that had happened.
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参考答案：
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The test result was to Tim’s surprise. After one week, Tim received an email from the company saying that he was accepted as the new office manager. The next day, Tim went to the company and knocked on the door of the chief manager’s office. Before Tim said a word, the chief manager smiled at Tim and asked Tim whether he could remember that they had met before. Tim was very confused until the chief manager explained that he was the candidate sitting behind Tim in the test.
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Tim then understood everything that had happened. The test was carefully arranged to test whether the candidates were honest even if no invigilator was there. The chief manager continued to say that their company was established based on honesty of the employees. The job of office manager would require the candidate to be independent and honest. In consideration of this, they found that Tim was the most suitable candidate to hold this position.
【解析】
【分析】
本文是根据短文进行续写，使之成为一个完整的故事。
【详解】
1.认真读懂所给提供的材料：蒂姆最近大学毕业，参加了一家著名的网上商务公司的招聘考试。蒂姆惊讶地发现其中有些人有硕士甚至博士学位，而他只有学士学位，勉强达到了文凭的最低要求。考试过程中监考老师并没有在考场能全程监考，于是很多人开始作弊。而蒂姆选择了诚实考试，考试结束时，蒂姆还有一个问题没回答。他几乎可以肯定他不会被录取。
2.续写部分和前面的文章衔接得上，并且与原文情节发展和人物性格相一致，故事情节的向后延续发展要合乎情理。
3.根据第一段首句The test result was to Tim’s surprise.(测试结果使蒂姆很吃惊)可推知，蒂姆被录用了，在本段中可以描述一下，为什么会出现这样的结果；根据第二段首句Tim then understood everything that had happened.(蒂姆明白了所发生的一切)可以针对为什么测试时，没有监考老师而展开构思。
4.续写的语言要尽可能与原文的语言保持风格上的一致。文章时态以一般过去时为主。应使用自己熟悉的句型和短语进行写作，考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合题干要求，句子结构准确，适当补充信息，使篇章结构连贯。
【点睛】
范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如非谓语动词及宾语从句After one week, Tim received an email from the company saying that he was accepted as the new office manager.时间状语从句Before Tim said a word, the chief manager smiled at Tim and asked Tim whether he could remember that they had met before.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。
（2022·重庆·礼嘉中学一模）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was my first day of school. I loved school: the smell of chalk and colored crayons and having my own desk that was just my size. However, there was one big problem with school: Mildred.
Daily when I walked the short distance home after school, Mildred would hit me and scare me. I was absolutely terrified of her. She had failed first grade and was a year older than me. Mildred didn’t have any friends, so she seemed to concentrate on making enemies. Because I was one of the smallest children in first grade, she had selected me as her number one enemy.
As soon as the dismissal bell rang each day, my heart started to pound and I blinked fast so I wouldn’t cry.
Pretty soon my mother figured out something was wrong at school. I didn’t want to tell her about Mildred. Mother continued to question me, and I finally sobbed out the whole story. I begged not to go to school and didn’t sleep much that night. The next morning she said, “Marion, I’m going to walk up the hill with you today. I believe we’ll see Mildred.” Mildred walked from way across down to school. She never bothered me on the way to school, only afterward.
“Oh, mama, please don’t do that! Don’t say anything to Mildred. It will just make her mad. Let me stay home by myself. Please, mama.”
“Hurry and get dressed, Marion.” Her voice was gentle, but quite firm.
“Ple-e-ease, mama.”
“Trust, Marion. I have a plan.”
We bundled up against the bitter cold wind and stared out. Maybe we wouldn’t see Mildred, I hoped. But my mother had this confident look. I knew the look well, and I had a sinking feeling that we would see Mildred and that mother would use her “plan”.
Just as we were turning around at a corner when we spotted Mildred. We waited a few moments as she approached us. “Hello, Mildred.” my mother said.
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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Mildred stopped, frozen as still as a statue.
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Mildred chewed on her bottom lip and then nodded.
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参考答案：
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Mildred stopped, frozen as still as a statue. Her hands and face were bright red and the oversized coat hung open with only two buttons. Mother stooped down, rapidly buttoning her coat. “I'm Marion's mother. I need your help, Mildred.” Mildred looked intently at my mother. “Marion doesn't have any sisters. She sort of needs a special friend at school. Would you be her friend ”
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Mildred chewed on her bottom lip and then nodded. “Oh, thank you! I just know you are someone I can depend on.” Then she hugged Mildred long and hard. I found Mildred smiling! I'd never seen her smile before. We walked up the hill each day after school together, and pretty soon we were talking, laughing and sharing secrets. I started calling her “Mil”, and then others did too, even Miss Edna. She always sat with me at lunch. My mother usually included something in my lunch especially for Mil-even notes of gratitude. Mildred smiled a lot now. She was getting good grades too, and didn't stuff her papers inside her desk anymore. I knew my mother’s plan had worked and I’ve learned that the plan works in all kinds of impossible situations: "Love is patient and love never fails.”
