北京市部分区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末英语汇编：应用文写作（含解析）

北京市部分区
2023-2024学年高一上学期期末考试英语试题分类汇编
应用文写作
北京市昌平区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末英语试题
第二节(20分)
44. 假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“阳光体育”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括：
1.活动形式；
2.活动内容。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
北京市顺义区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末英语试题
五、书面表达(满分20分)
54. 假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友Jack在给你的邮件中提到他很想了解你校近期举办的“冬季长跑”活动情况，请你给他回信，内容包括：
1. 活动开始的时间、地点；
2. 跑前热身，跑中听学生自选的音乐；
3. 你的收获或感受。
注意：1.词数不少于50词；
2.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in our school’s Winter Running Event. I would like to share something about it with you.
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How about your school activities Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
北京市延庆区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末英语试题
第三节：书面表达(共1小题，20分)
54. 根据题目所提出的具体要求，在答题卡上写出一篇连贯完整的短文。词数不少于60。
假如你是李华，来自澳大利亚的交换生Jack春节期间要来北京体验中国文化，你将负责一天的接待。请参考下面提供的信息，给他发邮件，介绍一天的活动安排。
邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Time Activities
morning go to Ditan Temple Fair (庙会) learn about Chinese folk arts watch dragon and lion dances eat local traditional snacks
afternoon …
Dear Jack,
I’m so glad you’re coming to Beijing during the Spring Festival season.
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What do you think of the arrangements If you have any other plans, just let me know.
Lihua
北京市通州区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末英语试题
第二节 (20分)
46. 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim最近开始学习中文，感觉有些困难，所以给你写信，希望你能给他一些学习中文的建议。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1. 你建议及理由；
2. 你的祝愿。
注意: 1. 词数100左右， 开头和结尾已经给出, 不计入总词数；
2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
北京市西城区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末英语试题
Ⅴ. 书面表达(20 分)
57. 假设你是红星中学高一学生李华。你的英国笔友 Jim 在邮件中提到对你的高中生活很感兴趣。请你给他回一封邮件，分享你高中生活中一件难忘的事。
内容包括：
1. 事情经过；
2. 你的感受。
注意： 1. 词数不少于 60；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
答案：
北京市昌平区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末英语试题
【答案】Dear Jim,
Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Sunshine Sports” and need any help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.
I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive manner so that students are interested in it. Besides, all kinds of forms of activities should be arranged. You can arrange some competitions in sports ranging from running, doing gymnastics, playing basketball, playing football and so on, which can make students help students keep fit. You can also carry out different physical education courses.
Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本文是应用文。要求考生给正在策划以“阳光体育”为主题的社团活动的Jim，写一封邮件，给他提供建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
建议：suggestions→advice
此外：Besides→In addition
各种各样的：all kinds of →various
等等：and so on→and the like
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions.
拓展句：I hope that you will get some inspiration from my suggestions.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Sunshine Sports” and need any help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions.(运用了that引导的宾语从句和非谓语动词作状语)
【高分句型2】You can arrange some competitions in sports ranging from running, doing gymnastics, playing basketball, playing football and so on, which can make students help students keep fit. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
北京市顺义区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末英语试题
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in our school’s Winter Running Event. I would like to share something about it with you.
The event started on December 1st, right on our playground. All the students and teachers couldn’t wait to join in the 1000-meter morning run. We first did the warm-up exercises with the help of our PE teachers to get ready for it. Then we started running in two lines along the tracks. More interestingly, we could run to our own chosen music which made the event more enjoyable and dynamic.
After completing the run, I was filled with a special sense of achievement. And I have learned that running can not only build up our body but also provide relief from tension due to hard work.
How about your school activities Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国笔友Jack写封回信，介绍学校近期举办的“冬季长跑”活动情况。
【详解】1.词汇积累
开始：start→begin
参加：join in→take part in
帮助：help→assist
完成：complete→finish
2.句式拓展
同义句替换
原句：More interestingly, we could run to our own chosen music which made the event more enjoyable and dynamic.
拓展句：What was more interesting was that we could run to our own chosen music which made the event more enjoyable and dynamic.
