专题二十五：读后续写之如何续写故事开头高考英语二轮专题复习学案
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【2024高分攻略】高考英语二轮复习学案(通用版)
专题二十五 读后续写之如何写好故事开头
读后续写将优质性输入和创造性产出紧密结合的新途径，它要求学生在读完一篇结尾缺失的外语材料后，在充分理解原文的基础上，补全内容。它向学习者提供了丰富的语境和模仿材料， 激发了他们的表达动机，通过与文本互动协同产生了拉平效应，来促进外语学习。
如何写出精彩开头
仿写句式一：无灵主语开头（没有生命的名词作主语）
1.用情感状态的抽象名词作主语
Despair seized him at the thought of his failure in the exam.
2 ．行为动作的名词作主语
The thought of seeing her son very soon filled her heart with great happiness.
3.身体部位/音容笑貌类名词作主语
Tears welled up in Lily’s eyes.
4.时间/地点/场景类名词作主语
常见的时间、地点类名词：silence ，hush 安静沉默；dusk 黄昏；dawn 黎明；morning；afternoon；night 等。
常见的谓语动词：see 看见；witness 见证；find 发现；fall 降临等。
Beijing has witnessed great changes in recent years.
5. 自然现象类名词作主语
常见的自然现象类名词：sun；sunshine；moon；moonlight；fog ，mist 雾；rain；earthquake 地震等。
常见的谓语动词：blanket 覆盖；come ；bring；prevent 妨碍阻止；strike 打击侵袭；threaten 威胁/即将 来临等。
An earthquake comes like a thief in the night, without warning.
The thick fog blanketed the field.
6.事物类名词作主语
My watch says it is eleven.
7.用 it 作形式主语，其逻辑主语是后面的短语或从句
It was no more important whether he won the first place or not.
8. there be句型
There is a growing concern over the population growth.
9. 谚语中的无灵主语句
Fortune knocks once at least at every man's door.人人都有好运的一天。
Constant dropping wears a stone.水滴石穿。
例1：He felt a bit sad inside him.
翻译：他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤。
改写：A ripple/flush/wave/surge of sadness welled up inside him.
例2：With tears streaming down her face, he couldn’t say a word.
翻译：眼泪顺着她的脸流下来，她说不出话来。
改写：Words failed her, with tears streaming down her face,
例3：Suddenly she felt very excited when she caught sight of a familiar figure.
翻译：突然她看到一个熟悉的身影,内心涌起一阵兴奋.
改写：Suddenly a wave of happiness and excitement seized/took hold of/swept over her when she caught sight of a familiar figure.
仿写句式二：倒装句开头
只有这样你才能学好英语。
Only in this way can you learn English well.
例1：A young man sat by the lake with a book in his hand.
翻译：湖边坐着一个手里拿着一本书的年轻男孩。
改写：By the lake sat a young man with a book in his hand.
例2：(2020新高考读后续写) When they got home, they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags.
改写：Hardly had they got home when they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags.
例3：(2021新高考读后续写) Their mother never expected her day to start with such a warm gift.
翻译：在任何情况下，他们的母亲也不会想到她的一天会以这样的暖心礼物开始的。
改写：Under no circumstances had their mother expected her day to start with such a warm gift.
仿写句式三：对话或独白开头
“太可怕了，”这个年轻人用颤抖的声音回答道。
“Awfully,” the young man answered in a trembling voice.
例1：Rachel called to see who got there first as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.
翻译：“让我们看看谁先到那里去！”瑞秋一边叫着，一边飞快地蹬着车从珍妮身边冲过去。
改写：“Let’s see who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.
例2：The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul shouted at Mac and told him to get into the car.
翻译：汽车突然停在他面前。“上车！”保罗对麦克喊道。
改写：The car abruptly stopped in front of him. “Get into the car.” Paul shouted at Mac.
仿写句式四：介词短语开头
孩子们高兴地找到了出路。
In delight, children found their way out.
