专题二十八：读后续写之如何巧妙设置结尾高考英语二轮专题复习学案
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【2024高分攻略】高考英语二轮复习学案(通用版)
专题二十八 读后续写之如何巧妙设置结尾
在读后续写中,结尾发挥着至关重要的作用。除基础的揭示故事结局外,从表现手法上,结尾还应照应前面的标题和开头,完成整个文章结构。
一、首尾呼应式结尾
首尾呼应式结尾指续写文章的结尾与原文开头互相呼应,这是一种在续写文章中比较常用的结尾方法。这种方式不仅能保证续写文章的前后逻辑一致,不偏离主题,而且还能唤起读者心理上的共鸣。
例：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Opening her eyes, she couldn’t believe what she had seen. Before she could ask any question, their father turned up and told his wife about how the twins had made preparations to give her the surprise breakfast, and what trouble they had gone through when making the porridge and toast. Disbelief gave way to excitement and pride. Hugging them in her arms, she said,“Thank you, children. It’s such an unforgettable Mother’s Day for me.” The twins were excited when they found they could do something for their mother.
分析:原文首句是The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day.,续写结尾时可以利用孩子们的愿望得以实现来呼应首句,以The Twins were excited when they found they could do something for their mother.为结尾。这种结尾方式不仅能够保证续写不偏离主题,还可以增加故事的连贯性。
（2020年高考I卷）妈妈带领孩子们一起帮助贫穷的家庭的经历
原文：The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline , some people in the town had lost their jobs . Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet . People were trying to help each other meet the challenges .
麦迪斯一家住在一个小社区。由于经济衰退，镇上的许多人都失业了。许多家庭都在艰难维持生计。人们也在努力帮助彼此迎接这次的挑战。
续写：Bernard’s business worked out quite well . The smile on his face was as brilliant as the sun on a spring day . He also decided to do what he could to help those in need.
伯纳德的生意很顺利。他脸上的笑容就如春日里的阳光那样灿烂。他也决定尽他所能去帮助那些有需要的人。
二、哲理式结尾
哲理式结尾是指在续写文章结尾时用一两句话总结全文的中心思想,并用客观语言表述,起到升华主题的作用。
例：I didn’t know how to deal with the matter but luckily the waitress arrived out of breath.“Please stop fighting! It’s my fault.” Hearing these remarks, all of us stopped fighting. The waitress explained that her mother became badly ill last night, which contributed to her fault. The moment she finished her accounting for the fault, she burst into tears. At a loss, the young man, my husband, I and even my kids tried to comfort her. Eventually, we said sorry to each other. This special experience in someone else’s room made me realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
分析:这是一篇讲述作者一家在旅行途中在宾馆走错房间的故事续写结尾。最后一句This special experience in someone else’s room made me realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.总结了作者的写作意图,即“原谅是一种美德”。这种篇末扣题的手法是我们平时续写文章结尾的时候可以模仿的。
常用哲理式结尾句：
I.助人为乐型升华句式
1.Not only did he keep in mind the help of Meredith ' s family , but he also did whatever he could to help those in need .
他不仅把麦迪斯家人的帮助记在心里了，而且他也尽他所能去帮助其他有需要的人。
【句式点评】该句运用了固定结构 not only ...but also... 且应用了部分倒装高级句型。
2.It was Mom that made my childhood colorful . And it was also she that showed me the true meaning of giving .
是妈妈让我的童年多彩绚丽。也是妈妈向我展示了“给与”的真正意义。
【句式点评】应用了强调句的结构
3.From then on, I would go all out to help those in need. Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.
从那时起，我会尽我最大的努力去帮助有需要的人。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
4.Small kindness can bring rich reward .
小的善举可以带来丰富的回报。
5.Small act can bring / contribute to / give rise to a big difference .
小小举动，大大影响。
6.A small act / gesture of kindness will perhaps melt / cure one ' s loneliness .
小小的善举，可能会融化/治愈一个人的孤独。
7.The miracle is this : the more we share, the more we have .
这就是奇迹：分享的越多，收获的越多。
8.Love matters more than anything , which can conquer / overcome any difficulty .
爱是最重要的，它可以击败世间任何困难。
9.Kindness costs nothing to give , but the influence it has on people ' s lives is priceless.
