2024届高三英语一轮复习写作专项读后续写父子关系 My first hunting 学案
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| 名称 | 2024届高三英语一轮复习写作专项读后续写父子关系 My first hunting 学案 |  | |
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| 更新时间 | 2024-02-22 16:58:22 | ||
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试题呈现：
His father said, “All set, boy ” and Jeremy nodded, picking up his gun with awkward gloved hands. His father pushed open the door and they went out into the freezing dawn together. Ordinarily Jeremy would take out his camera to record the scenery, but not this morning. This was the morning, particularly sacred, when 14-year-old Jeremy would go duck hunting for the first time.
However, he hated it, and had hated the whole idea since his father bought him a gun. But he was determined to go through with it. He loved his father, and wanted his approval more than anything in the world.
They came to a narrow and hidden place facing the bay. Jeremy sat down nervously and waited. To reduce fear, he took a picture of his father against the clean water. Then he put the camera hurriedly on the grass and picked up his gun.
Jeremy got his gun ready. “I'll let you shoot first,” his father said, loading his own gun. “You know, I've been waiting for a long time for this day. Just the two of us..."He broke off, bending forward, eyes narrowed. “There's a small flight heading this way now. Keep your head down. I'll give you the word.”
The sun came out. Jeremy could see everything clearly: his father's face, tense and eager; the white frost on the gun. His heart was beating wildly. He prayed, “Don't let them come, please!”
But they kept coming. "Four black,” his father said. “One mallard (绿头鸭）.” High above, Jeremy heard the pulsing whistle of wings as the flight began to circle. The mallard was leading, his feet dropping down, reaching for the silver-colored water. Closer, closer... “Get set,” his father whispered.
“Now!” cried Jeremy's father. “Take them!”
Jeremy felt his body obey. He stood up, holding the gun. In the same instant, the wild ducks saw the gunners and flew. “Shoot!” said something sharply in Jeremy's brain. But up went the mallard higher still, until suddenly he caught the full force of the wind and flew away, out of range.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: His father asked in a controlled voice, “Why didn't you shoot ”___ _______________________
Paragraph 2:To Jeremy's surprise, his father was handing the camera to him.___ ___________________________
Analysis of the text:
1. Who are the main characters in the article What are the descriptions of their personalities and hobbies in the article
Jeremy
I love photography, hate hunting, love my father, and crave his approval
Father
Likes hunting and looks forward to hunting with my son (thinking he also enjoys hunting)
2.What are the time and place where the story takes place in the article What is the description of this time point in the article How helpful is it for describing details
Time: at dawn Description: free; Sacred; The sun comes out; The white frost on the gun
Location: near the clean water
Help: Use environmental description in outdoor scenarios, echoing relevant details of time and place
3.What does the word shoot mean in the original text
The pun meaning of "shoot" is 1: shooting; Meaning 2: Shooting
What are the main contradictions/issues in the article
Superficial contradiction: Should Jeremy shoot for hunting
4.Deep level contradictions:
1) Should Jeremy stick to his interests (taking photos) or choose hunting to gain his father's approval
2) How to get along with a father and son: Do sons have to listen to and like things that the father likes
What should be written at the end of the first paragraph from the beginning of the second paragraph
5.At the beginning of the second paragraph, To Jeremy's surprise, it can be seen that the end of the first paragraph can be written about Jeremy's psychological description after explaining why he didn't shoot, thinking that his father would be angry.
参考范文：
Paragraph 1: His father asked in a controlled voice, “Why didn’t you shoot ” Judging from his expression, it was evident that he was about to explode. Jeremy dropped his head down, tense and speechless. At the thought of losing his father’s approval, he was overcome with a sense of failure, tears falling onto the silent ground. “Son, tell me what’s the matter ” murmured the father, gathering Jeremy into his arms. “You like duck hunting, don’t you ” Jeremy explained that he didn’t like hunting at all and how exciting it was to stroll with him and take photos as usual. Then up went the boy’s head, through his misty eyes, he witnessed his father turning and leaving.（103w）
Paragraph 2: To Jeremy’s surprise, his father was handing the camera to him. “Sorry, I thought you were fond of hunting just like me,” apologized the father, putting the camera on the boy’s palms. Eyes glinting and lips curving into a big smile, the boy was jumping with joy, taking a picture of his father and the charming scenery. Having taking away the gun, the father was bathed in the radiant glow of sun. He could hear the chirps of the birds and laughter from his son. It suddenly dawned on him that he was full of himself in showing his love to his son.（92w）
下水作文:
His father asked in a controlled voice, “Why didn't you shoot " Looking into Jeremy's eyes, he tried to figure out what had happened But the little boy simply looked away.apparently in an attempt to avoid eye contact with his father, with tears welling up in his eyes. One part of him wanted to have father's approval, just out of love, but another voice urged him to let the mallard go and fly like the wind and capture the lively scene with his camera. After quite a moment of silence, he turned his eyes in the direction of the camera.To Jeremy's surprise, his father was handing the camera to him. Instinctively, he dropped his gun held the camera close to his chest. But what happened next went really beyond his imagination. His father bent down and apologized, “I'm sorry! I took it for granted that you would like duck hunting.just like me. Sorry! These words immediately lit up Jeremy's world. Once more, he took up the camera and took a picture of his father, seated by the water,bathed in the golden sunlight. And the silent bay miraculously came alive, the birds flying chirping against the blue sky, the fish and ducks wandering freely in the water, and Jeremy enjoying all that beauty to his heart's content.
