2024届高考英语二轮复习模块精练：专题十八 书面表达【新教材新高考】（含解析）
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专题十八 书面表达——2024届高考英语二轮复习模块精练【新教材新高考】
一、
假定你是李华，得知你的留学生朋友Peter准备写一份中国乡村生活报告。请给他写一封邮件，邀请他寒假到你的家乡体验生活，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.体验内容及意义；
3.表达希望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
二、
受学生会委托,你在校英文报上发出倡议,呼吁同学们重视锻炼”积极参加体育活动,要点如下:
1.倡议的原因；
2 倡议的内容。
注意：
1.词数80左右;
2.题目已为你写好,
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
More Exercise, Better Health
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、
假如你是李华,你的好友Sam给你写信说最近在中文学习上遇到了一些困难,心情很沮丧。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;
2. 提出建议(不少于2点);
3. 给予鼓励。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 书信格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
四、
你校正在组织以运动为主题的英语作文比赛，请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 你对运动的认识；
2. 你的日常运动情况。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请在答题卡相应位置作答。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
五、
上周六,你校组织学生到天山公园参加植树活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请以 A Meaningful Activity 为题,写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动过程;
3. 活动意义。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Meaningful Activity
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
六、
假定你是高三学生李华，请你在学校英文报，给今年的新生写一封英语学法建议信。
内容包括：
1. 你对英语学法的理解；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear freshmen,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely,
Li Hua
七、
假定你是李华，上周你校举办了中国古典音乐演奏会。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 演奏内容；
3. 音乐会反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式，在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Chinese Classical Music Concert
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
八、
假定你是李华，在英国笔友Jim的帮助下，你在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖，请给Jim写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．告知获奖情况；
2．表达获奖心情；
3．感谢他的帮助。
注意：
1．写作词数为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
九、
你校将要举办一次主题为“How to Communicate with Our Parents”的英语演讲比赛, 请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：
1. 与父母进行沟通的原因；
2. 与父母沟通的方式；
3. 与父母发生争执时的做法。
注意：
1．写作词数为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
十、
最近一则外刊杂志正在评选全国最美主题公园，请您给杂志主编写一封推荐信，介绍一个公园。内容可包括：
1.公园地点、规模等基本信息；
2.园内著名景色或设施；
3.公园里可进行的娱乐休闲活动；
4.推荐原因。
注意：
1．写作词数为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
3.短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入字数。
Dear editor,
I am writing to you to recommend a theme park for your selection of the best theme park.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your consideration.
Sincerely
XXX
答案以及解析
一、
答案：
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you are writing a report about Chinese rural life, I sincerely invite you to my hometown to spend the coming winter vacation.
My hometown is a typical village of northern China, where you can not only be exposed to the living environment of the villagers but also truly experience their daily life in every aspect. Meanwhile, you can participate in the colorful activities in celebration of the Spring Festival and immerge yourself in the authentic Chinese culture. All this will provide rich first-hand materials for your report.
I believe it will be a rewarding experience. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析： 高分句型一：Knowing that you are writing a report about Chinese rural life, I sincerely invite you to my hometown to spend the coming winter vacation.
翻译：知道你正在写一篇关于中国农村生活的报告，我真诚地邀请你到我的家乡度过即将到来的寒假.
分析：本句使用了现在分词作状语。
高分句型二：My hometown is a typical village of northern China, where you can not only be exposed to the living environment of the villagers but also truly experience their daily life in every aspect.
翻译：我的家乡是中国北方一个典型的村庄，在这里，你不仅可以接触到村民的生活环境，还可以真正体验到他们日常生活的方方面面。
分析：本句使用了where引导的定语从句。
二、
答案：
More Exercise, Better Health
Nowadays, many students haven't realized how important exercise is and don't work out regularly, listing various reasons such as lack of lime or exhaustion from studying. However, taking regular exercise docs us students good, helping reduce stress and improve learning efficiency. Therefore, we should give priority to exercise however busy or tired we are. We can incorporate exercise into everyday routines, like squeezing in ten minutes daily for a jog.