例1：They kept their eyes open to read the results surprisingly.
翻译：她们好奇地瞪着眼睛看着结果。
改写：In surprise, they kept their eyes open to read the results.
例2：The man didn’t say a word and picked Jim up off the motorbike.
翻译：那个男人一言不发地，把吉米从摩托车上扶起来。
改写：Without saying a word, the man picked Jim up off the motorbike.
仿写句式五：独立主格结构开头
Her shirt caught on a nail，she could not move.
她的衬衫被钉子钩住了，她动弹不得。
例1：As his friends will come tonight，he is busy preparing the dinner.
翻译：他的朋友今晚要来，他正忙着准备晚餐。
改写：His friends to come tonight，he is busy preparing the dinner.
例2：As there was no bus, we had to walk home.
翻译：由于没有公共汽车，我们只好走回家。
改写：There being no bus, we had to walk home.
仿写句式六：形容词开头
又累又饿，安妮跪了下来。
Tired and hungry, Anne knelt down.
例1：Sam was curious to know who she was, so he tiptoed into the room.
翻译：萨姆很好奇她是谁，因此踮着脚走进了屋子里。
改写：Curious to know who she was, he tiptoed into the room.
例2：Bob was unable to say a word and was frozen because of the horrible scene.
翻译：那可怕的场面让鲍勃一句话说不出来，他惊呆了。
改写：Unable to say a word, Bob was frozen because of the horrible scene.
仿写句式七：副词开头
悄悄地，他一句话没说离开了。
翻译：Quietly, he left without saying a word.
例1：Arthur skipped up the street joyfully.
翻译：亚瑟高高兴兴地在街上蹦蹦跳跳地走。
改写：Joyfully, Arthur skipped up the street.
例2：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Soon the forest became very dark.
翻译：但是再也没有直升飞机飞来，天色又晚。黑暗立马笼罩着整个树林。
改写：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.
仿写句式八：现在分词开头
好奇地四处闲逛后，吉米溜进了厨房。
翻译：Wandering around with curiosity, Jim slipped into the kitchen.
例1：He slowly walked across the grassland, aimed at the lion and shot.
翻译：他慢慢地走过草地，把枪对准了狮子后然射击了。
改写：Slowly walking across the grassland, he aimed at the lion and shot.
例2：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Though Jane felt disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night.
翻译：但是再也没有直升飞机飞来，天色又晚。简感到很失望，不得不一个人再待一个晚上。
改写：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night.
仿写句式九：过去分词开头
问他发生了什么事情，他低下了头。。
翻译：When he was asked what had happened, he lowered his head.
例1：As he was surrounded by his grandchildren, the old man felt joyful.
翻译：被孙子孙女们环绕着，这位老人感到很快乐。
改写：Surrounded by his grandchildren, the old man felt joyful.
例2：The girl was lost in thought, so she didn’t notice the approaching danger.
翻译：那个女孩陷入沉思，因此没有注意到危险正在靠近。
改写：Lost in thought, the girl didn’t notice the approaching danger.
例3：As he was torn by sorrow and compassion, Franklin stood silently, weighing what to say.
当富兰克林默默地站着，悲伤和同情让他心碎，犹豫着该说些什么。
改写：Torn by sorrow and compassion, Franklin stood silently, weighing what to say.
仿写句式十：动词不定式开头（多作目的状语）
To get there on time, we hurriedly departed from home.
翻译：为了准时到达那里，我们匆忙从家里出发。
例1：I turned around and left quietly in order to avoid embarrassment.
翻译：为了避免尴尬，我转身静静地离开了。
改写：To avoid embarrassment, I turned around and left quietly.
例2：The firefighter laid down his life in order to save the child.
翻译：为了救那个男孩，消防员献出了生命。
改写：To save the child, the firefighter laid down his life.
一、无灵主语开头
1. (2023年1月浙江读后续写)I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. I noticed a flash of movement.
