2024 年初中中考英语 书面表达（含解析）

2024 年初中中考英语—— 书面表达
1 ．（2023·江苏淮安 · 统考中考真题）假如你是李华，你们学校的英语社团将开展以“体育锻炼， 健康你我”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请以“Better Exercise, Better Life”为题， 根据以下要点， 写一篇英
语演讲稿。
我的日常锻炼 1. 最喜欢的锻炼方式
2. 锻炼时长
3. 带来益处（不少于两点)
给同学的建议 1. 校内锻炼方式（不少于两点）
2. 校外锻炼方式（不少于两点）
号召 1. 希望大家多锻炼
2. …
参考词汇：做早操 do morning exercises
上体育课 have PE lessons
压力减轻 feel less stressed
合理锻炼 exercise properly
注意：
1. 词数在 80—100 之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
Better Exercise, Better Life
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “Better Exercise, Better Life” .
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That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
2 ．（2023·江苏盐城 · 统考中考真题） 在人生的旅程中， 亲人、朋友、老师、书籍等陪伴我们同行， 助力我们成长。学校英语俱乐部正组织题为“Being with You”的征文比赛， 请根据提示， 写一篇短文
参赛。
1. Who/What do you always like being with 2. Why do you like being with him/her/it (Give two or three reasons) …
注意事项：
1. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
2. 词数 100 左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Being with You
You’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with you,
3 ．（2023·江苏常州 · 统考中考真题） 当前， 有些学生忽视倾听的作用， 针对该情况， 请你根据要
点提示，用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，阐述倾听的重要性。
要点：
1.在学校生活中要倾听及理由；
2.在日常生活中要倾听及理由。
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.词数 100 左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Listening carefully plays an important role in our life.
4 ．（2023·江苏南通 · 统考中考真题） 热心公益， 积极为社会作力所能及的贡献是新时代初中生责 任意识的表现。请你从以下社会行为中选择一种或另选一种相关活动，用英语写一篇关于今年暑假
准备做的一次社会实践活动的短文。要求表达清楚“做什么、为何做、怎样做”。
注意： 1. 词数 90 左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
参考词汇： responsibility n. 责任；义务
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social
practice activity.
5 ．（2023·江苏镇江 · 统考中考真题） 假如你是李华， 你们学校整理出一块空地， 将用于拓宽学生 活动和实践的空间。校英语报登载了校方初拟的两种方案，就这块空地建设文化角还是菜园征求意
见。请根据提示给校报写一封信谈谈你的想法和建议。
A Culture Corner A Vegetable Garden
●display art works ●share ideas and feelings ●hold activities (fashion shows, …) ●develop a sense of beauty ● … ●work with classmates ●learn farming skills ●harvest vegetables (tomatoes, …) ●form the habit of labour (劳动) ● …
要求：
1.所写内容必须包括一种方案的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2.对你所选择的方案说明理由，并对其提出建议；
3.文章不少于 90 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m happy to hear that there is an empty area in our school for building a Culture Corner or a
Vegetable Garden. In my opinion, it’s better to
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Yours,
Li Hua
6 ．（2023·江苏徐州 · 中考真题） 假定你是李华。你班交换留学生 Simon 即将返校， 他对“校园科
技周”非常感兴趣，他写了一封邮件向你询问相关信息，请你根据邮件内容和所给提示写封回信。
注意：
1.词数 90 左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.邮件需包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，使内容完整通顺；
3.邮件中不得泄露个人信息；
4.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Hi Simon, I’m very happy to tell you about our School Technology Week. _______________________________________________________________________________
I’m sure you will enjoy the Technology Week. Li Hua
7 ．（2023·江苏宿迁 · 统考中考真题） “双减”政策推行之后， 中学生的学习及生活发生了很大的变 化。为了达成“五育”并举的培养目标，你校开展了丰富的延时服务课程并鼓励学生参与志愿服务。
某报社想了解这方面的情况。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示写一封英文邮件进行简单介绍。
延时服务 参加各种各样的课程，比如音乐、篮球等； ……(你的情况)
志愿服务 帮助他人解决问题； …… (举例说明)
你的收获 提升能力，更加自信； ……(补充 1-2 点)
注意事项：
1. 词数 90 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Dear Editor,
I am glad to tell you something about the after-school services in our school and the voluntary work we
do.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
8 ．（2023·江苏无锡 · 统考中考真题）青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21 世纪英文 报》开设了 Teens Talk 专栏， 倾听读者的心声， 并由“少年之友”Sigmund Friend 予以回复。假设你是
