(共36张PPT)
第二讲 润色添彩
策略一 “包装”让词汇高端起来
1．求新求变
同样意义的词语，要根据语境使用高级词汇而不是小学初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现，要使用不同的表达方式。如：
①To begin with，it couldn't be better if students with mixed levels of English could be grouped together on purpose rather than at random.[2023·新课标Ⅰ卷]
→To begin with，it couldn't be better if students with mixed levels of English could be grouped together deliberately rather than at random.
②After a busy morning, they were tired, but they felt proud.[2023·白山市三模]
→After a busy morning, they were worn out/ exhausted, but they felt proud.
2．求准求精
写作时不一定每一句都要有复杂句式，有时准确使用一个单词就会让整个句子增色。
①In conclusion，we should find a way to study online better．[2021·全国乙卷]
→In conclusion，we should find a way to study online more efficiently．
②I am waiting for your early reply.[2021·全国甲卷]
→I am waiting for your early reply eagerly/with eagerness．
3．短语优先
恰当使用短语代替单词，不但可以增加词数，还有助于绕开不会表达的单词，使得行文更加流畅。
①However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it can help students understand English better．[2022·全国乙卷]
→However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it can help students gain a deeper understanding of English.
②I would appreciate it if you could consider my invitation.[2023·新高考Ⅰ卷]
→I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration．
③He tried to carry out a series of reforms to make his country prosperous.[2023·全国甲卷]
→He spared no effort to carry out a series of reforms to make his country prosperous.
◎针对训练1——升级加黑词汇
①[2022·全国乙卷]Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only make up 18% and 12% respectively.________________
②[2024·日照市联考]With the intention of heightening people's awareness of China's profound history and culture, a lot of regular activities are arranged.________________
③[2022·全国甲卷]Countries should team up with one another to make practical plans regarding ocean protection.________________
④[2021·新高考Ⅰ卷]When feeling sad，I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of good stories.________________
⑤[2023·诸暨市高三诊断性]Besides, he is warm hearted and willing to help others in need, for which I recommend him to you.________________
account for
a wide variety of
work out
depressed; imaginative
In addition; give a helping hand to
策略二 “换装”让句子新颖起来
换用句式时，应遵循以下原则：高级但不造作，多变但不离谱，复杂但不晦涩。
(一)特殊句式，风景独好
特殊句型如倒装句、强调句和感叹句等可以使整篇文章句式更加丰富。
强
调 句型1：It is/was＋被强调成分＋that＋其他…… It is by learning cooking that I have strengthened my relationship with my parents.[2023· 全国乙卷书面表达]
正是通过学习烹饪，我加强了与父母的关系。
句型2：主语＋助动词do/does/did＋动词原形＋... I do believe that only with joint efforts can we have a better tomorrow．[2022·全国甲卷]
我相信，只有大家共同努力，我们才能拥有更美好的明天。
倒装 句型1：“only＋状语(副词/介词短语/when/if引导的状语从句)” 位于句首构成部分倒装，意为“只有……才……”。 It is my firm belief that only with joint efforts can we have a better tomorrow．[2022·全国甲卷]
我坚信，只有大家共同努力，我们才能拥有更美好的明天。
句型2：So＋adj./adv.＋情态动词/be动词/助动词＋主语＋that...,So proud did I feel that I shared housework with my parents，which also showed I had grown up. [2023·全国乙卷书面表达]
我感到很自豪，我和父母一起分担家务，这也表明我长大了。
句型3：Not only＋助动词/情态动词/系动词＋主语＋谓语＋其他，but＋主语＋also＋谓语＋其他，意为“不仅……而且……”。,Not only have I tried something new，but it allows me to take on responsibilities. [2023·全国乙卷书面表达]
我不仅尝试了新事物，而且还承担了责任。
感叹句 ①what 引导的感叹句，中心词是名词。 What a wonderful time we had picking apples on the farm！[2020·全国Ⅱ卷]
我们在农场摘苹果的时光多么美好啊！
②how引导的感叹句，中心词是形容词或副词。 How happy I was to be one of the members in your team!
