-2024年高考英语二轮复习专题五 应用文写作 第2讲 解题技法指导（共49张PPT）
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应用文写作
专题五
第2讲
解题技法指导
根据高考应用文写作的评分标准，应用词汇的丰富性和准确性是作文能否取得高分的一条重要的标准。所以，在词汇的亮化上应遵循以下三个原则：
原则1 求新求变
同样意义的词语，要根据语境使用最新学过的而不是小学或初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现，要使用不同的表达方式。如：
1.Not only does the ocean offer us enough food，but it also maintains the balance of nature.Thus，it is very important to protect the ocean.
(2022·全国甲)
技法一 亮化词汇三原则
→Not only does the ocean offer us sufficient food，but it also maintains the balance of nature.Thus，it is imperative to protect the ocean.
2.I asked my parents to allow me to have a piano lesson for beginners.
(2023·全国乙)
→I asked my parents to allow me to take up a piano lesson for beginners.
3.With the wide spread of the Internet，more and more people become online learners.(2021·全国乙)
→With the wide spread of the Internet，an increasing number of people become online learners.
4.My suggestion is to group students by their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.(2023·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
→My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
5.Last weekend，many students who like gardening participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Council.(2023·浙江1月)
→Last weekend，various students who are keen on gardening participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Council.
6.Throughout the event，I was attracted by the wide variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes，and those that provide food and shelter for animals.
(2023·浙江1月)
→Throughout the event，I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes，as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.
原则2 求准求精
写作时不一定每一句都要有复杂句式，有时准确使用一个单词就会让整个句子增色。
1.We believe that his teachings will remind us of the importance of integrity，compassion，and social responsibility.(2023·全国甲)
→We hold a strong belief that his teachings do remind us of the importance of integrity，compassion，and social responsibility.
2.In conclusion，we should find a way to study online better.
(2021·全国乙)
→In conclusion，we should find a way to study online more efficiently.
3.I watched a live musical performance for the first time and the good players touched me.(2023·全国乙)
→That was the first time I had watched a live musical performance and the fantastic players made me touched deeply.
4.I think that it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.(2023·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
→I think it not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.
原则3 短语优先
恰当使用短语代替单词，不但可以增加词数，还有助于绕开不会表达的单词，使得行文更加流畅。
1.I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestion.
(2023·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
→I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into account/consideration.
2.Initially，on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing，I began to love skating.(2023·全国乙)
→Initially，on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing，I became enthusiastic about skating.
3.And eventually，we can master what we desire to learn.(2021·全国乙)
→And eventually，we can have a good command of what we desire to learn.
4.Firstly，randomly pairing up students may cause imbalanced language abilities within the groups.(2023·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
→Firstly，randomly pairing up students may lead to/result in imbalanced language abilities within the groups.
对复杂结构和含有非谓语动词的高级句式的灵活运用能够彰显考生对英语语言文字的驾驭能力。在使用这些句式时，一定要注意：高级但不造作，多变但不离谱，复杂但不晦涩。巧记以下四个诀窍会对你使用高级句式起到事半功倍的效果。
技法二 美化句式四诀窍
诀窍1 多种句型巧用
1.定语从句：Confucius，also known as Kong Qiu，was a Chinese philosopher and politician who lived during the Spring and Autumn Period.(2023·全国甲)
2.状语从句：However，at the very beginning，when I stepped on the ice，I stumbled over myself.(2023·全国乙)
3.名词性从句：I hope that by sharing my personal story，others will be inspired to find joy and growth in their own childhood hobbies and pursuits.(2023·上海)
4.with复合句型：This can hinder the progress of both students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation，with little room left for the other student to improve.(2023·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
5.感叹句：How thrilled I am to have the opportunity to share my own skills and experiences as part of this effort！(2023·天津)
诀窍2 非谓语动词若干
非谓语动词的正确使用能体现出学生的语法功底，相比于从句，非谓语动词更加生动简洁。
1.Last weekend，I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Council.(2023·浙江1月)
2.Initially，on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing，I became enthusiastic about skating.(2023·全国乙)
3.I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.(2023·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
4.Firstly，randomly pairing up students may lead to imbalanced language abilities within the groups.(2023·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
5.This allows students to collaborate with someone they are comfortable with，ensuring a supportive and productive learning environment.