李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。
注意事项：
（1）邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
（2）词数在 100 左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9 ．（2023·江苏泰州 · 中考真题） 泰州是著名的教育之乡。你的英国朋友想了解泰州的教育， 想请
你用英语介绍一下，你列出如下提纲：
1. 良好的教育环境（校园美丽，名人众多…… 写 1-2 点）；
2. 优秀的老师；
3. 自己的学习表现。
要求：
1. 包含所有要点，表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然，可适当拓展；
2. 不得使用真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；
3. 词数 100 左右。
10 ．（2023·江苏苏州 · 统考中考真题） Happy Home Club 本期的主题是“How to make Suzhou more beautiful”，你打算以“Starting from me and now”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法， 请你用英语写一篇发
言稿，内容包括：
1. 触动你的一件事情；
2. 这件事给你的启示；
3. 你的倡议。
注意：
1. 词数： 100 左右。
2. 内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分）
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Starting from me and now
11 ．（2023·江苏扬州 · 统考中考真题） 为丰富校园生活，弘扬中华优秀传统文化， 近期你校校报 英语专栏举行了 Getting close to traditional Chinese culture 征文活动，请根据表格中的内容提示写一篇 英语短文，向此专栏投稿，介绍中国传统手工艺（handicraft）风筝的历史、特征及其文化重要性，
并分享你的看法。
Kites
History Mozi, in the Warring States period
Characteristics materials for making kites: … shapes of kites: …
Cultural importance kites: ● a traditional Chinese handicraft ● … kite flying: ● a popular outdoor activity … ● the World Kite Capital: Weifang, Shandong Province …
Your ideas …
要求： (1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
(2) 必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
(3) 词数： 100 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
(4) 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China.
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12 ．（2023·江苏连云港· 统考中考真题）走进江苏， 游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加“Go Jiangsu” 旅游活动。假如你是李华， 请你根据以下图片及文字提示， 以“Welcome to Lianyungang”为题写一篇
英语短文，邀请他们走进家乡连云港，品山海文化，游大圣故里。
注意：
（1）词数 90 左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Welcome to Lianyungang
I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you.
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13 ．（2023·江苏镇江 · 统考一模） 学校英语报社针对学生的学习方式展开讨论，假如你是李华，
请根据表格里提供的信息，选择一种你喜欢的学习方式进行阐述并提出不足之处。
Study in a group Study alone
Advantages spirit fixed learning plans learn faster develop students’ support each other teamwork personal learning plans learn more quietly improve the abilities of control form the habit of thinking self-
Disadvantages … …
要求：
（1）所写内容必须包括一种学习方式的所有信息并提出不足之处；
（2）文章不少于 90 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清，书写规范；
（4）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Different students like different ways to study. But personally, I would rather
14 ．（2023·江苏宿迁 · 校联考一模）习近平在讲话中引用李大钊的话说， “青年者，国家之魂”， “ 一个民族只有寄望青春、永葆青春，才能兴旺发达。” 作为青少年的我们，现行之重是当好学生。 请以“How to Be a Good Student”为题， 谈谈我们应该怎样做， 才能不负自己， 不负时代赋予我们的责
任。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含表格中的提示，可以自由发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，合理展开想象；
2. 词数 90 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
How to Be a Good Student
As teenagers, we should be good students at present. Then what should we do
15 ．（2023·江苏宿迁 · 统考二模） 作为学生， 我们不仅要努力学习，还要掌握一定的生活技能。 你校组织了题为“Learning life skills”的英语演讲活动。假如你是李华， 请根据下面的表格， 用英语写
一篇演讲稿，描述作为青少年，你们应具备哪些生活技能及如何提高这些技能。
Learning Life skills
解决问题 与人合作，要勇敢地试着处理问题
管理时间 计划好，把事情做得更快、更好
学做家务 寻求父母的帮助
…… （补充一点） …… （如何提升）
要求:
1. 词数 90 左右，短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
3. 短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Learning Life skills
Learning life skills is necessary for us. What kind of life skills should we learn And how can we
improve them Here are my ideas.