我很高兴能成为您团队的一员！
◎针对训练2——句型转换
①[2023·福建省高三适应性练习卷]We can improve our efficiency and make our school life meaningful only in this way.(升级为强调句)
→______________________ we can improve our efficiency and make our school life meaningful.
②[2021·新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写]Their father instruct them so patiently that the twins made the breakfast fast and well. (升级为倒装句)
→________________________________ the twins made the breakfast fast and well.
It is only in this way that
So patiently did their father instruct them that
(二)三大句式，编排巧妙
从句是丰富内容的有效手段，每一篇优秀作文，句式都应该多样， 所以在写作中，要注意打造三种从句。
1．定语从句
句型1: As the old saying goes; As is known to us As is known to us, trees are very important not only to the environment but also to human beings.[2023·黑龙江省大庆市二模]
众所周知，树木不仅对环境很重要，而且对人类也很重要。
句型2：which; who; without whose; where引导的定语从句 In conclusion，we all look forward to attending your class，where we can take the chance to improve our oral English. [2023·新课标Ⅰ卷]
总之，我们都很期待参加您的课，在课堂上我们可以借此机会提高我们的英语口语。
2.状语从句
句型1：as/when/while 引导的时间状语从句 When my grandfather was diagnosed with cancer, my family was extremely upset and shocked. [2023·辽宁省重点高中联合二模]
当祖父被诊断出患有癌症时，我的家人非常沮丧和震惊。
句型2：such/so...that.../so that引导的状语从句 Last week, a sports meeting was held by our school in the stadium, which was so exciting that it impressed me deeply.[2023·衡水中学下学期高三一调]
上周，我们学校在体育馆举行了一场运动会，非常激动人心，给我留下了深刻的印象。
句型3：if和so/as long as 引导条件状语从句 To begin with，we'd feel privileged if you could match us according to our oral English levels，rather than pair us randomly. [2023·新课标Ⅰ卷应用文]
首先，如果您能根据我们的英语口语水平给我们搭配，而不是随意搭配，我们会感到很荣幸。
3.名词性从句
句型1：What引导的主语从句＋be＋n./that... What impresses me most among many historical figures in China is Fan Zhongyan. [2023·全国甲卷书面表达]
在中国的许多历史人物中，给我印象最深的是范仲淹。
句型2：It is＋ adj/n. that... It's necessary that we should raise children's labor consciousness and involve them in housework. [2023·山东省聊城市一模]
我们有必要培养孩子们的劳动意识，让他们参与家务劳动。
句型3：I hold the firm belief that...我坚信……
There is no doubt that...
毫无疑问……
There is no denying that...
不可否认…… There is no denying that we will make a difference to the marine environment with joined efforts.[2022·全国甲卷]
不可否认，我们将共同努力，对海洋环境作出巨大贡献。
句型4：I do hope that... I do hope that these tips will be helpful to you and I wish you the best of luck in the competition. [2023·河北省高三二模]
我希望这些建议能对你有所帮助，祝你在比赛中好运。
◎针对训练3——完成句子
①[2023·沈阳市三模]我们所知道的是，我们人类不能没有野生动物，因为它们在保持自然平衡方面发挥着重要作用。
__________________we human beings could not live without wildlife, because they play an important role in keeping the balance of nature.
②[2023·安徽阜阳市3月质量检测]此外，我还做过兼职英语编辑，从中我获得了相关经验。
Besides, I have taken the part time job as an English editor, ________________________________．
③[2023·深圳市高三二模]这次经历给我的教训是，只有勇敢地承担失败的全部责任，而不是指责别人，才能取得成功。
________________________________ only by bravely taking full responsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed.
What we know is that
from which I have gained relevant experience
The lesson I have drawn from this experience is that
(三)活用非谓语，让表达言简意赅
用非谓语动词整合简单句、并列句或复合句，提升表达档次，使句子凝练高端。
非谓语的正确使用能体现出学生的语法功底，相比于从句，非谓语更加生动简洁。
句型1：knowing/representing/ learning...