Let's take action and exercise more from now!
解析：本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在校英文报上发出倡议,呼吁同学们重视锻炼,积极参加体育活动。
1.词汇积累
理解: realize→comprehend
许多的: various→numerous
然而: however→nevertheless
压力: stress→pressure
2.句式拓展
短句变长句
原句: Therefore, we should give priority to exercise however busy or tired we are. We can incorporate exercise into everyday routines, like squeezing in ten minutes daily for a jog.
拓展句: Therefore, not only should we give priority to exercise however busy or tired we are, but we can also incorporate exercise into everyday routines, like squeezing in ten minutes daily for a jog.
[高分句型1] Therefore, we should give priority to exercise however busy or tired we are. (运用了however引导的让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] However, taking regular exercise does us students good, helping reduce stress and improve learning efficiency. (运用了动名词做主语和现在分词作状语)
三、
答案：
Dear Sam,
I'm so sorry to hear you've met with some difficulties in learning Chinese. I can totally understand your feelings.
In my experience, firstly, you should develop an interest in learning Chinese, for interest is the best teacher. So I strongly recommend that you should watch Chinese TV programs. Besides, a language partner is of equal importance, with whom you can improve your Chinese through daily communication.
Cheer up! I'm sure you'll deal with all the challenges if you find proper ways.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：高分句型一：In my experience, priority should be given to developing an interest, which can serve as your biggest motivation in learning a second language.
翻译：根据我的经验，应该优先培养兴趣，这可以成为你学习第二语言的最大动机。
分析：which引导非限定性定语从句。
高分句型二：Of secondary importance is a language partner, with whom you can improve your Chinese through daily communication.
翻译：其次是语言伙伴，你可以通过日常交流提高你的汉语水平。
分析：运用了"介词+关系代词“引导非限定性定语从句。
四、
答案：
I’d like to share you with my sports story.
Of all the sports, I like table tennis best, which is the most popular sports in China. On weekdays, I usually play table tennis after school and I have learned many practical skills. I also take part in other sports activities in our school, including running, basketball as well as football. On weekends, I go cycling or climb the hill and I have great fun. In my opinion, not only does the sports help me build up my body, train my brains and keep me confident, but also it helps me make a lot of friends.
解析：本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇短文参加学校组织的以运动为主题的英语作文比赛。
1.词汇积累
最喜欢:like best→favorite
参加:take part in→join in
过得愉快:have great fun→enjoy oneself
在我看来:in my opinion=from where I stand
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:On weekends, I go cycling or climb the hill and I have great fun.
拓展句:On weekends, I go cycling or climb the hill, which makes me have great fun.
[高分句型1] I also take part in other sports activities in our school, including running, basketball as well as football. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] In my opinion, not only does the sports help me build up my body, train my brains and keep me confident, but also it helps me make a lot of friends. (运用了not only...but also...句式和部分倒装)
五、
答案：
A Meaningful Activity
To let us students understand the value of labor, a tree-planting activity was held in Tianshan Park last Saturday.
Arriving at the park, we began to work. Some students dug holes, some put the bottom of the trees in the hole, some watered the trees and some tied the trees on small sticks. With our joint effort, the park looked greener and more beautiful.
Through this activity, not only did we learn how to plant trees, but got much closer to the nature. Every participant expects another one next year.
解析：本文是开放性作文。要求考生以A Meaningful Activity为题，写一篇上周六，学校组织学生到天山公园参加植树活动的报道。
1.词汇积累
使，让：let→make
举办：hold→throw
到达：arrive at→reach
看起来：look→seem
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Arriving at the park, we began to work.
拓展句：After we arrived at the park, we began to work.