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As students, we should not only work hard, but also learn some life skills. They will help us get ready for our
future.
16 ．（2023·江苏盐城 · 校考二模） 近几年，我们被很多闪光的人物感动：有为国争光的奥运健儿， 有抗击疫情的医护人员，有风雨无阻的快递小哥，有兢兢业业的社区工作人员……他们在各自的工 作岗位上奉献着光和热。某英文网站正在开展“My ideal job”为主题的征文活动。请用英语写一篇短
文投稿，谈谈你的未来职业设想，你这样选择的理由及如何使之实现。提示问题：
●What is your ideal job
●Why do you want to do such a job (at least 2 points)
●How are you going to make it come true (at least 2 points)
注意事项：
1. 词数 100 左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总数）；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
My ideal job
Everybody has his ideal job.
17 ．（2023·江苏淮安 · 校考一模） 五月的第二个星期日为母亲节。假设你是九年级一班的李明，
你将代表班级参加学校举行的“感恩父母” 的英语演讲比赛。
演讲内容包括：
1.讲述一件你和母亲或父亲之间难忘的事情；
2.你将在今后如何感恩父母；
3.表达对父母的祝福与愿望。
注意：
1.语言通顺、语言连贯、条理清楚、书写规范；
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称；
3.词数 80~100，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming from Class 1, Grade 9. Today the topic of my speech is Love for my
parents.
18 ．（2023·江苏泰州 · 校考三模） 向世界传递中国文化，让世界倾听中国声音。近期， 我市将面 向全体学生举办“用英语讲好中国故事” 的爱国主义主题展示活动。假如你是李华，想参加此次活动， 请根据以下信息， 向负责本次活动的英语老师 Mr. Yang 写一封 100 词左右的自荐信， 表达你的个人
优势以及对参加活动的期待。
要点提示：
1. Say something about yourself.
2. Why do you want to take part in the activity
3. What do you hope to gain from the activity
注意： 1.词数 100 左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.短文中不得泄露个人信息.
Dear Mr. Yang,
I’m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “Telling Chinese Stories in English”. I really
want to take part in it.
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Yours,
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19 ．（2023·江苏徐州 · 校考二模） 换位思考是实现高效沟通的重要方法。为了促进同学、师生间 的交往， 建立与维护和谐的人际关系， 你校英语报开展了以“Put yourself in others’ shoes”为主题的征
文活动。
请你写一篇短文投稿，讲述一段涉及换位思考的经历与体会。
写作要求：
1. 语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2. 90 词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
It is important to put oneself in others’ shoes because it helps people understand each other and develop
good relationships.
20 ．（2023·江苏宿迁 · 校联考三模）热爱劳动是中华民族的传统美德， 也是推动人类进步的源动 力。然而劳动教育往往被忽视。请你根据一下提示， 以 Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life 为题写一篇英语短文，
对这一现状进行分析并提出建议。
现状 ◆父母很少给予劳动机会 ◆忙于学业，无暇劳动 ◆懒惰不愿劳动
建议 ◆在家：学做家务，如…… ◆在校： ◆在社区：
你对劳动的看法 …… （至少一点）
要求：
1. 包含表格中提示信息，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，适当发挥；
2. 词数 90 个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 文中不得出现真实校名和人名等信息。
参考词汇：劳动 labor
Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life
Labor is the traditional Chinese virtue of love. However,
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参考答案：
1 ．例文
Dear classmates,
I’m glad to be here to give a speech. My topic is “Better Exercise, Better Life” .