知道/代表/听说…… Learning that we'll be randomly paired to do the oral practice，I feel an urge to express my different voice. [2023·新课标卷Ⅰ]
得知我们将被随机配对进行口语练习，我有表达自己不同声音的冲动。
句型2：aiming to...
为了…… Aiming to make our school more attractive and create a better environment, the Students' Union organized the activity “Green School, We Are in Action”．[2023·抚顺市高三模拟]
为了让我们的学校更有吸引力，创造一个更好的环境，学生会组织了“绿色校园，我们在行动”。
句型3：Absorbed in...
专心于……
Faced with...面对……
Known as...作为……而出名 Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty，Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society.[2023·全国甲卷书面表达]
作为中国宋代著名的作家和政治家，范仲淹因其对社会的巨大贡献而受到高度赞赏。
句型4：with复合结构：
with＋宾语＋to do(将来的动作)，主句
with＋宾语＋doing(主动或进行)，主句
with＋宾语＋done(被动或完成)，主句 With her eyes fixed on the floor, Liya came over and apologized in a low voice, “You mean a lot to us.” [2023·广东省高三二模]
Liya眼睛盯着地板，走了过来，低声道歉：“你对我们来说很重要。”
With our exchange program drawing to an end, I want to express our sincere gratitude to you for your kindness and generosity.[2023·武汉市四月质量检测]
在我们的交流项目即将结束之际，我想对您的友好和慷慨表示衷心的感谢。
◎针对训练4——用非谓语升级句式/__完成句子
①[2022·新高考全国Ⅰ卷]I represent the English program of our school's radio station. I'm writing to invite you to give an interview.
→__________________________ our school's radio station, I'm writing to invite you to give an interview.
②[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]The radio program was founded in 2016. It aimed to provide a good platform for the students to share their school life.
→The radio program was founded in 2016,
_________________________________________ to share their school life.
Representing the English program of
aiming to provide a good platform for the students
③[2021·全国甲卷]要开主题班会了，我写信征求您的建议。
_______________________________， I'm writing to ask you for some advice on it.
④此外，中央部分被青草覆盖，和矗立在那里的雕塑，反映了我们的校园文化。
Besides, the central part can be covered with grass with a sculpture standing there, ____________________________. (分词作状语)
With the theme based class meeting to hold
reflecting the culture of our school
策略三 “改装”让细节丰满起来
在英语写作中，适当增加细节内容，能使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。
一、 列举具体的实例来补充说明
1．such as.../like...
将来，我认为我们学校可以提供一些活动。
In the future, I think our school could provide some activities such as reading book clubs or English corners to further inspire students' interest in learning English．[2022·全国乙卷]
2．for example /instance
如今，我们中的一些人在校园里养成了一些坏习惯。
Nowadays, some of us have formed some bad habits on campus. For instance, some students leave the lights on in the daytime; some leave much food on the table after eating．
3．...as well as...
我们将组织一系列的活动。
We will organize a range of activities, including performances on traditional Chinese musical instruments, folk dances as well as Chinese martial arts.
二、 增加状语成分
1．增加目的状语
①我们学校将举行一场中国民间舞蹈表演。
In order to enrich the campus life of international students, a Chinese folk dance performance will be given in our school.
②此外，练习你的汉语口语。
Furthermore, practice your spoken Chinese so that you can express yourself more clearly and fluently．[2023·鞍山市第二次监测]
2．增加结果状语
①此外，我的英语很好。
Moreover, I have a good command of English, enabling me to communicate with foreign guests smoothly．[2023·长郡中学模拟试卷一]
②将安排一系列与环保相关的讲座。
A series of lectures related to environmental protection will be arranged, thus arousing people's awareness of living a low carbon life．
3．增加原因状语
我认为我适合这项职位。
I think I'm qualified for the position because I have a good command of English, especially written English．
4．增加方式状语 By doing...