His father said, “All set, boy ” and Jeremy nodded, picking up his gun with awkward gloved hands. His father pushed open the door and they went out into the freezing dawn together. Ordinarily Jeremy would take out his camera to record the scenery, but not this morning. This was the morning, particularly sacred, when 14-year-old Jeremy would go duck hunting for the first time.
However, he hated it, and had hated the whole idea since his father bought him a gun. But he was determined to go through with it. He loved his father, and wanted his approval more than anything in the world.
They came to a narrow and hidden place facing the bay. Jeremy sat down nervously and waited. To reduce fear, he took a picture of his father against the clean water. Then he put the camera hurriedly on the grass and picked up his gun.
Jeremy got his gun ready. “I'll let you shoot first,” his father said, loading his own gun. “You know, I've been waiting for a long time for this day. Just the two of us..."He broke off, bending forward, eyes narrowed. “There's a small flight heading this way now. Keep your head down. I'll give you the word.”
The sun came out. Jeremy could see everything clearly: his father's face, tense and eager; the white frost on the gun. His heart was beating wildly. He prayed, “Don't let them come, please!”
But they kept coming. "Four black,” his father said. “One mallard (绿头鸭）.” High above, Jeremy heard the pulsing whistle of wings as the flight began to circle. The mallard was leading, his feet dropping down, reaching for the silver-colored water. Closer, closer... “Get set,” his father whispered.
“Now!” cried Jeremy's father. “Take them!”
Jeremy felt his body obey. He stood up, holding the gun. In the same instant, the wild ducks saw the gunners and flew. “Shoot!” said something sharply in Jeremy's brain. But up went the mallard higher still, until suddenly he caught the full force of the wind and flew away, out of range.
注意：
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph 1: His father asked in a controlled voice, “Why didn't you shoot ”___ _______________________
Paragraph 2:To Jeremy's surprise, his father was handing the camera to him.___ ___________________________
Analysis of the text:
1. Who are the main characters in the article What are the descriptions of their personalities and hobbies in the article
Jeremy
I love photography, hate hunting, love my father, and crave his approval
Father
Likes hunting and looks forward to hunting with my son (thinking he also enjoys hunting)
2.What are the time and place where the story takes place in the article What is the description of this time point in the article How helpful is it for describing details
Time: at dawn Description: free; Sacred; The sun comes out; The white frost on the gun
Location: near the clean water
Help: Use environmental description in outdoor scenarios, echoing relevant details of time and place
3.What does the word shoot mean in the original text
The pun meaning of "shoot" is 1: shooting; Meaning 2: Shooting
What are the main contradictions/issues in the article
Superficial contradiction: Should Jeremy shoot for hunting
4.Deep level contradictions:
1) Should Jeremy stick to his interests (taking photos) or choose hunting to gain his father's approval
2) How to get along with a father and son: Do sons have to listen to and like things that the father likes
What should be written at the end of the first paragraph from the beginning of the second paragraph
5.At the beginning of the second paragraph, To Jeremy's surprise, it can be seen that the end of the first paragraph can be written about Jeremy's psychological description after explaining why he didn't shoot, thinking that his father would be angry.
参考范文：
Paragraph 1: His father asked in a controlled voice, “Why didn’t you shoot ” Judging from his expression, it was evident that he was about to explode. Jeremy dropped his head down, tense and speechless. At the thought of losing his father’s approval, he was overcome with a sense of failure, tears falling onto the silent ground. “Son, tell me what’s the matter ” murmured the father, gathering Jeremy into his arms. “You like duck hunting, don’t you ” Jeremy explained that he didn’t like hunting at all and how exciting it was to stroll with him and take photos as usual. Then up went the boy’s head, through his misty eyes, he witnessed his father turning and leaving.（103w）
Paragraph 2: To Jeremy’s surprise, his father was handing the camera to him. “Sorry, I thought you were fond of hunting just like me,” apologized the father, putting the camera on the boy’s palms. Eyes glinting and lips curving into a big smile, the boy was jumping with joy, taking a picture of his father and the charming scenery. Having taking away the gun, the father was bathed in the radiant glow of sun. He could hear the chirps of the birds and laughter from his son. It suddenly dawned on him that he was full of himself in showing his love to his son.（92w）
下水作文:
His father asked in a controlled voice, “Why didn't you shoot " Looking into Jeremy's eyes, he tried to figure out what had happened But the little boy simply looked away.apparently in an attempt to avoid eye contact with his father, with tears welling up in his eyes. One part of him wanted to have father's approval, just out of love, but another voice urged him to let the mallard go and fly like the wind and capture the lively scene with his camera. After quite a moment of silence, he turned his eyes in the direction of the camera.To Jeremy's surprise, his father was handing the camera to him. Instinctively, he dropped his gun held the camera close to his chest. But what happened next went really beyond his imagination. His father bent down and apologized, “I'm sorry! I took it for granted that you would like duck hunting.just like me. Sorry! These words immediately lit up Jeremy's world. Once more, he took up the camera and took a picture of his father, seated by the water,bathed in the golden sunlight. And the silent bay miraculously came alive, the birds flying chirping against the blue sky, the fish and ducks wandering freely in the water, and Jeremy enjoying all that beauty to his heart's content.