【高分句型1】 To let us students understand the value of labor, a tree-planting activity was held in Tianshan Park last Saturday.(由动词不定式短语做目的状语）
【高分句型2】Through this activity, not only did we learn how to plant trees, but got much closer to nature.(由not only引导的部分倒装结构）
六、
答案：
Dear freshmen,
As a third year high school student, I would like to share with you some suggestions on English learning methods. I believe that learning methods play a very important role in English learning. Next, I would like to introduce some suggestions for English learning.
First of all, listen carefully and take notes in class so that you can get the most standard language system. In addition, reading English books, newspapers and watching TV programs are also helpful to English learning. Besides, it can also help you learn English well to learn to sing English songs. Furthermore, another good way is to make more English speaking friends, which can give you more opportunities to practice your spoken English.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析：高分句型一：I believe that learning methods play a very important role in English learning.
翻译：我相信学习方法在英语学习中起着非常重要的作用。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Furthermore，another good way is to make more English speaking friends，which can give you more opportunities to practice your spoken English.
翻译：此外，另一个好方法是交更多的英语朋友，这可以给你更多的机会练习口语。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
七、
答案：
A Chinese Classical Music Concert
A Chinese classical music concert was held in the school hall on Saturday night. Many masterpieces of ancient musicians, such as High Mountain and Flowing water and The Spring Snow, were played by a famous band. The students present felt the mountain, the water, the winter snow, the silk bamboo and the endless call of life flowing in the air at the concert. The concert was really popular with the students, especially those who love Chinese classical music. Many said that they would pass on the traditional music and look forward to the next music feast.
解析：本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，报道学校上周举办的中国古典音乐演奏会的情况。
1.词汇积累
著名的：famous→noted
流动：flow→stream
尤其：especially → particularly
期待：look forward to→ anticipate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：A Chinese classical music concert was held in the school hall on Saturday night.
拓展句：A Chinese classical music concert, which fell on Saturday night, was held in the school hall.
[高分句型1] The concert was really popular with the students, especially those who love Chinese classical music.(运用了关系代词who引导限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Many said that they would pass on the traditional music and look forward to the next music feast.(运用了连词that引导宾语从句）
八、
答案：
Dear Jim,
How is everything going I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks to you because I've won the first prize in the English Speech Contest of our school. Your kind help has meant more than anything.
I remember vividly how you guided and encouraged me. Without your patient guidance, I couldn’t have made so great an achievement. During the preparation of the contest, you helped polish my draft many times and better my pronunciation with great patience. The public speaking skills you shared turned out really effective. More importantly, whenever I felt hesitant and unsure about myself, you were always there to back me up and boost my confidence.
No words are strong enough to express my heartfelt gratitude to you. Thank you very much and wish you all the best.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析：这是一篇应用文写作。要求学生以李华的身份，给英国笔友Jim写一封电子邮件，告知他你在英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖的情况，表达获奖心情，同时感谢他的帮助。
1. 词汇积累
真诚的；由衷的：heartfelt→ sincere
感谢：thanks→ appreciation
增加；促进：boost→ enhance
生动地：vividly→ graphically
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I've won the first prize in the English Speech Contest of our school.
复合句： I've won the first prize in the English Speech Contest which was held in our school.
【高分句型1】I remember vividly how you guided and encouraged me. （how引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】More importantly, whenever I felt hesitant and unsure about myself, you were always there to back me up and boost my confidence.（whenever引导的时间状语从句）
九、
答案：
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Hello, everyone. I’d like to share my ideas about the topic of communicating with our parents.
Parents are the people devoted to us most, and that is why it is necessary to keep a good relationship with them. Here are my ideas on how to make it easier to communicate with parents.
First, we should respect and trust our parents. Don’t be rude to them even if they have done something wrong. Second, if we often share with them about our life and experiences, we will know each other better. If sometimes we don’t agree with our parents’ decisions, we should try to put ourselves into their shoes and we will soon understand them.
Remember that what they really want is only the best for us.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening.