善良不需要付出代价，但它对人们生命的影响却是无价的。
10.Cold as the rain was , great warmth filled his heart like never before ．
尽管雨天很冷，但他心里感到前所未有的温暖。
11.Even though I can’t remember their names, I can see their faces when I close my eyes as if it were yesterday.
即使我记不住他们的名字了，但是当我闭上眼睛我就能看到他们的脸，仿佛一切就在昨天。
12.In a flash , with tears welling up in my eyes , I was touched beyond words . I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest .
刹那间，我热泪盈眶，感动得难以言表。我觉得很温暖，就像胸口有九个太阳。
From that I have learned a lot about my father and life. I have learned that if you come from a family with love, you will show a lot of kindness to people who are suffering. Just one single kind act may change someone’s life.
从那件事我学到了好多关于父亲和生活的道理。如果你来自一个有爱的家庭，你也会向那些遭受苦难的人施与善意。仅仅一个小小的善举就有可能改变他人的生活。
II.个人成长型升华句式
1.Actually, every individual possesses talent.Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.
事实上，每个人都有天赋。当你发现它的时候你要勇敢，也要努力。你能最终创造奇迹。
2.You glow differently when your confidence is fueled by belief in yourself instead of validation of others.
当你的自信来自于对自己的信任而不是别人的认可时，你会散发出独特的光芒。
3.We can not change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is to hold a positive attitude.
我们不能改变我们的过去;我们不能改变事实。然而,我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。
4.You can’t always have a good day. But you can always choose to face a bad day with a good attitude.
你没法保证每天都很美好，但是你总可以选择用好的态度来面对糟糕的日子。
5.Don’t compare yourself to others,because there is no comparison between the sun and the moon.They shine when it’s their time.
不要总是把自己和别人想必比，因为太阳和月亮之间没有可比性。它们总在各自的时段发光。
6.Whenever something bad happens , you have three choices . You can either let it define you , destroy you , or strengthen you.
不管什么时候有不好的事情发生时，你都有三个选择。要么让它定义你，要么毁灭你，要么强大你。
7.Today’s experience was like an everlasting flower ,blooming in the river of my memories .
永不凋谢的花朵，永远绽放在我的记忆里。
8.The cloud removed instantly , sunshine landed on the happy teardrops in my eyes .
刹那间，乌云散去，阳光洒在了我充满喜悦的泪水上。
9.Adversity / Setbacks in life is either a blessing in disguise or a fruitful lesson .
生活中的逆境要么是因祸得福，要么是卓有成效的教训。
10.Where there is a will , there is a way .
有志者事竟成。
11.No pains, no gains.
不劳无获。
12.We will meet various challenges in life, but never give up easily. Just as the famous saying goes, sunshine always comes after the rain.
人生中会碰到各种挑战，但是不要轻易放弃。正如名言所说，风雨后总能见阳光。
III.勇于追梦型升华句式
1.It's never too late to chase your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will acquire a chance to realize your dreams.
追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会,你就有机会实现梦想。
2.There were six pence all over the ground,but he looked up and saw the moon.
满地都是六便士，但是他却抬头看见了月亮。———《月亮与六便士》
3.Life is just like that.You have to pick up six pence even though you don’t want to;but only in this way can you afford to raise your head and look at the moon, even though you can’t reach it.
人生就是如此。你不得不捡起那六便士，即使你并不想捡；但是，只有捡起六便士你才能抬头看月亮，即使它遥不可及。
4.You can ' t go back and change the beginning ,but you can start where you are and change the ending .
你无法回头去改变开始，但是你可以从现在开始，改变结局。
5.Seize the day , and chase your dreams . As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it , you will stand a chance to realize your dreams .
把握今天，追求梦想。只要你抓住每个机会并充分利用它，你就有可能实现你的梦想。
6.Where there is dream, there is hope. 哪里有梦想，哪里就有希望。
7.Never allow reality to get in the way of your dream.永远不要让现实阻挡你的梦想。
8.A dream doesn’t become reality through magic; It takes sweat,determination and hard work.
梦想不会通过魔法变成现实；它需要汗水、决心和勤奋。
9.Don' t let others hijack your dreams. Be captain of your own ship and master of your own destiny .
