广东省部分地区2023-2024学年高二上学期期末英语汇编：读后续写（含解析）

广东省部分地区2023-2024学年高二上学期期末英语试题分类汇编
读后续写
广东省广州市越秀区2023-2024学年高二上学期期末考试英语试卷（含解析）
第三节(满分15分)
57. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Ellie had always been a planner. From a young age she had organized her toys by color and size, planned her outfits for school days in advance, and created detailed schedules for her summer vacation. It was no surprise to anyone when Ellie decided to plan the perfect birthday party for her best friend, Sarah.
Ellie spent weeks carefully selecting the perfect decorations, choosing the tastiest snacks, and coming up with the most fun activities for Sarah’s birthday party. She even created a detailed plan for the day, down to the minute. Everything was going according to plan until the unexpected happened.
As the party guests arrived, Ellie was excited to show them all the amazing activities she had planned. However, when she led everyone to the backyard for the first activity, she was shocked to find that the stage she had rented for performing programs was nowhere to be found. Ellie’s heart sank as she realized that her perfect plan was falling apart.
In a panic, Ellie tried to come up with a solution. She called the rental company, but they had no record of her reservation. She tried to distract the guests with other activities, but nothing seemed to work. Ellie’s stress levels were through the roof as she realized that her carefully crafted plan was failing.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为80词左右；
2. 段首句已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Just as Ellie was about to give up hope Sarah approached her with a big smile on her face.
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广东省茂名市电白区2023—2024学年高二上学期期末质量监测英语试卷（含解析）
第三节（满分25分）
57. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
A boy named Ali had a large and harmonious family, happily living with his sisters, parents and grandmother. His grandmother loved everyone a lot and was respected by all family members. She was very old, but sometimes she would recall things from her past and share with them. Sometimes they would believe her but at other times they would think that Granny might be mixing up the facts due to her old age.
One day, when Ali was in school, suddenly while knitting (编织), Granny remembered something and she couldn’t contain her emotions so she got up to tell her son — Ali’s father. She walked as fast as she could to his room and said, “You always asked about my birth date, but do you know today is the day when I was born ”
She looked at her son with an excited expression, expecting an immediate response. However, her son wondered how she could remember her date of birth in this old age when she forgot so many other things, so he didn’t pay much attention to this. Disappointed at her son’s reaction, Granny then went to Ali’s mother and Ali’s sister, but like Ali’s father, nobody believed her.
Sadly, she went and sat in the terrace (庭院). When Ali returned from his school, he found his grandmother sitting alone with a sad expression. Ali asked his granny about the matter, but she said there was nothing to worry about. After a lot of persuasion she finally told him what was troubling her — nobody seemed to care that it was her birthday today!
After hearing what Granny said, Ali thought of a plan. Purely by chance, some of Ali’s friends were playing nearby so he shared his plan with them.
His friends were all willing to help Ali achieve what he planned.
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Ali was so happy to see his granny with tears of joy shining in her eyes.
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广东省深圳市宝安区2023-2024学年高二上学期期末英语试卷（含解析）
第二节（满分25分）
62. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
When I was four years old, I learned an important lesson about trust and water. It was a lesson I would carry with me for the rest of my life.
I remember those lazy summer days when my father and I used to play in the swimming pool. He was a giant in the water, his chest towering above the surface, while I struggled to keep my head above water. One day, he decided it was time to teach me how to swim. Here assured me, “Put your head underwater. It’s not scary, I promise.” But my four-year-old self was too afraid of the unknown depths. What if something happened to me down there I couldn’t take the risk. My father pointed to a distant flag and said, “Look at that flag!” As soon as I turned to look, his hands pushed my head beneath the water. For a brief moment, I couldn’t see or breathe. Then, just as quickly, he let go, and l emerged breathing for air. It was a memory that stayed with me.
A year later, during a family vacation in Miami when I was five, my father suggested we try the waterslide at the hotel pool. The slide was tall and full of twists and turns that made me dizzy just looking at it. He said, “Let’s go. If you’re scared, we can come back down.” I climbed to the top but refused to slide. I remembered his trick from the previous year. Unexpectedly, he lightly pushed me, and I went sliding down with a splash.
Over the years, with my father’s challenge and company, I tried various kinds of adventurous water sports, including surfing, sailing, and rafting. Gradually, I had turned from distrusting my father to trusting myself. As I turned 18, my father prepared a special gift for me, cliff-diving in Red Rocks, Arizona, where participants jumped off cliffs(悬崖) into bodies of water. After hours of flight and drive, we were there.
