2024届北师版高考英语二轮复习写作专项提升Step 2第一讲词汇优美4角度课件(共38张PPT)

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写作专项
提升
第一讲　词汇优美4角度
英 语
词汇1　名词(短语)
名词是表示人、事物、地点或抽象概念的名称,属于实词,名词分为专有名词和普通名词。名词用得好,能显示出深厚的语言功底,更能出众脱俗。
[示范1](2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)
(一般词)On the other hand,there also exist some advantages.
(高级词)On the other hand,there also exist some strong points.
另一方面,也有一些优点。
[示范2](2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷,写作)
(一般词)The activity was highly spoken of,because not only did it provide a chance for us to exercise,but also made us more cohesive.
(高级词)The activity was highly spoken of,because not only did it provide an opportunity for us to exercise,but also made us more cohesive.
这项活动受到高度评价,因为它不仅为我们提供了锻炼的机会,而且使我们更有凝聚力。
高中阶段常见的名词及名词短语类写作高级词汇:
①方法way→approach/means
②困难difficulty→challenge/barrier
③问题problem→issue
④机会chance→opportunity
⑤选择choice→alternative
⑥责任 duty→responsibility
⑦影响effect→influence/impact
⑧后果result→consequence
⑨缺点shortcoming→drawback
⑩职业career→profession
优势 advantage→strength/strong point
老人old people→the elderly/the aged/the senior citizens
青少年young people→youngsters/youths/adolescents
一个表现好的孩子a child who behaves in a proper way→a well-behaved child
各种各样的图书 all kinds of books→varieties of books/a wide range of books
[对点过关训练]
用所给的词补全句子
1.(2021·全国乙卷,书面表达)网络课程打破了时间和空间的限制。
　　　　　　　　　　 break the limitation of time and space.(course)
→　　　　　　　　　　　　 break the limitation of time and space.
The online courses
The online curriculums
2.(2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷,写作)这场比赛对参赛者的身体和精神都有很大的好处。所以我们都很重视,希望以后能有更多这样的活动。
The race was of great benefit to the participants,physically and mentally.　　　　　　　　　　,we all think highly of it,and expect more activities like this in the future.(result)
→The race was of great benefit to the participants,physically and mentally.　　　　　　　　　　,we all think highly of it,and expect more activities like this in the future.
As a result
As a consequence
3.传媒对于舆论有很大的影响。
The media 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　public opinion.(effect)
→The media 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　public opinion.
4.最重要的是,老人通常是最先品尝桌上食物的人,因为他们在中国备受尊重。
Most importantly,　　　　　 　　　　　 the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.(old people)
→Most importantly
　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　the food served on the table because they are well respected in China.
has a powerful effect on
has a powerful impact/influence on
old people are usually the first to taste
the old/the elderly/the aged/senior citizens are usually the first to taste
5.政府计划为年轻人创造更多的就业机会。
The government plans to 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.(young people)
→The government plans to
　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　.
create more jobs for young people
create more jobs for youngsters/youths/adolescents
词汇2　动词(短语)
动词分为及物动词和不及物动词两类,在句子中作谓语和非谓语。及物动词后面接宾语;不及物动词后面不能接宾语。动词或者动词短语恰当灵活的运用,能生动形象地表达主语的动作或者状态,动词用的恰当高级,能为文章增色添彩。
[示范1](2021·全国甲卷,书面表达)
(一般词)Knowing you are interested in China,I believe you can help me solve these puzzles.
(高级词)Knowing you take a great interest in China,I’m firmly convinced that/I firmly hold the belief that you can lend a helping hand to solve these puzzles.
知道你对中国很感兴趣,我相信你能帮我解决这些难题。
[示范2](2020·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)
(一般词)We want to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel.
(高级词)We’d like to combine your culture with ours by adapting the classic novel.
我们想通过改编经典小说把你们的文化与我们的文化联系在一起。
高中阶段常见的动词及动词短语类写作高级词汇:
①知道know→be aware of
②感谢thank→appreciate
③拥有have→possess
④看见see→catch sight of
⑤记住remember→keep in mind
⑥保持 keep→maintain
⑦提高improve→promote
⑧完成finish→accomplish
⑨应该should→be supposed to
[对点过关训练]
Ⅰ.用高级词汇替换下列句中的加黑部分
1.(2020·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)Our class thought of the idea to make better use of used materials.　　　　　　　　　　　
2.(2020·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)We sincerely hope you can help us.　　　　　　　　　　　
3.I could have won the game but decided to let her win.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
4.This could cause serious damage to the country’s economy.　　　　　　　　　　　
5.We need more time to see how things develop before we take action.　　 　　
came up with　
do us a favor　
made up my mind　
give rise to
promote
Ⅱ.用所给的词补全句子
1.更糟的是,食用过多的糖可能会引起健康问题。
What’s worse,eating too much sugar 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.(cause)
2.她和丈夫一起买了一小块地,开始自己种植食物。
She 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　with her husband and began growing their own foods.(buy)
can lead to/result in/give rise to health problems
purchased a small piece of land
3.所有的游客都被要求不能在公园内乱扔垃圾。
All the visitors 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　in the park.(ask)
4.我们应不遗余力地美化我们的环境,因为它是全人类共有的。
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　,
because it is shared by all the human beings.(try one’s best)
5.更重要的是,我们可以提出自己的想法,通过讨论进一步学习。
What’s more,we 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　and learn more through discussion.(think of)
were requested not to throw litter about
We should spare no effort to beautify our environment
can come up with our own ideas
词汇3　形容词(短语)
形容词是描述人或事物的特征、性质、属性及状态的一种开放性词类。形容词或者形容词短语的恰当使用会渲染文章的色彩,为文章增加亮点。
[示范1](2020·全国Ⅱ卷,书面表达)
(一般词)This fruit-picking experience is helpful to us and teaches us the importance of working.
