2024年聚焦人教版中考英语写作讲义 - 话题写作五 自我管理与提升

聚焦人教版2024中考英语写作 - 话题写作五 自我管理与提升
一、教材话题链接
Topics 教材链接 写作角度
School subjects 七上Unit 9 My favorite subject is science 谈论喜好并给出原因
Life goals 八上Unit 6 I'm going to study computer science. ①计划安排②职业目标/理想
Learning how to learn 九全Unit 1 How can we become good learners 交流学习方法和策略
How we have changed 九全Unit 4I used to be afraid of the dark 谈论变化——谈论人物过去的特点
二、话题词句拓展
◎必备短语和句型
1. catch up with 赶上；追上
2. do/try one's best 尽某人最大的努力
3. give up(doing sth. )放弃(做某事)
4. go over 仔细检查；复习
5. grow up 长大，成长
6. in order that 为了
7. in order to/so as to 为了
8. make mistakes 犯错误
9. make progress 取得进步
10. make up one's mind to do sth. 下决心做某事
11. take pride in/be proud of 为……感到自豪
12. take up 占去；占据(时间、空间等)
13. used to do sth. 过去常常做某事
14. be used to sth. /doing sth. 习惯于某事/做某事
15. decide to do sth. 决定做某事
16. It is important/necessary/difficult/possible/ unbelievable for sb. to do sth. 对某人来说做某事是重要的/必要的/困难的/可能的/难以置信的。
17. try to do sth. 努力做某事
18. be responsible for 为……负责
19. as…as possible/one can 尽可能……
20. manage to do sth. 设法做某事
21. the+ 比较级…, the +比较级… 越……就越……
◎基础句型写作
1. 你练习得越多，你的英语就越好。(the+ 比较级 …, the + 比较级 …)
2. 我的小妹妹过去很害羞，从来不跟陌生人说话。(used to)
3. 玛丽努力奔跑，试图赶上她的朋友们。(try to do sth.; catch up with)
4. 阅读很重要，我决定从现在开始花更多的时间进行阅读。(decide to do sth.)
5. 对所有的学生来说，考试前保持轻松很重要。(It is+adj. +for sb. to do sth.)
6. 莉莉为即将到来的测试认真复习功课。(go over)
三、满分作文五步法
典/例/分/析
假定你是刘芳，你看到美国留学生Sharon在网上发的帖子，希望有 人能帮助她提高普通话(Mandarin)水平，她可以教对方英语。请根据以下提示，用英语给她写一封电子邮件
要点：
1. 表达向她提供帮助的意愿
2. 说明你能胜任的理由；
3. 给出学好普通话的建议
4. 提出想学习英语的要求
注意：
1. 词数：90左右(开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数)
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容
Dear Sharon,
How is it going
Looking forward to your reply
Yours
Liu Fang
Step 1审——审清题意
文体
人称：
时态：
功能：
要点：
1.
2.
3.
4.
5.
适当发挥 ……
Step 2 搭——列提纲，搭好框架
Step 3 连——连词成句
1. 开篇点题：
① Your post said that you _________________________________ your Mandarin.
② I’m quite interested in it. I think _________________________ it.
2. 主体内容：
① I have _____________________ Mandarin for many years.
② Mandarin is a _____________________ in my _____________________, so I can help you learn Mandarin well.
③ You should _____________________ every day.
④ You can read more books _________________ see some Chinese films ____________________ some Chinese songs.
⑤ We can _____________________ and _____________________ each other.
3. 总结收尾：
Looking forward to your reply.
Step 4 组——组句成篇
Dear Sharon,
How is it going ①Your post said that you want to improve your Mandarin. I'm quite interested in it. I think I'm fit for it. ②I have been learning Mandarin for many years, and Mandarin is a must in my daily life. So I can help you learn Mandarin well. ③You should practice Mandarin every day. Besides, you can read more books in Chinese, see Chinese films, listen to some Chinese songs and so on. You know, speaking and listening are very important for language learning.
In your post, you said you can teach English as a reward. It's just what I want. I'm eager to improve my English. If you agree,we can chat online to learn from each other. ④We can both learn well soon.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Liu Fang
Step 5 修——修饰美化
① 用关系从句合并句子：
I'm quite ______________________________________ your post in which you said ___________
_____________________ your Mandarin
② 加状语：
_____________________ China, I have been learning Mandarin for many years.
③ 增加有关时间的细节：
You'd better ____________________ to practice Mandarin every day.
④ 改写为含宾语从句的复合句：
I believe ____________________ can improve our oral speaking ___________________________.
◎小小加油站
[开头句]
1. As an old saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.”
2. Here are my learning ways that I want to share with you.
3. I'm quite interested in it. I think I'm fit for it.
4. I'd like to tell you something about how we study in class.
[发展句]
1. Listen to the teacher attentively and take notes carefully so that you can review them later.
2. So you are sure to make great progress.
3. I suggest that you should listen to teachers and take notes carefully in class.
4. There is no doubt that it is useful for us to develop our good learning habits.
5. Our teachers give us enough time to study and think for ourselves.
[结尾句]
1. We can help each other to improve our speaking ability.
2. I believe both of us can improve our oral English as soon as possible
3. I really hope my advice can be helpful to you and you can enjoy your new school life.
4. If you have any suggestions,feel free to tell me.
I do believe we'll have a great time.
话题佳篇创作
在我们的成长过程中，自律起 着重要的作用。为了加强青少年的自我约束能力，某英语杂志社正在开展以“争做自律好学生” 为主题的征文比赛。请你以“How to Be a Self-disciplined Student”为题，写一篇英语短文参赛。
要点：
(1)在学校：遵守校规，与同学相处融洽……
(2)在家里：按时完成家庭作业，帮助父母做家务……
(3)其他方面：多阅读，少玩电脑游戏……
(4)自律的作用：使我们更健康，更快乐……
参考词汇： self-discipline n. 自律，self-disciplined adj. 自律的
要求：
(1)短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
(2)词数：80左右(短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名。
正稿：
How to Be a Self-disciplined Student
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. We must be strict with ourselves in everyday life
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