解析：高分句型一：Parents are the people who love us most，so it's necessary to keep a good relationship with them.
翻译：父母是最爱我们的人，所以有必要和他们保持良好的关系。
分析：本句使用了who引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：Don't be rude to them even if they have done something wrong.
翻译：即使他们做错了什么，也不要对他们无礼。
分析：本句使用了if引导的条件状语从句。
十、
答案：
Dear editor,
I am writing to you to recommend a theme park for your selection of the best theme park.
Located 12 km south of our city, the park is a combination of culture, entertainment and health. To begin with, it is a perfect place where you may have a taste of various features in different times of China. Additionally, the park has plenty of facilities, with which you can do various sports. Besides, there are some knowledge about how to keep healthy broadcast on the loudspeakers.
Welcome to Health Theme Park. I am sure you will like it.
Thanks for your consideration.
Sincerely
XXX
解析：这是一篇应用文。最近一则外刊杂志正在评选全国最美主题公园，请考生给杂志主编写一封推荐信，介绍一个公园。
1.词汇积累
位于：located→situated/lying
娱乐：entertainment→recreation
各种各样的：various→varied/a variety of/varieties of
确定的：be sure→be certain
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, there are some knowledge about how to keep healthy broadcast on the loudspeakers.
拓展句：What is more beneficial is that there are some knowledge about how to keep healthy broadcast on the loudspeakers.
[高分句型1]To begin with, it is a perfect place where you may have a taste of various features in different times of China. （运用了where引导的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Additionally, the park has plenty of facilities, with which you can do various sports. （运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句）
一、
假定你是李华，得知你的留学生朋友Peter准备写一份中国乡村生活报告。请给他写一封邮件，邀请他寒假到你的家乡体验生活，内容包括：
1.写信目的；
2.体验内容及意义；
3.表达希望。
注意：
1.写作词数应为80左右；
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Peter,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
二、
受学生会委托,你在校英文报上发出倡议,呼吁同学们重视锻炼”积极参加体育活动,要点如下:
1.倡议的原因；
2 倡议的内容。
注意：
1.词数80左右;
2.题目已为你写好,
3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
More Exercise, Better Health
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、
假如你是李华,你的好友Sam给你写信说最近在中文学习上遇到了一些困难,心情很沮丧。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1. 表示理解;
2. 提出建议(不少于2点);
3. 给予鼓励。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 书信格式已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
四、
你校正在组织以运动为主题的英语作文比赛，请你写一篇短文参赛，内容包括：
1. 你对运动的认识；
2. 你的日常运动情况。
注意：
1. 词数80左右；
2. 请在答题卡相应位置作答。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
五、
上周六,你校组织学生到天山公园参加植树活动。假定你是学校英语报记者,请以 A Meaningful Activity 为题,写一篇报道,内容包括:
1. 活动目的;
2. 活动过程;
3. 活动意义。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为 80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Meaningful Activity
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
六、
假定你是高三学生李华，请你在学校英文报，给今年的新生写一封英语学法建议信。
内容包括：
1. 你对英语学法的理解；
2. 提出建议。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear freshmen,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely,
Li Hua
七、
假定你是李华，上周你校举办了中国古典音乐演奏会。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：
1. 时间和地点；
2. 演奏内容；
3. 音乐会反响。
注意：
1. 写作词数应为80左右；
2. 可适当增添细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 请按如下格式，在答题卡的相应位置作答。
A Chinese Classical Music Concert
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
八、
假定你是李华，在英国笔友Jim的帮助下，你在英语演讲比赛中获得了一等奖，请给Jim写一封电子邮件，内容包括：
1．告知获奖情况；
2．表达获奖心情；
3．感谢他的帮助。
注意：
1．写作词数为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
九、
你校将要举办一次主题为“How to Communicate with Our Parents”的英语演讲比赛, 请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：
1. 与父母进行沟通的原因；
2. 与父母沟通的方式；
3. 与父母发生争执时的做法。
注意：
1．写作词数为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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十、
最近一则外刊杂志正在评选全国最美主题公园，请您给杂志主编写一封推荐信，介绍一个公园。内容可包括：
1.公园地点、规模等基本信息；
2.园内著名景色或设施；
3.公园里可进行的娱乐休闲活动；
4.推荐原因。
注意：
1．写作词数为80个左右；
2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
3.短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入字数。
Dear editor,
I am writing to you to recommend a theme park for your selection of the best theme park.