My favorite exercise is playing basketball. I often play basketball for about ten hours a week. Because
I think it is interesting and relaxing and it also enables me to make friends with others.
I think we should do morning exercises every day to start our day. What’s more, when we have PE lessons, we can take part in different kinds of activities. We can also run for half an hour every day to build
up our body. If we have time, we can ride bikes on weekends with our friends.
I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据表格中的提示信息进行写作，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己的日常锻炼；
第三步，介绍给同学的建议；
第四步，发出号召。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends with sb.和某人交朋友
②take part in 参与
③on weekends 在周末
[高分句型]
①when we have PE lessons, we can take part in different kinds of activities.(when 引导的时间状语从句)
②I hope everyone can exercise more and have a better life.(省略 that 的宾语从句)
2 ．例文
Being with You
You’ve always been my sunshine. I like being with you, my English teacher, Miss Li. You are very kind
and hard-working. You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class.
Two years ago, I was afraid to speak English and was poor at English. But you tried your best to help me solve my problem. Thanks to your help, I made great progress in my English study. Now I can speak
English in public and don’t feel nervous any more.
You teach me not only to learn but also to be a kind and warm-hearted person. I hope I’ll be with you
forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作
重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接短文开头，引出喜欢同行的是谁或某个物品；
第二步，按照提示说明你喜欢与之相伴的原因，至少给出两、三个原因，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，表达愿与其一直同行的意愿并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to help sb 乐于帮助某人
②thanks to 多亏，由于
③not…any more 不再
④not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①You are so helpful that you are ready to help almost every student in our class.（so…that 引导的结果状
语从句）
②I hope I’ll be with you forever. （省略引导词 that 引导的宾语从句）
3 ．例文
Listening carefully plays an important role in our life.
In class, we should listen to teachers carefully. It can not only help us have a better understanding of what the teachers say, but also it can improve learning efficiency. What’s more, we should listen to our classmates carefully. It can show that we are listening to our classmates and we care about them so that it can
strengthen our relationship.
We should be good listeners at home. We should listen to our parents carefully in order to know about
our parents’ ideas and avoid arguing with each other.
In a word, listening to others carefully is important in our daily life, so we should learn to become good
listeners.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示内容介绍倾听的重要性。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍在学校生活中要倾听及理由；
第三步，介绍在日常生活中要倾听及理由。
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also 不但……而且
②care about 关心
③in order to 为了
[高分句型]
①It can show that we are listening to our classmates and we care about them so that it can strengthen our
relationship. (that 引导的宾语从句，以及 so that 引导的目的状语从句)
②We should listen to our parents carefully in order to know about our parents’ ideas and avoid arguing
with each other. (动词不定式作目的状语)
4 ．例文：
The summer holiday is coming. In order to develop my sense of responsibility, I plan to have a social
practice activity. I’m going to take part in a voluntary activity in Old People’s Home.
First, I can talk to the old about something interesting or take a walk with them. Then, I may give them a great performance. Finally, I can do whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrooms or folding clothes for
the old.
I believe these activities will not only make the old happy but also help me learn a lot. Isn’t it meaningful
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应选择一种社会行为，介绍今年暑假准备做的社会实践活动，要包
含要点“做什么、为何做、怎样做”。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题，介绍做什么，为何做；
第二步，介绍怎么做；
第三步，再次点明活动的益处，暗含这么做的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in 参加
②such as 例如
③fold clothes 叠衣服
④not only ... but also ... 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Finally, I can do whatever I can such as cleaning the bedrooms or folding clothes for the old.（whatever
引导宾语从句）
②Isn’t it meaningful （否定疑问句）
5 ．例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m happy to hear that there is an empty area in our school for building a Culture Corner or a Vegetable
Garden. In my opinion, it’s better to build a vegetable garden. The reasons are as follows.