不要让别人劫持你的梦想。做自己船的船长和自己命运的主人。
10.All you need to do is focusing on one thing and get started.
你需要做的就是专注于一件事情并且立即开始。
11.Starting before feeling ready is one of the habits of successful people.
在感觉准备好之前开始行动是成功人士的习惯之一。(先完成再完美)
12.when you are clear about where to go, the rest of the world will either help you get there or get out of the way.
当你清楚想要去哪里时，世界要么助你一臂之力要么为你让路。
13.You are never too old to set another goal or to dream a new dream．
设定一个新的目标或去梦想一个新的梦想永远都不迟。
IV.亲情友情型升华句式
1..Family and friends are hidden treasures .
家人和朋友就是隐藏的财富。
2.Family , a wonderful shelter and a 24- hour harbor , is always there for us .
家，永远为我们敞开，就是一个极佳的庇护所，一个24小时的港湾。
3.Family is to us what harbor is to ships. 家庭之于我们，就像港口之于船只。
4.Family is a life jacket in the stormy sea of life .--J . K . Rowling
家人是人生海洋中的救生衣。——杰克 罗琳
5.Family is like branches on a tree ;we all grow in different directions , but our roots remain as one .
家人就像一棵树上的树枝。虽然我们朝不同方向各自生长，但是我们的根是一体的。
6.Families are the compass that guides us .
家人就是为我们领航的指南针。
7.Family : where life begins and love never ends
家是我们生命开始的地方，也是爱永不枯竭的地方。
8.With laughter lingering in the room , their sincere friendship blossomed in the summer like a flower that never fades .
伴随着笑声回荡在房间里，他们真挚的友谊之花盛开在这个夏季，永不凋败。
9.Life will hit us unexpectedly, but there is always someone to help us out and there is always hope waiting for us.
生活总会出乎意料地打击我们，但总有人帮助我们,总有希望在等着我们。
10.Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.
正如俗话说，一个人可以走得很远，但一群人可以走得更远。
11.That affection towards our family is like a cup of green tea, refreshing and heartwarming
那份亲情像一杯清茶,沁人心脾，温暖人心。
12.I learned that I could contribute to the household in my own way.
我了解到我可以用自己的方式为家庭做贡献。
三、脱困型结尾
1. when I recovered from the shock, I realized that my most frightening but magical experience was captured forever in a single image.
当我从震惊中恢复过来时，我意识到这个可怕但神奇的经历已经被永远定格在一张照片中。
2.That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.
那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆中。
2.Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.
最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困难。
3.Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.
直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。
4.The day was really an adventure, but I thought it was worthwhile.
那天真是一次惊险的奇遇，但是我认为是值得的。
5.The pictures taken were wonderful. I felt the close-up snap we took were worth the danger we experienced.
拍摄的照片很棒。我觉得这个特写镜头值得我们经历的危险。
6.That unforgettable experience was carved into my heart and nothing would be able to erase it. It turns out that there's always a way out of any trouble as long as we never give up our hope.
那段难忘的经历刻在我的心里，没有什么能够抹去它。事实证明，只要我们不放弃希望就总有办法摆脱困境
四、谚语名言式结尾
1.From then on, I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others. Just as a saying goes: “Rose given and fragrance in hands. ”
从那时起，我就决定把“爱”传递给别人。正如一句谚语所说：“赠人玫瑰，手留余香。”
2.There were six pence all over the ground,but he looked up and saw the moon.
满地都是六便士，但是他却抬头看见了月亮。———《月亮与六便士》
（该句源自毛姆的经典小说《月亮与六便士》。六便士指的是现实，月亮则代表理想。该句可以用在理想VS现实的续写中）
3.I came , I saw , I conquered.
我所到之处，我所见之事，我所向披靡。---凯撒大帝
4.There is a crack in everything . That is how the light gets in .
万物皆有裂隙，那是光照进来的地方。
5.Every cloud has a sliver lining .
朵朵乌云衬银边／黑暗中总有一线光明。（暗示即将出现转机）
6.It is better to light a candle than to curse the darkness .