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Thanks for your consideration.
Sincerely
XXX
答案以及解析
一、
答案：
Dear Peter,
Knowing that you are writing a report about Chinese rural life, I sincerely invite you to my hometown to spend the coming winter vacation.
My hometown is a typical village of northern China, where you can not only be exposed to the living environment of the villagers but also truly experience their daily life in every aspect. Meanwhile, you can participate in the colorful activities in celebration of the Spring Festival and immerge yourself in the authentic Chinese culture. All this will provide rich first-hand materials for your report.
I believe it will be a rewarding experience. Looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析： 高分句型一：Knowing that you are writing a report about Chinese rural life, I sincerely invite you to my hometown to spend the coming winter vacation.
翻译：知道你正在写一篇关于中国农村生活的报告，我真诚地邀请你到我的家乡度过即将到来的寒假.
分析：本句使用了现在分词作状语。
高分句型二：My hometown is a typical village of northern China, where you can not only be exposed to the living environment of the villagers but also truly experience their daily life in every aspect.
翻译：我的家乡是中国北方一个典型的村庄，在这里，你不仅可以接触到村民的生活环境，还可以真正体验到他们日常生活的方方面面。
分析：本句使用了where引导的定语从句。
二、
答案：
More Exercise, Better Health
Nowadays, many students haven't realized how important exercise is and don't work out regularly, listing various reasons such as lack of lime or exhaustion from studying. However, taking regular exercise docs us students good, helping reduce stress and improve learning efficiency. Therefore, we should give priority to exercise however busy or tired we are. We can incorporate exercise into everyday routines, like squeezing in ten minutes daily for a jog.
Let's take action and exercise more from now!
解析：本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生在校英文报上发出倡议,呼吁同学们重视锻炼,积极参加体育活动。
1.词汇积累
理解: realize→comprehend
许多的: various→numerous
然而: however→nevertheless
压力: stress→pressure
2.句式拓展
短句变长句
原句: Therefore, we should give priority to exercise however busy or tired we are. We can incorporate exercise into everyday routines, like squeezing in ten minutes daily for a jog.
拓展句: Therefore, not only should we give priority to exercise however busy or tired we are, but we can also incorporate exercise into everyday routines, like squeezing in ten minutes daily for a jog.
[高分句型1] Therefore, we should give priority to exercise however busy or tired we are. (运用了however引导的让步状语从句)
[高分句型2] However, taking regular exercise does us students good, helping reduce stress and improve learning efficiency. (运用了动名词做主语和现在分词作状语)
三、
答案：
Dear Sam,
I'm so sorry to hear you've met with some difficulties in learning Chinese. I can totally understand your feelings.
In my experience, firstly, you should develop an interest in learning Chinese, for interest is the best teacher. So I strongly recommend that you should watch Chinese TV programs. Besides, a language partner is of equal importance, with whom you can improve your Chinese through daily communication.
Cheer up! I'm sure you'll deal with all the challenges if you find proper ways.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析：高分句型一：In my experience, priority should be given to developing an interest, which can serve as your biggest motivation in learning a second language.
翻译：根据我的经验，应该优先培养兴趣，这可以成为你学习第二语言的最大动机。
分析：which引导非限定性定语从句。
高分句型二：Of secondary importance is a language partner, with whom you can improve your Chinese through daily communication.
翻译：其次是语言伙伴，你可以通过日常交流提高你的汉语水平。
分析：运用了"介词+关系代词“引导非限定性定语从句。
四、
答案：
I’d like to share you with my sports story.
