(共18张PPT)
A person I love
writing
Who do you like
What does/did he/she look like
What do you like about him/her
My dad
I love my dad. He is tall. He has black hair and wears glasses.
My dad is a doctor. Every day, he goes to work and helps sick people. Sometimes he has to work all day and all night, but he still finds time to help me with my studies. He also plays ball games with me every weekend.
My dad is hard-working, patient and kind. He is a great dad!
1.help sick people (同义词)
2.all day and all night
translate:
Answer the following questions:
Who is this person
What does he look like
What does he do
What does he do for you
Why do you love him
3.He still finds time to help me with my studies.
4.He also plays ball games with me.(同义句)
A person I love
a family member
a good friend
a teacher or a great person
Who are you going to write about
B. Write a short article. Use the plan and the sample article.
Paragraph1
paragraph2
paragraph3
Who is this person
What does/did he/she look like
What does/did he/she do
(at work/at home/at school)
Why do you love him/her
(personality/actions/words)
Paragraph 1
Paragraph 2
Paragraph 3
A person I love
who/appearance
activities(time/
place)
reason
Paragraph 1
Who is this person
What does he/she look like
Dad, Mum, my best friend Jim
middle-aged,
tall, thin, fat, short, good-looking, pretty, slim, strong, medium build
long hair, short hair, black hair, grey hair
wears glasses
My dad
I love my dad. He is tall. He has black hair and wears glasses
Paragraph 2
What does he/she do
a doctor, a teacher, an engineer, a boss, a worker, a shop assistant, an accountant
work for eight hours
help sick people; help the students study well
My dad is a doctor. Every day, he goes to work and helps sick people. Sometimes he has to work all day and all night, but he still finds time to help me with my studies. He also plays ball games with me every weekend.
Paragraph 3
Why do you love him/her
patient, kind, friendly, cheerful,
hard-working, helpful, confident, nice, generous, polite, clever, humorous, outgoing, shy, active, honest, quiet,
My dad is hard-working, patient and kind. He is a great dad!
素材积累
★The best thing about her is her sense of humor.
★She never talks about people behind their backs.
★He is the kind of person you can always believe in.
★The woman is well-dressed and looks very fashionable.
★He is the same age as his brother but he looks much younger.
★The reason why I like her is that she has always made everyone around her feel safe and happy.
★There is no doubt that he is one of the greatest men in history.
★ My neighbor is a kind old man and is generous to people around.
★When people first meet my father, they often think he is a very strict father. But when they get to know him better, they realize that he is very kind in fact.
A person I love
Attention:
字迹是否工整;
冠词使用是否得当;
是否注意动词的使用,e.g. has…hair/eyes; is tall/kind…;
4. 固定搭配使用是否正确;
5. 是否注意到时态;
6. 文章是否完整。
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