应用文写作之通知和演讲或致辞限时练
1.元旦即将来临,学生会(The Students’ Union)将举办一场英语晚会(an English Evening party),现请你以学生会的名义发一份英语书面通知,欢迎全校师生参加,通知包含以下要点:
晚会主题:迎新春,享受英语
时间:12月31日星期五晚上8:00-10:00
节目内容:1.英语短剧(English short-play performances) 演唱英语歌曲,讲英语故事
2.邀请外国学生为我们演唱中国歌曲
其他:1.全体学生要求准时出席;
2.晚会上不要乱扔垃圾(扔垃圾:litter);
3.欢迎大家光临晚会,玩得开心。
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2、你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together,内容包括:
短片内容:学校的发展;
放映时间、地点;
(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:(1)词数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3、假设你是学生会主席李华,当地电视台将举办外国人参与的"汉字听写大赛",委托你向学校国际部留学生通知相关事宜,请你写一则书面通知,要点包括:
1.参赛日期:2017年3月15日;
2.复习范围:中国四大名著中的词汇;
3.奖品:中国四大名著套书;
4.联系人及电话:李华12345678910。
注意:词数100左右。
Notice
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4.假如你是英华国际学校学生会主席李华,你在食堂发现有浪费粮食现象,打算向全校师生作"FOOD FOR LIFE"的演讲,请你用英文写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.演讲的主题;
2.演讲的原因;
3.你的倡议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Good morning, respected teachers and dear fellow students!
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Thank you for your listening!
5、假设你是学生会主席李华,你校将举办英语读写大赛。请你为校英语报写一则通知,内容包括:
(1)大赛时间及目的;
(2)参赛对象;
(3)比赛内容:读写任务(task-based writing)和主题写作;
(4)报名截止日期。
注意:词数100左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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6、假定你是李华,你负责的英语俱乐部拟在暑假期间组织主题为“Stay out of danger and enjoy a safe holiday”急救培训课程。请你用英语写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 时间和地点;
2. 培训内容(观看关于意外受伤的短片,专家教授急救技能等);
3. 培训课的意义。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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7.你校正在举办英语周活动,你准备参加以Sharing为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你结一个事例,写一篇演讲稿,谈谈Sharing的作用。演讲稿应包含下列要点:
1. 有关Sharing的一个事例:时间,人物,内容,过程,影响等;
2. 你的感悟。
注意:1. 词数120左右.
2. 演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
It’s a great honor to be here and share something with you.
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8、.假定你是李华,是新华中学的一名中学生。你班的外教Mr. Johnson即将回国,请你代表同学们在欢送会上致辞,内容包括:
1、对Mr. Johnson致谢;
2、准备了礼物,以留作纪念;
3、希望Mr. Johnson以后常回来看看。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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19应用文写作之通知和演讲或致辞限时练
1.元旦即将来临,学生会(The Students’ Union)将举办一场英语晚会(an English Evening party),现请你以学生会的名义发一份英语书面通知,欢迎全校师生参加,通知包含以下要点:
晚会主题:迎新春,享受英语
时间:12月31日星期五晚上8:00-10:00
节目内容:1.英语短剧(English short-play performances) 演唱英语歌曲,讲英语故事
2.邀请外国学生为我们演唱中国歌曲
其他:1.全体学生要求准时出席;
2.晚会上不要乱扔垃圾(扔垃圾:litter);
3.欢迎大家光临晚会,玩得开心。
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NOTICE
In order to celebrate the coming new year, an English Evening party with a theme of “Welcome new year and Enjoy your English” is going to be held by our Students’ Union from 8 pm to 10 pm on Friday, 31st. December on our school playground. There will be many activities from the students, such as English short-play performances, English story telling and English songs. What’s more, some foreign students will be invited to sing Chinese songs for us at the party. All students are expected to attend it on time and required not to litter. At last, you are welcome to our English party and we are sure you will enjoy yourself.