【解析】
【分析】
本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的同学米尔德丽德是个问题小孩总是欺负作者，导致自己不爱上学，后来妈妈知道后，带着作者一起去找米尔德丽德实施计划，请她和作者做朋友，自此之后，米尔德丽德和作者相处愉快成绩也提高的故事。
【详解】
1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“米尔德丽德停了下来，像雕像一样一动不动。”可知，第一段可描写作者妈妈开始实施那个计划。
②由第二段首句内容“米尔德丽德咬着下嘴唇，点了点头。”可知，第二段可描写之后两人相处愉快，妈妈计划成功。
2.续写线索：害怕——请求——同意——相处愉快——计划成功——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①依靠：depend/ rely/account on
②成功：work/be a success/succeed
情绪类
①感谢：appreciation/gratitude/be grateful
【点睛】
[高分句型1] I just know you are someone I 生活类（亲情、友情、趣事篇）（原卷版）
目录
读后续写10 生活类（亲情、友情、趣事篇）（原卷版） 1
Part 1命题解读 2
Part 2思维导图 2
Part 3 一、友情和亲情 2
核心技巧1：矛盾塑造（尴尬+紧张） 2
核心技巧2：快乐结局塑造（感激+开心） 3
Part 4 二、人与动物 3
套路一：可爱型动物故事情节 4
套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节 5
套路三：主题升华设计 6
动物描写词句积累 7
第一部分 7
第二部分 10
Part 5习题精讲 12
1. 【精讲习题】 12
2. 【精讲习题】 13
3. 【精讲习题】 15
4. 【精讲习题】 16
Part 5 高考真题再现 18
1． 小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】 18
2． 拍照北极熊遇险【2020年7月浙江卷】 19
Part 6 模拟演练 20
1． （2022·江苏·苏州市苏州高新区第一中学一模） 20
2． （2022·江苏·模拟预测） 22
3． （2022·江苏·南京市第一中学模拟预测） 23
4． （2022·重庆·礼嘉中学一模） 24
5． 读后续写模拟专练01 25
6． 读后续写模拟专练02 27
Part 7名师精讲 30
1. 01—父亲的百万奖赏 30
2. 02---父母旅行后 32
Part 1命题解读
生活类故事的核心就是体验生活，体验感情：友情，亲情，人与动物之情等。
Part 2思维导图
Part 3 一、友情和亲情
核心技巧1：矛盾塑造（尴尬+紧张）
So nervous was he that （他太紧张了）he dropped the electric carving knife.（2021.04 台州高三调考）
I got into a panic（ 陷入惊慌之中）as I pressed firmly against the table and moved my head around trying to find the right angle, but it was no use. （2021年1月浙江高考）
3. Sweating and nearly tearing（汗流浃背，眼泪差点流下来）, I could imagine how silly and strange I was at that moment based on the continuing laughter from my parents and Jason. （2021年1月浙江高考）
她立刻涨红了脸，感到尴尬几乎把她整个包围起来。
Blushing scarlet instantly, she felt embarrassment almost wreathed her entirely.
核心技巧2：快乐结局塑造（感激+开心）
1. 他们耸了耸肩，咧着嘴笑，这就驱散了她的一切烦恼，给了她安慰。
They shrugged and grinned, which dissipated all her distress and consoled her.
2.谢谢。她紧紧抓住打开的袋子，充满了感激和温暖。
‘Thanks.’ Clinging her hands to the bag opening, she was overwhelmed by a surge of gratitude and warmth.
3.这两个强壮的陌生人点亮了她的一天。
The two strong strangers undoubtedly lit her day up.
4. We all jumped to our feet, dancing and screaming with joy（开心得欢呼雀跃）. （2021.04 台州高三调考）
5. Though I was dissatisfied with my ugly gesture and stupid image, I was satisfied with the happiness and fun that I brought to others（对我带给别人的快乐和乐趣感到满意）. （2021年1月浙江高考）
6. 她停了下来，心中洋溢着欢快的心情，拿出一把硬币，扭头把它们攥在他们的手里，尽管两个男人的表情都很惊讶。（2021嘉兴二模）
Brimming over with bright feeling and joy, she stopped, fished out a handful coins and tuned around to squeeze them in their fists despite two men's astonished expression.
Part 4 二、人与动物
从历年高考的读后续写话题中可以看出人和动物的话题备受命题者青睐。试题文本一般从两个角度展开，一个就是人和动物和谐相处, 要么是人类帮助动物解决问题，要么是动物帮助人类解决问题；另外一个就是，人类与动物产生冲突，尤其遇到勇猛高大的动物，遇到危险，首先沉着冷静与动物周旋，后来向别人求助，之后成功脱险的故事。例如：人狼大战：骑车旅途遭遇狼wolf追赶，脱险经历（2017年6月浙江高考）；人战：北极探险者给北极熊拍照，遭遇polar bear追赶的惊险经历（2020年6 月浙江高考）；人狗和谐：父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴，帮助Poppy摆脱孤独和想念的故事（2020年1月浙江高考）；人猫和谐：作者的丈夫从讨厌猫到向猫求助，赶走土拨鼠的故事（2021年3月临沂市一模）。
套路一：可爱型动物故事情节
可爱型动物，如狗，鸟等，主要构思陪伴、忠诚，或者人救助动物生命，动物（主要是狗）救人的生命等故事情节。
They were glad to see Poppy coming back to her usual self（他们很高兴看到Poppy又回到以前的自己）, guiding the little dog on daily walks and even introducing to it her favorite toys.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
Smiling ever so bright（笑得更加灿烂。）, he called out to his parents, who tugged him in for a long hug. （2020年1月高考浙江卷）
Her parents watched them playing around and smiled with relief（轻松地笑了）–Poppy was back to her old cheerful self!（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
【关于狗的神态描写】
How to make the dog in your writing vivid andeye-catching
1.Uponhis master’s arrival, the dog leapt tohis feet ，snorted happily and bounded forward.(高兴狗狗)
2.The dog curled into a wet lump and lay shivering on theground. (可怜狗狗)
3.Aware of the immense danger, the crippled dog was doing impression of a corpse. （胆怯狗狗）
4.He stretched, shook himself and circled several times before dropping to the ground.（伸个懒腰抖抖身，保证有个好睡眠）
5.With pricked ears, he watched for a moment and then yawned. （警觉狗狗）
6. Lying on the ground，the dog kept his eyes wide open, ears flat,a vibrating growl deep in his chest.（别惹我，后果自负）
7.The dog wandered off to rest her noses in her paws.（我想静静，不想理你）
8.Dogs take much pleasure in rolling andrubbing their necks and backs with their paws.（调皮狗狗）
9.Seeing the meat in the master’s hand, the little dog wagged its tail and watched with hopeful eyes.（馋狗狗）
10.At the sight of a stranger approaching the house, the dog watched him, ears up, head slightly cocked. （高度戒备狗狗）
11.The dog, when intently watching and slowly approaching the prey, kept one of its fore-legs doubled up for a long time, ready for the next cautious step.（伺机一扑,成败在此一举）
12.Little puppies enjoy playing growling and biting each other’s faces and legs.（天真烂漫小可爱）
13.The dog got worried, crawling up around the old man’s feet as if to seek for safety and warmth. （好怕怕，别过来）
套路二：凶猛型动物故事情节
凶猛的动物，如狼、熊等，一般会给人造成生命威胁，所以主要是以遇险、脱险的故事情节为主。
1、害怕
Terrified（非常害怕）, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. （2020.7高考浙江卷）
Seeing the approach of the polar bear, I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch（被恐惧吓呆，害怕到动也不能动）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