与其诅咒黑暗，不如燃起蜡烛。
7. When life gives you lemons , make lemonade with it .
当生活给了你柠檬，那就把它做成柠檬水。
8.To change the worst situation into best , one should take immediate actions .
想要把最遭的情况扭转为最好的情况，我们应该立刻采取行动。
9.A journey of a thousand miles must begin with a single step .
千里之行，始于足下。
五、借景抒情式结尾
借景抒情是指在叙述故事的过程中戛然而止,转为写景,以景代情作结,使得短文“此时无情胜有情”,显得意犹未尽,可以使读者在景物描写中体味到景的意境,驰骋想象,寓情于景,达到不言情而情无限、言有尽而意无穷的艺术效果。
例：On the eighth floor, I saw a man reading a book in the day room, who happened to be Michael Goldsteins’. Cautiously, I slipped approaching him,slowly passing the wallet, breaking the message from Hannah. For a long time, he just stared at the blank before him, merrily, sinking in sweet memories in the past. Then, something like a smile wrinkled the corners of his eyes. Old as he was, he stood up and stepped downstairs swiftly, followed by me. In Hannah’s room, they hugged, tightly. Balmy breeze wiping my face, a sudden warmth just hit me.
分析:该篇文章的结尾借景抒情,情景交融,营造了一幅和谐温暖的画面,令人回味无穷。该续写结尾将人物感动的心情与微风拂面的环境相结合,当他们相拥的那一刻、微风拂面,温暖袭人是再自然不过的事了。这个结尾给人一种水到渠成的感觉,也让人明白——爱,温暖人心。同时该文结尾方式与主题(爱)相称,融情于景,加深了读者的感受。
六、画面定格式结尾
1.The children said loudly, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.
孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐！”妈妈紧紧地拥抱着他们，一次又一次地吻着他们。
2.In the meanwhile , the wolf might feel the people ' s threats around , so it began to step back slowly . Soon , it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance .
同时，狼可能感受到了人们对它的威胁，所以它开始慢慢后退。很快，它就离开道路，消失在远处。
3.They hugged each other tightly , the warm sunlight shining on them and the birds singing in the sky .
他们紧紧地拥抱着彼此，温暖的阳光洒在他们身上，鸟儿在天空中叫着。
4.When the judge blew the starting whistle, I spotted his usual big toothy smile.
当裁判吹了开始哨后，我看到了他那一如既往地咧嘴笑。
5.Despite the chilly autumn wind, their home was filled with the warmth of love and reunion.
尽管秋天的风冷嗖嗖，但是他们家里却满是爱与重逢的温暖。
七、成长改变结尾
1.学习知识促“改变’
It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.
学习永远为时不晚。每人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。
2.发挥天赋促“改变”
Actually, each of us possesses a unique talent that we are born with. As long as we are good at discovering it and developing it to the fullest, and also make efforts, we can create miracles in the end.
事实上,我们每个人都拥有与生俱来的与众不同的天赋，只要我们善于发现它并将其发挥到极致,加上努力,最终你就一定能创造奇迹 。
3.追逐梦想促“改变”
It's never too late to pursue your dream. As long as you seize every opportunity and take full advantage of it, and also make every effort, you are sure to realize your dreams.
追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住并充分利用机会，加上努力，你就一定会实现梦想。
4.克服困难促“改变”
The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and hardships. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don't give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal finally.
通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标。
5.战胜恐惧促“改变”
Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear,build your confidence and reach your goal.
战胜恐惧、建立自信和实现目标，需要决心和乐观。
6.战胜自卑促“改变”
I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence. Now, I am proud of what I look like, because I have come to realize that it is your personality that decides who you really are.
我笑了，因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源。现在，我为我的样子感到骄傲,因为我已经意识到，决定你真正是谁的是你的个性...
7.战胜消极促“改变”
Attitude is more important than facts for us. We cannot change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude.
