五、Unit9-Unit10写作专项提升 人教版八上寒假专题讲解+提升训练

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写作专项提升
一、作文步骤：
仔细审题、弄清题目要求，确定要素
考虑用恰当的词语、句型和时态
弄懂大意后，构思一个基本框架，考虑用什么样的句型、词语、时态来充分表达文章的内容，尽可能使用熟悉的词语或句型。
3．列出要点，组织语言
弄清题意，逐个完整无误的把内容要列出来，接着将要点译成英文或过渡性语句，使上下文连贯。
4．详略得当
必不可少的细节不能忽略，可有可无的可以增删
5.仔细检查、修改
核对要点时候有遗漏
时态、语态是否正确
文章句段篇是否连贯
用词是否得当、词数是否符合要求
检查大小写、拼写、标点是否准确无误
二、作文模版：
（一）说明原因型
1．有一些人认为…… 2．另一些人认为……3．我的看法……
　　The topic of ① （主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of② （支持A的理由一）What is more, ③ 理由二). Moreover,④ (理由三).
　　While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,- (支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥ （理由二）. Thirdly (finally),⑦ (理由三).
　　From my point of view, I think ⑧ （我的观点）. The reason is that⑨ (原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice.
（二）利弊型议论文
Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)作文题目
.In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in 题目议题
.
Generally speaking, it is widely believed there are several positive aspects as follows. Firstly, 优点一 . And secondly 优点二 _.
　　Just As a popular saying goes, "Every coin has two sides", 讨论议题 is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with, 缺点一
. In addition,缺点二 .
　　To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages of讨论议题 into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of the
（三）阐述主题型
　１． 问题现状, ２． 怎样解决(解决方案的优缺点)
　　In recent days, we have to face I problem A, which is becoming more and more serious. First, (说明Ａ的现状)．Second,
(举例进一步说明现状)
　　Confronted with A, we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, (解决方法一). For another
(解决方法二). Finally, (解决方法三).
　　Personally, I believe that (我的解决方法). Consequently, I'm confident that a bright future is awaiting us because (带来的好处).
三、英语作文万能句子短语
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1. at first/ first(ly)/ first of all / in the first place 首先;第一
2. in the beginning 起初
3. to begin with /to start with首先
4. finally/at last/ at the end 最后;终于
5. at present 现在;当今
6. one the one hand…(on the other hand) 一方面…(另一方面)
7. in general 一般说来
8. generally speaking 一般地说
9. on the whole /all in all总起来说
10. in a word/ in short,/in brief, 简言之;总之
11. to be honest 说实话
12. all the time 一直,始终
　　13. in my opinion. 在我看来
　　14. as a matter of fact 实际上
　　15. as far as ...be concerned 就...而言
　　16. at least 至少
　　17. by accident 偶然
　　18. play an important role in… 发挥着重要作用
　　19. by all means 尽一切办法,务必
　　20. even if/though 即使,虽然
　　21. every now and then 时而,偶尔
　　22. in order to 为了
　　23. more or less 或多或少,有点
24. take the place of/instead of 代替
四、常用连接词：
1.并列关系的过渡 词：and, as well as, not only... but also, neither...nor......both...and……
2.转折关系的过渡词：but, yet, however……
3.时间关系的过渡词：first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days,
at last……
4.空间关系的过渡词：near (to)， far (from)， in the front of, besides, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right……
5.比较关系的过渡词：in the same way, just like, just as……
6.对照关系的过渡词：but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of……
7.递进关系的过渡词：also, and, then, too, in addition……
8.因果关系的过渡词：because, since, then, so, therefore……
9.解释说明的过渡词：for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually......
10.强调的过渡词：in fact, in deed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important……
11.目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose……
12.列举的过渡词：for example, such as……
13.总结性的过渡词：in conclusion, finally, in a word, in short, all in all……
五、写作常用谚语
1）Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
2）God helps those who help themselves. 天助自助者
3）Easier said than done. 说起来容易做起来难。
4）Where there is a will, there is a way. 有志者事竟成
5）It’s never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老
6）Failure is the mother of success. 失败是成功之母
六、开头句型选择：
1.关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
There are different opinions among people as to 。Some people suggest that 。
2.现在，……很普遍，许多人喜欢……，因为……，另外(而且)……。
Nowadays，it is common to 。 Many people like because 。 Besides， 。
3.任何事物都是有两面性，……也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。
Everything has two sides and is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages.
4人类正面临着一个严重的问题……，这个问题变得越来越严重。
Man is now facing a big problem which is becoming more and more serious.
5.……在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。
has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
6.最近，…问题已引起人们的关注。
Recently， the problem of has aroused people’s concern.