First of all, our country advocates labor education. Second, students can work with their classmates in the garden to strengthen their friendship. Third, working in the garden can help students learn farming skills. Fourth, a garden built on the empty land can harvest a lot of vegetables, such as tomatoes, potatoes, carrots and so on, which can save the cost of food for the school. Last but not least, students can form the habit of
labor by planting vegetables.
This is not only good for the school, but also good for the growth of students.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示” 中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突
出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据表格选择一种方案；
第二步，就选择的方案结合提示信息介绍下你的想法和建议。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all 首先
②help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
③last but not least 最后也是最重要的
[高分句型]
Fourth, a garden built on empty land can harvest a lot of vegetables, such as tomatoes, potatoes, carrots and
so on, which can save the cost of food for the school.（which 引导的非限制性定语从句）
6 ．例文：
Hi Simon,
I’m very happy to tell you about our School Technology Week. It will be held in the No. 2 building in two weeks. There are many different kinds of activities in the Week. First, you can watch science fiction films like The Wandering Earth. Second, some students will tell stories about scientists like Deng Jiaxian. What’s more, our school will share the latest news about technology and show creative ideas about robots. You are crazy about robots, right Great, there are some smart robot shows you can take part in here. Then
you can see and experience how excellent they are.
I’m sure you will enjoy the Technology Week.
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据开头，介绍科技周开始的时间；
第二步，根据 Simon 的问题提示，介绍科技周的活动；
第三步，介绍 Simon 感兴趣的机器人活动。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 不同种类的
②take part in 参加
[高分句型]
Then you can see and experience how excellent they are.(感叹句作宾语)
7 ．例文
Dear Editor,
I am glad to tell you something about the after-school services in our school and the voluntary work we
do.
Our school provides various after-school services, such as music, basketball, and more. I enjoy taking
part in the art club where I can express my creativity.
In addition to these services, we also have opportunities for voluntary work. By helping others solve problems and assisting in community service events, we gain valuable experience and develop important
skills.
Through these activities, I have gained confidence and improved my abilities. I believe that these
experiences will benefit me greatly in the future.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍学校的课后服务和志愿工作，适当添加细节，并
突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出对课后服务和志愿工作的介绍；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从课后服务和志愿工作两个方面重点介绍；
第三步，表达自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①such as 例如
②take part in 参加
③In addition to 另外
④in the future 在未来
[高分句型]
①By helping others solve problems and assisting in community service events, we gain valuable
experience and develop important skills. （动名词作宾语）
②I believe that these experiences will benefit me greatly in the future.（that 引导的宾语从句）
8 ．例文：
Dear Mr. Friend,
I’m writing to you about the problem I’m facing at the moment.
These days I’m not happy. I always argue with my parents. They only care about my schoolwork. The summer holiday is coming. They plan to choose lots of after-school classes for me. But I don’t want to take these classes and don’t want to be so busy. I’m interested in painting. I just want to take painting lessons during the holiday. They disagree with me. I don’t know what to do. And how can I improve the relationship
with my parents Can you give me some advice
I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明自己遇到了问题。
第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议。
第三步，书写结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①argue with 和某人争吵
②care about 关心
③take painting lessons 上绘画课
[高分句型]
①The summer holiday is coming. (现在进行时表示将来的动作)
② I don’t know what to do. (疑问词+动词不定式)
9 ．例文
I am proud to be a student in Taizhou. There is a good educational environment. The campus here is beautiful, and there are many celebrities, such as Hu Yuan, Wang Anshi and so on. There are also many
libraries and famous universities.
The teachers here are also excellent. Most of them are teachers who graduated from famous universities, and some even returned from studying abroad. They have advanced teaching methods and teaching ideas.
They also produce a large number of excellent students.