翻译：我正要离开这时蜂鸟出现了。一阵儿活动引起了我的注意。
改写： I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention.
2. (2023新高考读后续写)When the host announced that I won the first prize, I felt very excited.
翻译：当主持人宣布我获得一等奖时，我激动得心砰砰跳。
改写：When the host announced that I won the first prize, my heart was thumping/pounding with excitement.
二、倒装句开头
1. (2021新高考读后续写) Jenna was so ashamed that she shed guilty tears with head drooping.
翻译：杰娜羞愧得低着头流下了愧疚的泪水。
改写： So ashamed was Jenna that she shed guilty tears with head drooping.
2. (2022年6月浙江读后续写) I will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food.
翻译：我永远不会忘记他们被给予食物时看我的样子。
改写： Never will I forget the way they looked at me when they were given food.
3. (2021新高考读后续写) Their father told them not to panic and handed each of them a wet towel, helping them clean the mess up quickly.
翻译：“别慌！”爸爸递给每人一个湿毛巾，帮他们迅速收拾残局。
改写：“Don’t panic!” their father handed each of them a wet towel, helping them clean the mess up quickly.
三、对话或独白开头
1. (2021新高考读后续写)The happiest mother in the world kept thanking her twins.
翻译：这个世上最幸福妈妈不停地重复着，“谢谢你们，宝贝。”
改写： “Thank you, my honey.” the happiest mother in the world kept repeating these words.
2. (2022新高考读后续写)They shouted enthusiastically and cheered for him.
翻译：他们都热情地叫喊着，“加油！你真棒！为你自豪！”
改写：“Come on! You can make it! We are proud of you!” they shouted enthusiastically.
四、介词短语开头
1.(2021新高考读后续写) Soon the kitchen was filled with sweet smell.
翻译：刹那间，厨房里芳香四溢。
改写： In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen.
2. (2022年6月浙江读后续写) We were relieved that they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile.
翻译：让我们如释重负的是，他们看到我的微笑也礼貌地报之以微笑。
改写： To our relief, they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile.
3. (2023新高考读后续写) It is your recognition and guidance that I wrote the article.
翻译：没有你的认可和指导，我就不会写好这篇文章。
改写： Without your recognition and guidance, I couldn’t have written this article.
五、独立主格结构开头
1. (2020浙江读后续写) Anger overwhelming him, he smashed his paws madly against the wire fence, thrusting his sharp claws at us.
翻译：愤怒压倒了他，他疯狂地用爪子猛击铁丝网，用锋利的爪子向我们刺来。
改写：Anger overwhelming him, he smashed his paws madly against the wire fence, thrusting his sharp claws at us.
2. (2020新高考读后续写) Soon Bernard returned with an empty basket and some coins were in his hand.
翻译：伯纳德很快带着空篮子回来了，手里拿着硬币。
改写： Coins in hand, Bernard soon returned with an empty basket and.
3. (2021新高考读后续写) When everything was settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
翻译：一切安排妥当，爸爸离开厨房，答应保密。
改写： Everything settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
六、形容词开头
1. Though she was weak, Jenny struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance..
翻译：尽管很虚弱，珍妮挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。
改写：Weak as she was, Jenny struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance..
2. Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. As I was afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.
翻译：突然一只兔子从马匹前跳出来。我害怕我会伤害这个可爱的小生物，我自动发出一声喊叫来阻止我的马。
改写：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.
3. (2021新高考读后续写) As she was speechless and happy, Mum held the twins tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
翻译：妈妈说不出话来，高兴极了，把双胞胎紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。
改写：Speechless and happy, she held the twins tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
七、副词开头
1.(2020浙江读后续写) An absolute darkness ruled the woods in seconds.
翻译：顷刻间，一片漆黑笼罩了整个森林。
改写：Instantly, an absolute darkness ruled the woods.
2. (2021新高考读后续写）At once, the father joined the twins and they started all over again.
翻译：爸爸立马加入双胞胎和他们一起开始张罗着。
改写：Immediately, the father joined the twins and they started all over again.