对我们来说，态度比事实更重要。我们不能改变我们的过去，我们不能改变事实。然而，我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。
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专题二十八 读后续写之如何巧妙设置结尾
在读后续写中,结尾发挥着至关重要的作用。除基础的揭示故事结局外,从表现手法上,结尾还应照应前面的标题和开头,完成整个文章结构。
一、首尾呼应式结尾
首尾呼应式结尾指续写文章的结尾与原文开头互相呼应,这是一种在续写文章中比较常用的结尾方法。这种方式不仅能保证续写文章的前后逻辑一致,不偏离主题,而且还能唤起读者心理上的共鸣。
例：The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. Opening her eyes, she couldn’t believe what she had seen. Before she could ask any question, their father turned up and told his wife about how the twins had made preparations to give her the surprise breakfast, and what trouble they had gone through when making the porridge and toast. Disbelief gave way to excitement and pride. Hugging them in her arms, she said,“Thank you, children. It’s such an unforgettable Mother’s Day for me.” The twins were excited when they found they could do something for their mother.
分析:原文首句是The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day.,续写结尾时可以利用孩子们的愿望得以实现来呼应首句,以The Twins were excited when they found they could do something for their mother.为结尾。这种结尾方式不仅能够保证续写不偏离主题,还可以增加故事的连贯性。
（2020年高考I卷）妈妈带领孩子们一起帮助贫穷的家庭的经历
原文：The Meredith family lived in a small community. As the economy was in decline , some people in the town had lost their jobs . Many of their families were struggling to make ends meet . People were trying to help each other meet the challenges .
麦迪斯一家住在一个小社区。由于经济衰退，镇上的许多人都失业了。许多家庭都在艰难维持生计。人们也在努力帮助彼此迎接这次的挑战。
续写：Bernard’s business worked out quite well . The smile on his face was as brilliant as the sun on a spring day . He also decided to do what he could to help those in need.
伯纳德的生意很顺利。他脸上的笑容就如春日里的阳光那样灿烂。他也决定尽他所能去帮助那些有需要的人。
二、哲理式结尾
哲理式结尾是指在续写文章结尾时用一两句话总结全文的中心思想,并用客观语言表述,起到升华主题的作用。
例：I didn’t know how to deal with the matter but luckily the waitress arrived out of breath.“Please stop fighting! It’s my fault.” Hearing these remarks, all of us stopped fighting. The waitress explained that her mother became badly ill last night, which contributed to her fault. The moment she finished her accounting for the fault, she burst into tears. At a loss, the young man, my husband, I and even my kids tried to comfort her. Eventually, we said sorry to each other. This special experience in someone else’s room made me realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.
分析:这是一篇讲述作者一家在旅行途中在宾馆走错房间的故事续写结尾。最后一句This special experience in someone else’s room made me realize forgiveness is a kind of virtue.总结了作者的写作意图,即“原谅是一种美德”。这种篇末扣题的手法是我们平时续写文章结尾的时候可以模仿的。
常用哲理式结尾句：
I.助人为乐型升华句式
1.Not only did he keep in mind the help of Meredith ' s family , but he also did whatever he could to help those in need .
他不仅把麦迪斯家人的帮助记在心里了，而且他也尽他所能去帮助其他有需要的人。
【句式点评】该句运用了固定结构 not only ...but also... 且应用了部分倒装高级句型。
2.It was Mom that made my childhood colorful . And it was also she that showed me the true meaning of giving .
是妈妈让我的童年多彩绚丽。也是妈妈向我展示了“给与”的真正意义。
【句式点评】应用了强调句的结构
3.From then on, I would go all out to help those in need. Only in this way could more and more people help each other in the future.
从那时起，我会尽我最大的努力去帮助有需要的人。只有这样，将来才能有越来越多的人互相帮助。
4.Small kindness can bring rich reward .
小的善举可以带来丰富的回报。
5.Small act can bring / contribute to / give rise to a big difference .
小小举动，大大影响。
6.A small act / gesture of kindness will perhaps melt / cure one ' s loneliness .
小小的善举，可能会融化/治愈一个人的孤独。
7.The miracle is this : the more we share, the more we have .
这就是奇迹：分享的越多，收获的越多。
8.Love matters more than anything , which can conquer / overcome any difficulty .
爱是最重要的，它可以击败世间任何困难。
9.Kindness costs nothing to give , but the influence it has on people ' s lives is priceless.