Of all the sports, I like table tennis best, which is the most popular sports in China. On weekdays, I usually play table tennis after school and I have learned many practical skills. I also take part in other sports activities in our school, including running, basketball as well as football. On weekends, I go cycling or climb the hill and I have great fun. In my opinion, not only does the sports help me build up my body, train my brains and keep me confident, but also it helps me make a lot of friends.
解析：本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一篇短文参加学校组织的以运动为主题的英语作文比赛。
1.词汇积累
最喜欢:like best→favorite
参加:take part in→join in
过得愉快:have great fun→enjoy oneself
在我看来:in my opinion=from where I stand
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:On weekends, I go cycling or climb the hill and I have great fun.
拓展句:On weekends, I go cycling or climb the hill, which makes me have great fun.
[高分句型1] I also take part in other sports activities in our school, including running, basketball as well as football. (运用了现在分词作状语)
[高分句型2] In my opinion, not only does the sports help me build up my body, train my brains and keep me confident, but also it helps me make a lot of friends. (运用了not only...but also...句式和部分倒装)
五、
答案：
A Meaningful Activity
To let us students understand the value of labor, a tree-planting activity was held in Tianshan Park last Saturday.
Arriving at the park, we began to work. Some students dug holes, some put the bottom of the trees in the hole, some watered the trees and some tied the trees on small sticks. With our joint effort, the park looked greener and more beautiful.
Through this activity, not only did we learn how to plant trees, but got much closer to the nature. Every participant expects another one next year.
解析：本文是开放性作文。要求考生以A Meaningful Activity为题，写一篇上周六，学校组织学生到天山公园参加植树活动的报道。
1.词汇积累
使，让：let→make
举办：hold→throw
到达：arrive at→reach
看起来：look→seem
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Arriving at the park, we began to work.
拓展句：After we arrived at the park, we began to work.
【高分句型1】 To let us students understand the value of labor, a tree-planting activity was held in Tianshan Park last Saturday.(由动词不定式短语做目的状语）
【高分句型2】Through this activity, not only did we learn how to plant trees, but got much closer to nature.(由not only引导的部分倒装结构）
六、
答案：
Dear freshmen,
As a third year high school student, I would like to share with you some suggestions on English learning methods. I believe that learning methods play a very important role in English learning. Next, I would like to introduce some suggestions for English learning.
First of all, listen carefully and take notes in class so that you can get the most standard language system. In addition, reading English books, newspapers and watching TV programs are also helpful to English learning. Besides, it can also help you learn English well to learn to sing English songs. Furthermore, another good way is to make more English speaking friends, which can give you more opportunities to practice your spoken English.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析：高分句型一：I believe that learning methods play a very important role in English learning.
翻译：我相信学习方法在英语学习中起着非常重要的作用。
分析：本句使用了that引导的宾语从句。
高分句型二：Furthermore，another good way is to make more English speaking friends，which can give you more opportunities to practice your spoken English.
翻译：此外，另一个好方法是交更多的英语朋友，这可以给你更多的机会练习口语。
分析：本句使用了which引导的非限制性定语从句。
七、
答案：
A Chinese Classical Music Concert
A Chinese classical music concert was held in the school hall on Saturday night. Many masterpieces of ancient musicians, such as High Mountain and Flowing water and The Spring Snow, were played by a famous band. The students present felt the mountain, the water, the winter snow, the silk bamboo and the endless call of life flowing in the air at the concert. The concert was really popular with the students, especially those who love Chinese classical music. Many said that they would pass on the traditional music and look forward to the next music feast.
解析：本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为校英文报写一篇报道，报道学校上周举办的中国古典音乐演奏会的情况。
1.词汇积累
著名的：famous→noted
流动：flow→stream
尤其：especially → particularly
期待：look forward to→ anticipate
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：A Chinese classical music concert was held in the school hall on Saturday night.