The Students’ Union
【写作步骤】
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一则通知;元旦即将来临,学生会(The Students’ Union)将举办一场英语晚会(an English Evening party),现请你以学生会的名义发一份英语书面通知,欢迎全校师生参加。人称应为第三人称,时态应为一般将来时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:theme(主题),Welcome new year and Enjoy your English(迎新春,享受英语),from 8 pm to 10 pm on Friday, 31st. December(12月31日星期五晚上8:00-10:00),English story telling and English songs(演唱英语歌曲,讲英语故事),on time(准时)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【写作亮点】
范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如in order to,with a theme of,such as,what’s more,at last等等;本文中的被动语态运用地非常自然和流畅,如In order to celebrate the coming new year, an English Evening party about/with a theme of “Welcome new year and Enjoy your English”is going to be held by our Students’ Union from 8 pm to 10 pm on Friday, 31st. December on our school playground.;What’s more, some foreign students will be invited to sing Chinese songs for us at the party.;All students are expected to attend it on time and required not to litter.全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。
2、你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知,请大家观看一部英语短片Growing Together,内容包括:
短片内容:学校的发展;
放映时间、地点;
(3)欢迎对短片提出意见。
注意:(1)词数100左右;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【品读范文】
Notice
In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. It is organized by the Student Union. Here are some relevant details about it.
To begin with, the name of the movie is Growing Together, which is about the development of our beloved school. As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments.
The Student Union
June 8, 2018
【提分词汇】
have a better understanding of 更好地理解
outstanding 杰出的
relevant details about ...相关的细节
meaningful adj. 有意义的
5.a heated discussion 一场激烈的讨论
【亮点句型】
In order to have a better understanding of our school, an outstanding English short movie about our school will be shown in the library from 2:30 to 4:00 in the afternoon on June 9th. 为了更好的了解我们学校,6月9日下午2:30 - 4:00将在图书馆放映一部关于我们学校的优秀英语短片。
As we all expect, it will be not only meaningful but also interesting. 正如我们所期待的那样,它不仅有意义,而且有趣。
What’s more, everyone of you will be welcome to take part (participate) in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your own comments..更重要的是,我们欢迎你们每个人都来参加,欣赏电影,然后进行热烈的讨论,并给出自己的意见。
3、假设你是学生会主席李华,当地电视台将举办外国人参与的"汉字听写大赛",委托你向学校国际部留学生通知相关事宜,请你写一则书面通知,要点包括:
1.参赛日期:2017年3月15日;
2.复习范围:中国四大名著中的词汇;
3.奖品:中国四大名著套书;
4.联系人及电话:李华12345678910。
注意:词数100左右。
Notice
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【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达是应用文中的书面通知,写作时时态以一般现在时为主,人称以第二人称为主。应用文写作是语言交际能力的一个重要部分,能够体现出考生综合语言运用能力以及逻辑思维能力。通知类书面表达要注意语言的得体性、交际性和准确性,最能考查考生的实际交际能力,是高考考查的重点之一。本篇书面表达根据题干和要点提示可分三段来写:
第一段:交代写作背景,引入话题,表明写作意图。
第二段:要点列举,包括时间、要求和奖品。
第三段:互相转告,有问题联系李华。
【写作素材】
1.为了让大家更好地了解……,我愿与大家分享它的一些细节。
To help you have a better understanding of...,I’d like to share with you some details about it.
2.一个令人兴奋的……活动将要举行了。
An exciting event...is around the corner.
3.按计划, …… 将在……举行。
As scheduled, ... will be held at...
4.确保……/注意……
Make sure that.../Note that...
5.你最好提前准备……
You’d better prepare...in advance.
6.希望你们参加……
You are expected to participate in...
7.希望对……感兴趣的人都来参加。
Those who are interested in ... are expected to come.
8.请不要错过获奖机会。
Don’t miss the chance of being the winner.
9.请互相转告。
Please inform whomever you meet.
