Module 8 写作能力提升练 课件 2023-2024学年外研版英语八年级下册（26张PPT）

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Module 8　Time off
Module 8　写作能力提升练
素材典藏
短语
have a picnic,the top of..., summer vacation,by train,places of interest,take photos,be famous for
句型
1. Travelling can not only help us to gain knowledge about geography and history,but also help us keep healthy.
2. Travelling has now become more and more popular.
3. Travelling will relax your mind and soul.
经典例题
假如你是玲玲，上周日你和父母去颐和园游玩。请根据表格提示向你的同学们介绍一下颐和园和你们的游玩经历及感受。
Distance （距离） about fifteen kilometres from the centre of the city
Size covers （占） about 3 square kilometres
Distance （距离）
Famous Tourist Spot （著名旅游景点） the Longevity Hill （万寿山）
［审题指导］
1.体裁： 记叙文　　　2.人称： 第一人称为主
3.时态： 一般过去时为主
［范文欣赏］
My parents and I spent some time visiting the Summer Palace last Sunday.
It is a lovely park in the northwest of Beijing. It’s only about fifteen kilometres from the centre of the city. It covers about 3 square kilometres. One of the famous sights is the Longevity Hill. My father drove us to the park that morning and it took us about 2 hours. We found that there were many people in the park. So we decided to climb up to the top of the Longevity Hill. When we got there， we had a clear view of the whole park.
It’s a place worth visiting. I’m looking forward to visiting it again.
写作实践
随着人们生活水平的提高， 旅游成为同学们休闲放松的一种方式。去年暑假你和朋友去了湖南省张家界旅游， 请你根据表格提示写一篇英语作文， 介绍一下张家界并说明你们的活动情况。
Where about 330 kilometres from Changsha
Be famous for the strange shape of tall rocks
Things you did climbed Mount Tianzi
walked down the path
went to Dongting Lake
camped by a small lake in the evening
注意： 1. 词数：80左右；
2. 可以适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯。
　I went to Zhangjiajie with my friend last summer holiday. It’s in Hunan Province. It’s about 　33　0 kilometres from Changsha. It’s very large. It’s famous for the strange shape of its tall rocks. Some of them look like humans while others look like wild animals.　
　I went to Zhangjiajie with my friend last summer holiday. It’s in Hunan Province. It’s about 　33　0 kilometres from Changsha. It’s very large. It’s famous for the strange shape of its tall rocks. Some of them look like humans while others look like wild animals.　
　We climbed Mount Tianzi！ From the top we could see the lakes and forests. And we walked down the path after that. The next day， we went to Dongting Lake， the second－largest freshwater lake in China. We camped by a small lake in the evening. We really had a good time.　
　We climbed Mount Tianzi！ From the top we could see the lakes and forests. And we walked down the path after that. The next day， we went to Dongting Lake， the second－largest freshwater lake in China. We camped by a small lake in the evening. We really had a good time.　
一、话题分析
本模块的话题是谈论旅行和假期。我们可以通过介绍名胜古迹来培养对自然风光的热爱。介绍旅游休假的经历。具体到书面表达中，要求同学们能够运用所学知识来描述自己旅行的起因、经过及感受等。
二、写作方法
“六要素”法写旅游经历类作文
时间、地点、人物、交通方式、景点活动、感受。
三、素材积累
1. 旅游经历类话题的常用词汇：
sights // by train // be famous for // in the north
of // take photos
2. 旅游经历类话题的常用句型：
开头句
1. Traveling is good for our health.
2. ...is a great city with a long history.
3. I’m having a wonderful time in...
中间句
1. Last summer I went to...with...
2. There are many places of interest in...
3. It’s famous for...It’s one of the...
4. It’s about ...square kilometres.
5. It’s in the east/west/south/north of...
6. You can go there by...and it takes you about...
7. We enjoyed many beautiful sights there, such as...
结尾句
1. What a pleasant outing it was!
2. I hope everyone can enjoy himself during the travel.
四、写作任务
根据提示，写一篇内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的短文。
假如你是林涛, 上周日你和父母去北京颐和园游玩，请你向同学们介绍一下颐和园和你们的游玩经历及感受。开头已给出。
Location (位置) in the west of Beijing
Size covers ( 覆盖) about 3 square kilometres
Famous Tourist Spot ( 著名旅游景点) the Longevity Hill ( 万寿山)
提示词：
lovely park, find, decide, climb up to, foreigners...
【写作模板】
时间、地点、人物、交通方式
景点活动
感受
My parents and I, the Summer Palace, last Sunday, by bus
I hope the city will become...
One of the famous tourist spots is ..., climb up to...
旅游
经历
【高分作文】
My parents and I spent some time off in the Summer Palace last Sunday. _________________________________
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My parents and I spent some time off in the Summer Palace last Sunday.
It is a lovely park in the west of Beijing. It covers about 3 square kilometres. One of the famous tourist spots is the Longevity Hill. We got there by bus and it took us about 2 hours. We found that there were many people in the park. So we decided to climb up to the top of the Longevity Hill.
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When we got to the top, we could saw the whole park. There we met a few foreigners. They said that they liked Beijing very much. I was really proud of our city when I heard that.
I hope the city will become more and more beautiful and people all over the world will come to visit it every year.