My wife Elli grasped my clothes and trembled, swallowing hard（抓住我的衣服，颤抖着，使劲吞口水）.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
A numbing chill gripped me（一种麻木的寒战擢紧了我）.（2020.11金华十校）
Thinking of the wolf’s bloody mouth, Mac was nearly dead with fright（几乎给吓死） （2017年6月高考浙江卷）
I was seized by a strong sense of horror（被一种强烈的恐惧感所控制）, my palms sweating.（山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）
2、求助与获救
1. At the sight of it, Elli waved her hands wildly（疯狂地挥手）, screaming, “Help!” （2020.7高考浙江卷）
2. When we were safe on the helicopter up in the air, I was amazed to spot （惊奇地发现）that the bear had finally torn down the fence and ran towards the food we left behind. （2020.7高考浙江卷）
3. Having pulled the massive body out of the stump, Brian cleaned the wounds （清洁伤口）and then gave him careful treatment. Becky knelt down and tended to the wolf（蹲下来照顾狼）together with Brian. （2020.11金华十校）
4. I went near the innocent one and held it in my hand and wiped the puppy（擦干小狗） till he had become dry. （山东模拟）
5. Using a rock as the supporting point, I unlocked the chain and set the wolf free（放走这只狼）. （山东省青岛市2020年4月高三模考）
套路三：主题升华设计
可爱型动物主题：陪伴、珍爱生命、自然和谐、忠诚等。
凶猛型动物主题：难忘的经历、获得教训、感谢他人救助等。
1. Elli and I learned our lesson（学到一个教训）: Be aware of a bear with a toothache.（2020.7高考浙江卷）
2. Despite the chill autumn wind, their home was filled with the warmth of love and reunion（充满爱和团聚的温暖）.（2020年1月高考浙江卷）
3. The rain that came that day was a miracle（那天下的雨是一场奇迹）, saving our farm, just like my boy saved a life.（202103宁波十校）
4. Appearing to be feeling better, the wolf slowly raised his head and gave a gentle kiss to Becky’s hand as if to express thanks（好像在表达感谢）. What a warm scene! （2020.11金华十校）
动物描写词句积累
第一部分
1. The bear snarled at them (对……低声吼叫), inching closer (小心翼翼地靠近).
2. The bear bared its enormous teeth and growled (露出巨大的牙齿吼叫着).
3. The bear was pacing back and forth, sniffing (嗅) the ground.
4. Their howls and cries filled the air (空中飘荡着嚎叫声).
5. The bear rose up and roared at me (对……吼叫), baring its enormous teeth (露出巨大的牙齿).
6. At any moment (随时) the monster would leap up and tear/rip me to pieces (会一跃而起将我撕成碎片).
7. It looked around, and stopped short (突然停下).
8. It stood there, ready to attack (准备攻击).
9. The enormous grizzly bear (灰熊) roared with rage (生气地嚎叫) and its dripping jaws were open wide (张开它滴着口水的嘴).
10. The polar bear let out one last roar and then scampered off (跑了).
11. The dog leapt and wagged its tail in excitement (跳起来，兴奋地摇着尾巴).
12. The dog suddenly started barking at us like crazy (疯狂地对我们汪汪叫).
13. The dog let out a string of roaring barks (发出一连串咆哮的吠声)
14. The dog was biting, growling and wagging its tail (撕咬着，咆哮着，摇晃着尾巴).
15. The dog curled up next to him (蜷缩在他身边).
16. The dog licked his hands (舔了舔他的手) and pushed its head against his leg (用它的头推他的腿). Then the dog sat down and looked up into his eyes, barking as if telling him help was on the way (好像告诉他救援马上就到). He bent down (弯腰) and patted it on the head (拍了拍它的头).
17. But before he could grab the dog, it let out a ferocious bark (发出猛烈的叫声) and rammed (撞) its body against him, almost knocking him down (几乎要撞倒他).
18. A mother crocodile was carrying their babies in its wide-open jaws (在它张开的大嘴里).
19. The dog sat patiently with its tongue hanging out of its mouth (它的舌头从嘴里伸出来). He threw/wrapped his arms around (抱住) his dog, burying his face in his fur (把脸埋在它的毛皮上).
20. The wild boar (野猪) grunted and snorted (发出哼声) as it stared at him with beady (圆溜溜的) black eyes. Suddenly the monster charged (猛冲), its sharp tusks (獠牙) aimed right for his stomach.
21. Monkeys were screeching (吱吱地叫着) in the trees.
22. Owls hooted (鸣叫) and fireflies shimmered (闪烁).
23. The chicken gave a startled squawk (发出嘎嘎的惊叫声).
24. A robin was perching (落在……上停留) on the fence.
25. He turned around just in time to see a robin hopping around (跳来跳去) on the path.
26. The sparrows were pecking (啄) at whatever they could find.
27. The swan flapped its wings and flew away (拍打着翅膀飞走了).
28. The shark was right behind him, its huge jaws wide open (张开大嘴巴), and its white sharp teeth gleaming in its mouth (在嘴里发光).
29. Little by little, the beast came closer and closer (逐渐逼近) until I could see its eyes.
30. The gigantic shark, bigger than Tom himself, came toward him, the black eyes staring up through the water (从水里向上盯着看).
31. The horse snorted, tossed its head and then galloped away (打了个响鼻儿，晃晃脑袋，然后飞奔而去).
32. Alan took hold of the reins (抓住缰绳) and the small horse started trotting (开始慢跑起来).
33. The horse seemed restless (坐立不安), too, stamping its feet (跺着脚), and snorting.
34. He got up and stroked its fur (抚摩着它的毛), resting his cheek against (将脸颊靠在) its warm head.
35. The horse nosed him in the chest, looking at him nervously (紧张地看着他).
36. The horse reared in terror (受惊后腿直立), throwing its rider.
37. The cat sat licking its paws (坐着舔爪子).
38. The cat suddenly jumped up and yowled (突然跳起来，哀嚎着). It stood there with its fur standing straight up (毛发竖起来).
39. It pushed against Harry’s arm with its nose (用鼻子拱Harry的手臂). It looked as if it wanted to roll Harry off the bed.
40. They could watch herds of zebras and giraffes strolling (溜达) through the grass. At night, roars of lions echoed through the darkness (狮子的吼叫声在黑暗中回响).