【范文赏析】
Notice
To help you further understand Chinese culture, the local TV station will organize a Chinese Character Dictation Competition. I’d like to share with you some details about it.
As scheduled, the competition is to be held on March 15, 2017. You are supposed to get prepared before the competition. Above all, it’s recommended that you read the Four Great Classical Novels and focus on the phrases in them. Whoever wants to go, please sign your name here as soon as possible. Don’t miss the chance of being the winner, and the appealing prize "a set of the Four Great Classical Novels" is waiting for you. Please inform whomever you meet. For any question, call Li Hua at 12345678910. I’m sure you will benefit a lot from it.
【亮点点击】
正文部分分三段来写,第一段简述活动背景,引入参赛这一话题,段末用"I’d like to share with you some details about it."使上下文衔接更加紧密。
第二段中过渡性词语As scheduled,Above all等的使用,使文章条理清晰,结构严谨,过渡自然,行文流畅。
高级表达,如句句中的不定式短语作目的状语,句中that引导的宾语从句以及句中whoever引导的让步状语从句的使用使文章句式丰富,提升了文章的得分档次。
范文中各种高级词汇和短语(文中加粗部分)的交替使用,也为文章增加了亮点和得分点。
4.假如你是英华国际学校学生会主席李华,你在食堂发现有浪费粮食现象,打算向全校师生作"FOOD FOR LIFE"的演讲,请你用英文写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
1.演讲的主题;
2.演讲的原因;
3.你的倡议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Good morning, respected teachers and dear fellow students!
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Thank you for your listening!
【参考范文】
Good morning. respected teachers and dear fellow students!
I feel so honored/privileged to deliver a speech themed at food for life. The past years have witnessed the severeness of food crisis worldwide. However, some of us haven't attached great importance to the issue. Food waste is still a common sight, especially in the canteen.
Facing the stern reality, I think it's high time that we stopped it. Not only are we expected to raise the awareness of saving food, but also go into action immediately. Do remember, every bit of effort counts in the process of saving food for a better life.
Thank you for your listening!
【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇题为“"FOOD FOR LIFE"”的演讲稿,号召同学们珍惜粮食。
【写作步骤】
1.词汇积累
发表演讲:maker a speech=deliver a speech
重视:pay attention to=attached great importance to
严峻的:serious → severe
行动:take action= go into action
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Food waste is still a common sight, especially in the canteen.
拓展句:It is especially in canteen that Food waste is still a common sight.
【写作亮点】
[高分句型1]:Not only are we expected to raise the awareness of saving food, but also go into action immediately.这句话运用了倒装句。
[高分句型2]:Do remember, every bit of effort counts in the process of saving food for a better life.这句话运用了强调句。
5、假设你是学生会主席李华,你校将举办英语读写大赛。请你为校英语报写一则通知,内容包括:
(1)大赛时间及目的;
(2)参赛对象;
(3)比赛内容:读写任务(task-based writing)和主题写作;
(4)报名截止日期。
注意:词数100左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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【范文】
Notice
Aimed at promoting our interest in reading and improving our writing skills, an English reading & writing contest is to be held in our school next month.
The contest consists of two parts, task-based writing and theme writing, both of which are good ways to show our English ability. All the students in our school are welcome to take part in the contest. Three winners will be chosen for a 15-day summer camp in London. If you're interested, please come to the Student Council and sign up before September 10.
There is no doubt that participants will benefit a lot from the contest. Don't miss the valuable chance!
6、假定你是李华,你负责的英语俱乐部拟在暑假期间组织主题为“Stay out of danger and enjoy a safe holiday”急救培训课程。请你用英语写一则通知,内容包括:
1. 时间和地点;
2. 培训内容(观看关于意外受伤的短片,专家教授急救技能等);
3. 培训课的意义。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Notice
With the summer vacation approaching, the English club plans to organize a first aid training class, whose theme is “Stay out of danger and enjoy a safe holiday”.