首先，每个人都有机会展示他们对这本书的理解。
Firstly, everyone will have the chance to show their understanding of the book by participating in the free discussions. [2023·福建省四月联合测评]
5．增加动词 ing形式作状语
①所有的家庭成员围坐在桌子旁。
All family members would sit around the table, tasting delicious dumplings, watching performances and chatting happily．[2023·山东省淄博市高三一模]
②我写信申请这个职位。
Knowing that the school English newspaper is looking for an editor responsible for the column “Traditional Chinese Culture”， I'm writing to apply for the position.
6．增加with复合结构作状语
我们学校组织一系列活动。
With the World Heritage Day approaching on April 18, our school has arranged a range of activities.[2023·石家庄市教学质量检测二]
三、增加定语成分
①介绍名人故事
Besides, the stories of world famous people are also attractive to me，which help me learn a lot from them．
②介绍活动
Aiming to make our school more attractive and create a better environment, the Students' Union organized the activity, which took place last Saturday afternoon．
四、增加个人感受、评价、希望、倡议等
1．增加个人感受
虽然这个暑假我觉得很累，但我为我所做的事情感到很高兴。
Although I was very tired this summer holiday，I felt very happy for what I did because I got a knowledge of farming experience．
2．增加评价
我想这样的活动是必要的和有意义的。
I think such activities are necessary and meaningful，from which I learn that we should help people who are in trouble if possible．
3．增加希望
我希望在大家的努力下，我们的操场能变得更加干净整洁。[2023·安徽省名校联盟高三联考]
I hope that with everyone's efforts, our playground can become much cleaner and tidier.
4．增加倡议
我从这次经历中学到的是爱护和保护我们的社区是我们的责任。
What I learnt from this experience is that it is our duty to love and protect our community. So the Chairman of our school recommends our school hold a series of activities to call on students to take action to do it．
◎针对训练5——根据提示增加相关细节
①[2023·湖北省高三第二次模拟]
__________________________________________， our school is organizing an activity on line,
_____________________________________________．(增加分词作状语， 介绍活动目的； 增加定语从句，说明举办时间)
②You'd better work out regularly ______________________________
______________________________. (so that添加目的 )
Aiming to promote our understanding and passion for work
which is scheduled to begin on May the first and last two weeks
so that you can keep fit and healthy and, more importantly, more energetic
③[2022·全国甲卷]____________________(只要我们尽力), we will make a difference to the marine environment. (增加条件状语从句)
④[2023·山东省四月新高考联合模拟] ________________________， human beings have damaged the environment seriously, and we are faced with serious problems ________________________________________. (due to 表达原因，like列举)
⑤________________________________________________________， I am writing to invite you to spend it with my family, ________________________________．(增加分词作状语；who引导的定语从句)
As long as we try our best
Due to social and economic developments
like global warming, frequent natural disasters
Knowing that you won't be able to go back home during the approaching Spring Festival
who will be more than happy to welcome you
策略四 “化装”让语篇靓丽起来
根据行文或段落需要，在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语，使文章浑然一体。
1．表示“首先”的词语：
first/firstly, first of all, to begin/start with等。
①First of all, we must make full use of every 45 minute lesson.
②To begin with, smoking should be banned in public areas.
2．表示“其次”的词语：
second/secondly, besides, in addition, what's more, furthermore, moreover等。
①Secondly, we should get up early to memorize idioms and useful expressions.
②What's more, good books can help us to develop good characters.
③Besides, I am outgoing, responsible and have a good command of communication, which will help me to introduce the beautiful history to the customers.
3．表示“最后”的词语：
last/lastly, last but not least, most importantly等。
①Last but not least, there are various extra curricular activities for students, which discover and develop students' interests and hobbies.[2023·广东省深圳市第二次调研]
②Most importantly, outgoing and enthusiastic, I'm keen on being a volunteer, providing service.
4．表示“总之”的词语：
in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a/one word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general等。
In a word, success is important，and so is failure，because it's the mother of success.
◎针对训练6——补全句子
①________________ (首先), as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon.
②________________ (此外), we can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit.
First of all
Besides第二讲 润色添彩
策略一 “包装”让词汇高端起来
1．求新求变
同样意义的词语，要根据语境使用高级词汇而不是小学初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现，要使用不同的表达方式。如：
①To begin with，it couldn't be better if students with mixed levels of English could be grouped together on purpose rather than at random.[2023·新课标Ⅰ卷]
→To begin with，it couldn't be better if students with mixed levels of English could be grouped together deliberately rather than at random.