3. (2021浙江读后续写) I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad.
翻译：我自豪地拿出自己的钱递给爸爸。
改写：Proudly I took out my own money and handed it to Dad.
八、现在分词开头
1. It was daybreak when Jane woke up. As she felt refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.
翻译：简醒来的时候天已经亮了。她感到神清气爽，继续沿着小溪散步，寻找出去的路。
改写： It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.
2. (2021新高考读后续写)After looking at the well prepared breakfast, the three exchanged an understanding smile.
翻译：看着备好的早餐，三人会意地笑了。
改写：Looking at the well prepared breakfast, the three exchanged an understanding smile.
3. (2023新高考读后续写) He held my hands and said “Congratulations! You are a good writer, so keep writing.”
翻译：他握着我的手说，“祝贺呀！你是好作家，继续写下去！”
改写： Holding my hands, he said “Congratulations! You are a good writer, so keep writing.”
九、过去分词开头
4. (2021新高考读后续写)Father was astonished and was rooted on the floor, staring at the scene with eyebrow frowning.
翻译：爸爸很吃惊，愣在地上，皱着眉头注视着现场。
改写：Astonished, Father was rooted on the floor, staring at the scene with eyebrow frowning.
5. (2022新高考读后续写) After he was encouraged by my words, David looked at me with shining eyes, with his big toothy smile on his lovely face.
翻译：受我的鼓励，戴维闪亮的眼睛看着我，可爱的脸上挂着大大的笑容。
改写：Encouraged by my words, David looked at me with shining eyes, with his big toothy smile on his lovely face.
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专题二十五 读后续写之如何写好故事开头
读后续写将优质性输入和创造性产出紧密结合的新途径，它要求学生在读完一篇结尾缺失的外语材料后，在充分理解原文的基础上，补全内容。它向学习者提供了丰富的语境和模仿材料， 激发了他们的表达动机，通过与文本互动协同产生了拉平效应，来促进外语学习。
如何写出精彩开头
仿写句式一：无灵主语开头（没有生命的名词作主语）
1.用情感状态的抽象名词作主语
Despair seized him at the thought of his failure in the exam.
2 ．行为动作的名词作主语
The thought of seeing her son very soon filled her heart with great happiness.
3.身体部位/音容笑貌类名词作主语
Tears welled up in Lily’s eyes.
4.时间/地点/场景类名词作主语
常见的时间、地点类名词：silence ，hush 安静沉默；dusk 黄昏；dawn 黎明；morning；afternoon；night 等。
常见的谓语动词：see 看见；witness 见证；find 发现；fall 降临等。
Beijing has witnessed great changes in recent years.
5. 自然现象类名词作主语
常见的自然现象类名词：sun；sunshine；moon；moonlight；fog ，mist 雾；rain；earthquake 地震等。
常见的谓语动词：blanket 覆盖；come ；bring；prevent 妨碍阻止；strike 打击侵袭；threaten 威胁/即将 来临等。
An earthquake comes like a thief in the night, without warning.
The thick fog blanketed the field.
6.事物类名词作主语
My watch says it is eleven.
7.用 it 作形式主语，其逻辑主语是后面的短语或从句
It was no more important whether he won the first place or not.
8. there be句型
There is a growing concern over the population growth.
9. 谚语中的无灵主语句
Fortune knocks once at least at every man's door.人人都有好运的一天。
Constant dropping wears a stone.水滴石穿。
例1：He felt a bit sad inside him.
翻译：他内心涌起一阵阵悲伤。
改写：A ripple/flush/wave/surge of sadness welled up inside him.
例2：With tears streaming down her face, he couldn’t say a word.
翻译：眼泪顺着她的脸流下来，她说不出话来。
改写：Words failed her, with tears streaming down her face,
例3：Suddenly she felt very excited when she caught sight of a familiar figure.
翻译：突然她看到一个熟悉的身影,内心涌起一阵兴奋.