41. He turned around, and in the dark distance he saw two glowing eyes (看到两只发光的眼睛).
42. Flames reached out of the windows, like bright orange arms (像明亮的橙色手臂) trying to grab the houses all around it.
43. Poisonous black smoke rushed up his nose and down his throat (冲上鼻子到喉咙). He cried
out for help, but his words were smothered (扑灭) by the terrible noises all around. He clawed
his way across the floor, gasping for breath (气喘吁吁). He could feel the building would be
burnt to the ground any second (随时烧成灰烬).
44. Any second/minute (随时), the ceiling would collapse (倒塌).
45. It looked as if the house could crash down any second (随时倒塌).
46. He stood on the steps, knowing that he could lose his nerve any second (随时失去勇气).
47. There was fire everywhere now — raining from the sky (从天上如雨水一般落下), rising
from the ground.
48. Smoke swirled all around him (在他周围浓烟盘旋). He rose to his feet (站起来), gasping for breath.
49. I heard a commotion (听到喧闹声) and went to see what was happening (看看正在发生什么事情).
50. Shouts and screams rang out (响起) from the house.
51. They ran into buildings filled with blazing orange flames and choking black smoke (呛人的黑烟).
52. There was no way he could kill the monster. 他不可能杀死这只怪物。
53. There was no way he would be able to move the enormous tree. 他不可能移动那棵大树。
54. There was nothing he could do to help his sister. 他帮不了妹妹什么忙。
55. There was nothing he could do but sit there like an idiot. 他毫无办法，只能像白痴似地坐在那里。
56. It seemed as if there was no way out. 看情形似乎无路可逃了。
57. But no matter how she searched, she saw no signs of John (=John was nowhere to be seen.)
但是无论怎样寻找，她也没有找到约翰。
58. For a split second (一瞬间), he seemed frozen, staring at the rising water.
59. And then he caught a glimpse of (瞥见) something in the water, just a few feet away (就几英尺远). He had no idea (不知道) what it was. For a second (一会儿), he imagined it was a whale.
60. He hit the ground hard, but within seconds (几秒钟之内), he was back on his feet.
61. In a flash/blink (立刻，一瞬间), the boy disappeared around the corner.
62. Out of nowhere (不知从哪里), a car zoomed (疾驰) into view.
63. He looked up just in time to see (正好看见) a massive tree crashing down on top of him.
第二部分
01. The bear snarled at them(对…低声吼叫snɑ l), inching closer(小心翼翼地靠近 nt ).
02. The bear bared its enormous teeth and growled. (露出巨大的牙龇吼叫着ɡra l)
03. The bear was pacing back and forth, sniffing (嗅sn f)the ground.
04. Their howls and cries filled the air. (空中飘荡着嚎叫声)
05. The bear rose up and roared at me(对…吼叫r d), baring its enormous teeth(露出巨大的牙龇).
06. Any second (随时)the monster would leap up and tear/rip me to pieces(会一跃而起将我撕成碎片)
07. It looked around, and stopped short(突然停下).
08. It stood there, ready to attack(准备攻击)
09. The enormous grizzly( gr zli灰熊) roared with rage(生气地嚎叫re d ) and its dripping jaws were open wide (张开它滴着口水的嘴).
10. The polar bear let out one last roar and then scampered off. ( sk mp d跑了)
11. The dog leapt and wagged its tail in excitement(lept跳起来，兴奋地摇着尾巴w ɡ).
12. The dog suddenly started barking at us like crazy(疯狂的对我们发汪汪叫).
13. The dog let out a string of roaring barks(发出一连串咆哮的吠声)
14. The dog was biting, growling and wagging its tail. (这条狗撕咬着，咆哮着，摇晃着尾巴。)
15. The dog curled up next to him. (蜷缩在他身边k l)
16. The dog licked his hands (舔了舔他的手) and pushed its head against his leg(用它的头推他的腿上). Then the dog sat down and looked up into his eyes, barking as if telling him help was on the way(好像告诉他救援马上就到). He bent down (弯腰)and patted it on the head(拍了拍它的头).
17. But before he could grab the dog, it let out a ferocious bark (发出猛烈的叫声f r s) and rammed [r m]撞its body against him, almost knocking him down(几乎要撞倒他).
18. The dog looked up at Barry with a thank you kind of look on his face(脸上带着那种感恩的表情).
19. The dog sat patiently with its tongue hanging out of its mouth(它的舌头从嘴里伸出来). He threw/wrapped his arms around (抱住)his dog, burying his face in his fur(把脸埋在它的毛皮上).20. The snake coiled up and bared its gleaming fangs, ready to strike(盘绕k l起来，露出发光的毒牙f ).
21. Monkeys (Owls) were screeching in the trees(猴子在树上吱吱地叫着skri t ).
22. Owls hooted and night bugs shimmered(鸣叫hu tid闪烁 m ).
23. The chicken gave a startled squawk(鸟发出嘎嘎的惊叫声skw k).
24. A robin was perching on the fence(一只知更鸟落在篱笆上p t 停留)
25. He turned around just in time to see a robin hopping around on the path(正好看到一只知更鸟在小路上跳来跳去)
26. The sparrows were pecking at whatever they could find.
27. The swan flapped its wings and flew away(天鹅sw n拍打着fl p翅膀飞走了).
28. The shark was right behind him, its huge jaws wide open(张开大嘴巴), its white sharp teeth gleaming in its mouth(有嘴里发光).
29. Little by little(渐渐地), the shark/beast came closer and closer until I could see its eyes.
30. The gigantic shark, bigger than Tom himself, came toward him, the black eyes staring up through the water(从水里向上盯着看).
31. The horse snorted, tossed its head and then galloped away(马打了个响鼻儿sn t，晃晃t s脑袋，然后飞奔而去 ɡ l p =suddenly broke into a gallop/took off in a gallop)
32. Alan took (hold of) the reins and the small horse started trotting [tr t]. 艾伦抓住缰绳re nz，小马开始慢跑起来。
33. The horse seemed restless, too, stamping its feet, snorting(似乎也坐立不安，跺着脚，打着响鼻儿).
34. He got up and stroked its fur, resting his cheek against its warm head (抚摩着str k它的毛，将脸颊靠在它温暖的头上).
35. The horse nosed him in the chest, looking at him nervously(用鼻子拱它的胸部，紧张地看着他).
36. The horse reared in terror, throwing its rider(这匹马受惊后腿直立r (r)，将骑手摔下).
37. The cat sat licking its paws(那只猫坐着舔爪子)
38. The cat suddenly jumped up and yowled (ja l猫、狗哀嚎). It stood there with its fur standing straight up(毛发竖起来), then started pushing against
39. Harry’s arm with its nose(用鼻子拱harry的手臂). It looked as if it wanted to roll Harry off the bed.
40. They could watch herds [h dz] of zebras and giraffes strolling溜达str l through the grass. At night, roars of lions echoed through the darkness(狮子的吼叫声在黑暗中回响).