(2023·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
诀窍3 省略倒装强调可出现
特殊句型如省略句、倒装句和强调句等可以使整篇文章句式更加丰富。
1.While listening to the local botanist’s talk，I gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.(2023·浙江1月)
2.It is events like the Chinese Workshop that are crucial for promoting cross-cultural understanding and appreciation.(2023·天津)
3.So easily addicted to chatting online or playing games are they that they will forget to learn English by using them.(2022·全国乙)
4.From the learning experience，I fully understand that only by practicing diligently can we overcome many kinds of difficulties.
(2023·全国乙)
5.Hard as I strive，I still fell over again and again.(2023·全国乙)
6.Such is the well-known figure in history I will respect all the time.
(2023·全国甲)
诀窍4 被动适当露露面
如果一篇文章全都是主动句而且主语一致，文章就会显得单调，适当使用被动句能够避免这种情况。
1.He is widely considered one of the most important figures in Chinese history and his teachings have had a profound impact on Chinese culture and society.(2023·全国甲)
2.Confucius’ influence can still be seen in modern Chinese society，where his teachings continue to be studied and applied in daily life.(2023·全国甲)
3.The moment I thought of the athletes on the field，I was inspired by their powerful spirits.(2023·全国乙)
4.Paper-cutting is an art form that has a long history in China and is still widely practiced today.(2023·天津)
技法三 衔接过渡“起、承、转、合”
类别 常见词 经典句
用于“起”的过渡词汇 (用在段落或文章的开头) first of all；at first； to start/begin with；recently/lately/ currently；at present； in recent years； in general 1.To begin with，I suggest organizing a walking tour around the city to explore the green spaces in Beijing.(2023·北京)
2.First of all，what we can do is place importance on our daily actions.(2022·全国甲)
类别 常见词 经典句
用于“承”的过渡词汇 (用在段落中的第一个扩展句中) 比较/解释 as well as；in other words；similarly；likewise；that is to say；also；too 3.It is also a symbol of the skills that I developed through my childhood experiences.(2023·上海)
4.What’s more，if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements，what should I do？(2021·全国甲)
并列 what’s more；moreover； furthermore；in addition； besides；additionally 因果 therefore；so；thus； for this purpose 举例 for instance；for example；in this case；such as 类别 常见词 经典句
用于“承”的过渡词汇 (用在段落中的第一个扩展句中) 比较/解释 as well as；in other words；similarly；likewise；that is to say；also；too 5.Therefore，I strongly recommend that all the students in our school should make use of their spare time to enjoy these wonderful works carefully.(2021·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
6.There are many influential historic figures in China such as Qu Yuan，Zhuge Liang and Li Bai.(2023·全国甲)
并列 what’s more；moreover； furthermore；in addition； besides；additionally 因果 therefore；so；thus； for this purpose 举例 for instance；for example；in this case；such as 类别 常见词 经典句
用于“转”的过渡词汇 (用在段落中的第二个扩展句中) though/although；in spite of；despite；even if/though；but；however；on the other hand；yet；on the contrary；whereas；nevertheless；in contrast；by contrast；what’s worse；worse still；unfortunately/fortunately；unluckily/luckily；in fact；as a matter of fact；actually 7.Although my fingers were painful after practice，I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.(2023·全国乙)
8.Even though I will not pursue it as my life career，I will still continue playing the piano as my hobby.(2023·全国乙)
9.However，those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12% respectively.(2022·全国乙)
类别 常见词 经典句
用于“合”的过渡词汇 (用在段落的结论句或文章的结论 段中) overall；in a word；in general；in short；above all；after all；generally speaking；to sum up；finally；in conclusion；at last；in summary；as a result；thus；eventually；hence；on the whole 10.Overall，it was a valuable and enriching experience.(2023·浙江1月)
11.And eventually，we can have a good command of what we desire to learn.(2023·全国乙)
12.To sum up，I wish you could live up to the expectations of our school.(2019·全国Ⅱ)
技法四 规避常见五错误
典例示范 常见错误 错误句子 改错
句子成分残 缺或多余 (缺)There are many students support it. There are many students who/that support it.