善良不需要付出代价，但它对人们生命的影响却是无价的。
10.Cold as the rain was , great warmth filled his heart like never before ．
尽管雨天很冷，但他心里感到前所未有的温暖。
11.Even though I can’t remember their names, I can see their faces when I close my eyes as if it were yesterday.
即使我记不住他们的名字了，但是当我闭上眼睛我就能看到他们的脸，仿佛一切就在昨天。
12.In a flash , with tears welling up in my eyes , I was touched beyond words . I felt so warm as if there were nine suns in my chest .
刹那间，我热泪盈眶，感动得难以言表。我觉得很温暖，就像胸口有九个太阳。
From that I have learned a lot about my father and life. I have learned that if you come from a family with love, you will show a lot of kindness to people who are suffering. Just one single kind act may change someone’s life.
从那件事我学到了好多关于父亲和生活的道理。如果你来自一个有爱的家庭，你也会向那些遭受苦难的人施与善意。仅仅一个小小的善举就有可能改变他人的生活。
II.个人成长型升华句式
1.Actually, every individual possesses talent.Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.
事实上，每个人都有天赋。当你发现它的时候你要勇敢，也要努力。你能最终创造奇迹。
2.You glow differently when your confidence is fueled by belief in yourself instead of validation of others.
当你的自信来自于对自己的信任而不是别人的认可时，你会散发出独特的光芒。
3.We can not change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is to hold a positive attitude.
我们不能改变我们的过去;我们不能改变事实。然而,我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。
4.You can’t always have a good day. But you can always choose to face a bad day with a good attitude.
你没法保证每天都很美好，但是你总可以选择用好的态度来面对糟糕的日子。
5.Don’t compare yourself to others,because there is no comparison between the sun and the moon.They shine when it’s their time.
不要总是把自己和别人想必比，因为太阳和月亮之间没有可比性。它们总在各自的时段发光。
6.Whenever something bad happens , you have three choices . You can either let it define you , destroy you , or strengthen you.
不管什么时候有不好的事情发生时，你都有三个选择。要么让它定义你，要么毁灭你，要么强大你。
7.Today’s experience was like an everlasting flower ,blooming in the river of my memories .
永不凋谢的花朵，永远绽放在我的记忆里。
8.The cloud removed instantly , sunshine landed on the happy teardrops in my eyes .
刹那间，乌云散去，阳光洒在了我充满喜悦的泪水上。
9.Adversity / Setbacks in life is either a blessing in disguise or a fruitful lesson .
生活中的逆境要么是因祸得福，要么是卓有成效的教训。
10.Where there is a will , there is a way .
有志者事竟成。
11.No pains, no gains.
不劳无获。
12.We will meet various challenges in life, but never give up easily. Just as the famous saying goes, sunshine always comes after the rain.
人生中会碰到各种挑战，但是不要轻易放弃。正如名言所说，风雨后总能见阳光。
III.勇于追梦型升华句式
1.It's never too late to chase your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will acquire a chance to realize your dreams.
追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会,你就有机会实现梦想。
2.There were six pence all over the ground,but he looked up and saw the moon.
满地都是六便士，但是他却抬头看见了月亮。———《月亮与六便士》
3.Life is just like that.You have to pick up six pence even though you don’t want to;but only in this way can you afford to raise your head and look at the moon, even though you can’t reach it.
人生就是如此。你不得不捡起那六便士，即使你并不想捡；但是，只有捡起六便士你才能抬头看月亮，即使它遥不可及。
4.You can ' t go back and change the beginning ,but you can start where you are and change the ending .
你无法回头去改变开始，但是你可以从现在开始，改变结局。
5.Seize the day , and chase your dreams . As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it , you will stand a chance to realize your dreams .
把握今天，追求梦想。只要你抓住每个机会并充分利用它，你就有可能实现你的梦想。
6.Where there is dream, there is hope. 哪里有梦想，哪里就有希望。
7.Never allow reality to get in the way of your dream.永远不要让现实阻挡你的梦想。
8.A dream doesn’t become reality through magic; It takes sweat,determination and hard work.
梦想不会通过魔法变成现实；它需要汗水、决心和勤奋。
9.Don' t let others hijack your dreams. Be captain of your own ship and master of your own destiny .
不要让别人劫持你的梦想。做自己船的船长和自己命运的主人。
10.All you need to do is focusing on one thing and get started.