41. A mother crocodile was carrying their babies in its wide-open jaws(在它张开的大嘴里).
42. The wild boar(野猪b ) grunted and snorted (发出哼声 ɡr nt d) as it stared at him with beady(圆溜溜的 bi di) black eyes. Suddenly the monster charged(=lunged猛冲[l nd d), its sharp tusks (獠牙t sk) aimed right for his stomach.
Part 5习题精讲
【精讲习题】
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
It was one of the hottest days of the dry season.We had not seen rain in almost a month.The crops were dying.Cows had stopped giving milk.The streams were long gone back into the earth.If we didn't seesome rain soon we would lose everything.
I was in the kitchen making lunch for the family when I saw my six year- old son，Billy，walking toward the woods.I could only see his back.He wasn't walking in his usual way.He was obviously walking with a great effort，trying to be as still aspossible.Minutes after he disappeared into the woods，he came running out again，toward the house.
Moments later，however，he was once again walking in that slow and purposeful step toward the woods.This activity went on for over anhour：walking cautiously tothe woods，then running back to thehouse.Finally，my curiosity got the best of me.I crept out of the house and followed him on his journey.
He was cupping both hands in front of him as he walked；being very careful not to spill thewater he carried.Branches and thorns slapped(拍打)his little face but he did not try to avoid them.He had a much greaterpurpose.As I leaned against a tree to spy on him，Isaw the most amazing site.
Several large deers appeared threatening in front of him.But Billy walked right up to them.I almost screamed for him to get away.AndI saw a baby deer laying on the ground，obviously suffering from heavy loss of water and heat exhaustion，lift its head with great effort to lap(舔饮) up the water in my beautiful boy's hand.
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When the water was gone，Billy jumped up to run back to the house.
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And later I knew what was going on.
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【精讲习题】
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。
Little snow had fallen this winter. For Reuven the frier(皮衣制作工) it was a bad year, and after long hesitation he decided to sell Zlateh the old goat. The town butcher had offered eightsilver coins for the goat. Reuven told his oldest boy, Aaron, to take the goat to town. Aaron understood what it meant, but he had to obey his father. Hissisters cried loudly.
Aaron took along two slices of bread to eat on the road. He needed to deliver the goat by evening and return the next day with the money. While the family said goodbye, Zlatch stood as patiently as ever. Zlateh trusted human beings.
The sun was shining when Aaron left. Suddenly the weather changed, and after awhile it began to snow. Soon their path was completely covered and Aaron got lost. Beneath the snow Aaron’s boots touched the softness of a plowed field. He realized that he was no longer on the road. Zlateh bleated (哀鸣) as if asking to be taken home. Aaron looked around hoping to find a farmer driving a sleigh(雪橇) along the way. But he could see nothing.
Aaron knew that if they did not find shelter, they would freeze to death. Suddenly he made out the shape of a hill. When he came near it, he realized that it was a large haystack (大干草堆)covered by snow. Aaron knew that they were saved. When he reached the hay, he dug a nest for himself and the goat. It was always warm in the hay. And hay wasfood for Zlateh.
Zlateh,sat down and seemed to have regained her confidence in man. Aaron ate his bread, but after the difficult journey he was still hungry. He looked at Zlatehand realized that he would not be starved to death. Goat’s milk was sweet.Zlateh ate frequently and her body gave forth an animal warmth, and Aaron hugged her tightly. The snow fell for 3 days and the windquieted down.
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Onthe morning of the fourth day, Aaron heard the ringing of sleigh bells.
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【精讲习题】
人与麻雀
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It's getting hot. It's time to put on lighter clothes and open up the windows. I can't wait to do so. Yesterday, an unforeseen visit to the kitchen happened during the brief time we were out. Two daring sparrows (麻雀) had risked landing on our territory to enjoy the freshness in our sink and some other breadcrumbs (面包屑) on our kitchen counter.
Actually, sparrows are everywhere. The tiny, gray -and brown birds are found on every continent except Antarctica, flying or jumping around cities, picking up leftover food on side-walks, and sometimes chasing with native bird species. These small creatures have adapted to living alongside humans- similar to pet dogs.
When you come across such sudden callers, you are likely to sense it as an unwanted visitor into your comfort zone, or you might receive it as a lovely angel of life. I chose the second option, with no hesitation while my husband preferred driving them away. After all, I've never come to stop to feel the relationship with sparrows.
I recalled when I was a little girl living in the city, I lived in an apartment with a flat roof viewed from our kitchen window. Every day my mom and I would go out to feed the sparrows. She taught me how to call them with a clicking sound she made with her tongue. I have loved sparrows ever since. So every day in my spare time, I can't stop observing and celebrating their dance from our window. I stuffed them with the leftovers on our tablecloth after every meal. And I have provided them with every kind of bases and stands of our house.
Undoubtedly, they feel at ease in our backyard. And that has led them to gather up courage and slide into our kitchen, bedroom or even reading room. Perhaps because they have the feeling that we don' t consider them trouble makers, but friendly neighbors. But I am slightly worried about their droppings (粪便).
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
One day, they left some droppings in my husband's reading room.
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About two weeks later, I heard my husband calling “Oh, my God!”
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【精讲习题】
A heroic dog
Like most dogs whose homes are situated on large plotsof land，one New Zealand dogregularly went off exploring through the farmland around his home forhours at a time.
But as Louie，asheepdog rescued from a shelter when he was just a puppy，got older，his trips got shorter andshorter.Now that Louie is 12 years old，hechooses to stay close to home and hardly ever goes out to explore any more，which is why his family was soworried when he recently disappeared and didn't return home as usual.
“My mother was a little upset as he had stopped hiswandering，” said Marolyn Diver，whose parentsown Louie.“Wewere very concerned that he might forget where his home was.” But thankfully，Louie turned up at the house a fewhours later.“He looked so tired and had basically just collapsed(崩溃)，”Marolyn said.“We were concerned that someone might have hurt him.But then werealized there was a small noteattached to Louie's collar.After readingthe note，I felt complete reliefand relaxed，and then my heartmelted.”
