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高 中 英 语 书 面 表 达
基 本 要 求
1 . 结构清晰,要点突出显眼
具体做法:作文要分3段或者4段。
一般以略(Beginning)详(Body)略(Ending)模式呈现。
2. 英语作文不要写成记叙文文体,观点+证据/信息支撑
具体做法:一般是开头要开门见山,直切话题;
主体部分一般为两到三个要点表达,
要1个要点+1个信息支撑(可以是原因,现象,意义等)
要点与要点间要有衔接词;
结尾要互动话题;
段与段要过渡衔接自然;
4. 卷面干干净净,书写工整,赏心悦目
3. 非特殊情况,绝不能出现真实学校名,真实地名,城市名和人
名,否则一律0分
常用过渡句和衔接词
Beginning : 1. the reasons are as follows.
2. I am more than delighted to share sth with you .
3. I will tell you something about it.
4. Knowing that you are interested in …, I am writing to
tell you… (some relevant details).
Body : 1. Firstly, To begin with, …
2. Secondly, Then/Next/In addition/Besides, Moreover, …
3. On the one hand…On the other hand…
4. What’s more, What’s worse, However, Last but not least…
Ending: 1. In a word, In short, All in all, In summary,…
2. As for me, Personally, In my opinion, As far as I am concerned
3. Not only…but also…
4. I would appreciate it if……
5. Looking forward to your reply.
假定你是眉山一中的学生李华,得知英国学生Tom下学期将到你校学习,
请根据以下提示,给他写封邮件:
表示欢迎;
介绍本校情况(如校园环境,老师教学等);
给Tom提出两点建议,帮助他未来更快适应新环境。
注意:
词数100左右;
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。
参考词汇:
适应新环境 adapt to new environment
Step One(审题) :
审时态:
审人称:
一般现在时+将来时
the first person
Step Two:
列结构(段落安排)
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
Para 4
greeting/self-introduction + background + purpose
welcome+ basic information (campus & teachers)
suggestions
proper ending (echo the topic + interaction/hope)
words and phrases for reference:
向某人简单介绍某物
2.一名交换生
3. 不仅……而且……
4. 欣赏美丽的风景
5. 优秀的学生
6. 这里所有的老师
7. 热情友好
2. an exchange student
3. not only…but also…
4. enjoy beautiful scenery
5. brilliant students
6. all the teachers here
7. be enthusiastic and friendly
introduce sth. to sb. briefly;
give sb. a brief introduction about sth.
words and phrases for reference:
8. be willing to do sth.
9. help sb. with sth.
10. whatever problems you’ll meet
12. adapt to the new environment
13. advise sb. to do sth.
14. relax oneself
15. get rid of homesickness
11. in order to do sth.
8. 愿意做某事
9. 帮助某人某事
10. 无论你遇到什么问题
11. 为了做某事
12. 适应新环境
13. 建议某人做某事
14. 放松自己
15. 摆脱乡愁
16. 对某人有帮助
16. be helpful for sb.
连词成文
Para 1
我是李华,一名来自眉山一中的学生。得知你下学期要来我们学校学习,我想向你简单介绍一下我们学校。
I'm Li Hua, a student from No 1 Middle School of Meishan. Knowing that you will come to our school to study next semester, I would like to give you a brief introduction about my school.
连词成文
Para 2
我很高兴你将成为我们学校的交换生,在这里你不仅可以欣赏美丽的风景,还可以和许多优秀的学生一起学习。
I'm glad you will be an exchange student in our school, where you can not only enjoy beautiful scenery but also study with many brilliant students.
此外,这里所有的老师都热情友好。无论你遇到什么问题,他们都愿意帮助你。
Besides, all the teachers here are enthusiastic and friendly. They are willing to help you with whatever problems you’ll meet.
连词成文
Para 3
另外,为了帮助你快速适应新环境,我建议你学习一些汉语,以便将来更好地交流。
What’s more, in order to help you adapt to the new environment quickly, I advise you to learn some Chinese for better communication in the future.
比如,你可以试着看一些中国电影,这可以帮助你放松自己,学习很多中国文化。别忘了带些你家人和朋友的照片,因为它们可以帮你摆脱思乡之苦。
For instance, you can try to watch some Chinese movies, which can help you relax yourself and learn a lot of Chinese culture. And don’t forget to bring some photos of your families and friends, because they can help you get rid of homesickness.
连词成文
Para 4
我希望这些信息对你有帮助。期待你的到来!
I hope the information can be helpful for you. Looking forward to your coming!
Dear Tom,
I'm Li Hua, a student from No.1 Middle School of Meishan.(self-introduction) Knowing that you will come to our school to study next semester, I would like to give you a brief introduction about my school. (background + purpose)
I'm glad you will be an exchange student in our school, where you can not only enjoy beautiful scenery but also study with many brilliant students. (basic information-campus) Besides, all the teachers here are enthusiastic and friendly. They are willing to help you with whatever problems you’ll meet. (basic information-teachers)
What’s more, in order to help you adapt to the new environment quickly, I advise you to learn some Chinese for better communication in the future. (过渡句) For instance, you can try to watch some Chinese movies, which can help you relax yourself and learn a lot of Chinese culture. (suggestion1) And don’t forget to bring some photos of your families and friends, because they can help you get rid of homesickness. (suggestion2)
I hope the information can be helpful for you. Looking forward to your coming! (proper ending)
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Tom,
I'm Li Hua, a student from No 1 Middle School of Meishan. Knowing that you will come to our school to study next semester, I would like to give you a brief introduction about my school.
I'm glad you will be an exchange student in our school, where you can not only enjoy beautiful scenery but also study with many brilliant students. Besides, all the teachers here are enthusiastic and friendly. They are willing to help you with whatever problems you’ll meet.
What’s more, in order to help you adapt to the new environment quickly, I advise you to learn some Chinese for better communication in the future. For instance, you can try to watch some Chinese movies, which can help you relax yourself and learn a lot of Chinese culture. And don’t forget to bring some photos of your families and friends, because they can help you get rid of homesickness.
I hope the information can be helpful for you. Looking forward to your coming!
Yours,
Li Hua