注意：1.续写次数应为80左右；
2.开头已给出。
I stood on a cliff, facing the deep sea and vast sky and preparing to jump.
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广东省深圳市光明区2023-2024学年高二上学期1月期末英语试题（含解析）
第二节 读后续写(满分20分)
57. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写一段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Juju was the star dancer at school. She had a smile that would light up the room and movements as if she was creating the music. But when she was away from her high school dance class, she was more quiet, a little bit cautious — something the group of girls in her class noticed.
In fact, Juju’s real name is Julie. Raised up as an orphan (孤儿), she experienced a lack of familial support, which contributed to her sense of loneliness. More often than not, she hid behind the nickname, creating a bright character that covered up the pain she was experiencing. Julie kept schoolmates at a distance but let Juju out when the music was on. Though as an excellent dancer, her biggest regret was that none of her family ever came to watch her performances. She would watch sadly as other students were greeted with flowers and hugs from parents after the performances.
Observing Julie’s closed nature outside of the dance room, Corrina, one of the other dance students, sensed her need for companionship. When she found her at lunchtime sitting alone, Corrina would invite Julie to join her table with other dance kids, including her as a member of their extended “family”. At first, they talked about dance and music. As the conversation turned to family, Juju would quickly shift the subject back to dance.
Despite this initial hesitance, trust between the girls gradually developed, and then a sister-like bond. They started spending more time together, not just in dance-related activities but also in their personal lives.
As their high school years ended, the closing night performance for graduation was around the corner. While everyone was filled with excitement, Corrina sensed Julie’s anxiety as curtain time approached. She knew Julie feared the post-show loneliness of having no family to celebrate with. So she took it upon herself to ensure that Julie didn’t feel alone on this important night.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为 100 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Determined to plan a surprise for Julie as a “family”, Corrina gathered other girls.
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Mike was a big fan of football.When he was ten years old，he was admitted to join his first football team.As soon as he got home that day，he put on his uniform and admired himself in front of the mirror.
"I'm a real football player!" He said to himself and pretended to practise football.
"What are you doing，silly boy？" asked his older sister.
"I'm practising football，" said Mike.
"When people practise football，they usually use a ball，" his sister laughed.
Mike then found a football in the basement and hurried back to his room，posing with the ball in front of the mirror，again.
The next day，Mike met his teammates on the playground.The coach taught them how to kick and run after the ball.He taught them how to throw the ball in from the sidelines，using two hands while keeping both feet on the ground.Finally，they had a practice game.
It turned out that playing football was a lot harder than it looked.Every time Mike was about to kick the ball，someone else kicked it away from him.When Mike threw the ball in from the sideline，he forgot to keep both feet on the ground.The only thing that Mike was good at was cheering.Whoever scored，he would jump up and cheer for them.
On the weekend，Mike's team was invited to take part in its first real competition with the Sun.Mike's family all came to watch.Mike chased the ball up and down，with excitement.It came as no surprise that their team lost the match.Even so，he kept cheering for anyone who scored.
After the game，his sister came over and reminded Mike that he needed to be a real football player，not just a cheerleader.Meanwhile，his coach told Mike that if he tried to do more practice and cooperate with his teammates，he could be a better football player，too.
注意：
（1）续写词数应为150个左右；
（2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Motivated by their words，Mike started to take the training more seriously.

Finally，the day for the match between his team and the Sun came.