(多)Because the planting process can bring me a sense of satisfaction and achievement，so I really consider it the best way to relax myself. The planting process can bring me a sense of satisfaction and achievement，so I really consider it the best way to relax myself.
典例示范 常见错误 错误句子 改错
主谓不一致 The survey show that most students prefer to text or give gifts to their mothers. The survey shows that most students prefer to text or give gifts to their mothers.
You can read the books which is on the shelf. You can read the books which are on the shelf.
典例示范 常见错误 错误句子 改错
时态、语态错误 The exhibition will hold next weekend. The exhibition will be held next weekend.
Knowing that you had a preference for flying kites，I sincerely invite you to go to the Kite Festival with me. Knowing that you have a preference for flying kites，I sincerely invite you to go to the Kite Festival with me.
典例示范 常见错误 错误句子 改错
词性不分 To raise the aware of caring for the disadvantaged groups，our school is to organize a charity donation. To raise the awareness of caring for the disadvantaged groups，our school is to organize a charity donation.
Paper-cutting is a tradition Chinese art. Paper-cutting is a traditional Chinese art.
I finally through the exam after several attempts. I finally got through the exam after several attempts.
典例示范 常见错误 错误句子 改错
中式英语 How are you going these days？I very miss you. How are you going these days？I miss you very much.
The hotel broke out a big fire last night. A big fire broke out in the hotel last night.
As you know，our programme starts every Tuesday at 10 am and ends at 11 am. As you know，our programme starts at 10 am and ends at 11 am every Tuesday.
Ⅰ.升级句中加颜色词汇
1.With the development of technology，more and more people are fond of online payment.
→With the development of technology， people are fond of online payment.
2.(2023·江西5市重点中学联考)Knowing that you like Chinese culture，I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me.
→Knowing that you Chinese culture，I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me.
随堂演练
an increasing number of
are keen on/are fond of/are interested in
3.(2023·陕西咸阳一模)In order to improve the students’ awareness of body building，a hill-climbing competition，with the theme of “Health Is First”，was held last Sunday by our school.
→ the students’ awareness of body building，a hill-climbing competition，with the theme of “Health Is First”，was held last Sunday by our school.
Aimed to enhance/With the purpose of enhancing
4.(2023·河北唐山、保定一模)If you want to enter for it，please fill in the application form on the school website before October 5th.
→If you want to it，please fill in the application form on the school website before October 5th.
5.It will be about the history of Chinese paper-cutting and teaching some basic paper-cutting techniques.
→It will the history of Chinese paper-cutting and teaching some basic paper-cutting techniques.
sign up for
focus on
6.(2023·郑州质检)After all，the Spring Festival is very important because it’s a new beginning which brings hope to us and it’s also a time to say our thanks and take our responsibility.
→After all，the Spring Festival is because it’s a new beginning which brings hope to us and it’s also a time to ______________
___________________and take our responsibility.
of great importance
convey/show/
express our gratitude
7.(2023·兰州一诊)I think that what mothers really need is their children’s understanding and trust.
→I that what mothers really need is their children’s understanding and trust.
8.(2023·安徽淮南一模)I am very happy to hear from you，and I want to recommend you to do voluntary work.
→I am to hear from you，and I ________________
recommend you to do voluntary work.
hold the view
greatly delighted
would like to
9.(2023·湖南张家界二模)Representing my class，I’m writing to propose some ideas and confirm related details about it.
→ my class，I’m writing to propose some ideas and confirm related details about it.
10.(2023·四川凉山州一诊)The charity sale is arranged on our school playground next Saturday from 8：00 am to 11：00 am.
→The charity sale is on our school playground next Saturday from 8：00 am to 11：00 am.
