聚焦人教版2024中考英语写作 - 话题写作二 计划安排
一、教材话题链接
Topics 教材链接 写作角度
Entertainment 八上Unit 5 Do you want to watch a game show ①休闲娱乐 ②观点态度
Life goals 八上Unit 6 I'm going to study computer science ①计划安排 ②职业目标
Decision making 八上Unit 10 If you go to the party,you'll have a great time
二、话题词句拓展
◎必备短语和句型
1. as long as 只要;既然
2. be/get ready to 准备好(做)……
3. come true 实现;成为现实
4. look forward to 盼望;期待
5. make plans for… 为……制定计划
6. plan to do sth. 计划做某事
7. decide to do sth. 决定做某事
8. prepare to do sth. 准备做某事
9. Make preparation for… 为……作准备
10. go camping/fishing 去野营/钓鱼
11. set off 动身,启程;使爆炸
12. take place 发生;出现
13. had better do sth. 最好做某事
14. would like/want to do sth. 想要做某事
15. hope to do sth. 希望做某事
16. expect to do sth. 期望做某事
17. dream about/of doing sth. 梦想做某事
e across 偶然遇见
19. enjoy doing sth. 喜欢做某事
20. listen to music 听音乐
21. pick up 拾起;开车去接;接电话
22. be excited to do sth. 做某事很兴奋
23. in order to do sth. 为了做某事
24. make an effort to do sth. 努力做某事
◎基础句型写作
1. 你最好明天动身。(had better do sth.; set off)
2. 我希望帮助那些有困难的人。(hope to do sth. )
3. 这部电影如此有趣,以至于我期望再看一遍。(look forward to)
4. 只要你继续努力,你就会更接近成功。(as long as)
5. 参加这次学校郊游我很兴奋。(be excited to)
6. 为了保持健康,我们应该避免吃快餐。(in order to)
7. 我年少的时候常梦想当一名作家。(dream of)
8. 期末考试后,我开始为这次旅行作准备。(make preparations for)
三、满分作文五步法
典/例/分/析
假设你是李华,请给你们的美籍教师Bob写一封电子邮件,向他简要介绍你校即将举办的英语文化节(English Culture Festival),邀请他参加本次活动,并请他在节目最后做一场关于如何学好英语的讲座。邮件还应包括以下内容:
1. 活动时间;本周五下午14:30—17:30
2. 活动地点:报告厅(Lecture Hall)
3. 活动内容;学生演唱英文歌曲……
注意:
1. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3. 文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear Bob,
How is it going
Looking forward to your reply
Yours,
Li Hua
Step 1审——审清题意
人称
时态:
功能:
要点:
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适当发挥 ……
Step 2 搭——列提纲,搭好框架
Step 3 连——连词成句
1. 开篇点题:
① We will _____________________________ in our school.
② Would you like to ____________________________________
2. 主体内容:
① The activity will begin __________________ in the Lecture Hall.
② Some students will __________________ and perform plays in English.
③ After the performance, you can __________________ on how to learn English well.
3. 总结收尾:
Looking forward to your reply.
Step 4 组——组句成篇
Dear Bob,
How is it going
①We will have an English Culture Festival in our school. ②Would you like to come and join us
The activity will begin in the Lecture Hall at 14:30 this Friday and finish at 17:30. We've prepared many programs for it. For example, some students will sing English songs and some will also perform plays in English. ③
④What's more, after the performance you can give a talk on how to learn English well.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
Step 5 修——修饰美化
① 用 invite 改写本句,说明邀请的目的:
I'm writing to __________________ the English Culture Festival in our school.
② 改写为it 作主语的陈述句,表达期待他的到来:
It is __________________ if you can come.
③ 结尾处用主语从句扩写,表达活动带来的好处(为更好理解来自不同国家文化提供了一个好机会):
It will be a good opportunity for us to get __________________ the culture from different countries.
④ 扩句(说明邀请演讲的原因/理由):
As you know, many students in our school __________________ learning English well. So when the performance finishes, it will be nice if you can give a talk and provide us with some practical advice.
◎小小加油站
[开头句]
1. I'm glad to tell you something about our colorful school life.
2. I am going to travel to places of interest which can open my eyes.
3. I would like to invite you to attend the graduation ceremony at our school.
4. I am thinking of taking a trip to your city this summer vacation.
5. We are going to have some meaningful activities.
6. I am planning to travel abroad during the vacation.
[发展句]
1. I really have a large number of things to do. Maybe I'm a bit busy,but I like this sort of life.
2. We will meet at our school gate and then go to…by bus.
3. Every term there is a basketball match between the students and the teachers in our school
4. We plan to send our cards on which we have written our thanks to our teachers.
5. We plan to go to Tian'anmen Square to watch the flag-raising ceremony first.
[结尾句]
1. Let's make a plan for the coming vacation together.
2. In a word, it's helpful for our society to do some charity. Many hands make light work.
3. I'm sure I'll have an unforgettable and meaningful holiday.
4. I hope we can spend more time on such activities and less time on homework.
5. I can't wait to enjoy my weekend. Would you like to join me
话题佳篇创作
紧张的初中学习生活就要结束了,你即将迎来一个轻松的暑假。请根据下图中的 提示,以“My Summer Vacation Plan”为题,用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的假期计划。
写作要求
1. 短文必须包含图中的全部信息,并适当发挥;
2. 词数:80词左右(文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。
正稿:
My Summer Vacation Plan
The summer vacation is coming. Here are my plans for it __________________________________
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All in all, I'm looking forward to spending a happy summer vacation.
自评(亮点与困难):
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