②After a busy morning, they were tired, but they felt proud.[2023·白山市三模]
→After a busy morning, they were worn out/ exhausted, but they felt proud.
2．求准求精
写作时不一定每一句都要有复杂句式，有时准确使用一个单词就会让整个句子增色。
①In conclusion，we should find a way to study online better．[2021·全国乙卷]
→In conclusion，we should find a way to study online more efficiently．
②I am waiting for your early reply.[2021·全国甲卷]
→I am waiting for your early reply eagerly/with eagerness．
3．短语优先
恰当使用短语代替单词，不但可以增加词数，还有助于绕开不会表达的单词，使得行文更加流畅。
①However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it can help students understand English better．[2022·全国乙卷]
→However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it can help students gain a deeper understanding of English.
②I would appreciate it if you could consider my invitation.[2023·新高考Ⅰ卷]
→I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration．
③He tried to carry out a series of reforms to make his country prosperous.[2023·全国甲卷]
→He spared no effort to carry out a series of reforms to make his country prosperous.
◎针对训练1——升级加黑词汇
①[2022·全国乙卷]Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only make up 18% and 12% respectively.________________
②[2024·日照市联考]With the intention of heightening people's awareness of China's profound history and culture, a lot of regular activities are arranged.________________
③[2022·全国甲卷]Countries should team up with one another to make practical plans regarding ocean protection.________________
④[2021·新高考Ⅰ卷]When feeling sad，I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of good stories.________________
⑤[2023·诸暨市高三诊断性]Besides, he is warm hearted and willing to help others in need, for which I recommend him to you.________________
策略二 “换装”让句子新颖起来
换用句式时，应遵循以下原则：高级但不造作，多变但不离谱，复杂但不晦涩。
(一)特殊句式，风景独好
特殊句型如倒装句、强调句和感叹句等可以使整篇文章句式更加丰富。
强 调 句型1：It is/was＋被强调成分＋that＋其他…… It is by learning cooking that I have strengthened my relationship with my parents.[2023· 全国乙卷书面表达] 正是通过学习烹饪，我加强了与父母的关系。
句型2：主语＋助动词do/does/did＋动词原形＋... I do believe that only with joint efforts can we have a better tomorrow．[2022·全国甲卷] 我相信，只有大家共同努力，我们才能拥有更美好的明天。
倒装 句型1：“only＋状语(副词/介词短语/when/if引导的状语从句)” 位于句首构成部分倒装，意为“只有……才……”。 It is my firm belief that only with joint efforts can we have a better tomorrow．[2022·全国甲卷] 我坚信，只有大家共同努力，我们才能拥有更美好的明天。
,
句型2：So＋adj./adv.＋情态动词/be动词/助动词＋主语＋that...,So proud did I feel that I shared housework with my parents，which also showed I had grown up. [2023·全国乙卷书面表达]
我感到很自豪，我和父母一起分担家务，这也表明我长大了。
句型3：Not only＋助动词/情态动词/系动词＋主语＋谓语＋其他，but＋主语＋also＋谓语＋其他，意为“不仅……而且……”。,Not only have I tried something new，but it allows me to take on responsibilities. [2023·全国乙卷书面表达]
我不仅尝试了新事物，而且还承担了责任。
感叹句 ①what 引导的感叹句，中心词是名词。 What a wonderful time we had picking apples on the farm！[2020·全国Ⅱ卷] 我们在农场摘苹果的时光多么美好啊！
②how引导的感叹句，中心词是形容词或副词。 How happy I was to be one of the members in your team! 我很高兴能成为您团队的一员！
◎针对训练2——句型转换
①[2023·福建省高三适应性练习卷]We can improve our efficiency and make our school life meaningful only in this way.(升级为强调句)
→______________________ we can improve our efficiency and make our school life meaningful.