On behalf of
scheduled
Ⅱ.升级句式练习
1.(2023·北京)To begin with，I suggest organizing a walking tour around the city to explore the green spaces in Beijing，and it will allow participants to experience the beauty of the city’s parks and gardens while promoting eco-friendly transportation.(用定语从句改写)
→To begin with，I suggest organizing a walking tour around the city to explore the green spaces in Beijing，_______________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________.
which will allow participants to experience the beauty of the city’s parks and gardens while promoting eco-friendly transportation
2.(2023·湖南株洲一模)With the intention of promoting interpersonal and cross-cultural communication，a lecture will be delivered in the morning，and after it we’ll have a discussion about ways to sharpen English skills.(用定语从句改写)
→With the intention of promoting interpersonal and cross-cultural communication，a lecture will be delivered in the morning，__________
____________________________________________________.
after which we’ll have a discussion about ways to sharpen English skills
3.(2023·河北唐山、保定一模)Each participant is required to recite a Tang poem or a Song lyric poem within 5 minutes.(用what I stress把此句改为名词性从句)
→__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.The students interested in the contest are required to sign up for it before July 3.(用主语从句改写)
→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What I stress is that each participant is required to recite a Tang poem or a Song lyric poem within 5 minutes.
It is required that the students interested in the contest (should) sign up for it before July 3.
5.(2023·河北邯郸一模)Everyone plays team spirit well and our club will be better and better.(用as long as引导的状语从句改写)
→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.We became exhausted halfway，but we managed to get to the finishing line.(用状语从句改写)
→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
As long as everyone plays team spirit well，our club will be better and better.
Although/Though/While we became exhausted halfway，we managed to get to the finishing line.
7.Whenever I meet with difficulty，my Chinese teacher gives me encouragement.(用强调句改写)
→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.(2023·江西上饶一模)Through the hands-on experience，I not only gain a sense of achievement，but I also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth.(用倒装句改写)
→___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It is my Chinese teacher that/who gives me encouragement whenever I meet with difficulty.
Through the hands-on experience，not only do I gain a sense of achievement，but I also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth.
9.The fruit farm lies at the foot of the Mount Yuhuangshan.(用倒装句改写)
→_____________________________________________________________
10.We will hold the exhibition in the gallery hall of our school on Saturday afternoon.(用被动语态改写)
→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
At the foot of the Mount Yuhuangshan lies the fruit farm.
The exhibition will be held in the gallery hall of our school on Saturday afternoon.
Ⅲ.用适当的过渡词汇填空
A
Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next month.Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress 1. Su prefers the school uniforms.
2. ，I would be happy to wear the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony.
3. ，this is precisely what the British students are expecting. They come to learn about Chinese culture with their own eyes.
As for me/In my opinion/As far as I’m concerned
For one thing/First of all
while
4. ，their Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive.The school uniforms are fine；5. ，they are not special enough to give a unique Chinese flavour.6. ，the inconvenience is not a problem if our purpose is to share Chinese culture.It is just the so-called inconvenience that displays the richness，delicacy and great fascination of Chinese culture with a history of thousands of years.
Therefore
however
For another/Secondly/Besides
7. ，the traditional Chinese dress will make the occasion attractive to the British guests.
In conclusion/All in all/In short/In brief
B
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am Li Hua，a student from Guangming Middle School.I am writing to ask some questions about the summer course.
8. ，I wonder when the course will begin and how long it will last.9. ，I want to know whether your school will offer accommodation for the students.10. ，how much will you charge for it？11. ，how many students will be there in one class
First of all
Secondly
Besides/What’s more/In addition
Last but not least
12. ，I would appreciate it if you could reply to me as soon as possible.
Yours，
Li Hua
All in all
本课结束
应用文写作
专题五
第2讲
解题技法指导
根据高考应用文写作的评分标准，应用词汇的丰富性和准确性是作文能否取得高分的一条重要的标准。所以，在词汇的亮化上应遵循以下三个原则：
原则1 求新求变
同样意义的词语，要根据语境使用最新学过的而不是小学或初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现，要使用不同的表达方式。如：
1.Not only does the ocean offer us enough food，but it also maintains the balance of nature.Thus，it is very important to protect the ocean.
