外研版八年级下册Module 3 Journey to space写作能力提升练课件(共22张PPT)

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Module 3　Journey to space
Module 3　写作能力提升练
单词earth,moon,planet,model,news,spaceship,project,astronaut,environment,universe,reach,discover,impossible,just,already,yet
短语
be up to,make... for,no problem,have been to,have gone to,search for information,on the earth,hundreds of,millions of,go around,in space,communicate with sb., some day,wait for,a small part of...
句型
1. I have got some information about the universe.
2. The earth goes around the sun.
3. The astronauts have been to the moon but haven't found any life on it.
4. There has been life on the earth for hundreds of millions of years.
5. The sun and its planets re called the solar system.
本周学校英语校刊的主题为“太空旅行”，要求同学们发挥自己的想象力，描述一次自己的“太空之旅”。假如你是陈诺，请根据以下提示，以“My Journey to Venus”为题，谈谈你的“太空旅行”经历吧！
提示： 1. alien 外星人；2. walk on Venus在金星上行走；3. see other planets看其他的行星；4. basketball match篮球比赛；5. feel excited感到兴奋。
［审题指导］
1.体裁： 记叙文　2.人称： 第一人称为主
3.时态： 主要使用一般过去时
［范文欣赏］
My Journey to Venus
I’m Chen Nuo. I had a great journey to Venus.
After I arrived， I had a walk on it first. I found it wonderful to see other planets from Venus. I met some aliens on the second day. They were very friendly， so we became friends soon. On the third day， I had a special basketball match with my alien friends. It was so great. Then I taught them English and they taught me their language， too.
It was really a special journey. I felt very excited and wanted to go there again.
写作实践
假如现在是2050年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观，举行聚会，与外星人（alien）通电话……总之，你们玩得很愉快。
请根据上述材料，以“An Exciting Trip”为题，以第一人称的形式描述一下你的火星之旅。要求表达准确，语法正确，行文连贯，可适当发挥，词数不少于80。
An Exciting Trip
　Our school organised a great trip to Mars a few days ago and we enjoyed ourselves during our stay there.　
　Our school organised a great trip to Mars a few days ago and we enjoyed ourselves during our stay there.　
　We went to Mars by spaceship. On Mars we went everywhere. We found a lot of things different from those on our earth， such as big stones which can speak. It’s amazing. And we had a party there. Many aliens took an active part in the party. Their songs were very nice.Finally， we made phone calls with aliens on other planets. We all had a good time on Mars.The trip was very interesting and I will never forget it. I hope to travel to Mars again soon.　
　We went to Mars by spaceship. On Mars we went everywhere. We found a lot of things different from those on our earth， such as big stones which can speak. It’s amazing. And we had a party there. Many aliens took an active part in the party. Their songs were very nice.Finally， we made phone calls with aliens on other planets. We all had a good time on Mars.The trip was very interesting and I will never forget it. I hope to travel to Mars again soon.　
一、话题分析
本模块围绕 “Journey to space”展开对宇宙奥妙的学习和讨论, 从而激起学生探索宇宙的欲望。具体到书面表达上, 要求学生能够用所学知识及通过各种途径, 如报纸、电视、网络等获取有关太空的知识, 书写有关太阳、地球、月亮及宇宙飞船的短文。
二、写作方法
“三步”法写太空旅行
第一步: 开门见山, 引出话题。
第二步: 具体描述。
第三步: 总结全文, 谈旅行的感受和希望。
三、素材积累
1. 介绍“太空旅行”类话题的常用词汇：
organize // journey to Mars // far away // by
spaceship // visit // discover // have a good
time // study hard // grow up
2. 介绍“太空旅行”类话题的常用句型：
开头句
1. Our school had/organized a journey to...
2. ... we visited...
3. My dream is to be an astronaut and travel ...
中间句
1. Scientists have discovered...
2. Scientists are working hard in order to...
3. The earth is a planet and it goes around the sun.
4. The sun and its planets are called...
5. There are billions of stars in the Galaxy.
6. Scientists have sent spaceships to...
结尾句
1. I am sure my dream will come true one day if I work hard.
2. I hope to travel... some day/again.
3. The spaceship’s journey to ... can lay the foundation for our visit to other planets.
四、写作任务
千百年来, 科学家们一直在研究火星上是否有生命存在。如今太空专家研究指出火星上存在大量的冰冻水。随着科学的不断发展, 火星有可能成为适合人类生存的第二个星球。50 年后, 我们人类会移居火星吗？请用英语写一篇关于在火星上生活的想象作文, 不少于70词。
【写作模板】
开门见山,
引出话题
具体描述
总结全文，
谈旅行的感受和希望。
Many people believe that we will
live on Mars in 50 years.
Life on Mars is interesting and exciting. We’re looking forward to it.
First, the houses on Mars can…
Second, people on Mars will not go outside…
太空
旅行
【高分作文】
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Life on Mars
Many people believe that we will live on Mars in 50 years.
First, the houses on Mars can prevent the solar radiation and keep warm all day and all night. So we will not feel too hot or cold in our houses.
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Second, people on Mars will not go outside because of the heavy traffic. So there will be online supermarkets, schools, cinemas and many other places instead of real ones. Also, there will be more bus stations and taxi stands in the sky on Mars.
Life on Mars is interesting and exciting. We’re looking forward to it.