参考答案
广东省广州市越秀区2023-2024学年高二上学期期末考试英语试卷（含解析）
【答案】Just as Ellie was about to give up hope, Sarah approached her with a big smile on her face. “Don’t worry, Ellie,” she said. “This might not be the party you planned, but it’s going to be just as fun. Let’s make the best of it and have a great time together.” Ellie was surprised by Sarah’s words, but she also felt a sense of relief. She realized that sometimes the best laid plans don’t always work out, but that doesn’t mean you can’t still have a good time. With Sarah’s encouragement, Ellie embraced the present and let go of her obsession with the perfect party. The guests joined in, and soon everyone was having a great time.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Ellie是个爱计划的人，她为自己的好朋友设计了完美地生日派对，但是突发事件的发生让她手忙脚乱，幸亏了朋友Sarah的安慰，她才明白了接受现实、享受当下，反而会更美好。
【详解】1.段落续写：
由首句内容“就在Ellie快要放弃希望的时候，Sarah带着灿烂的笑容走近了她。”可知，本段可描写Sarah如何安慰Ellie，并让她学会享受当下。
2.续写线索：Ellie非常有计划，做事都是按照计划而行——Ellie决定为好朋友Sarah计划一个完美的生日派对——经过几个星期的准备，Ellie觉得一切都没有问题——然而生日当天，Ellie发现第一项活动就出现了意外，她一下就慌了——她很想解决问题，但是并未成功——就在Ellie快要崩溃的时候，Sarah走过来告诉Ellie，有时候接受现实、享受当下也很美好
3.词汇激活
行为类
①充分利用：make the best of/make the most of
②玩得开心：have a good time/have fun
③拥抱：embrace/hug
情绪类
①使惊讶：surprise/astonish
②缓解、缓和：relief/easement
【点睛】【高分句型1】She realized that sometimes the best laid plans don’t always work out, but that doesn’t mean you can’t still have a good time.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）
【高分句型2】This might not be the party you planned, but it’s going to be just as fun.（运用了省略关系代词that/which的定语从句修饰先行词party）
广东省茂名市电白区2023—2024学年高二上学期期末质量监测英语试卷（含解析）
【答案】 His friends were all willing to help Ali achieve what he planned. With Ali acting as the director, stage designer and host, preparation for a performance stage was soon finished. Afterwards, a series of eye-catching performances, ranging from dancing, crosstalk, acrobatics and magic tricks were given by Ali’s friends. By this time, the audience had expanded from granny to Ali’s whole family, all of whom gave thunderous applause to the carefully staged shows. Towards the end, a huge banner saying ‘Happy Birthday, granny!’ was put up on the central stage, which pushed the warm and loving atmosphere to its peak.
Ali was so happy to see his granny with tears of joy shining in her eyes. “For all my life, I have… never spent… my birthday with so many… relatives and… lovely kids. Thank you, Ali and all of you kids.” Granny stammered, choking up with gratitude and bliss. “Never mind, granny!” Ali grinned, knowing deep down that the real reason for granny’s tears was not the party itself, but love, care and trust from her family members, which she believed were gone when they reacted indifferently to her ‘made-up’ birthday.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了Ali的祖母年纪很大了，她经常会回忆起过去的事情和家人们分享。有一次祖母想起今天是她的生日，但是家人们都不相信她，认为她记错了，祖母很伤心，Ali放学回来后知道了这件事，想出了一个计划，并把计划告诉了附近的一些朋友。
【详解】1.段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“他朋友们都愿意帮助Ali实现他的计划。”可知，第一段可描写Ali的朋友是如何帮助他实现计划的。
②由第二段首句内容“Ali很高兴看到他的奶奶眼里闪烁着喜悦的泪水。”可知，第二段可描写祖母的反应以及Ali的感悟。
2.续写线索：准备——表演——观众鼓掌——奶奶感动流泪——感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①完成：finish/complete
②扩大：expand/extend
③反应：react/respond
情绪类
①喜悦：joy/delight/pleasure
②感谢：gratitude/appreciation
【点睛】[高分句型1] By this time, the audience had expanded from granny to Ali’s whole family, all of whom gave thunderous applause to the carefully staged shows. （由“介词短语+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句）
[高分句型2] Ali grinned, knowing deep down that the real reason for granny’s tears was not the party itself, but love, care and trust from her family members, which she believed were gone when they reacted indifferently to her ‘made-up’ birthday. （由连接词that引导宾语从句、which引导非限制性定语从句和when引导的时间状语从句）
广东省深圳市宝安区2023-2024学年高二上学期期末英语试卷（含解析）
【答案】I stood on a cliff, facing the deep sea and vast sky, preparing to jump. My heart raced with excitement and apprehension, recalling my father’s encouragement through the years. With a deep breath, I closed my eyes and took a step forward, surrendering to the unknown depths below. The rush of wind and adrenaline filled me as I plummeted towards the water. But amidst the fear, there was liberation, a feeling of breaking free. Emerging from the water, I surfaced with newfound confidence, grateful for the lessons learned and the bond with my father.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了自己在父亲的引导下，如何逐渐克服对未知和危险的恐惧，学会信任自己，并最终成长为一个敢于尝试各种冒险水上运动的人。