(2022·全国甲)
技法一 亮化词汇三原则
→Not only does the ocean offer us sufficient food，but it also maintains the balance of nature.Thus，it is imperative to protect the ocean.
2.I asked my parents to allow me to have a piano lesson for beginners.
(2023·全国乙)
→I asked my parents to allow me to take up a piano lesson for beginners.
3.With the wide spread of the Internet，more and more people become online learners.(2021·全国乙)
→With the wide spread of the Internet，an increasing number of people become online learners.
4.My suggestion is to group students by their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.(2023·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
→My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners.
5.Last weekend，many students who like gardening participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Council.(2023·浙江1月)
→Last weekend，various students who are keen on gardening participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Council.
6.Throughout the event，I was attracted by the wide variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes，and those that provide food and shelter for animals.
(2023·浙江1月)
→Throughout the event，I was struck by the incredible variety of plants that exist in our world and learned about plants that are used for medical purposes，as well as those that provide food and shelter for animals.
原则2 求准求精
写作时不一定每一句都要有复杂句式，有时准确使用一个单词就会让整个句子增色。
1.We believe that his teachings will remind us of the importance of integrity，compassion，and social responsibility.(2023·全国甲)
→We hold a strong belief that his teachings do remind us of the importance of integrity，compassion，and social responsibility.
2.In conclusion，we should find a way to study online better.
(2021·全国乙)
→In conclusion，we should find a way to study online more efficiently.
3.I watched a live musical performance for the first time and the good players touched me.(2023·全国乙)
→That was the first time I had watched a live musical performance and the fantastic players made me touched deeply.
4.I think that it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.(2023·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
→I think it not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.
原则3 短语优先
恰当使用短语代替单词，不但可以增加词数，还有助于绕开不会表达的单词，使得行文更加流畅。
1.I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestion.
(2023·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
→I would appreciate it if you could take my suggestion into account/consideration.
2.Initially，on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing，I began to love skating.(2023·全国乙)
→Initially，on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing，I became enthusiastic about skating.
3.And eventually，we can master what we desire to learn.(2021·全国乙)
→And eventually，we can have a good command of what we desire to learn.
4.Firstly，randomly pairing up students may cause imbalanced language abilities within the groups.(2023·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
→Firstly，randomly pairing up students may lead to/result in imbalanced language abilities within the groups.
对复杂结构和含有非谓语动词的高级句式的灵活运用能够彰显考生对英语语言文字的驾驭能力。在使用这些句式时，一定要注意：高级但不造作，多变但不离谱，复杂但不晦涩。巧记以下四个诀窍会对你使用高级句式起到事半功倍的效果。
技法二 美化句式四诀窍
诀窍1 多种句型巧用
1.定语从句：Confucius，also known as Kong Qiu，was a Chinese philosopher and politician who lived during the Spring and Autumn Period.(2023·全国甲)
2.状语从句：However，at the very beginning，when I stepped on the ice，I stumbled over myself.(2023·全国乙)
3.名词性从句：I hope that by sharing my personal story，others will be inspired to find joy and growth in their own childhood hobbies and pursuits.(2023·上海)
4.with复合句型：This can hinder the progress of both students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation，with little room left for the other student to improve.(2023·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
5.感叹句：How thrilled I am to have the opportunity to share my own skills and experiences as part of this effort！(2023·天津)
诀窍2 非谓语动词若干
非谓语动词的正确使用能体现出学生的语法功底，相比于从句，非谓语动词更加生动简洁。
1.Last weekend，I participated in a “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” activity organised by our Students’ Council.(2023·浙江1月)
2.Initially，on watching the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing，I became enthusiastic about skating.(2023·全国乙)
3.I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class.(2023·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
4.Firstly，randomly pairing up students may lead to imbalanced language abilities within the groups.(2023·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
5.This allows students to collaborate with someone they are comfortable with，ensuring a supportive and productive learning environment.