“Louie is the hero of the day，” read the note，which was written by a neighborabout a mile away.“He led me to Maddy in distress stuck under a pile of branches．Cheers，Rob．” “According to Rob，Louie was waiting for him at hishouse and demanded to be followed.Rob said that he was 100 percent sure thatLouie knew what he was doing，and leading him to Maddywas his pure focus，” Marolyn explained.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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Part 5 高考真题再现
小狗找到新的玩伴【2020年1月浙江卷】
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“I’m going to miss you so much, Poppy,” said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions (情绪) get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. “I guess this is it.” he said. “I’ll see you back home in a month, okay ” His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy’s mother turned to the dog, “Okay, Poppy, time to go back home.”
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn’t seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit, Poppy didn’t.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn’t her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried, “What should we do to cheer Poppy up ” asked Dad. “We’ve tried everything.”
“I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy,” smiled Mom. “Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let’s get a little dog for Poppy.”
It didn’t take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy
welcomed them home as usual, but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on
it. Her tail began wagging (摆动) ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.
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拍照北极熊遇险【2020年7月浙江卷】
第二节 读后续写（满分25分）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
One fall, my wife Elli and I had a single goal: to photograph polar bears. We were staying at a research camp outside “ the polar bear capital of the world ” — the town of Churchill in Manitoba, Canada.
Taking pictures of polar bears is amazing but also dangerous. Polar bears — like all wild animals — should be photographed from a safe distance. When I’m face to face with a polar bear, I like it to be through a camera with a telephoto lens. But sometimes, that is easier said than done. This was one of those times.
As Elli and I cooked dinner, a young male polar bear who was playing in a nearby lake sniffed, and smelled our garlic bread.
The hungry bear followed his nose to our camp, which was surrounded by a high wire fence. He pulled and bit the wire. He stood on his back legs and pushed at the wooden fence posts.
Terrified, Elli and I tried all the bear defense actions we knew. We yelled at the bear, hit pots hard, and fired blank shotgun shells into the air. Sometimes loud noises like these will scare bears off. Not this polar bear though — he just kept trying to tear down the fence with his massive paws (爪子).
I radioed the camp manager for help. He told me a helicopter was on its way, but it would be 30 minutes before it arrived. Making the best of this close encounter (相遇), I took some pictures of the bear.
Elli and I feared the fence wouldn’t last through 30 more minutes of the bear’s punishment. The camp manager suggested I use pepper spray. The spray burns the bears’ eyes, but doesn’t hurt them. So I approached our uninvited guest slowly and, through the fence, sprayed him in the face. With an angry roar (吼叫), the bear ran to the lake to wash his eyes.
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Part 6 模拟演练
（2022·江苏·苏州市苏州高新区第一中学一模）
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Snowflakes dancing in the sky, it was an awfully cold winter. Mary felt as gray as the sky outside. She struggled to get by the tough winter because her bills went up while her income went down.
Her refrigerator sat empty. Her only food consisted of peanut butter, bread and bananas, only enough for two sandwiches. Worse still, it would be four days before she got paid. As Mary prepared to sit down and eat half of her remaining food, she heard a knock at the door. Who could it be on such a freezing night Robbery scenes from films flashed across her mind. Then Mary shook her head and laughed at her foolish thought-no robber would choose her as a target. Opening the door, she saw a stranger standing outside, body trembling with cold.
“Madam, sorry to disturb you, but I'm lost and get stuck in the snow. Could you please spare a piece of bread " the stranger asked cautiously and politely in a weak but deep voice.
“I'm afraid not,” said Mary, “but I could make you a peanut butter and banana sandwich.”
“That sounds wonderful,” the stranger answered. "Mind if I wait here on the porch ”
“Yes, I do mind,” Mary replied, "but you could come in and eat it at the table.”
Not expecting both food and warmth, the stranger entered the house eagerly. Mary hurried off to the kitchen for the last four pieces of bread, peanut butter, and bananas. In a few minutes, she returned and invited him to sit down to eat what she could offer. After eating, the man thanked and said goodbye to her.
Looking outside, Mary hesitated a moment and said, "If you don't mind, you can sleep on the sofa.” "That would be good enough," responded the man gratefully.
Mary went into her room, and locked the door. The next morning, when she woke up, she remembered the man. "How will I tell him I have nothing for breakfast " she asked herself. She dressed, unlocked, and opened the door slightly.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
To her surprise, the man was nowhere to be seen.
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（2022·江苏·模拟预测）
阅读下面短文，根据其内容和所给段落首句进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
I grew up in a small town where elementary school was a ten-minute walk from my house and in an age, not so long ago, when we children could go home for lunch and find our mothers waiting. At the time, I didn’t consider this to be so important, although today it certainly would be. Actually, our lunch time together in the past years had had a great influence on my life before I realized it.
Our lunch time when I was in the third grade will stay with me always. I had been picked to be the princess in the school play, and for weeks my mother had painstakingly practised my lines with me. But no matter how easily I delivered them at home, as soon as I stepped onstage, every word disappeared from my head. Finally, my teacher took me aside. She explained patiently that she needed a narrator and had written a narrator’s part to the play, and asked me to switch roles. Her words, kindly delivered, still hurt me, especially when I saw my part go to another girl.
I didn’t tell my mother what had happened when I went home for lunch that day. But she sensed my unease, and instead of suggesting we practice my lines, she asked if I wanted to walk in the yard. It was a lovely spring day and the rose vine(藤) was turning green. Under the huge trees, we could see yellow dandelions(蒲公英) appearing unexpectedly through the grass in bunches, as if a painter had touched our landscape with small amounts of gold. I watched my mother casually bend down by one of the bushes. “I think I'm going to dig up all these weeds,” she said, pulling a blossom up by all its roots. “From now on, we’ll have roses in this garden.” I immediately protested, “But I like dandelions. All flowers are beautiful — even dandelions.”
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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“Do you mean that every flower has its own beauty ” asked my mother thoughtfully.