②[2021·新高考Ⅰ卷读后续写]Their father instruct them so patiently that the twins made the breakfast fast and well. (升级为倒装句)
→______________________________________________________ the twins made the breakfast fast and well.
(二)三大句式，编排巧妙
从句是丰富内容的有效手段，每一篇优秀作文，句式都应该多样， 所以在写作中，要注意打造三种从句。
1．定语从句
句型1: As the old saying goes; As is known to us As is known to us, trees are very important not only to the environment but also to human beings.[2023·黑龙江省大庆市二模] 众所周知，树木不仅对环境很重要，而且对人类也很重要。
句型2：which; who; without whose; where引导的定语从句 In conclusion，we all look forward to attending your class，where we can take the chance to improve our oral English. [2023·新课标Ⅰ卷] 总之，我们都很期待参加您的课，在课堂上我们可以借此机会提高我们的英语口语。
2.状语从句
句型1：as/when/while 引导的时间状语从句 When my grandfather was diagnosed with cancer, my family was extremely upset and shocked. [2023·辽宁省重点高中联合二模] 当祖父被诊断出患有癌症时，我的家人非常沮丧和震惊。
句型2：such/so...that.../so that引导的状语从句 Last week, a sports meeting was held by our school in the stadium, which was so exciting that it impressed me deeply.[2023·衡水中学下学期高三一调] 上周，我们学校在体育馆举行了一场运动会，非常激动人心，给我留下了深刻的印象。
句型3：if和so/as long as 引导条件状语从句 To begin with，we'd feel privileged if you could match us according to our oral English levels，rather than pair us randomly. [2023·新课标Ⅰ卷应用文] 首先，如果您能根据我们的英语口语水平给我们搭配，而不是随意搭配，我们会感到很荣幸。
3.名词性从句
句型1：What引导的主语从句＋be＋n./that... What impresses me most among many historical figures in China is Fan Zhongyan. [2023·全国甲卷书面表达] 在中国的许多历史人物中，给我印象最深的是范仲淹。
句型2：It is＋ adj/n. that... It's necessary that we should raise children's labor consciousness and involve them in housework. [2023·山东省聊城市一模] 我们有必要培养孩子们的劳动意识，让他们参与家务劳动。
句型3：I hold the firm belief that...我坚信…… There is no doubt that... 毫无疑问…… There is no denying that... 不可否认…… There is no denying that we will make a difference to the marine environment with joined efforts.[2022·全国甲卷] 不可否认，我们将共同努力，对海洋环境作出巨大贡献。
句型4：I do hope that... I do hope that these tips will be helpful to you and I wish you the best of luck in the competition. [2023·河北省高三二模] 我希望这些建议能对你有所帮助，祝你在比赛中好运。
◎针对训练3——完成句子
①[2023·沈阳市三模]我们所知道的是，我们人类不能没有野生动物，因为它们在保持自然平衡方面发挥着重要作用。
__________________we human beings could not live without wildlife, because they play an important role in keeping the balance of nature.
②[2023·安徽阜阳市3月质量检测]此外，我还做过兼职英语编辑，从中我获得了相关经验。
Besides, I have taken the part time job as an English editor, ________________________．
③[2023·深圳市高三二模]这次经历给我的教训是，只有勇敢地承担失败的全部责任，而不是指责别人，才能取得成功。
________________________________ only by bravely taking full responsibility for failure rather than blaming others can we succeed.