你需要做的就是专注于一件事情并且立即开始。
11.Starting before feeling ready is one of the habits of successful people.
在感觉准备好之前开始行动是成功人士的习惯之一。(先完成再完美)
12.when you are clear about where to go, the rest of the world will either help you get there or get out of the way.
当你清楚想要去哪里时，世界要么助你一臂之力要么为你让路。
13.You are never too old to set another goal or to dream a new dream．
设定一个新的目标或去梦想一个新的梦想永远都不迟。
IV.亲情友情型升华句式
1..Family and friends are hidden treasures .
家人和朋友就是隐藏的财富。
2.Family , a wonderful shelter and a 24- hour harbor , is always there for us .
家，永远为我们敞开，就是一个极佳的庇护所，一个24小时的港湾。
3.Family is to us what harbor is to ships. 家庭之于我们，就像港口之于船只。
4.Family is a life jacket in the stormy sea of life .--J . K . Rowling
家人是人生海洋中的救生衣。——杰克 罗琳
5.Family is like branches on a tree ;we all grow in different directions , but our roots remain as one .
家人就像一棵树上的树枝。虽然我们朝不同方向各自生长，但是我们的根是一体的。
6.Families are the compass that guides us .
家人就是为我们领航的指南针。
7.Family : where life begins and love never ends
家是我们生命开始的地方，也是爱永不枯竭的地方。
8.With laughter lingering in the room , their sincere friendship blossomed in the summer like a flower that never fades .
伴随着笑声回荡在房间里，他们真挚的友谊之花盛开在这个夏季，永不凋败。
9.Life will hit us unexpectedly, but there is always someone to help us out and there is always hope waiting for us.
生活总会出乎意料地打击我们，但总有人帮助我们,总有希望在等着我们。
10.Just as the saying goes, one person can go far, but a group of persons can travel farther.
正如俗话说，一个人可以走得很远，但一群人可以走得更远。
11.That affection towards our family is like a cup of green tea, refreshing and heartwarming
那份亲情像一杯清茶,沁人心脾，温暖人心。
12.I learned that I could contribute to the household in my own way.
我了解到我可以用自己的方式为家庭做贡献。
三、脱困型结尾
1. when I recovered from the shock, I realized that my most frightening but magical experience was captured forever in a single image.
当我从震惊中恢复过来时，我意识到这个可怕但神奇的经历已经被永远定格在一张照片中。
2.That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.
那天是如此难忘，它将永远留在我的记忆中。
2.Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.
最后，我们走出了困住我们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊！事实证明，只要我们保持冷静，就总有办法摆脱困难。
3.Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the way.
直到那时，我才意识到，正是勇敢才能克服一切困难。
4.The day was really an adventure, but I thought it was worthwhile.
那天真是一次惊险的奇遇，但是我认为是值得的。
5.The pictures taken were wonderful. I felt the close-up snap we took were worth the danger we experienced.
拍摄的照片很棒。我觉得这个特写镜头值得我们经历的危险。
6.That unforgettable experience was carved into my heart and nothing would be able to erase it. It turns out that there's always a way out of any trouble as long as we never give up our hope.
那段难忘的经历刻在我的心里，没有什么能够抹去它。事实证明，只要我们不放弃希望就总有办法摆脱困境
四、谚语名言式结尾
1.From then on, I made up my mind to pass on “love” to others. Just as a saying goes: “Rose given and fragrance in hands. ”
从那时起，我就决定把“爱”传递给别人。正如一句谚语所说：“赠人玫瑰，手留余香。”
2.There were six pence all over the ground,but he looked up and saw the moon.
满地都是六便士，但是他却抬头看见了月亮。———《月亮与六便士》
（该句源自毛姆的经典小说《月亮与六便士》。六便士指的是现实，月亮则代表理想。该句可以用在理想VS现实的续写中）
3.I came , I saw , I conquered.
我所到之处，我所见之事，我所向披靡。---凯撒大帝
4.There is a crack in everything . That is how the light gets in .
万物皆有裂隙，那是光照进来的地方。
5.Every cloud has a sliver lining .
朵朵乌云衬银边／黑暗中总有一线光明。（暗示即将出现转机）
6.It is better to light a candle than to curse the darkness .