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（2022·江苏·南京市第一中学模拟预测）
Tim recently graduated from the university and was looking for a job. After searching on the Internet he found out that a famous online business company is recruiting a new office manager. Many candidates applied for the entry exam, but only one would be accepted in the end. Tim noticed the resumes (简历) of other candidates and was surprised to see that some of them held a Master’s Degree or even a Doctor's Degree .But Tim was only a Bachelor, and barely met the lowest requirement of the diploma. Tim felt a bit frustrated because he had no advantage over other candidates who were excellent students. All the candidates entered the exam hall after handing up their resumes. Tim scanned through the pages of the test paper and found out that the questions were very difficult for him. Tim tried to calm down and focus on the questions themselves instead of their difficulty level. He started with the easiest ones and moved on to the more difficult ones slowly.
There were two invigilators (监考人) in the hall , one of them was tall and thin , while the other invigilator was of the opposite: he was short and fat .They seemed to be quite confident about the honesty of the candidates and were absent. After about 10 minutes, one of the invigilators left to answer a phone call. The other invigilator soon went out too.
The atmosphere in the exam hall changed after the invigilators had left .Some of the candidates took out notes and books, some of them brought tablets to search for answers, and some even called others for help .Tim looked back, and he saw the candidate sitting behind him cheating too. The man winked to Tim, as if telling him to cheat in the test because everyone was doing so Tim shook his head and continued doing the difficult problems at a slow pace.
In about half an hour, the invigilators returned to the exam hall. Tim still had one question left blank at the end of the test. He was almost sure that he was not going to be accepted.
注意：
1. 所续写短文的词数应为120左右；
2. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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The test result was to Tim’s surprise.
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Tim then understood everything that had happened.
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（2022·重庆·礼嘉中学一模）
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was my first day of school. I loved school: the smell of chalk and colored crayons and having my own desk that was just my size. However, there was one big problem with school: Mildred.
Daily when I walked the short distance home after school, Mildred would hit me and scare me. I was absolutely terrified of her. She had failed first grade and was a year older than me. Mildred didn’t have any friends, so she seemed to concentrate on making enemies. Because I was one of the smallest children in first grade, she had selected me as her number one enemy.
As soon as the dismissal bell rang each day, my heart started to pound and I blinked fast so I wouldn’t cry.
Pretty soon my mother figured out something was wrong at school. I didn’t want to tell her about Mildred. Mother continued to question me, and I finally sobbed out the whole story. I begged not to go to school and didn’t sleep much that night. The next morning she said, “Marion, I’m going to walk up the hill with you today. I believe we’ll see Mildred.” Mildred walked from way across down to school. She never bothered me on the way to school, only afterward.
“Oh, mama, please don’t do that! Don’t say anything to Mildred. It will just make her mad. Let me stay home by myself. Please, mama.”
“Hurry and get dressed, Marion.” Her voice was gentle, but quite firm.
“Ple-e-ease, mama.”
“Trust, Marion. I have a plan.”
We bundled up against the bitter cold wind and stared out. Maybe we wouldn’t see Mildred, I hoped. But my mother had this confident look. I knew the look well, and I had a sinking feeling that we would see Mildred and that mother would use her “plan”.
Just as we were turning around at a corner when we spotted Mildred. We waited a few moments as she approached us. “Hello, Mildred.” my mother said.
1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。
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Mildred stopped, frozen as still as a statue.
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读后续写模拟专练01
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
“If mum finds out that I'm going to the beach, I'll be in big trouble.” I said to myself softly in a low voice.
I went downstairs slowly and tried to walk casually into the kitchen. As I was walking towards the back door, mum asked without looking up from her “dish-washing”, “Where are you going ” I answered back without hesitation,“ I am going to the garden to play.” After I got out of the kitchen, I breathed a sign of relief. My plan had worked out fine so far. I climbed the fence and jumped onto the muddy field next to my house and started running towards the bus stop at top speed.
After half an hour I was at the beach scanning the crowd for my friends, Jimmy and Bobby. Two young men were racing in the canoes (独木舟). After a while, I saw them near a coconut tree. I ran towards them and got into my swimming trunk (游泳裤). For about an hour, we played volleyball happily.
Suddenly, Bobby hit the ball too hard and the ball fell into the sea. Just as Bobby was going to pick up the ball, the tide came in and carried the ball further and further away from the shore. I wanted to show off my swimming skills so I declared to help get the ball for them.
I dived into the water and started swimming at a steady pace. After swimming for about ten minutes, I became tired but when I saw that the ball was only a few feet away from me, I put in an extra burst of speed. However, just as I was going to get the ball, a very strong current swept the ball further away from me. At that moment, a string of weed (海草)tangled (缠绕) up with my feet and I could not swim properly. I struggled to keep afloat but it was no use. “ If I had listened to my parents, this would never have happened,”I thought silently.
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翻译小练习：
1. 我还是被推到水下。我告诉自己永远不要放弃。
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2. 然后我又使劲拔了一次草。杂草终于断了。
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3. 我游回水面深呼吸。我看见两个年轻人划着独木舟，互相比赛。
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4. 我筋疲力尽，大声呼救。那两个男人看见我就朝我划来。
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5. 当他们到达我这边时，我已经失去知觉了。
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6. 直到一位医生走进房间，我才意识到我在医院里。
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7. 吉米和鲍比告诉我，那两个年轻人把我带到岸边，送我去医院。
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8. 几分钟后，我的父母带着半生气半担心的表情走了进来。
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9. 我父母责骂我偷偷地跑出家门，但也很高兴我没有受重伤。
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10. 我永远不会忘记那可怕的经历。我也不想再炫耀了。
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读后续写模拟专练02
读后续写 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Scout could clearly remember the night she had to leave her home in Poland. It was the beginning of World War II and her family had to escape as soon as possible. She quickly packed a suitcase with a few pieces of clothing, her diary, and her most prized treasure, a silk scarf. Scout and her best friend, Betty, had persuaded their parents to buy them matching scarves, which they took as a symbol of their friendship. Scout didn’t know she was going to America and would not be returning.
Scout kept that special silk scarf for many years. One day she decided to give it to her granddaughter, Eliza, to wear to her first job interview for good luck. Scout was afraid that Eliza would lose the scarf, but the granddaughter promised, "Don't worry, Grandma, nothing's going to happen to your scarf. You'll see that it’s going to bring both of us luck."And with that, Eliza kissed her grandmother and left for the interview.
Leaving the interview, Eliza felt confident that she had got the job so she decided to celebrate by going to a restaurant. Sitting at her table, Eliza felt an elderly woman staring at her for a long time.
