聚焦人教版2024年中考英语写作讲义 - 话题写作六 观点态度

聚焦人教版2024中考英语写作 - 话题写作六 观点态度
一、教材话题链接
Topics 教材链接 写作角度
Rules 七下Unit 4 Don't eat in class ①遵守学校/社会规则②文明礼仪
Life in the future 八上Unit 7 Will people have robots 对未来的预测/畅想
Rules 九全Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes. 规则——允许/不允许；同意/不同意
二、话题词句拓展
◎必备短语和句型
1. agree to do sth. 同意做某事
2. agree with sb. 同意某人的观点
3. be against… 反对……
4. be for… 赞成……
5. be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事
6. compare…with… 与……相比
7. advise sb. to do sth. 建议某人做某事
8. the best way to do sth. 做某事的最好方法
9. in a word 简言之，总之
10. in fact 事实上
11. in one's opinion 在某人看来
12. on the one hand…on the other hand… 一方面……另一方面……
13. take it easy 别着急；别紧张
14. I think/believe/hope… 我认为/相信/希望
15. It's said that… 据说……
16. It's a good idea to do sth. 做某事是个好主意
17. to tell you the truth 说实话
18. from my point of view 在我看来
19. as for me 至于我
20. allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事
21. talk about 谈论
22. argue with sb. 与某人争论
◎基础句型写作
1. 总之，手机已经让我们的生活变得更加丰富多彩。(in a word)
2. 依我看，课外活动对孩子们有好处。(in one's opinion)
3. 对于你的看法我恐怕无法苟同。(agree with)
4. 如果你做不出这道题，和你的团队成员紧密合作是一个不错的主意。(It's a good idea to…)
5. 不要花费太多时间在游戏上，我认为你是在浪费生命。(Don't do sth.; think)
6. 我认为和朋友分享兴趣和爱好很重要。(think; share. …with)
三、满分作文五步法
典/例/分/析
上周，你们班举行了一次以“初中生使用微信的利与弊”为主题的班 会，同学们各抒己见。请根据表格内容，以“The Opinions of Using WeChat” 为题写一篇英语短文。
利 弊
1. 提供交流的平台 1. 过度沉溺、影响学习
2. 认识更多的朋友 2. 交友不慎、上当受骗
3. 学习更多的东西 3. 长期使用损害视力
……
注意：
1. 词数：90左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
参考词汇：platform 平台，trick 欺骗，eyesight 视力
The Opinions of Using WeChat
Step 1审——审清题意
文体：
人称：
时态：
功能：
要点：
1. 利：
2. 弊：
Step 2 搭——列提纲，搭好框架
Step 3 连——连词成句
1. 开篇点题：
① ____________________ middle school students use WeChat nowadays.
② Different students ________________________________________ about it.
2. 主体内容：
Advantages:
① Some students think WeChat is a very ____________________ tool
② It can provide a platform to _________________ others. It can help them __________________ and get more knowledge.
Disadvantages:
① Some students think WeChat ____________________.
② They may ____________________ by strange net friends.
③ It's ____________________ by using it too long.
3. 总结收尾：
In my opinion, we should use WeChat ____________________.
Step 4 组——组句成篇
The Opinions of Using WeChat
① More and more middle school students use WeChat. Last week, we had a discussion about using WeChat. Different students have different opinions about it.
Some students think WeChat is a very useful tool. It can provide a platform to communicate with others. Besides, they can make more friends and get more knowledge by WeChat. ②
③ However, some students think WeChat affects their study. And they may be tricked by strange net friends. ④ It will also be bad for their eyes if using WeChat for a long time.
In my opinion, we should use WeChat properly. In addition, we shouldn't add strangers or meet net friends casually.
Step 5 修——修饰美化
① 改为被动句：
WeChat ____________________________ among middle development of science and technology.
② 加总结句：
____________________, WeChat has made our life more colorful.
③ 加条件状语从句(假如他们在上面花太多时间): However, some students think WeChat will affect their study ____________________ on it.
④ 加衔接词；
____________________, it will also result in poor eyesight if using WeChat for a long time.
◎小小加油站
[开头句]
1. Nowadays, WeChat is very popular. It is playing an important role in our life.
2. Different people have different opinions about…
3. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter opinion.
4. All in all, if you follow my suggestions above, I'm sure you'll …
5. I seldom buy things online because I don't think it's safe enough.
[发展句]
1. It doesn't matter whether or not you make mistakes. What matters most is to correct and learn from them.
2. A balanced diet is very important for losing weight.
3. It's someone who is honest with others all the time that can get more trust at school.
4. Every coin has two sides. It has both advantages and disadvantages.
5. You'd better get up early in the morning and do some sports regularly. The more you exercise, the healthier you'll be.
[结尾句]
1. I'm sure you will pay more attention to your study and your grades will be better and better.
2. In my opinion, we shouldn't spend lots of time on them and we should use them properly.
3. We believe that China will be stronger and stronger.
4. I hope my advice is worth taking. /I hope my advice will be helpful to you.
话题佳篇创作
国家提出将“劳动教育(labor education)”纳入中小学国家课程方案，请结合自身的劳动经历，谈谈你对劳动教育的看法。内容包括
1. 你对劳动教育的看法 be good for health; relax from the hard study…
2. 你自身的劳动经历及感受 at home: do the dishes; sweep the floor . . at school: clean the classroom; water flowers …
3. 你对劳动教育课程的建议 offer different kinds of labor classes; hold competitions about labor skills…
要求：
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名
2. 包含以上表格内所有信息，可适当发挥；
3. 词数：80左右；文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数
正稿：
It's reported that labor education will be included in the education of middle schools and primary schools in China. I think
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