与其诅咒黑暗，不如燃起蜡烛。
7. When life gives you lemons , make lemonade with it .
当生活给了你柠檬，那就把它做成柠檬水。
8.To change the worst situation into best , one should take immediate actions .
想要把最遭的情况扭转为最好的情况，我们应该立刻采取行动。
9.A journey of a thousand miles must begin with a single step .
千里之行，始于足下。
五、借景抒情式结尾
借景抒情是指在叙述故事的过程中戛然而止,转为写景,以景代情作结,使得短文“此时无情胜有情”,显得意犹未尽,可以使读者在景物描写中体味到景的意境,驰骋想象,寓情于景,达到不言情而情无限、言有尽而意无穷的艺术效果。
例：On the eighth floor, I saw a man reading a book in the day room, who happened to be Michael Goldsteins’. Cautiously, I slipped approaching him,slowly passing the wallet, breaking the message from Hannah. For a long time, he just stared at the blank before him, merrily, sinking in sweet memories in the past. Then, something like a smile wrinkled the corners of his eyes. Old as he was, he stood up and stepped downstairs swiftly, followed by me. In Hannah’s room, they hugged, tightly. Balmy breeze wiping my face, a sudden warmth just hit me.
分析:该篇文章的结尾借景抒情,情景交融,营造了一幅和谐温暖的画面,令人回味无穷。该续写结尾将人物感动的心情与微风拂面的环境相结合,当他们相拥的那一刻、微风拂面,温暖袭人是再自然不过的事了。这个结尾给人一种水到渠成的感觉,也让人明白——爱,温暖人心。同时该文结尾方式与主题(爱)相称,融情于景,加深了读者的感受。
六、画面定格式结尾
1.The children said loudly, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.
孩子们大声说：“母亲节快乐！”妈妈紧紧地拥抱着他们，一次又一次地吻着他们。
2.In the meanwhile , the wolf might feel the people ' s threats around , so it began to step back slowly . Soon , it ran away off the road and disappeared in the distance .
同时，狼可能感受到了人们对它的威胁，所以它开始慢慢后退。很快，它就离开道路，消失在远处。
3.They hugged each other tightly , the warm sunlight shining on them and the birds singing in the sky .
他们紧紧地拥抱着彼此，温暖的阳光洒在他们身上，鸟儿在天空中叫着。
4.When the judge blew the starting whistle, I spotted his usual big toothy smile.
当裁判吹了开始哨后，我看到了他那一如既往地咧嘴笑。
5.Despite the chilly autumn wind, their home was filled with the warmth of love and reunion.
尽管秋天的风冷嗖嗖，但是他们家里却满是爱与重逢的温暖。
七、成长改变结尾
1.学习知识促“改变’
It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.
学习永远为时不晚。每人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。
2.发挥天赋促“改变”
Actually, each of us possesses a unique talent that we are born with. As long as we are good at discovering it and developing it to the fullest, and also make efforts, we can create miracles in the end.
事实上,我们每个人都拥有与生俱来的与众不同的天赋，只要我们善于发现它并将其发挥到极致,加上努力,最终你就一定能创造奇迹 。
3.追逐梦想促“改变”
It's never too late to pursue your dream. As long as you seize every opportunity and take full advantage of it, and also make every effort, you are sure to realize your dreams.
追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住并充分利用机会，加上努力，你就一定会实现梦想。
4.克服困难促“改变”
The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and hardships. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don't give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal finally.
通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标。
5.战胜恐惧促“改变”
Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear,build your confidence and reach your goal.
战胜恐惧、建立自信和实现目标，需要决心和乐观。
6.战胜自卑促“改变”
I smiled as I eventually realized the real source of confidence. Now, I am proud of what I look like, because I have come to realize that it is your personality that decides who you really are.
我笑了，因为我最终意识到了自信的真正来源。现在，我为我的样子感到骄傲,因为我已经意识到，决定你真正是谁的是你的个性...
7.战胜消极促“改变”
Attitude is more important than facts for us. We cannot change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude.
对我们来说，态度比事实更重要。我们不能改变我们的过去，我们不能改变事实。然而，我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。
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