"I'm sorry. Do I know you " Eliza asked.
"I'm sorry, dear, but you remind me of my best friend," the old woman replied. "She looked like you and used to wear a scarf just like yours." Eliza listened carefully, with her eyes and mouth wide open. She had heard stories of her grandmother's best friend and knew the meaning of the scarf. Could this woman be Betty, her grandmother's childhood friend
注意:
1. 所续写短文词数应为100左右;
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已给出，不计入总词数;
4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
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翻译小练习：
1. “我叫贝蒂。我原籍波兰，但13岁时离开了那里。从那时起，我就一直住在美国华盛顿特区。”
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2．伊丽莎简直不敢相信，她祖母最好的朋友的故事在她脑海里飘荡。
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3. 她以为那个老妇人一定是她祖母最好的朋友。她说，“贝蒂，你介意现在和我一起去吗？我要给你看一个人。”
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4. 晚饭后不久他们离开了餐馆。到了史考特家，老妇人急切地按了门铃。
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5. 史考特一开门，她就惊讶地看到儿时的朋友站在她面前。
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6. 多神奇啊！围巾确实给他们带来了好运。
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7. 激动又感动，两人都泪流满面。
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Part 7名师精讲
01—父亲的百万奖赏
阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
My dad was a nice man who didn’t talk too much. He used to work as a mechanic fixing army planes, but he was sent back after getting injured. Later, he opened a garage with his friend, who sold it behind his back. People took advantage of him, but he just couldn't turn down a favor.
That’s why I felt more than a little confused when a policeman called my office, asking me to pick him up at the station. The old man was found walking alone along the high way. When a police patrol car stopped him, he explained that he was travelling to Nabraska to claim his million dollars.
“What million dollars ” I asked Dad, who was sitting quietly in the passengers’ seat as we drove home.
Dad took out a wrinkled letter and read, “We are now authorized to pay one million dollars to Woodrow T. Grant of Billings, Montana.”
I never knew dad wanted to be a millionaire. I asked him what he would do with the prize money, to which he replied that he wanted a new truck. His driver’s license has expired fifteen years ago when he reached his seventies.
I knew that the letter was a scam, but the old man was as stubborn as a mule. He even slept with that stupid letter in his hand. He memorized it word for word. I didn’t think he could memorize anything anymore. He wouldn’t stay at home either, but ventured out onto the highway again and again, until the police sent him back. In the end, I had to give up. I called in sick at work and the two of us set out in my car to claim his prize.
We travelled past several states. Dad remained silent, while I found it hard to control my temper. Finally, I decided to ask the question. “Why on earth do you need a million dollars for a stupid truck ” Dad replied, “The rest is for you. I wanted to leave you something.” His words rendered me speechless.
注意：
1. 续写字数应为150左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡上的相应位置作答。
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The following day, we arrived at our destination.
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【写作特训】
1. People took advantage of him, but ______________________________(他就是不能拒绝帮忙).
2. I knew that the letter was a scam, but ______________________________(那老人像骡子一样倔强).
3. Dad remained silent, while ______________________________(我发现很难控制自己的脾气).
4. Dad replied, “The rest is for you. I wanted to leave you something.” _____________________________(他的话使我说不出话来).
5. ______________________________(爸爸成为百万富翁的梦想) was already broken.
6. ______________________________(他把头靠在手上) like a downhearted old horse bowing beneath the violence of the storm.
7. Looking at the truck, my Dad ______________________________(脸上带着惊喜的表情).
8. _____________________________(一场突如其来的雨把炎热的太阳赶走了) and the dull air changed into a fitful breeze.
02---父母旅行后
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节和给定段落开头语进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Dad and Mom had got to go on a four-day business trip. They instructed their elder son Daniel and younger daughter Jane how to feed and look after their dog, Spot, how to take good care of themselves--learning to cook if they could, or ordering pizza--with money left on the table--if they were busy, and told them to keep their rooms clean and tidy. They asked Daniel to be in charge(负责).
On the very morning when the parents left, Mom kissed them and said to Daniel gently, “Young man, do take care of Spot and Jane.” Daniel promised, “I will, Mum.” Too excited to fall asleep again, Daniel and Jane jumped out of bed, calling out each other to get up. Their pet dog, Spot, heard the similar voice and rushed in, with a ball in its mouth. Jane stuck(伸) her head into Daniel’s room,“Spot got up an hour earlier. Let’s walk it.”Daniel said excitedly,“I’m coming, but, Jane, don’t forget to keep your room clean and tidy.” “I will.”
They ran with the dog in the yard(庭院) and threw the ball away for Spot to bring it back. They had fun playing with Spot the whole morning. Washing Spot was slow and tiring as it was the first time they had done it. Then Daniel settled down to his homework while Jane did her reading with interest.
The following day, Jane begged her brother to order pizza for lunch. Daniel agreed excitedly“we haven’t tasted that for long and we behave ourselves(表现好) ,right ”After a while, he added,“We should save money, too.”Within half an hour, they treated themselves to a big pizza. However, in the afternoon, Spot looked sick, lying lazily and unwilling to move. Daniel was concerned about the dog and took it to the petclinic (诊所)immediately with Jane as their parents had done.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语己为你写好；
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When Dad and Mom arrived a day earlier, they were amazed to find everything in a mess.
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Daniel ran into his room, with tears in his eyes, “Jane, there is no need to explain and mom won’t trust me any longer”.
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【写作特训】
1. ______________________________(激动得再也睡不着了), Daniel and Jane jumped out of bed, calling out each other to get up.
2. ______________________________(给spot洗澡又慢又累) as it was the first time they had done it.
3. Then ______________________________(丹尼尔专心做家庭作业) while Jane did her reading with interest.
4. Within half an hour, _____________________________(他们请自己吃了一个大比萨饼).
5. ______________________________(妈妈怒不可遏地大叫), “Daniel, don’t forget it was you who were in charge, but look at the mess. And why does Spot still look that hungry and gloomy ”
6. ______________________________(丹尼尔的内疚和愤怒交织在一起，以至于) he didn’t utter a word, biting his lip and tears trickling down his face.
7. ______________________________(简抓住她母亲的手臂), explaining in an anxious tone, “Mummy, Spot was actually sick, so ....”
8. _____________________________(妈妈后悔自己的粗鲁，很欣慰) that Daniel learnt to be responsible.
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