(2023·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
诀窍3 省略倒装强调可出现
特殊句型如省略句、倒装句和强调句等可以使整篇文章句式更加丰富。
1.While listening to the local botanist’s talk，I gained a greater appreciation for the role that plants play in maintaining the balance of our ecosystem.(2023·浙江1月)
2.It is events like the Chinese Workshop that are crucial for promoting cross-cultural understanding and appreciation.(2023·天津)
3.So easily addicted to chatting online or playing games are they that they will forget to learn English by using them.(2022·全国乙)
4.From the learning experience，I fully understand that only by practicing diligently can we overcome many kinds of difficulties.
(2023·全国乙)
5.Hard as I strive，I still fell over again and again.(2023·全国乙)
6.Such is the well-known figure in history I will respect all the time.
(2023·全国甲)
诀窍4 被动适当露露面
如果一篇文章全都是主动句而且主语一致，文章就会显得单调，适当使用被动句能够避免这种情况。
1.He is widely considered one of the most important figures in Chinese history and his teachings have had a profound impact on Chinese culture and society.(2023·全国甲)
2.Confucius’ influence can still be seen in modern Chinese society，where his teachings continue to be studied and applied in daily life.(2023·全国甲)
3.The moment I thought of the athletes on the field，I was inspired by their powerful spirits.(2023·全国乙)
4.Paper-cutting is an art form that has a long history in China and is still widely practiced today.(2023·天津)
技法三 衔接过渡“起、承、转、合”
类别 常见词 经典句
用于“起”的过渡词汇 (用在段落或文章的开头) first of all；at first； to start/begin with；recently/lately/ currently；at present； in recent years； in general 1.To begin with，I suggest organizing a walking tour around the city to explore the green spaces in Beijing.(2023·北京)
2.First of all，what we can do is place importance on our daily actions.(2022·全国甲)
类别 常见词 经典句
用于“承”的过渡词汇 (用在段落中的第一个扩展句中) 比较/解释 as well as；in other words；similarly；likewise；that is to say；also；too 3.It is also a symbol of the skills that I developed through my childhood experiences.(2023·上海)
4.What’s more，if I want to decorate my website with some Chinese elements，what should I do？(2021·全国甲)
并列 what’s more；moreover； furthermore；in addition； besides；additionally 因果 therefore；so；thus； for this purpose 举例 for instance；for example；in this case；such as 类别 常见词 经典句
用于“承”的过渡词汇 (用在段落中的第一个扩展句中) 比较/解释 as well as；in other words；similarly；likewise；that is to say；also；too 5.Therefore，I strongly recommend that all the students in our school should make use of their spare time to enjoy these wonderful works carefully.(2021·新课标Ⅰ，Ⅱ)
6.There are many influential historic figures in China such as Qu Yuan，Zhuge Liang and Li Bai.(2023·全国甲)
并列 what’s more；moreover； furthermore；in addition； besides；additionally 因果 therefore；so；thus； for this purpose 举例 for instance；for example；in this case；such as 类别 常见词 经典句
用于“转”的过渡词汇 (用在段落中的第二个扩展句中) though/although；in spite of；despite；even if/though；but；however；on the other hand；yet；on the contrary；whereas；nevertheless；in contrast；by contrast；what’s worse；worse still；unfortunately/fortunately；unluckily/luckily；in fact；as a matter of fact；actually 7.Although my fingers were painful after practice，I felt satisfied if I could play a music piece completely.(2023·全国乙)
8.Even though I will not pursue it as my life career，I will still continue playing the piano as my hobby.(2023·全国乙)
9.However，those choosing reading English books and visiting English learning websites only account for 18% and 12% respectively.(2022·全国乙)
类别 常见词 经典句
用于“合”的过渡词汇 (用在段落的结论句或文章的结论 段中) overall；in a word；in general；in short；above all；after all；generally speaking；to sum up；finally；in conclusion；at last；in summary；as a result；thus；eventually；hence；on the whole 10.Overall，it was a valuable and enriching experience.(2023·浙江1月)
11.And eventually，we can have a good command of what we desire to learn.(2023·全国乙)
12.To sum up，I wish you could live up to the expectations of our school.(2019·全国Ⅱ)
技法四 规避常见五错误
典例示范 常见错误 错误句子 改错
句子成分残 缺或多余 (缺)There are many students support it. There are many students who/that support it.