In addition to learning cultural knowledge, I also join many clubs, such as basketball club, chess club,
dancing club and so on. Here I not only learn cultural knowledge, but also learn a lot of life philosophy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍泰州的教育，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍泰州良好的教育环境；
第二步，介绍优秀的老师；
第三步，介绍自己的学习表现。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of 为……感到自豪
②graduate from 毕业于
③a large number of 许多
[高分句型]
①Most of them are teachers who graduated from famous universities, and some even returned from
studying abroad.（who 引导的定语从句）
②Here I not only learn cultural knowledge, but also learn a lot of life philosophy.（not only...but also...连
接并列结构）
10 ．例文
Starting from me and now
Last weekend, I went to the city park with my classmates. When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground. We felt very sad about that. The city is our home, so we
should try our best to keep the city clean.
First of all, we should protect our environment. Don’t throw rubbish around or spit anywhere. We’d better plant more trees to make the air clean. Second, we are supposed to be friendly and helpful to others. Third, we ought to obey the traffic rules. Don’t ride too fast or play on the street. Last but not least, remember
to save energy. Turn off the lights and taps in time.
As long as we try our best and starting from me and now, I believe Suzhou will become more and more
beautiful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：要求根据题干中的提示介绍如何让自己的家乡变得更美，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍触动你的一件事情以及这件事情给你的启示；
第二步，为了使苏州变得更美，介绍你的倡议；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望家乡会更美丽” 的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①different kinds of 各种各样的
②be supposed to do sth. 应该做某事
③remember to do sth. 记得做某事
④in time 及时
[高分句型]
①When we got there, we were amazed that there were different kinds of rubbish on the ground.（when 引
导时间状语从句）
②We’d better plant more trees to make the air clean. （“sb. had better do sth.”表建议的句型）
③I believe Suzhou will become more and more beautiful. （宾语从句）
11 ．例文：
Kites
Kites have a history of about 2,300 years in China. The kite was invented by a man called Mozi in the
Warring States period. He made a bird out of wood. It was the first kite in history. Later, his student Lu Ban used bamboo to make kites. During the Eastern Han Dynasty, with the invention of paper, people began to use paper to make kites. Kites have also begun to take on different shapes, such as airplanes, eagles and so
on.
The World Kite Capital is Weifang, Shandong Province. There are many grand kite competitions held there every year. People all over the world want to go there. Flying kites is deeply loved by people. It is a very popular outdoor activity. Every weekend, I can see many people flying kites in the park. They play
happily. But the kites we fly now are all bought from stores. Few people make their own kites.
I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down. We should
protect traditional Chinese handicrafts.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文
之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍风筝的历史情况以及特点；
第二步，介绍风筝的文化特点以及如今风筝的发展情况；
第三步，最后提出自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
① with the invention of paper 随着纸的发明
② take on 呈现
③ all over the world 全世界
[高分句型]
① I believe that as a traditional Chinese handicraft, kites should continue to be passed down. （宾语从
句）
② But the kites we fly now are all bought from stores. （定语从句）
12 ．例文
Welcome to Lianyungang
I’m Li Hua from Lianyungang, Jiangsu. I’d like to recommend my hometown to you.
Lianyungang lies in the north-east of Jiangsu. It’s famous for many places of interest. Here you can visit Huaguo Mountain, the home of the Monkey King. You can also go to the Suma Bay to enjoy the beautiful
sea. It’s cool in summer.
Moreover, Lianyungang is a city with rich culture. Local people are friendly enough to help you.
Remember to try our local food. I’m sure you will enjoy it.
Don’t miss Lianyungang when you attend “Go Jiangsu”. Welcome to our hometown. We’re looking
forward to meeting you soon.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，整体说明连云港的地理位置以及著名的景点；
第二步，介绍连云港丰富的文化和当地的人们以及食物；
第三步，最后邀请大家来连云港做客。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for 因 ……而著名
②moreover 而且
③look forward to doing 期待做
[高分句型]
Don’t miss Lianyungang when you attend “Go Jiangsu”.（when 引导的时间状语从句）
13 ．例文：
Different students like different ways to study. But personally, I would rather study alone.