(三)活用非谓语，让表达言简意赅
用非谓语动词整合简单句、并列句或复合句，提升表达档次，使句子凝练高端。
非谓语的正确使用能体现出学生的语法功底，相比于从句，非谓语更加生动简洁。
句型1：knowing/representing/ learning... 知道/代表/听说…… Learning that we'll be randomly paired to do the oral practice，I feel an urge to express my different voice. [2023·新课标卷Ⅰ] 得知我们将被随机配对进行口语练习，我有表达自己不同声音的冲动。
句型2：aiming to... 为了…… Aiming to make our school more attractive and create a better environment, the Students' Union organized the activity “Green School, We Are in Action”．[2023·抚顺市高三模拟] 为了让我们的学校更有吸引力，创造一个更好的环境，学生会组织了“绿色校园，我们在行动”。
句型3：Absorbed in... 专心于…… Faced with...面对…… Known as...作为……而出名 Known as a Chinese writer and politician in the Song Dynasty，Fan Zhongyan was highly appreciated because he made great contributions to society.[2023·全国甲卷书面表达] 作为中国宋代著名的作家和政治家，范仲淹因其对社会的巨大贡献而受到高度赞赏。
句型4：with复合结构： with＋宾语＋to do(将来的动作)，主句 with＋宾语＋doing(主动或进行)，主句 with＋宾语＋done(被动或完成)，主句 With her eyes fixed on the floor, Liya came over and apologized in a low voice, “You mean a lot to us.” [2023·广东省高三二模] Liya眼睛盯着地板，走了过来，低声道歉：“你对我们来说很重要。” With our exchange program drawing to an end, I want to express our sincere gratitude to you for your kindness and generosity.[2023·武汉市四月质量检测] 在我们的交流项目即将结束之际，我想对您的友好和慷慨表示衷心的感谢。
◎针对训练4——用非谓语升级句式/__完成句子
①[2022·新高考全国Ⅰ卷]I represent the English program of our school's radio station. I'm writing to invite you to give an interview.
→__________________ our school's radio station, I'm writing to invite you to give an interview.
②[2022·新高考Ⅰ卷]The radio program was founded in 2016. It aimed to provide a good platform for the students to share their school life.
→The radio program was founded in 2016, ________________ to share their school life.
③[2021·全国甲卷]要开主题班会了，我写信征求您的建议。
________________， I'm writing to ask you for some advice on it.
④此外，中央部分被青草覆盖，和矗立在那里的雕塑，反映了我们的校园文化。
Besides, the central part can be covered with grass with a sculpture standing there, ________________. (分词作状语)
策略三 “改装”让细节丰满起来
在英语写作中，适当增加细节内容，能使习作流畅、丰满，达到应有的表达效果。
一、 列举具体的实例来补充说明
1．such as.../like...
将来，我认为我们学校可以提供一些活动。
In the future, I think our school could provide some activities such as reading book clubs or English corners to further inspire students' interest in learning English．[2022·全国乙卷]
2．for example /instance
如今，我们中的一些人在校园里养成了一些坏习惯。
Nowadays, some of us have formed some bad habits on campus. For instance, some students leave the lights on in the daytime; some leave much food on the table after eating．
3．...as well as...
我们将组织一系列的活动。
We will organize a range of activities, including performances on traditional Chinese musical instruments, folk dances as well as Chinese martial arts.
二、 增加状语成分
1．增加目的状语
①我们学校将举行一场中国民间舞蹈表演。
In order to enrich the campus life of international students, a Chinese folk dance performance will be given in our school.
②此外，练习你的汉语口语。
Furthermore, practice your spoken Chinese so that you can express yourself more clearly and fluently．[2023·鞍山市第二次监测]
2．增加结果状语
①此外，我的英语很好。
Moreover, I have a good command of English, enabling me to communicate with foreign guests smoothly．[2023·长郡中学模拟试卷一]
②将安排一系列与环保相关的讲座。
A series of lectures related to environmental protection will be arranged, thus arousing people's awareness of living a low carbon life．
3．增加原因状语
我认为我适合这项职位。
I think I'm qualified for the position because I have a good command of English, especially written English．
4．增加方式状语 By doing...
首先，每个人都有机会展示他们对这本书的理解。
Firstly, everyone will have the chance to show their understanding of the book by participating in the free discussions. [2023·福建省四月联合测评]
5．增加动词 ing形式作状语
①所有的家庭成员围坐在桌子旁。
All family members would sit around the table, tasting delicious dumplings, watching performances and chatting happily．[2023·山东省淄博市高三一模]
②我写信申请这个职位。
Knowing that the school English newspaper is looking for an editor responsible for the column “Traditional Chinese Culture”， I'm writing to apply for the position.