(多)Because the planting process can bring me a sense of satisfaction and achievement，so I really consider it the best way to relax myself. The planting process can bring me a sense of satisfaction and achievement，so I really consider it the best way to relax myself.
典例示范 常见错误 错误句子 改错
主谓不一致 The survey show that most students prefer to text or give gifts to their mothers. The survey shows that most students prefer to text or give gifts to their mothers.
You can read the books which is on the shelf. You can read the books which are on the shelf.
典例示范 常见错误 错误句子 改错
时态、语态错误 The exhibition will hold next weekend. The exhibition will be held next weekend.
Knowing that you had a preference for flying kites，I sincerely invite you to go to the Kite Festival with me. Knowing that you have a preference for flying kites，I sincerely invite you to go to the Kite Festival with me.
典例示范 常见错误 错误句子 改错
词性不分 To raise the aware of caring for the disadvantaged groups，our school is to organize a charity donation. To raise the awareness of caring for the disadvantaged groups，our school is to organize a charity donation.
Paper-cutting is a tradition Chinese art. Paper-cutting is a traditional Chinese art.
I finally through the exam after several attempts. I finally got through the exam after several attempts.
典例示范 常见错误 错误句子 改错
中式英语 How are you going these days？I very miss you. How are you going these days？I miss you very much.
The hotel broke out a big fire last night. A big fire broke out in the hotel last night.
As you know，our programme starts every Tuesday at 10 am and ends at 11 am. As you know，our programme starts at 10 am and ends at 11 am every Tuesday.
Ⅰ.升级句中加颜色词汇
1.With the development of technology，more and more people are fond of online payment.
→With the development of technology， people are fond of online payment.
2.(2023·江西5市重点中学联考)Knowing that you like Chinese culture，I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me.
→Knowing that you Chinese culture，I’m writing to ask you to enjoy it with me.
随堂演练
an increasing number of
are keen on/are fond of/are interested in
3.(2023·陕西咸阳一模)In order to improve the students’ awareness of body building，a hill-climbing competition，with the theme of “Health Is First”，was held last Sunday by our school.
→ the students’ awareness of body building，a hill-climbing competition，with the theme of “Health Is First”，was held last Sunday by our school.
Aimed to enhance/With the purpose of enhancing
4.(2023·河北唐山、保定一模)If you want to enter for it，please fill in the application form on the school website before October 5th.
→If you want to it，please fill in the application form on the school website before October 5th.
5.It will be about the history of Chinese paper-cutting and teaching some basic paper-cutting techniques.
→It will the history of Chinese paper-cutting and teaching some basic paper-cutting techniques.
sign up for
focus on
6.(2023·郑州质检)After all，the Spring Festival is very important because it’s a new beginning which brings hope to us and it’s also a time to say our thanks and take our responsibility.
→After all，the Spring Festival is because it’s a new beginning which brings hope to us and it’s also a time to ______________
___________________and take our responsibility.
of great importance
convey/show/
express our gratitude
7.(2023·兰州一诊)I think that what mothers really need is their children’s understanding and trust.
→I that what mothers really need is their children’s understanding and trust.
8.(2023·安徽淮南一模)I am very happy to hear from you，and I want to recommend you to do voluntary work.
→I am to hear from you，and I ________________
recommend you to do voluntary work.
hold the view
greatly delighted
would like to
9.(2023·湖南张家界二模)Representing my class，I’m writing to propose some ideas and confirm related details about it.
→ my class，I’m writing to propose some ideas and confirm related details about it.
10.(2023·四川凉山州一诊)The charity sale is arranged on our school playground next Saturday from 8：00 am to 11：00 am.
→The charity sale is on our school playground next Saturday from 8：00 am to 11：00 am.