As is scheduled, it will be given in the school lecture hall from 4:00p.m. to 5:00p.m. next Wednesday. At the beginning of the class, a short film will be shown, helping us students know what accidental injuries will frequently happen and what harm they will cause. After that, an expert will give a lecture on how to avoid such injuries. Then under his professional guidance, we will learn how to offer first aid to those who get injured. By attending the class, not only will we master some basic and practical first aid skills, but also we will raise our awareness of safety and try to keep away from danger.
The training class will definitely prove to be a useful experience. Those who are interested are welcome to it!
The School English Club
7.你校正在举办英语周活动,你准备参加以Sharing为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你结一个事例,写一篇演讲稿,谈谈Sharing的作用。演讲稿应包含下列要点:
1. 有关Sharing的一个事例:时间,人物,内容,过程,影响等;
2. 你的感悟。
注意:1. 词数120左右.
2. 演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone!
It’s a great honor to be here and share something with you.
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Good morning, everybody!
It's a great honour to be here and share something with you. I still remember how depressed I was after the midterm examination in Senior One, when I had hoped to be still among the best as in junior high school. At that time, my best friend came up and asked me to go to the playground. “You're always the best in my heart,” she comforted me. “There is always a road ahead.” Strangely, my heart was filled with warmth I had never sensed before. I felt much better.
Sharing is part of beauty. Just as a Swedish proverb goes, “Shared joy is a double joy; shared sorrow is half a sorrow.” Sharing can broaden our horizons. As for me, by doing this, I live a happier and more confident life.
Thanks for your attention!
【写作分析】这是一篇以Sharing为主题的英语演讲比赛,首先要用正确的格式去写,会用一些短语,了解英语的句子结构与汉语的不同,需要平时对课本上的课文要正确地理解,会仿照课文的句子写出正确的英语句子,这里是有关Sharing的一个事例:时间,人物,内容,过程,影响等以及自己的感悟。所以注意用一般现在时,用第一人称来叙述。
【亮点说明】短文用了一些短语和固定句式,为文章增色不少,如:It's a great honour todo sth.、share something with、come up、live a happier and more confident life等,为了上下文的衔接还用了一些过渡词如:at that time、strangely等,使文章更加连贯完整。全文主要用的是一般现在时,时态做到使用准确。
8、.假定你是李华,是新华中学的一名中学生。你班的外教Mr. Johnson即将回国,请你代表同学们在欢送会上致辞,内容包括:
1、对Mr. Johnson致谢;
2、准备了礼物,以留作纪念;
3、希望Mr. Johnson以后常回来看看。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
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Good afternoon, everyone! Mr. Johnson has been teaching us for one year, and he will have to go back home. We all are very grateful for his devotion. We have witnessed Mr. Johnson working as our English teacher in his particular way. His patience with us students was impressive and his hard work has inspired many students. He is also a warm-hearted man, who spends a lot of his spare time staying in the school`s English Corner answering questions from us students.
To show our gratitude to him, we have made some presents for him ourselves, hoping that seeing these presents, he will remember us. Welcome to China again, Mr. Johnson. Do remember that there are a group of children in China missing you!
Thanks for listening!
【写作步骤】
第一步: 根据提示可知,本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一则发言稿,时态应为一般现在时和一般过去时。关键要点如下:①外教Mr. Johnson即将回国;②对Mr. Johnson致谢;③准备了礼物,以留作纪念;④希望Mr. Johnson以后常回来看看。
第二步:根据关键要点,确定关键词,如:go back home(回国),be grateful for(感谢),presents(礼物),show our gratitude to(表示感谢)等。
第三步:根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。
第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,使之自然流畅,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面。
【写作亮点】
本篇范文结构清晰,内容完整,过渡衔接严谨自然,符合发言稿的要求,其中不乏亮点句型。
非限制性定语从句的使用He is also a warm-hearted man, who spends a lot of his spare time staying in the school`s English Corner answering questions from us students.
非谓语动词的使用To show our gratitude to him, we have made some presents for him ourselves, hoping that seeing these presents, he will remember us.
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