Unit 7 What's the highest mountain in the world SectionB 写作课件(共32张PPT，含内嵌视频)人教版英语八年级下册

(共32张PPT)
Unit 7 What’s
the highest mountain in
the world
Section B
3a-3b Writing
Writing：Write a passage about
animal protection.
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Topic：Facts on whales and
dangers they face
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New words: whale, oil,
protection, huge
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Learning objectives
CONTENTS
What is this
animal
2. What do you
know about it
A whale.
Let's watch a video !
Let’s play a game to know something about whale,
then finish 3a.
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have teeth.
huge
What do they look like
They are _______(巨大的).
Some kinds_________(有牙齿)
Let’s play game to know something about whale,
then finish 3a.
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Where do they live
A. In the lake湖
B. In the river 河
C. In the sea海洋
Let’s play game to know something about whale,
then finish 3a.
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What do they eat
A. fruit and vegetables
B. small fish and other sea life
C. chicken, beef and mutton
Let’s play game to know something about whale,
then finish 3a.
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jump out of
sing songs
What can they do
They can ________ （从...跳出）the water and _______ （唱歌）under the water.
Let’s play game to know something about whale,
then finish 3a.
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1. Humans_______ whales for meat, fat and oil.
人类为了肉、脂肪和油抓捕鲸鱼
2. 水污染_____________________.
3.Whales parts______to make things like candles and soap.
部分鲸鱼卖去制造像蜡烛和肥皂的东西
Water pollution
catch
sold
The whales are in great danger now.
Why are they in great danger
Let’s play game to know something about whale,
then finish 3a.
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Students
government
政府
1.Stop_______the rubbish ______ the sea.
停止放垃圾到海洋里
2.Learn more about whales.
学习更多关于鲸
putting into
1.Rules on __________________
关于鲸鱼保护规则
whale protection
How can we protect them
3a
Pre-writing
Read the following words and phrases about whales. Put them in the correct place in the chart.
Humans catch whales for meat, Live in the sea
fat and oil Some kinds have teeth
Eat small fish and other sea life Learn more about whales
Jump high out of the water Stop putting rubbish into the sea
Rules on whale protection Sing songs
Huge Whale parts sold to make things
Water pollution like candles and soap
Huge;
Live in the sea
Eat small fish and other sea life
1. Jump high out of the water;
1. Humans catch whales for meat, fat and oil;
1.Rules on whale protection;
2. Water pollution;
3. Whale parts sold to make
things like candles and soap
2.Learn more about whales;
3.Stop putting rubbish into the sea
Some kinds have teeth
2. Sing songs
What do they look like
Where do they live
What do they eat
What can they do
Why do some of them
have to be protected
How can we protect
them
basic information
why in danger
ways to protect
Beginning
Body
Ending
Whales are … They live in … They eat … They can … One interesting fact is … Another interesting fact is … Some kinds of whales are in danger because …
We should protect whales from …
I think people should / shouldn’t …
Write a paragraph about whales and why they need to be protected. Use the information in 3a. Then make a poster.
3b
While-writing
1.审题
Examine
the topic
2.布局
Layout
3.造句
Make sentences
4.成篇
Complete article
5.检查修改
Check and modify
写
作
技
巧
思路引导
审题 体裁 话题
时态 人称
段落布局 Whales are … They live in … They eat … They can … One interesting fact is … Another interesting fact is …
介绍鲸鱼的基本信息
说明鲸鱼面临的危险
提出保护鲸鱼的建议
说明文
保护鲸鱼
以一般现在时为主
以第三人称和
第一人称为主
While-writing
Some kinds of whales are in danger because …
We should protect whales from …
I think people should / shouldn’t …
Beginning
Body
Ending
Whales
What do they look like
Whales are huge animals and some kinds have teeth.
basic information
Para. 1
Whales
Where do they live
They live in the sea and like eating small fish and other sea life.
basic information
What do they eat
Whales
basic information
What they can do
One interesting fact is whale can jump high out of the water and even sing songs.
Whales
Why do some of them have to be protected
But some kinds of whales are in danger.
Firstly, humans catch whales for meat, fat and oil. Secondly, water pollution is also a big problem. Another reason is that whale parts are sold to make things like candles and soap.
why in danger
Para. 2
Whales
How can we protect them
So what can we do
I think we should learn more about whales and make more rules on whale protection.
What’s more, we must stop putting rubbish into the sea.
ways to protect
Para. 3
connecting words
first , firstly , first of all , in the first place ...
finally, at last, last but not least ,in a word, all in all...
secondly, and, also, what' s more, meanwhile(同时，其间), besides(此外；而且), in addition( 另外), moreover（而且；此外） ...
结尾：提出倡议和号召
No trading, no killing.
Don't wait. Join us now ！
Start to join us now ！
Save animals! Save Ourselves ！
Save our planet!
Let's do it now ！
Please, don't do it again !
As students, we should start
from ourselves.
writing
What do they look like Where do they live
What do they eat What can they do
Why do we protect whales
What should we do
Beginning
Body
Ending
Whales are sea animals. They live in the sea. They eat small fish and other sea animals. They can jump high out of water. One interesting fact is that some kids have teeth. Another interesting fact is that they can sing songs.
But now some kinds of whales are in danger because there is more and more water pollution and people even catch whales for meat, fat and oil. Or people sold whale parts to make candles and soap.
We should protect whales from learning more about whales and the rules on whale protection. I think people should stop putting rubbish into the sea.
As students, we should start from ourselves!
Summary
words
Writing
whale, oil, protection, huge
Write a passage about animal protection
Topic
Facts on whales and dangers they face
Homework
书面表达
10月4日是世界动物日，你校组织以“I Want to Be a Volunteer of Protecting Animals”为主题的英语演讲比赛。假如李明参加比赛，请你以李明的名义写一篇英语演讲稿推荐自己，内容如下：
品质 善良，善待动物
爱好 ……（至少两点）
事迹 为Save China’s Tigers筹款……（至少一点）
感悟 动物是人类的朋友；保护动物就是保护我们自己
打算 ……（至少两点）
Homework
要求：1. 词数70左右；
2. 所写短文必须包括表格中的内容，自由发挥的内容必须
围绕主题。
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。
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Thanks for listening!