改写：Suddenly a wave of happiness and excitement seized/took hold of/swept over her when she caught sight of a familiar figure.
仿写句式二：倒装句开头
只有这样你才能学好英语。
Only in this way can you learn English well.
例1：A young man sat by the lake with a book in his hand.
翻译：湖边坐着一个手里拿着一本书的年轻男孩。
改写：By the lake sat a young man with a book in his hand.
例2：(2020新高考读后续写) When they got home, they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags.
改写：Hardly had they got home when they made a lot of popcorn and put it in the special bags.
例3：(2021新高考读后续写) Their mother never expected her day to start with such a warm gift.
翻译：在任何情况下，他们的母亲也不会想到她的一天会以这样的暖心礼物开始的。
改写：Under no circumstances had their mother expected her day to start with such a warm gift.
仿写句式三：对话或独白开头
“太可怕了，”这个年轻人用颤抖的声音回答道。
“Awfully,” the young man answered in a trembling voice.
例1：Rachel called to see who got there first as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.
翻译：“让我们看看谁先到那里去！”瑞秋一边叫着，一边飞快地蹬着车从珍妮身边冲过去。
改写：“Let’s see who gets there first!” Rachel shouted, as she pedaled fast and zoomed past Jenny.
例2：The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Paul shouted at Mac and told him to get into the car.
翻译：汽车突然停在他面前。“上车！”保罗对麦克喊道。
改写：The car abruptly stopped in front of him. “Get into the car.” Paul shouted at Mac.
仿写句式四：介词短语开头
孩子们高兴地找到了出路。
In delight, children found their way out.
例1：They kept their eyes open to read the results surprisingly.
翻译：她们好奇地瞪着眼睛看着结果。
改写：In surprise, they kept their eyes open to read the results.
例2：The man didn’t say a word and picked Jim up off the motorbike.
翻译：那个男人一言不发地，把吉米从摩托车上扶起来。
改写：Without saying a word, the man picked Jim up off the motorbike.
仿写句式五：独立主格结构开头
Her shirt caught on a nail，she could not move.
她的衬衫被钉子钩住了，她动弹不得。
例1：As his friends will come tonight，he is busy preparing the dinner.
翻译：他的朋友今晚要来，他正忙着准备晚餐。
改写：His friends to come tonight，he is busy preparing the dinner.
例2：As there was no bus, we had to walk home.
翻译：由于没有公共汽车，我们只好走回家。
改写：There being no bus, we had to walk home.
仿写句式六：形容词开头
又累又饿，安妮跪了下来。
Tired and hungry, Anne knelt down.
例1：Sam was curious to know who she was, so he tiptoed into the room.
翻译：萨姆很好奇她是谁，因此踮着脚走进了屋子里。
改写：Curious to know who she was, he tiptoed into the room.
例2：Bob was unable to say a word and was frozen because of the horrible scene.
翻译：那可怕的场面让鲍勃一句话说不出来，他惊呆了。
改写：Unable to say a word, Bob was frozen because of the horrible scene.
仿写句式七：副词开头
悄悄地，他一句话没说离开了。
翻译：Quietly, he left without saying a word.
例1：Arthur skipped up the street joyfully.
翻译：亚瑟高高兴兴地在街上蹦蹦跳跳地走。
改写：Joyfully, Arthur skipped up the street.
例2：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Soon the forest became very dark.
翻译：但是再也没有直升飞机飞来，天色又晚。黑暗立马笼罩着整个树林。
改写：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Immediately, an absolute darkness ruled the forest.
仿写句式八：现在分词开头
好奇地四处闲逛后，吉米溜进了厨房。
翻译：Wandering around with curiosity, Jim slipped into the kitchen.
例1：He slowly walked across the grassland, aimed at the lion and shot.
翻译：他慢慢地走过草地，把枪对准了狮子后然射击了。
改写：Slowly walking across the grassland, he aimed at the lion and shot.