【点睛】【高分句型1】More interestingly, we could run to our own chosen music which made the event more enjoyable and dynamic. (运用了which引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】And I have learned that running can not only build up our body but also provide relief from tension due to hard work. (运用了that引导宾语从句、动名词作主语以及not only…but also句型)
北京市延庆区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末英语试题
【答案】Dear Jack,
I’m so glad you’re coming to Beijing during the Spring Festival season. It’s the best time to experience Chinese holiday culture. I’ve planned a one-day tour for you in Beijing.
In the morning, we will go to Ditan Temple Fair, one of the biggest in Beijing. There you’ll learn about typical Chinese folk arts such as paper cuts and calligraphy artwork. We’ll also watch dragon and lion dances, an important celebration show for the holiday. At noon, we will try some local snacks there. I’m sure it’ll be a new experience for you.
I know you are interested in Peking Opera, so we’ll go to Beijing Liyuan Theatre in the afternoon. You will see what different opera mask colors mean. I believe the stage performance will impress you most!
What do you think of the arrangements If you have any other plans, just let me know.
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生假如是李华，来自澳大利亚的交换生Jack春节期间要来北京体验中国文化，你将负责一天的接待。请参考下面提供的信息，给他发邮件，介绍一天的活动安排。
【详解】1.词汇积累
感兴趣：be interested in→take interest in
重要的：important→vital
代表性的：typical→representative
展览：show→exhibition
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句：In the morning, we will go to Ditan Temple Fair, one of the biggest in Beijing. There you’ll learn about typical Chinese folk arts such as paper cuts and calligraphy artwork.
拓展句：In the morning, we will go to Ditan Temple Fair, one of the biggest in Beijing, where you’ll learn about typical Chinese folk arts such as paper cuts and calligraphy artwork.
【点睛】[高分句型1] You will see what different opera mask colors mean. (运用了what引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] I’m sure it’ll be a new experience for you. (运用了省略that的宾语从句)
北京市通州区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末英语试题
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Jim,
I’m very happy to hear that you are learning Chinese. And I really understand that you are finding Chinese quite challenging to learn. It’s okay for beginners to meet some troubles. Here are some advice I’d like to give you.
First, I suggest you focus on mastering the basics, such as pinyin and commonly used phrases. This will help you build a strong foundation for further learning.
Another suggestion is to immerse yourself in the language as much as possible. Watch Chinese movies or TV shows, listen to Chinese music, and try to communicate with native speakers. This will not only improve your listening and speaking skills but also give you a better understanding of Chinese culture.
Remember, learning a new language takes time and effort. I wish you all the best in your Chinese learning journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国朋友Jim最近开始学习中文，感觉有些困难，要求考生给他写一封电子邮件，给他一些学习中文的建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：happy→ glad
非常：quite→ extremely
挑战性的：challenging→ provocative
提高：improve→ enhance
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：I’m very happy to hear that you are learning Chinese.
拓展句：Hearing that you are learning Chinese, I’m very happy.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m very happy to hear that you are learning Chinese.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】And I really understand that you are finding Chinese quite challenging to learn.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
北京市西城区2023-2024学年高一上学期期末英语试题
【答案】Dear Jim,
How is everything going Glad to know you are interested in my high school life. I want to share with you an unforgettable event.
It was the annual school talent show held last week. When I first heard the news, I wanted to give it a try, but then I hesitated. Though I love singing, I had never sung in public. Finally, to challenge myself, I signed up. In the following weeks, I practiced almost every day. On the day of the show, I was very nervous, but the moment I stepped onto the stage and began my performance, all my fears disappeared. As the last note faded, the audience’s applause and cheers arose. At that time, I felt a great sense of achievement.
The best part of the experience was learning to step outside my comfort zone and embrace new challenges.
It always feels great to share with you these unforgettable moments in my life. Drop me a line when you are free.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国笔友 Jim 在邮件中提到对考生的 高中生活很感兴趣，要求考生给他回一封邮件，分享高中生活中一件难忘的事。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的：glad→ delighted
难忘的：unforgettable→ memorable
紧张的：nervous→tense
消失：disappear→ vanish
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Glad to know you are interested in my high school life.
拓展句：Knowing that you are interested in my high school life, I feel glad.
【点睛】【高分句型1】When I first heard the news, I wanted to give it a try, but then I hesitated. （运用了When引导的时间状语从句）
【高分句型2】Though I love singing, I had never sung in public.（运用了Though引导的让步状语从句）
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