冀教版七年级下册Unit 1A Trip to the Silk Road 写作能力提升练课件(共23张PPT)

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UNIT 1　A Trip to the Silk Road
UNIT 1　写作能力提升练
单词
special, amazing, chance, guide, culture
短语
have fun, by+交通工具, go on a trip, arrive in/at, be interested in, be famous as/for
句型
1. It is fun to travel to these places of interest.
2. I'm looking forward to the next trip.
3.We will go on a trip to...
4. It is + adj. + to do sth.
5. We can't wait to...
　　假设你是李明，你和朋友刘洋约好下周末一起郊游。请根据下面提示，介绍你们的出行计划。
提示： (1)What is your plan？
(2)What are you going to do？
注意： (1)短文须包括提示中的两个要点，可适当发挥。(2)题目可自拟。(3)词数60左右。
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[审题指导]
1.体裁：记叙文
2.人称：第一人称
3. 时态：一般将来时为主
开篇点题→郊游计划—I make aplan about...
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具体活动→骑行、爬山做游戏等
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总结→期待旅行—I’m looking forward to...
[思路构建]
A Pleasant Trip
　　I’m Li Ming. My best friend Liu Yang will go for an outing with me next weekend. We will meet at the school gate. I make a plan about this trip all by myself.
[范文欣赏]
　　We are going to the park by bike. I design many activities like riding bikes， climbing up the mountain， playing games and so on. First， we will climb up the mountain when we arrive there. Then we will have a picnic on the top of the mountain. Later， we plan to walk down the path and play games. We will go home when the sun sets.
　　I’m looking forward to this trip.
　　“五一”即将来临，请你根据提示写一篇 不少于70词的短文，介绍自己的旅行安排。
1. When and where will you go on a trip？
2. How will you go there？ Why？
3. What will you do during the trip？
4. ...
参考词汇： faster than… 比……快
　　May Day is coming. I’m going on a trip to Beijing with my parents. We want to take a train to Beijing， because it is faster than a bus. The train leaves at 5：00 in the morning and arrives in Beijing at 10：　20　in the morning. We will climb up the Great Wall and visit the Palace Museum on the first day. On the second day， we will go shopping on Wangfujing Street. On the third day， we will come back. I think it will be a great trip.　
　　May Day is coming. I’m going on a trip to Beijing with my parents. We want to take a train to Beijing， because it is faster than a bus. The train leaves at 5：00 in the morning and arrives in Beijing at 10：　20　in the morning. We will climb up the Great Wall and visit the Palace Museum on the first day. On the second day， we will go shopping on Wangfujing Street. On the third day， we will come back. I think it will be a great trip.　
一、话题分析
本单元的话题是A Trip to the Silk Road(丝绸之路之旅）。通过本单元的学习，学生学习描述旅行中的所见、所闻及所感。
二、写作方法
“三步四要素法”写旅游类作文
三步：
1. 确定时态、人称(一般将来时/ 过去时；第一人称为主)。
2. 具体描述(包括出游的方式、途中的见闻、旅游后的感受/ 对旅游的期待等)。
3. 发表感受(发表旅游后的感受和心得)。
四要素：时间、地点、人物及日程安排。
三、素材积累
(一)“旅游类” 作文常用词汇：
go on a trip (to... )//take a bus/train//arrive in/ at //be famous as/for//have a long history//can’t wait to... //on one’s way to//climb up//take a tour//a few//walk along//have a lot of fun//come back//take a photo/picture
(二)“旅游类”作文常用句型：
开头句
1. We will go on a trip to...
2. Do you want to take a tour to...
3. We will visit many places of interest...
中间句
1. There are many places of interest...
2. We will stay there for...
3. On the first/second day, I’ll visit...
结尾句
1. We are tired but happy.
2. I hope you will enjoy... / have a good trip.
四、写作任务
假如你是李欣，你与Bob 叔叔及其家人约定了一起去北京旅行。请你给Bob 叔叔写一封英文电子邮件，告知你的旅行安排。词数70 左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
要点：1. 6 月30 日下午2:00 机场见。
2. 酒店已预订好，直接前往。
3. 第二天观看升旗仪式。
4. 游长城，吃北京烤鸭。
5. 补充一两点与旅行有关的信息或想法。
参考词汇： book v. 预订；directly adv. 直接地；
flag-raising ceremony 升旗仪式
Dear Uncle Bob,
I’m so glad to hear from you about visiting Beijing. Here’s the trip plan. _______________________________
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Look forward to meeting all of you in Beijing.
Li Xin
【写作模板】
确定人称、时态
具体
描述
感受
第一人称
一般将来时
·We’ll meet at...
·We can go to the hotel directly...
·We’ll watch...
·What about the Great Wall
Look forward to...
A trip
【高分作文】
Dear Uncle Bob,
I’m so glad to hear from you about visiting Beijing. Here’s the trip plan. _______________________________
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Look forward to meeting all of you in Beijing.
Li Xin
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Dear Uncle Bob,
I’m so glad to hear from you about visiting Beijing. Here’s the trip plan. We’ll meet at the airport at 2 p.m. on June 30. We can go to the hotel directly to have a rest as I’ve already booked the rooms. The next day we’ll watch the flag-raising ceremony at Tian’anmen Square early in the morning. It must be amazing!
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What about the Great Wall It’s worth visiting and you’ll be impressed. As for dinner, we’ll have the delicious food, Beijing Duck. Honestly, I am getting excited about the trip.
Look forward to meeting all of you in Beijing.
Li Xin