【详解】1.段落续写：
由首句内容“我站在悬崖上，面对着深海和广阔的天空，准备跳下去。”可知，本段可描写作者回忆起父亲曾经的引导，终于战胜自我，跳了下去。
2.续写线索：作者四岁时，父亲教作者游泳，一把将作者按到水下——五岁时，作者的父亲将作者从高高的滑水道推了下去，作者滑了下去——作者18岁时，父亲安排作者进行悬崖跳水——作者终于战胜自我，跳了下去——作者也明白了父亲的爱
3.词汇激活
行为类
①回顾：recall/look back on
②屈服：surrender/give in
③向前：take a step forward/step forward
情绪类
①兴奋：excitement/thrill
②感激的：grateful/thankful
【点睛】【高分句型1】The rush of wind and adrenaline filled me as I plummeted towards the water.（运用了as引导的状时间语从句）
【高分句型2】Emerging from the water, I surfaced with newfound confidence, grateful for the lessons learned and the bond with my father.（运用了现在分词担当状语和过去分词担当后置定语）
广东省深圳市光明区2023-2024学年高二上学期1月期末英语试题（含解析）
【答案】Determined to plan a surprise for Julie as a “family”, Corrina gathered other girls. As Corrina explained the plan, it became evident that other girls approved to help. They agreed to arrange for their parents to send her a bouquet of flowers, a hug and a group photo after the performance. All went smoothly that day.It was the time when the perfomance was over.To her surprise,many parents applauded warmly and approched Julie to give her the best wishes and flowers.Julie was moved to tears and felt blessed with so many friends helping her achieve her dream eventually.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了学校舞蹈明星Juju是个乐观的女孩，但是作为孤儿被养大的Juju最大的遗憾是她的家人从来没有来看她的表演。随着他们高中生活的结束，毕业典礼的闭幕演出即将到来。当每个人都充满了兴奋时，随着演出时间的临近，科琳娜感觉到朱莉的焦虑。科瑞娜召集了其他女孩，为Juju这个“家人”一个惊喜。
【详解】1.段落续写：①由段首句内容“科琳娜决心为Juju这个“家人”策划一个惊喜，于是召集了其他女孩。”可知，本段可描写科琳娜和其他女孩为Juju策划的惊喜以及Juju的心情。
2.续写线索：商量计划——出主意——表演——祝贺——表达感激之情
3.词汇激活
行为类
①同意：agree/approve
②走近：approch/get closer
③表明：give/show/indicate
情绪类
①令她惊讶的是：To her surprise/To her amazement
②感动的泪水：moved tears/touched tears
【点睛】[高分句型1]. As Corrina explained the plan, it became evident that other girls approved to help.(运用了as引导的状语从句和that引导的主语从句)
[高分句型2]. Julie was moved to tears and felt blessed with so many friends helping her achieve her dream eventually.(运用了现在分词作宾语补足语)
2023-2024学年广东省阳江市高新区高二（上）期末英语试卷
【分析】这是一篇记叙文，本文以人物为线索展开，讲述Mike热爱足球并加入一支足球队，但他自己不擅长踢足球，只会为进球而欢呼，在一次比赛输掉后，他的教练说道，如果他努力多练习，与队友合作，他也可以成为一名更好的足球运动员。
高分句型一：Every time he felt too tired to continue，their words lifted his spirits and pushed him to rise to his feet again.
翻译：每当他感到太累而无法继续时，他们的话都会振奋他的精神，促使他重新站起来。
分析：本句使用了every time引导的时间状语从句。
高分句型二：Instead of chasing the ball up and down aimlessly，he kept passing the ball right to his teammates who were better at scoring.
翻译：他没有漫无目的地上下追球，而是一直把球传给更擅长得分的队友。
分析：本句使用了who引导的限制性定语从句。
【解答】Motivated by their words，Mike started to take the training more seriously.Day after day，he spared no effort to practice，regardless of wind or rain.Every time he felt too tired to continue，their words lifted his spirits and pushed him to rise to his feet again.【高分句型一】With the coach's guidance and his dedicated training，Mike found himself making steady progress.The whole team also became more confident and was looking forward to the next match against the Sun.（Mike在教练的指导下不断练习并取得进步，他期待下场比赛）
Finally，the day for the match between his team and the Sun came.Thinking of all the effort he had made for the game，Mike，fully-prepared and confident，took a deep breath and stepped onto the football field.Instead of chasing the ball up and down aimlessly，he kept passing the ball right to his teammates who were better at scoring.【高分句型二】At length，his team won the game and all the teammates ran to him and threw him into the air with deafening cheers.（Mike的球队和太阳队比赛并获得最后胜利）
【点评】（1）品读原文，确定文章线索
每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索。
（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求
一般短文后面的"注意"都有对此次短文续写的具体要求，如词数限制使用几处标有下划线的关键词语。续写段落的首句提示，这样考生可以做到"心中有数"。
（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路
根据文章后面的要求，再次快速阅读短文，抓住文章的思路结合段首的提示语最终确定续写段落的思路。
（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句
在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中画线的关键词拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。