7.互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色。它给我们带来了许多好处，但也产生了一些严重的问题。
Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
七、英语作文常用句型
　　1. for example. 举个例子
　　2. Nothing is more important than... 没有什么比…更重要
　　3.As far as I am concerned /as far as I know 就我个人而言/据我所知
　　4. There is no denying /doubt that... 毫无疑问，无可否认
　　5. As the proverb says/There is an old saying 正如谚语所说/俗话说;常言道
　　6.Every coin has both sides 有利有弊;凡事都有两面性
　　7. There are different opinions among people as to .Some people thinks that .关于……人们有不同的观点。一些人认为……
　　8. has become a hot topic among people ……已经成为人们关注的热点话题。
　　9. Man is now facing a big problem which is becoming more and more serious.人们正面临着一个大问题，这个问题变得越来越严重。
　　10. There are several measures/ways for us to adopt. First, we can 有几个可供我们采纳的方法，首先，我们可以……
11. However, just like everything has both its good and bad sides, also has its own disadvantages, such as _.然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，……也有它的不利的一面，例如……
8.随着科技的发展，越来越多的人认为…、
With the development of science and technology， more and more people believe that…
八、结尾段添彩句型模板：
1.In general/ above all / With the result that/ As a result /consequently…
2.As far as I am concerned / As for me, …
3.In my point of view, I like / prefer A much more than B
4.In order to make our world a better place to live in, we should make efforts to……
习题专练一
假如你是Mike，是一名一中的学生，上周你们学校对学生业余时间看电视节目的情况做了一个调查。请以"What Do No.I Middle School Students Think of TV Programs"为题，将下面的调查结果写成一篇英语短文，并给出你的建议。
注意：（1）阐述图片中的所有信息；（2）说明出现以上每个数据的理由；
（3）适当添加连接词，使文章上下文更有逻辑；（4）书写工整；
（5）字数：90﹣120字。
What Do No.1 Middle School Students Think of TV Programs
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【分析】【高分句型一】Let me tell you something about it．让我来告诉你关于它的事情吧。
let sb do sth让某人做某事。
【高分句型二】First，for the news，sixty percent of students dislike the news because they think it is boring.首先，对于新闻，60%的学生不喜欢新闻，因为他们认为它很无聊。
because引导原因状语从句。
范文： What Do No.1 Middle School Students Think of TV Programs
Last week，our school conducted a survey on the situation of students watching TV programs in their spare time.Let me tell you something about it．【高分句型一】（点题）
First，for the news，sixty percent of students dislike the news because they think it is boring．【高分句型二】twenty﹣five percent of students don't mind it．And fifteen percent of students like it．Because it helps them know more about the world. （关于新闻）
Second，for the soap operas，twenty﹣five percent of students can't stand them．They think they waste them a lot of time．The left seventy﹣five percent of students like them．Because they think they are relaxing．（关于肥皂剧）
What do you think of TV programs？（结尾提出问题）
习题专练二
愿得一知己，聊以慰平生。这世间总有一个人，愿把他/她所有的欢乐与苦痛都与你分享，这个人就是你的知己好友。你校英语学习社团正在开展关于友谊的征文比赛。请写一篇文章投稿，介绍你的好朋友，并讲述一个发生在你们之间的动人故事。
要求：（1）80—120词（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；
（2）文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。
参考信息：●his/her appearance（外貌）and personality（性格）
●the similarities and differences between you and him/her
●the story between you and him/her
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【分析】【高分句型一】We both have black eyes and black hair，although my hair is longer than hers.我们都有黑色的眼睛和黑色的头发，虽然我的头发比她的长。although引导的让步状语从句。
【高分句型二】I hope our friendship will last forever.我希望我们的友谊地久天长。I hope+宾语从句。
A life without a friend is a life without the sun.I have a best friend.Her name is Lucy.In some ways we look the same and in some ways we look different.We have some things in common.
We both have black eyes and black hair，although my hair is longer than hers.【高分句型一】She is as outgoing as me.I am as funny as her.And we both like music.But she is more beautiful than me.She studies very well.（异同）I failed an English exam once.I was very sad.She saw my problem，so she took the initiative to help me learn English after class.After a period of study，I finally got a very good result in the final exam.From then on，she often helped me.I am very grateful for her help.（故事）I hope our friendship will last forever.【高分句型二】
习题专练三
假如你是Lily，你的朋友John给你发邮件说他最近很不开心，觉得在学校读书很累，压力很大，想放弃学习。请你根据表格中的提示，给John回一封不少于80词的电子邮件，并给他提一些建议。开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
问题（problem） 家庭作业多，压力大，经常感到很累，想放弃学习
建议（advice） 努力学习，争取取得好成绩。 常做运动，学会放松自己。 积极参加课外活动，例如打篮球、弹钢琴等。 .多与父母、老师或朋友交流。
参考词语：压力：pressure 累的：tired 积极参加：take an active part in 活动：activity
Dear John，
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【分析】【高分句型一】I think you'd better find a proper way of study and work out a reasonable studying plan，so you can study easily.我认为你最好找到一个合适的学习方法，制定一个合理的学习计划，这样你就可以轻松地学习。I think +宾语从句。
【高分句型二】I hope these can help you.我希望这些能帮助你。I hope+宾语从句。
【解答】Dear John，
I am sorry to know that you are unhappy these days.You say you have too much homework to do every day and have little time to rest.So you always feel tired.You also want to give up studying.（问题）I think you'd better find a proper way of study and work out a reasonable studying plan，so you can study easily.【高分句型一】You should strive for good results.What's more，you should learn to relax yourself by listening to music or doing some sports.You should actively participate in extracurricular activities，such as playing basketball，playing the piano and so on.Finally，you can talk with your parents and teachers，tell them your problems and ask them for some advice.I hope these can help you.【高分句型二】（　　）建议
Yours，
Zhou Hua
习题专练四
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习题专练五
在辞旧迎新之时，回顾过去，展望未来。请你以My New Year’s Resolutions为题，写一写你的新年打算（比如，加强锻炼，早睡早起，保持健康；英语有点弱，多练习读和说；多吃蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品，注意饮食均衡等），不少于60词。
My New Year’s Resolutions
要求 1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3. 将短文写在答题卡（答题卷）上。写在本试题卷上无效。
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