例2：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Though Jane felt disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night.
翻译：但是再也没有直升飞机飞来，天色又晚。简感到很失望，不得不一个人再待一个晚上。
改写：But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Feeling disappointed, Jane had to stay alone for another night.
仿写句式九：过去分词开头
问他发生了什么事情，他低下了头。。
翻译：When he was asked what had happened, he lowered his head.
例1：As he was surrounded by his grandchildren, the old man felt joyful.
翻译：被孙子孙女们环绕着，这位老人感到很快乐。
改写：Surrounded by his grandchildren, the old man felt joyful.
例2：The girl was lost in thought, so she didn’t notice the approaching danger.
翻译：那个女孩陷入沉思，因此没有注意到危险正在靠近。
改写：Lost in thought, the girl didn’t notice the approaching danger.
例3：As he was torn by sorrow and compassion, Franklin stood silently, weighing what to say.
当富兰克林默默地站着，悲伤和同情让他心碎，犹豫着该说些什么。
改写：Torn by sorrow and compassion, Franklin stood silently, weighing what to say.
仿写句式十：动词不定式开头（多作目的状语）
To get there on time, we hurriedly departed from home.
翻译：为了准时到达那里，我们匆忙从家里出发。
例1：I turned around and left quietly in order to avoid embarrassment.
翻译：为了避免尴尬，我转身静静地离开了。
改写：To avoid embarrassment, I turned around and left quietly.
例2：The firefighter laid down his life in order to save the child.
翻译：为了救那个男孩，消防员献出了生命。
改写：To save the child, the firefighter laid down his life.
一、无灵主语开头
1. (2023年1月浙江读后续写)I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. I noticed a flash of movement.
翻译：我正要离开这时蜂鸟出现了。一阵儿活动引起了我的注意。
改写： I was just about to leave when the hummingbird appeared. A flash of movement caught my attention.
2. (2023新高考读后续写)When the host announced that I won the first prize, I felt very excited.
翻译：当主持人宣布我获得一等奖时，我激动得心砰砰跳。
改写：When the host announced that I won the first prize, my heart was thumping/pounding with excitement.
二、倒装句开头
1. (2021新高考读后续写) Jenna was so ashamed that she shed guilty tears with head drooping.
翻译：杰娜羞愧得低着头流下了愧疚的泪水。
改写： So ashamed was Jenna that she shed guilty tears with head drooping.
2. (2022年6月浙江读后续写) I will never forget the way they looked at me when they were given food.
翻译：我永远不会忘记他们被给予食物时看我的样子。
改写： Never will I forget the way they looked at me when they were given food.
3. (2021新高考读后续写) Their father told them not to panic and handed each of them a wet towel, helping them clean the mess up quickly.
翻译：“别慌！”爸爸递给每人一个湿毛巾，帮他们迅速收拾残局。
改写：“Don’t panic!” their father handed each of them a wet towel, helping them clean the mess up quickly.
三、对话或独白开头
1. (2021新高考读后续写)The happiest mother in the world kept thanking her twins.
翻译：这个世上最幸福妈妈不停地重复着，“谢谢你们，宝贝。”
改写： “Thank you, my honey.” the happiest mother in the world kept repeating these words.
2. (2022新高考读后续写)They shouted enthusiastically and cheered for him.
翻译：他们都热情地叫喊着，“加油！你真棒！为你自豪！”
改写：“Come on! You can make it! We are proud of you!” they shouted enthusiastically.
四、介词短语开头
1.(2021新高考读后续写) Soon the kitchen was filled with sweet smell.
翻译：刹那间，厨房里芳香四溢。
改写： In a flash, sweet smell filled the air in the kitchen.
2. (2022年6月浙江读后续写) We were relieved that they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile.
翻译：让我们如释重负的是，他们看到我的微笑也礼貌地报之以微笑。
改写： To our relief, they smiled politely back at me when they saw my smile.
3. (2023新高考读后续写) It is your recognition and guidance that I wrote the article.
