Module 1 Feelings and impressions 写作能力提升练(共22张PPT)2023-2024学年外研版八年级英语下册

(共22张PPT)
Module 1　Feelings and impressions
Module 1　写作能力提升练
单词
friendly,outgoing,helpful,strict,dislike,hair,tall,short,long,eye,glasses,jeans,trousers,T-shirt,shirt,bright,strong,thin
短语
look like,be willing to,more... than..., a pair of glasses,get along with,be kind to,be ready to help others,short / long hair,of medium height,be proud of
句型
1. He / She has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses.
2. He / She is good at / does well in playing the violin.
3. His / Her favourite subject is maths.
4. He / She always helps people out of trouble.
5. He / She helps me a lot with my maths.
你已经是八年级的中学生了，这些年来，许多老师为你的成长辛勤付出。请根据提示内容写一篇短文来描述你最喜欢的老师。不少于80词。
提示： 1. 他/她的外貌；2. 他/她的兴趣爱好；3. 他/她的性格；4. 他/她的教学风格（举例说明）。
［审题指导］
1.体裁： 记叙文　　2.人称： 以第三人称为主
3.时态： 主要使用一般现在时
［思路构建］
［范文欣赏］
My favourite teacher is Mr Zhang.
He has short hair. He’s tall. He likes reading all kinds of books， writing and doing exercise every day. He’s outgoing and popular. He can make a speech for an hour. He’s very patient and he is never angry with his students. He always encourages his students to study actively. He said， “I’m happy to have such students. It is these students who give me the chance to show my ability to educate them.”
I was not good at learning in the beginning. I have made great progress because he keeps encouraging me and never says anything bad to me.
回想一下自己的成长过程，对你影响最深的老师是谁？请你根据以下要点提示，以“The Nicest Teacher in My Heart”为题，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。
提示： 1. 他/她的外貌；2.他/她的性格；3.他/她对你影响深刻的原因；4.……
写作实践
The Nicest Teacher in My Heart
In my junior high school life， I have some special memories. One of them is about a teacher. In my heart， 　Mr Wang， my English teacher， is the nicest teacher. He is of medium height and very handsome. He is strict with us in English. About one year ago， Mr Wang noticed that I was worried about my pronunciation.
Mr
Wang， my English teacher， is the nicest teacher. He is of
medium height and very handsome. He is strict with us in
English. About one year ago， Mr Wang noticed that I was
worried about my pronunciation.
So he offered me some advice and encouraged me to improve it. He also gave me chances to speak as much as possible in class. With his help， my pronunciation is very good now. I wish him a healthy and happy life in the future.　
So he offered me some advice and encouraged me to improve
it. He also gave me chances to speak as much as possible in
class. With his help， my pronunciation is very good now. I
wish him a healthy and happy life in the future.　
一、话题分析
本模块主题是“感觉和印象”, 与此相关的写作任务通常是描述人物。写描述人物的文章时, 首先要介绍人物的基本信息, 如姓名、年龄、国籍等。然后从人物的外貌、兴趣爱好及性格特征等方面进行描述, 时态通常用一般现在时。
二、写作方法
“三步”法谈论对人物的印象
步骤一：开门见山, 引出人物。
步骤二：多方展开, 介绍人物。
步骤三：总结全文, 表达感受。
三、素材积累
1. 谈论人物印象类话题的常用词汇：
pretty // handsome // tall // short // fat // thin //
wear // jeans // coat // dress // glasses // fair //
nervous // kind // friendly // polite // helpful...
2. 谈论人物印象类话题的常用句型：
开头句
1. My favourite teacher is ...
2. ... is my good friend.
中间句
1. She/He is tall with... hair.
2. She/He often wears a pair of glasses.
3. She/He has many hobbies, such as...
4. She/He gets on well with...
5. She/He is helpful and always friendly to...
结尾句
1. We’re all proud of...
2. I’m... to have such a good friend.
四、写作任务
老师与我们朝夕相处, 对我们有着深厚的感情。他们不仅传授我们知识, 更教导我们如何做人。请以“My favourite teacher”为题写一篇英语短文, 从外貌、衣着、爱好、授课等方面描述你最喜欢的老师。
要点：1. 语句通顺, 意思连贯, 条理清晰；
2. 80 词左右。
【写作模板】
引出人物
介绍人物
表达感受
My favourite teacher is Miss Liu.
I’m proud of having such a good teacher.
She is... years old.
She is very pretty with...
She is very friendly, so we...
She enjoys... and she is good at...
Miss Liu loves us and teaches...
Her classes are... , so we...
【高分作文】
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My favourite teacher
My favourite teacher is Miss Liu. She teaches us English.
She is about thirty years old. She is very pretty with long black hair. She likes wearing a white dress. She is very friendly, so we all get on well with her.
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She has many hobbies and she is good at sports, especially tennis. Sometimes she plays with us after school. Miss Liu loves us very much and teaches us so well. Her classes are always lively and interesting, so we all like taking English classes.
I’m proud of having such a good teacher.