拓展句：A Chinese classical music concert, which fell on Saturday night, was held in the school hall.
[高分句型1] The concert was really popular with the students, especially those who love Chinese classical music.(运用了关系代词who引导限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Many said that they would pass on the traditional music and look forward to the next music feast.(运用了连词that引导宾语从句）
八、
答案：
Dear Jim,
How is everything going I am writing to express my heartfelt thanks to you because I've won the first prize in the English Speech Contest of our school. Your kind help has meant more than anything.
I remember vividly how you guided and encouraged me. Without your patient guidance, I couldn’t have made so great an achievement. During the preparation of the contest, you helped polish my draft many times and better my pronunciation with great patience. The public speaking skills you shared turned out really effective. More importantly, whenever I felt hesitant and unsure about myself, you were always there to back me up and boost my confidence.
No words are strong enough to express my heartfelt gratitude to you. Thank you very much and wish you all the best.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
解析：这是一篇应用文写作。要求学生以李华的身份，给英国笔友Jim写一封电子邮件，告知他你在英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖的情况，表达获奖心情，同时感谢他的帮助。
1. 词汇积累
真诚的；由衷的：heartfelt→ sincere
感谢：thanks→ appreciation
增加；促进：boost→ enhance
生动地：vividly→ graphically
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句： I've won the first prize in the English Speech Contest of our school.
复合句： I've won the first prize in the English Speech Contest which was held in our school.
【高分句型1】I remember vividly how you guided and encouraged me. （how引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】More importantly, whenever I felt hesitant and unsure about myself, you were always there to back me up and boost my confidence.（whenever引导的时间状语从句）
九、
答案：
How to Communicate with Our Parents
Hello, everyone. I’d like to share my ideas about the topic of communicating with our parents.
Parents are the people devoted to us most, and that is why it is necessary to keep a good relationship with them. Here are my ideas on how to make it easier to communicate with parents.
First, we should respect and trust our parents. Don’t be rude to them even if they have done something wrong. Second, if we often share with them about our life and experiences, we will know each other better. If sometimes we don’t agree with our parents’ decisions, we should try to put ourselves into their shoes and we will soon understand them.
Remember that what they really want is only the best for us.
That’s all. Thank you for your listening.
解析：高分句型一：Parents are the people who love us most，so it's necessary to keep a good relationship with them.
翻译：父母是最爱我们的人，所以有必要和他们保持良好的关系。
分析：本句使用了who引导的定语从句。
高分句型二：Don't be rude to them even if they have done something wrong.
翻译：即使他们做错了什么，也不要对他们无礼。
分析：本句使用了if引导的条件状语从句。
十、
答案：
Dear editor,
I am writing to you to recommend a theme park for your selection of the best theme park.
Located 12 km south of our city, the park is a combination of culture, entertainment and health. To begin with, it is a perfect place where you may have a taste of various features in different times of China. Additionally, the park has plenty of facilities, with which you can do various sports. Besides, there are some knowledge about how to keep healthy broadcast on the loudspeakers.
Welcome to Health Theme Park. I am sure you will like it.
Thanks for your consideration.
Sincerely
XXX
解析：这是一篇应用文。最近一则外刊杂志正在评选全国最美主题公园，请考生给杂志主编写一封推荐信，介绍一个公园。
1.词汇积累
位于：located→situated/lying
娱乐：entertainment→recreation
各种各样的：various→varied/a variety of/varieties of
确定的：be sure→be certain
2.句型拓展
简单句变复合句
原句：Besides, there are some knowledge about how to keep healthy broadcast on the loudspeakers.
拓展句：What is more beneficial is that there are some knowledge about how to keep healthy broadcast on the loudspeakers.
[高分句型1]To begin with, it is a perfect place where you may have a taste of various features in different times of China. （运用了where引导的限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2]Additionally, the park has plenty of facilities, with which you can do various sports. （运用了“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句）