翻译：没有你的认可和指导，我就不会写好这篇文章。
改写： Without your recognition and guidance, I couldn’t have written this article.
五、独立主格结构开头
1. (2020浙江读后续写) Anger overwhelming him, he smashed his paws madly against the wire fence, thrusting his sharp claws at us.
翻译：愤怒压倒了他，他疯狂地用爪子猛击铁丝网，用锋利的爪子向我们刺来。
改写：Anger overwhelming him, he smashed his paws madly against the wire fence, thrusting his sharp claws at us.
2. (2020新高考读后续写) Soon Bernard returned with an empty basket and some coins were in his hand.
翻译：伯纳德很快带着空篮子回来了，手里拿着硬币。
改写： Coins in hand, Bernard soon returned with an empty basket and.
3. (2021新高考读后续写) When everything was settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
翻译：一切安排妥当，爸爸离开厨房，答应保密。
改写： Everything settled, Father left the kitchen, promising to keep their secret.
六、形容词开头
1. Though she was weak, Jenny struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance..
翻译：尽管很虚弱，珍妮挣扎着站起来，继续寻求帮助。
改写：Weak as she was, Jenny struggled to her feet, continuing searching for assistance..
2. Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. As I was afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.
翻译：突然一只兔子从马匹前跳出来。我害怕我会伤害这个可爱的小生物，我自动发出一声喊叫来阻止我的马。
改写：Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Afraid that I might hurt the lovely small creature, I automatically let out a cry to stop my horse.
3. (2021新高考读后续写) As she was speechless and happy, Mum held the twins tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
翻译：妈妈说不出话来，高兴极了，把双胞胎紧紧地抱在怀里，眼里噙满了泪水。
改写：Speechless and happy, she held the twins tightly into her arms, with tears welling up in her eyes.
七、副词开头
1.(2020浙江读后续写) An absolute darkness ruled the woods in seconds.
翻译：顷刻间，一片漆黑笼罩了整个森林。
改写：Instantly, an absolute darkness ruled the woods.
2. (2021新高考读后续写）At once, the father joined the twins and they started all over again.
翻译：爸爸立马加入双胞胎和他们一起开始张罗着。
改写：Immediately, the father joined the twins and they started all over again.
3. (2021浙江读后续写) I proudly took out my own money and handed it to Dad.
翻译：我自豪地拿出自己的钱递给爸爸。
改写：Proudly I took out my own money and handed it to Dad.
八、现在分词开头
1. It was daybreak when Jane woke up. As she felt refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.
翻译：简醒来的时候天已经亮了。她感到神清气爽，继续沿着小溪散步，寻找出去的路。
改写： It was daybreak when Jane woke up. Feeling refreshed, she continued to walk along the stream to find the way out.
2. (2021新高考读后续写)After looking at the well prepared breakfast, the three exchanged an understanding smile.
翻译：看着备好的早餐，三人会意地笑了。
改写：Looking at the well prepared breakfast, the three exchanged an understanding smile.
3. (2023新高考读后续写) He held my hands and said “Congratulations! You are a good writer, so keep writing.”
翻译：他握着我的手说，“祝贺呀！你是好作家，继续写下去！”
改写： Holding my hands, he said “Congratulations! You are a good writer, so keep writing.”
九、过去分词开头
4. (2021新高考读后续写)Father was astonished and was rooted on the floor, staring at the scene with eyebrow frowning.
翻译：爸爸很吃惊，愣在地上，皱着眉头注视着现场。
改写：Astonished, Father was rooted on the floor, staring at the scene with eyebrow frowning.
5. (2022新高考读后续写) After he was encouraged by my words, David looked at me with shining eyes, with his big toothy smile on his lovely face.
翻译：受我的鼓励，戴维闪亮的眼睛看着我，可爱的脸上挂着大大的笑容。
改写：Encouraged by my words, David looked at me with shining eyes, with his big toothy smile on his lovely face.
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