First, when I study alone, I can make a personal learning plan so that I know what to learn. Second, I will learn more quietly without other people disturbing me. This way, I can put my heart in study. Third, it can help me improve the abilities of self-control because I have to depend on myself. What’s more, it can
also help me form the habit of thinking.
However, it also has disadvantages. When I don’t understand a question, I can’t discuss the answer with
my classmates.
I hope everyone can find the best way to learn.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：选择一种学习方式中材料所给优点不得遗漏，缺点部分自行阐述。
[写作步骤]
① 第一步，表明自己喜欢的学习方式；
② 第二步，阐述该学习方式的优缺点；
③ 第三步，表达作者希望每个人都找到最好学习方式的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① disturbe 打扰；干扰
② put one’s heart in 全心全意
③ what’s more 更重要的是；而且
[高分句型]
① I can make a personal learning plans so that I know what to learn.（so that 引导目的状语从句）
② When I don’t understand a question, I can’t discuss the answer with my classmates.（when 引导时间
状语从句）
14 ．例文
How to be a good student
As teenagers, we should be good students at present. Then what should we do
First of all, listen to the teachers carefully in class. We can go over what we have learned as often as possible and prepare for the new knowledge in time. Also, We can read different kinds of books in our free
time.
Secondly, it is important for us to do some exercise and have a healthy diet. We should go to bed early and get up early. Thirdly, We must obey school rules and traffic rules. Besides, we should behave politely in
public. We should always respect the old and care for the young.
What’s more, we should do some housework at home. And it is meaningful for us to work as volunteers
in our community.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接上文，表述在学习方面我们应如何做好；
第二步，表述在运动、个人安全及行为表现方面我们应该如何做好；
第三步，表述在其他方面我们应该如何做好。
[亮点词汇]
①at present 目前
②different kinds of 不同种类的
③What’s more 此外
[高分句型]
It is meaningful for us to work as as Volunteers in our community.（it 作形式主语）
15 ．例文：
Learning life skills is necessary for us. What kind of life skills should we learn And how can we
improve them Here are my ideas.
First, it’s important for us to solve the problems by ourselves. If we work closely with others and deal with the problems bravely, we’ll grow a lot. Second, we should manage time better. It’s a good idea to plan everything well before you do it, so you may do it better and more quickly. Third, doing some housework is
necessary. You may ask your parents for help if you don’t know how to do it. Last but not least, please do
more exercise to keep healthy. You can do more sports, like jogging, playing ball games. Remember that
health is the greatest wealth.
As students, we should not only work hard, but also learn some life skills. They will help us get ready
for our future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示” 阐述作为青少年应具备的生活技能，并谈谈
如何提高这些技能。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引言，导入正文；
第二步，从解决问题、管理时间和学做家务等方面阐述作为青少年应具备的生活技能；
第三步，总结学会生活技能的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
① solve the problems 解决问题
② by oneself 独自
③ deal with 处理
[高分句型]
① Remember that health is the greatest wealth. （宾语从句）
② If we work closely with others and deal with the problems bravely, we’ll grow a lot.（if 引导条件状语
从句）
16 ．例文
My ideal job
Everybody has his ideal job. And my ideal job is to be a writer. First of all, I am crazy about reading. Ever since I was able to read, I have read thousands of books, including classical Chinese novels and history books. I enjoy myself in the world of literature every time I read. Second, both my teacher and classmates
think highly of my writing. And I have won prizes in a few writing competitions.
To achieve my dream, I plan to take online writing courses to improve my writing kills. Also, I keep a
diary to write down my thoughts, my feelings and my dreams for the future. Through hard work, I believe I
can make it.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍你的理想工作；
第二步，介绍你为什么想做这样的工作；
第三步，最后说明你打算怎么实现它。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all 首先
②think highly of 高度评价
③plan to do 计划做
[高分句型]
①Ever since I was able to read, I have read thousands of books, including classical Chinese novels and
history books（ever since 引导时间状语从句）
②To achieve my dream, I plan to take online writing courses to improve my writing kills. （动词不定式作
目的状语）
17 ．例文：
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Ming from Class 1, Grade 9. Today the topic of my speech is love for my
parents.