6．增加with复合结构作状语
我们学校组织一系列活动。
With the World Heritage Day approaching on April 18, our school has arranged a range of activities.[2023·石家庄市教学质量检测二]
三、增加定语成分
①介绍名人故事
Besides, the stories of world famous people are also attractive to me，which help me learn a lot from them．
②介绍活动
Aiming to make our school more attractive and create a better environment, the Students' Union organized the activity, which took place last Saturday afternoon．
四、增加个人感受、评价、希望、倡议等
1．增加个人感受
虽然这个暑假我觉得很累，但我为我所做的事情感到很高兴。
Although I was very tired this summer holiday，I felt very happy for what I did because I got a knowledge of farming experience．
2．增加评价
我想这样的活动是必要的和有意义的。
I think such activities are necessary and meaningful，from which I learn that we should help people who are in trouble if possible．
3．增加希望
我希望在大家的努力下，我们的操场能变得更加干净整洁。[2023·安徽省名校联盟高三联考]
I hope that with everyone's efforts, our playground can become much cleaner and tidier.
4．增加倡议
我从这次经历中学到的是爱护和保护我们的社区是我们的责任。
What I learnt from this experience is that it is our duty to love and protect our community. So the Chairman of our school recommends our school hold a series of activities to call on students to take action to do it．
◎针对训练5——根据提示增加相关细节
①[2023·湖北省高三第二次模拟] ____________________________________， our school is organizing an activity on line, ________________________．(增加分词作状语， 介绍活动目的； 增加定语从句，说明举办时间)
②You'd better work out regularly ________________________________. (so that添加目的 )
③[2022·全国甲卷]________________(只要我们尽力), we will make a difference to the marine environment. (增加条件状语从句)
④[2023·山东省四月新高考联合模拟] ________________________， human beings have damaged the environment seriously, and we are faced with serious problems ________________. (due to 表达原因，like列举)
⑤________________， I am writing to invite you to spend it with my family, ________________．(增加分词作状语；who引导的定语从句)
策略四 “化装”让语篇靓丽起来
根据行文或段落需要，在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语，使文章浑然一体。
1．表示“首先”的词语：
first/firstly, first of all, to begin/start with等。
①First of all, we must make full use of every 45 minute lesson.
②To begin with, smoking should be banned in public areas.
2．表示“其次”的词语：
second/secondly, besides, in addition, what's more, furthermore, moreover等。
①Secondly, we should get up early to memorize idioms and useful expressions.
②What's more, good books can help us to develop good characters.
③Besides, I am outgoing, responsible and have a good command of communication, which will help me to introduce the beautiful history to the customers.
3．表示“最后”的词语：
last/lastly, last but not least, most importantly等。
①Last but not least, there are various extra curricular activities for students, which discover and develop students' interests and hobbies.[2023·广东省深圳市第二次调研]
②Most importantly, outgoing and enthusiastic, I'm keen on being a volunteer, providing service.
4．表示“总之”的词语：
in short, in brief, in conclusion, in a/one word, to sum up, all in all, on the whole, in general等。
In a word, success is important，and so is failure，because it's the mother of success.
◎针对训练6——补全句子
①________________ (首先), as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon.
②________________ (此外), we can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit.
专题五 应用文写作——先文体·再添彩
第二讲 润色添彩· “洋”气十足
针对训练1
①account for
②a wide variety of
③work out
④depressed; imaginative
⑤In addition; give a helping hand to
针对训练2
①It is only in this way that
②So patiently did their father instruct them that
针对训练3
①What we know is that
②from which I have gained relevant experience
③The lesson I have drawn from this experience is that
针对训练4
①Representing the English program of
②aiming to provide a good platform for the students
③With the theme based class meeting to hold
④reflecting the culture of our school
针对训练5
①Aiming to promote our understanding and passion for work; which is scheduled to begin on May the first and last two weeks
②so that you can keep fit and healthy and, more importantly, more energetic
③As long as we try our best
④Due to social and economic developments; like global warming, frequent natural disasters
⑤Knowing that you won't be able to go back home during the approaching Spring Festival; who will be more than happy to welcome you
针对训练6
①First of all
②Besides
