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Module 4 Life in the future
Module 4 写作能力提升练
单词
different, robot, machine, weather, clothes,school, traffic, everywhere, pollution...
短语
in the future, long holidays, light work, free time, some day, more and more, a big change...
句型
1. Life in the future will be different.
2. In ten years' time, maybe there won't be any...
3. Students/ Teachers will/ won'...
4. Will there be.../ Is there going to be...
5. I'm looking forward to...
亲爱的同学,你对未来的生活有着怎样的期待呢?请以“My life in the future”为题写一篇英语短文,畅想自己未来的学习、工作和生活。
要求: 语句通顺,合乎逻辑,书写规范。60~80词。
[审题指导]
1.体裁: 记叙文
2.人称: 第一人称
3.时态: 一般将来时
[思路构建]
[精彩范文]
My life in the future
My life in the future will be colorful and meaningful.
I’m going to be a good doctor after I leave school. But I will never give up studying and my robot teacher will help me get more education at home. I believe I’ll help my parents to be healthy and happy. In my spare time, I’ll stay with my family. We’ll travel a lot and do lots of sports. I’ll also read as many books as I can, for I want to be a better man.
I hope my dream will come true with my hard work and that the life in the future will get better and better.
如今,科技给我们的生活带来翻天覆地的变化。二十年后,人们的生活方式一定与现在有很大的不同。请根据下列提示,以“Life in twenty years”为题写一篇英语短文。
提示: 1.谈谈环境变化;2.介绍20年后的日常生活(如:衣、食、住、行等);3.谈谈科技的发展(如:机器人)。
要求: 必须包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥,70词左右。
Life in twenty years
People’s life will be different in 20 years. There will be more trees. The environment will be much better. Some people will live under the sea. Some people will live in the air. Every family will have a small plane or ship, so they will go out by plane or by ship. People won’t have to change their clothes because the clothes will be warm when it is cold and cool when it is hot.
There will be more
trees. The environment will be much better. Some people will
live under the sea. Some people will live in the air. Every
family will have a small plane or ship, so they will go out by
plane or by ship. People won’t have to change their clothes
because the clothes will be warm when it is cold and cool
when it is hot.
Robots will do all the jobs for people so people will have a lot of free time. They will not only have more time to enjoy themselves but also spend more time having trips with their family. I think people’s life will be great in twenty years!
Robots will do all the jobs for people so people will have a lot of free time. They will not only have more time to enjoy themselves but also spend more time having trips with their family. I think people’s life will be great in twenty years!
一、话题分析
本模块的主题是“ 描述未来生活”。通过学习,我们可以描述将来要发生的事情。注意运用一般将来时。
二、写作方法
“三步”法描述未来生活
1. 点明主题。
2. 具体阐述事物的变化。
3. 做出总结,照应主题。
三、素材积累
1. 描述未来生活的常用词汇:
life // future // change // everything // need // will //
maybe // question // machine // robot // dream //
everywhere // easy // hard // hour // cheap // plane //
space // heavy // working // rise // in the future //
come true // be able to // traffic jam // not only...
but also // not...any more // as well // free time
2. 描述未来生活的常用句型:
开头句
1. What will...be like in the future
2. Let’s imagine what our life will be like in the future.
3. What will my dream...be like
中间句
1. My life in the future will be...
2. I think there will be...in the future.
3. My dream school will be...
4. In the future, the traffic is no longer ... And people have ... that can fly.
5. I think I will meet lots of interesting people, so I’ll have more friends.
6. The car will be... It can not only ... but also ...
7. Robots will be popular and they will do what people don’t want to do.
8. There will be...in the future.
结尾句
1. I think the life in the future will be better.
2. I’m sure my dream will come true.
3. My life in the future will get better and better.
四、写作任务
请以 “My dream school” 为题, 写一篇短文介绍一下自己理想中的学校是什么样子的。
提示:
学生将每人拥有一台电脑, 学生在电脑上做作业、交作业。学校里会有很多机器人, 它们可以打扫卫生, 它们也会帮忙查看电子邮件等。
【写作模板】
点明
主题
具体
阐述
总结
What will my dream school be like
Do you want to know
Students can... It’ll be easy...
I think there will be...
My dream school will be very good.
描述未来生活
【高分作文】
My dream school
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What will my dream school be like Do you want to know I think every student will have a computer on the desk. Students can talk with their teachers and classmates on the Internet. They can do their homework on the computer and send it to the teachers by email.
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It will be easy to learn anything. I think there will be many robots in my dream school, too. They will help us do the cleaning. They will also help us check emails. My dream school will be very good.