2024年聚焦人教版中考英语写作 讲义- 话题写作一 日常活动

聚焦人教版2024中考英语写作 - 话题写作一 日常活动
一、教材话题链接
Topics 教材链接 写作角度
Daily routines 七下Unit 2 What time do you go to school ①日常生活 ②交通安全
Everyday activities 七下Unit 6 I'm watching TV ①业余活动，个人经历 ②周末活动 ③运动与健康 ④计划安排
Weekend activities 七下Unit 12 What did you do last weekend
Free time activities 八上Unit 2 How often do you exercise
二、话题词句拓展
◎必备短语和句型
1. arrive at(in)/get to sp. 到达某地
2. as usual 像往常一样
3. at the moment 此刻
4. at the weekend 在周末
5. on business 出差
6. out of breath 上气不接下气
7. do some cleaning/shopping 扫除/买东西
8. enjoy oneself/have fun/have a good time 过得愉快
9. go fishing/shopping/skating 去钓鱼/购物/滑冰
10. go to the movies 去电影院
11. have a break 休息
12. have breakfast/lunch/dinner 吃早饭/午饭/晚饭
13. help sb. do/with sth. 帮助某人做某事/在某方面帮助某人
14. with the help of… 在……的帮助下
15. look after/take care of 照顾
16. put away 积蓄；把……收好
17. spend. …on/(in)doing sth. 在某物上花费……/花费……做某事
18. stay at home 待在家里
19. take a walk/go for a walk 散步
20. take photos/pictures of… 给……拍照
21. wait for 等候，等待
22. wake up 醒来
23. It's time for…/It's time to do sth. 到做某事的时间了
24. can't wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事
25. be pleased to do sth. 高兴做某事
26. be pleased with sth. /sb. 对某事/某人感到高兴/满意
27. remind sb. that…/remind sb. of sth. 提醒某人……/提醒某人某事
◎基础句型写作
1. 我们和祖父母住在一起，这样可以很好地照顾他们。(take care of)
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2. 我妹妹虽然只有六岁，但是她能够帮助妈妈做家务。(help…do/with)
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3. 得知您对我们的服务很满意我们很开心。(be pleased to do)
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4. 这是我们爬山的最好的时间。(It's time to…)
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5. 上周末我花费了一小时帮助妈妈大扫除。(spend…doing)
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三、满分作文五步法
典/例/分/析
假设你是李华，请给你的好朋友Mike写一封电子邮件，向他简要介绍你一天的主要活动。
要点如下：
1. 生活方式：很健康，早上6:00起床，早餐前锻炼半个小时。
2. 交通；你家离学校很近，通常步行上学，大概花十分钟到达学校。
3. 爱好：喜欢阅读和写作，每天会花1小时进行阅读和写作。因为擅长写作，所以梦想成为一名作家。
注意：
1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：
3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear Mike,
How is it going
Looking forward to your reply
Yours
Li Hua
Step 1审——审清题意
文体
人称
时态：
功能：
要点：
1.
2.
3.
4.
适当发挥 ……
Step 2 搭——列提纲，搭好框架
Step 3 连——连词成句
1. 开篇点题：
① Let me tell you ________________________________.
② I have ________________________________.
2. 主体内容：
① I get up ________________________________ every morning
② I usually ________________________________ in the park.
③ My home is not far from our school. I often __________________________________________
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④ I like ________________________________________________________________.
⑤ I dream of ________________________________________________________________.
3. 总结收尾：
Looking forward to your reply.
Step 4 组——组句成篇
Dear Mike,
How is it going Let me tell you my daily life.
I have a healthy lifestyle. I get up at six every morning. ①Before having breakfast, I usually do exercise for half an hour in the park. My home is not far from my school. ②So I often walk to
school. It only takes me about ten minutes to get to school.
③I like reading and writing. I spend one hour enjoying them. I dream of becoming a great writer. I'm sure my everyday life is happy and interesting.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Step 5 修——修饰美化
① 用 spend 改写本句，并扩展关系从句，说明锻炼的益处：
Before having breakfast, I usually ____________________________________________________
exercise in the park, which can not only build up my body ________________________________ make me full of energy.
② 扩写为动词的-ing 形式作主语的句子：
So I often walk to school. ___________________________________________________________
makes me relaxed.
③添加过渡连词和总起句并改写本句，说明突出的爱好是阅读和写作：
_____________ more, I have lots of hobbies. Among them, _______________ and ____________ are my favourites.
◎小小加油站
[开头句]
1. Let me tell you something about my everyday life. I have a healthy lifestyle.
2. It is known to us that a healthy lifestyle leads to a healthy life, so it's important for us to keep a healthy lifestyle.
3. It's very important for us to develop good habits. Good habits are important in our lives. They influence us a lot in many ways.
[发展句]
1. In my opinion, we can do something meaningful instead of playing with the smartphones or watching TV.
2. Going for a walk makes me relaxed and healthy.
3. What's more, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food.
4. W e should also care for our parents and help them do more housework in our spare time.
[结尾句]
1. I'm looking forward to hearing from you all.
2. I hope you can write and tell me about your day.
3. All in all,a healthy lifestyle can help you feel more relaxed in both study and daily life.
4. Keep a healthy lifestyle, and you'll get healthier and healthier day by day.
话题佳篇创作
艺术充满魅力，艺术课使校园 生活丰富多彩。你校英文周刊以“My favourite art course”为题向同学们征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. 学校开设的艺术课(如音乐、绘画、舞蹈、书法、戏剧等);
2. 你最喜欢的一门艺术课及其开课情况(如上课时间、活动等);
3. 喜欢的理由。
注意：
1. 词数为80左右；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：art course(艺术课), painting(n. 绘画) , calligraphy(n. 书法), drama(n. 戏剧)
正稿：
My favourite art course
Art courses are important at school ___________________________________________________
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自评(亮点与困难)：
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