On behalf of
scheduled
Ⅱ.升级句式练习
1.(2023·北京)To begin with，I suggest organizing a walking tour around the city to explore the green spaces in Beijing，and it will allow participants to experience the beauty of the city’s parks and gardens while promoting eco-friendly transportation.(用定语从句改写)
→To begin with，I suggest organizing a walking tour around the city to explore the green spaces in Beijing，_______________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________.
which will allow participants to experience the beauty of the city’s parks and gardens while promoting eco-friendly transportation
2.(2023·湖南株洲一模)With the intention of promoting interpersonal and cross-cultural communication，a lecture will be delivered in the morning，and after it we’ll have a discussion about ways to sharpen English skills.(用定语从句改写)
→With the intention of promoting interpersonal and cross-cultural communication，a lecture will be delivered in the morning，__________
____________________________________________________.
after which we’ll have a discussion about ways to sharpen English skills
3.(2023·河北唐山、保定一模)Each participant is required to recite a Tang poem or a Song lyric poem within 5 minutes.(用what I stress把此句改为名词性从句)
→__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
4.The students interested in the contest are required to sign up for it before July 3.(用主语从句改写)
→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
What I stress is that each participant is required to recite a Tang poem or a Song lyric poem within 5 minutes.
It is required that the students interested in the contest (should) sign up for it before July 3.
5.(2023·河北邯郸一模)Everyone plays team spirit well and our club will be better and better.(用as long as引导的状语从句改写)
→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6.We became exhausted halfway，but we managed to get to the finishing line.(用状语从句改写)
→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
As long as everyone plays team spirit well，our club will be better and better.
Although/Though/While we became exhausted halfway，we managed to get to the finishing line.
7.Whenever I meet with difficulty，my Chinese teacher gives me encouragement.(用强调句改写)
→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8.(2023·江西上饶一模)Through the hands-on experience，I not only gain a sense of achievement，but I also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth.(用倒装句改写)
→___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
It is my Chinese teacher that/who gives me encouragement whenever I meet with difficulty.
Through the hands-on experience，not only do I gain a sense of achievement，but I also appreciate that labour itself is a kind of enjoyment and a must for our personal growth.
9.The fruit farm lies at the foot of the Mount Yuhuangshan.(用倒装句改写)
→_____________________________________________________________
10.We will hold the exhibition in the gallery hall of our school on Saturday afternoon.(用被动语态改写)
→____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
At the foot of the Mount Yuhuangshan lies the fruit farm.
The exhibition will be held in the gallery hall of our school on Saturday afternoon.
Ⅲ.用适当的过渡词汇填空
A
Li Jiang and Su Hua are discussing what to wear when receiving the British students next month.Li recommends the traditional Chinese dress 1. Su prefers the school uniforms.
2. ，I would be happy to wear the traditional Chinese dress at the welcome ceremony.
3. ，this is precisely what the British students are expecting. They come to learn about Chinese culture with their own eyes.
As for me/In my opinion/As far as I’m concerned
For one thing/First of all
while
4. ，their Chinese peers in the typical Chinese dress would be highly impressive.The school uniforms are fine；5. ，they are not special enough to give a unique Chinese flavour.6. ，the inconvenience is not a problem if our purpose is to share Chinese culture.It is just the so-called inconvenience that displays the richness，delicacy and great fascination of Chinese culture with a history of thousands of years.
Therefore
however
For another/Secondly/Besides
7. ，the traditional Chinese dress will make the occasion attractive to the British guests.
In conclusion/All in all/In short/In brief
B
Dear Sir/Madam，
I am Li Hua，a student from Guangming Middle School.I am writing to ask some questions about the summer course.
8. ，I wonder when the course will begin and how long it will last.9. ，I want to know whether your school will offer accommodation for the students.10. ，how much will you charge for it？11. ，how many students will be there in one class
First of all
Secondly
Besides/What’s more/In addition
Last but not least
12. ，I would appreciate it if you could reply to me as soon as possible.
Yours，
Li Hua
All in all
本课结束