My parents have done many things for me. When I was 10 years old, I caught a cold and had a high fever at midnight. I felt so terrible. My mother took me to hospital immediately. She took good care of me
without a rest during the whole night.
My parents give me almost everything. However, they don’t want to get any reward from me. From now on, I will help my parents do more housework. My mother’s birthday is coming, I will make a birthday
card for her. I must thank her by studying hard.
I hope my parents are in good health forever.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿，为记叙文；
② 时态：主要是“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：写作要点包括“和父母之间的一次难忘经历” 、“今后将如何感恩父母”和“表达对父母的祝
福” ；经历部分用一般过去时，感恩部分用一般将来时。
[写作步骤]
第一步，讲述和母亲之间的难忘经历；
第二步，介绍今后将如何感恩父母；
第三步，表达对父母的祝福与愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① by studying hard 通过努力学习
② be in good health 身体健康
③ take good care of 好好照顾
④ without a rest 没有休息
[高分句型]
I hope my parents are in good health forever. （宾语从句）
18 ．范文：
Dear Mr. Yang,
I’m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “Telling Chinese Stories in English”. I really
want to take part in it.
It’s my great honor to introduce myself. I’m a boy from Class One, Grade Nine. My name is Li Hua and I’m 15 years old. I’m an outgoing boy. I have many hobbies, especially reading. I have read a lot of classics
on Chinese history, so I’m familiar with Chinese history and culture.
I want to take part in the activity because it is very meaningful. I can build up my culture confidence
through the activity. Besides, I will feel proud that the world know more about China with my efforts.
I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的一些情况；
第二步，介绍你为什么要参加这个活动；
第三步，最后表达你希望从这次活动中得到什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be familiar with 对…… 熟悉
②take part in 参加
③look forward to 期待
[高分句型]
①I want to take part in the activity because it is very meaningful.（because 引导的原因状语从句）
②Besides, I will feel proud that the world know more about China with my efforts.（that 引导的宾语从
句）
19 ．例文
It is important to put oneself in others’ shoes because it helps people understand each other and develop
good relationships. I learned this lesson in a hard way, and I’d like to share my story with you.
One day last year, my friend Lucy and I had an agreement to meet at three p.m. in the park. However, Lucy didn’t show up until it was already four, which made me sad and angry. I thought she must have forgotten our plans. So I refused to answer her phone calls. And for the next few days, I avoided her on purpose. A week later, I was told that Lucy lost her grandmother that afternoon. I felt shocked and terribly
sorry. I should have helped her through the hard days instead of misunderstanding her.
From then on, I began to put myself in others’ shoes and think twice.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示中“换位思考经历” 的介绍要点，适当添加
细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。阐明我要与大家分享一个换位思考的经历；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。描述自己换位思考的整个故事，从误会朋友露西忘记两人的计划，到
得知真相之后的愧疚；
第三步，书写结语。我学会了换位思考，三思而后行。
[亮点词汇]
①show up 出现，露面
②refuse to do sth.拒绝做某事
③on purpose 故意
④think twice 再三考虑
[高分句型]
①However, Lucy didn’t show up until it was already four, which made me sad and angry.（which 引导非
限制性定语从句）
②A week later, I was told that Lucy lost her grandmother that afternoon.（that 引导宾语从句）
20 ．例文：
Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life
Labor is the traditional Chinese virtue of love. However, some students are rarely given the opportunity to enjoy labor, while others are too busy with their studies to labor. There are also some students who are
unwilling to labor because they are lazy.
Therefore, I advise you to participate in labor activities both at school and at home. At school, you can clean the classroom with your classmates every week. At home, you can help your parents do housework.
Besides, you can also visit the nursing homes and help take care of the elderly.
In conclusion, I believe that labor education is important for our development and I encourage all my
fellow classmates to actively engage in labor activities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏主要信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。