第五单元话题写作专项
【话题分析】
本单元主要谈论商业,主要对购物方式、经历、价格、质量优劣等进行描述。 本单元要求同学们能够谈论产品推销或买卖物品,能使用不同的句型表达对购物过程中的某个细节的真实感受,能使用宾语从句的正确形式说明产品的质量和价格等。
【素材积累】
【词汇】
1. 顾客
2. 质量
3. 产品
4. 选择
5. 优点
6. 确保
7. 吸引某人的目光
8. ……的优点
9. 去购物
10. ……的价格
11. 列一张购物清单
【开头句】
1.My cousin will come to my home tomorrow.
2.I went shopping with my mother to buy some food today.
【中间句】
1.At first, we made a shopping list and then we went shopping with a shopping basket.
2.I thought it was cheap, so I bought some.
【结尾句】
I was happy to go back with these things.
【写作典例】
超市给人们的生活带来了极大的便利,里面的商品琳琅满目,应有尽有。请以“Shopping”为题,讲述你的一次购物经历。
要求:(1)80词左右;
(2)字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,逻辑清晰。
Shopping
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【写作指导】
1.根据题干可知,本文的体裁是 。
2.文章应使用第 人称。
3.本文的时态为 。
【写作提纲】
谈论购
物经历
【写作范文】
Shopping My cousin will come to my home tomorrow. We will have a big dinner, so I went shopping with my mother to buy some food today. At first, we made a shopping list. There were many different kinds of products in the supermarket. We bought some vegetables and meat. Then, I saw the fish. It was 10 yuan a kilo. I thought it was cheap, so I bought some. At last, I bought some orange juice for my cousin. How much were these things Eighty yuan. I was happy to go back with these things. ①用连词so 引出需要购物的原因。 ②运用at first、 then、 at last等表示顺序的词列举购物的过程。 ③运用句型“I was happy to...”表达购物的感受。
【拓展应用】
在生活中, 我们都曾有独自购物的经历, 这些经历或曲折或开心, 给我们留下了难忘的回忆。请你以“My Shopping Experience”为题, 把你记忆最深刻的一次购物经历写下来。
要求:(1)80词左右;
(2)字迹工整, 语言流畅, 表达准确, 逻辑清晰。
My Shopping Experience
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参考答案
素材积累
1.customer 2.quality 3.product 4.choose 5.advantage 6.make sure
7.catch one's eye 8.the advantage of 9.go shopping 10.the price of 11.make a shopping list
写作指导
1.记叙文 2.一 3.一般过去时
拓展应用
Once I was in Beijing, I went shopping in the Front Gate Walking Street, because I wanted to buy some gifts for my friends.
There were so many things on sale. Suddenly, I saw two statues that looked so beautiful. I decided to buy them. So I asked the price. It was twenty yuan each. I tried to make a bargain. At last, I bought both of them at twenty yuan.
I was very happy on that day, because it was the first time that I had made a bargain with a businessman so successfully.
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