(高级词)This fruit-picking experience is beneficial to us and teaches us the importance of working.
这次采摘水果的经历对我们很有益,也教会了我们劳动的重要性。
[示范2](一般词)He is an excellent scientist,who has made a great contribution to our country.
(高级词)He is an outstanding scientist,who has made a great contribution to our country.
他是一位杰出的科学家,对我们国家做出了巨大贡献。
形容词及形容词短语类写作高级词汇:
①有益的 good→beneficial
②高兴的 glad→delighted
③激动的 excited→thrilled
④富裕的 rich→wealthy
⑤幸运的 lucky→fortunate
⑥常见的 common→universal
⑦充足的 enough→adequate
⑧可用的 usable→available
⑨困难的 difficult→challenging
[对点过关训练]
Ⅰ.用高级词汇替换下列句中的加黑部分
1.(2020·天津卷,书面表达)I am very glad to hear from you.The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month.　　　　
2.(2020·新高考全国Ⅰ卷,写作)As the running race is very important,we have to make full preparations in advance.　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
3.You can find different kinds of sweet food here.　　　　　　　　　　　
4.Young people today face a very difficult future at work.　　 　　
5.She seems an unusually clever girl.　 　　
delighted　
of great importance/significance　
a variety of/various　
challenging　
intelligent
Ⅱ.用所给的词补全句子
1.他的收入满足不了他的家庭需求。
His income 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.(enough)
2.学好英语对你未来就业至关重要。
Learning English well 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.(important)
3.清晨早起对这位病人的健康非常有益。
Getting up early in the morning 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　to this patient’s health.(useful)
is not adequate to his family’s needs　
is significant/vital to your future employment　
is of great benefit　
4.她是一位辛勤的老师,她工作非常勤奋。
She is 　　　　　　　　　　　　and she 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.(hard-working)
5.每天下了班,我都筋疲力尽。
I always 　　　　　　　　　when I am off work every day.(tired)
a diligent teacher
is diligent in her work　
feel exhausted
词汇4　副词及其他词
副词或者副词短语在句子中主要修饰动词或者形容词,往往作状语,写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人可能想不到的高级用法的副词或者副词短语,会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。
[示范1](2020·浙江1月卷,写作)
(一般词)In particular,you are qualified enough and experienced in presenting your ideas,because of your abundant skills.
(高级词)In particular,you are qualified enough and experienced in presenting your ideas,on account of/due to/owing to/thanks to your abundant skills.
尤其是,你有足够的资格和经验来表达你的想法,因为你有丰富的技能。
[示范2](2020·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)
(一般词)In particular,he was very patient though sometimes I had no way to solve some difficult maths problems.
(高级词)In particular,he was very patient though once in a while/occasionally/from time to time I had no way to solve some difficult maths problems.
尤其是,他很有耐心,尽管有时我无法解决一些数学难题。
常见的副词及其他词类写作高级词汇:
①经常often→frequently
②很少seldom→rarely
③只有only→merely
④然后then→subsequently/afterwards
⑤仔细地carefully→attentively
⑥适当地properly→appropriately
⑦大约about→approximately/roughly
⑧立刻immediately→shortly/right now/right away
⑨当然certainly→definitely/undoubtedly
[对点过关训练]
Ⅰ.用高级词汇替换下列句中的加黑部分
1.(2020·江苏卷,书面表达)In fact,documentaries about our country are plentiful both at home and abroad.　　　　　　　　　　　　　
2.(2019·全国Ⅲ卷,书面表达)I am very delighted to tell you that a music festival will be held in our school.　　　　　　　　　
3.(2019·全国Ⅰ卷,书面表达)In addition,I can explain the Chinese paintings in detail and give help to anyone who is in need.　　　　　　　　　　　
4.Most of us use public transport to get to work.　 　　　
5.A few days ago,my father called to ask me to study and living conditions!　　　　　　　　　
Actually/As a matter of fact　
more than　
as well as
The majority　
The other day
1.人生在世总是有苦有甜。
You will always have the bad 　　　　　　　　　　　in the world.(and)
2.第二,你们说如果我提前付费的话就可以给我打折。
Secondly,you say that there is a discount 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.(if)
3.下雨了,足球赛因此而延期了。
It rained and 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.(so)
Ⅱ.用所给的词补全句子
as well as the good　
suppose/supposing (that) I pay in advance
therefore the football match was postponed　
4.抓住这个机会,否则你会后悔的。
Seize the chance,　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.(or)
5.他不仅吸烟,而且还喝酒。
He not only smokes but 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　.(too)
otherwise/or else you’ll regret it　
drinks as well
Ⅲ.用高级词汇替换下面考生作文中的加黑部分
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack写电子邮件问你高考后暑假的安排。请根据以下要点,写一封电子邮件回复他。
1.参加英语培训课程;
2.学开车;
3.游览各地名胜。
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
[考生作文]
Dear Jack,
How time flies!My College Entrance Examination is coming soon(1.　　　　　　　　 　　).Therefore,I want(2.　　　　　) to have a colorful and meaningful summer vacation.
First(3.　　　 　　),I will take some English courses to improve my spoken English.Second(4.　　　 　　),
I will learn how to drive to get a driving license,because I like(5.　　　　　) driving very much.After that,I will visit(6.　　　 　　) some tourist attractions throughout China.Surely,I will take some photos to send to you via the Internet.Finally(7.　　　 　　),I will have a good rest.
approaching/around the corner
intend　
To begin with/To start with　
In addition/What’s more
am fond of
pay a visit to　
At last/Eventually
This is the plan for my vacation.I am eagerly looking forward to it.
Yours,
Li Hua