聚焦人教版2024年中考英语写作讲义 - 话题写作七 文化习俗

聚焦人教版2024中考英语写作 - 话题写作七 文化习俗
一、教材话题链接
Topics 教材链接 写作角度
Legends and stories 八下Unit 6 An old man tried to move the mountains 谈论看过的故事/图书
Literature and music 八下Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet
Festivals 九全Unit 2 I think that mooncakes are delicious! 传统文化
Customs 九全Unit 10 You're supposed to shake hands. 谈论不同国家的文化习俗
二、话题词句拓展
◎必备短语和句型
1. around the world =all over the world 全世界，世界各地
2. as far as (表示程度、范围)就……而言；尽……所能
3. each other 相互
4. places of interest 名胜古迹
5. in memory of… 为纪念……
6. not only…but also… 不仅……而且……
7. be different from 与……不同
8. be famous for 因……而闻名
9. be popular with… 在……中受欢迎
10. be made of 由……制成
11. be made in +地方在某地制造
12. get together 聚会
13. stand for 代表，象征
14. a symbol of… 一种……的象征
15. set off fireworks 放烟花
16. make dumplings 包饺子
17. buy sb. sth. =buy sth. for sb. 给某人买某物
18. lend sb. sth. =lend sth. to sb. 把某物借给某人
19. form a habit of… 养成……的习惯
20. fall on 适逢(某日), 正当(某日)
◎基础句型写作
1. 这座南方城镇因茶而著名。(be famous for)
2. 我们将要聚在一起庆祝中秋节。(get together)
3. 红色在我们国家代表好运。(stand for)
4. 人们喜欢在节日相互送礼物。 (each other)
5. 美国的生活习惯和中国的不同。(be different from)
6. 端午节是为了纪念屈原而举办的。(in memory of)
7. 元宵节在农历正月十五。(fall on)
三、满分作文五步法
典/例/分/析
请阅读Tony从美国发来的电子邮件，并根据所给提示和要求，以李华的名义回复一封邮件。
Hey, Li Hua!
How are you doing I've been busy since I came back from China. Guess what! I'm learning Chinese cooking, and I really enjoy it.
One more thing, I hear you have the Mid-Autumn Festival in China. What's the date of the festival How do you celebrate
Tony
要求：
1. 邮件须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 邮件中不得涉及真实的人名、校名和地名
3. 词数：60～80;开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词
参考词汇：the lunar calendar(阴历), mooncake, watch the moon, the symbol of reunion(团圆的象征)
Step 1审——审清题意
文体：
人称
时态：
功能：
要点
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2.
3.
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适当发挥 ……
Step 2 搭——列提纲，搭好框架
Step 3 连——连词成句
1. 开篇点题：
Good to _____________________ you.
2. 主体内容：
① It's amazing that you're learning _____________________.
② _____________________ are you interested in it _____________________ are you learning it And _____________________ can you cook
③ We really have the Mid-Autumn Festival. It's on _____________________ of the lunar calendar ④ All the family members _____________________ for a big dinner that day.
⑤ We usually _____________________, _____________________ and _____________________ at night.
3. 总结收尾：
Bye for now.
Step 4 组——组句成篇
Hi,Tony,
Good to hear from you! It's amazing that you're learning Chinese cooking. Why are you interested in it How are you learning it And what can you cook Hope to enjoy your dishes next time!
Yes, we really have the Mid-Autumn Festival. ①It's on August 15th of the lunar calendar. It's one of the most important festivals in China. All the family members get together for a big dinner that day. ②We usually eat mooncakes and watch the moon at night. We believe the full moon is the
symbol of reunion.
Bye for now.
Li Hua
Step 5 修——修饰美化
① 改为含关系从句的复合句：
It's on August 15th of the lunar calendar, _____________________ is one of the most important festivals in China.
② 改为含时间状语从句的复合句：
We usually eat mooncakes _____________________ at night.
◎小小加油站
[开头句]
1. China is a country with a long history of about 5,000 years.
2. I'm glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals.
3. I want to share something about traditional Chinese culture with you.
4. Let me give you some suggestions about Chinese customs.
5. The Spring Festival falls on the first day of the first lunar month, and ends on the fifteenth day.
[发展句]
1. It is a time for family members to get together
2. I like eating mooncakes that are shaped like the moon.
3. We celebrate National Day with a seven-day holiday.
4. You are supposed to behave well at the dinner table.
5. No matter where they are,people come home to celebrate the festival with their family.
[结尾句]
1. I hope that my e-mail will help you know more about Chinese festivals.
2. I'm sure I'll have an interesting and meaningful festival
3. I hope you will come here and experience this wonderful festival.
4. I do not find the customs so strange anymore.
5. The festival can make us feel not only love and happiness, but also the importance of home and family.
话题佳篇创作
假设你叫李华，你的英国朋友 Alex很难读懂中国诗句“山重水复疑无路，柳暗花 明又一村(For every cloud,there is a silver lining. )”, 来信向你寻求帮助。请你根据表格信息，并结
合自身例子给他回一封 e-mail,谈谈你的理解。
注意：
1. 文中必须包含所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；写作参考供选择使用；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
3. 词数：80～100;
4. 正文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
正稿：
Dear Alex
Glad to hear from you. It's natural for a foreigner not to understand the sentence
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I hope my reply will be helpful to you.
Yours
Li Hua
自评(亮点与困难)：
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