2024高考英语备考专题04-2023北京卷- 三年（2021-2024）高考英语小作文真题全解（含答案）
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三年（2021-2024）年高考英语小作文真题全解全析
专题04 2023年北京卷
真题原文
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，
内容包括：(1)活动形式 (2)活动内容
注 意：(1)词数100左右 (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
真题解析
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生站在李华的角度思考可以给出哪些能帮助英国好友 Jim 策划好以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动的建议，并用英文回一封电子邮件。邮件的内容必须包括活动形式和活动内容。
具体来看，题目创设了贴近现实生活的交际情景，明确了交际人物的活动背景与交际对象的身份，旨在考查学生的语言运用能力与解决生活问题的能力。因此，在构思具体的写作内容时，考生要结合个人生活经历，针对策划活动展开思考，运用所学知识，重点从活动形式和活动内容这两方面提出合理的建议。可通过补充细节，达到有效交际的目的。
考生在回复邮件时，需牢记应用文的写作要求：涵盖所有要点，详略得当；语言准确、得体，句式灵活；条理清晰，行文连贯。
在表达上，要注意 用建议式的语句，关注开头和结尾的交际用语。此外，要准确运用到与“建议”有关的关键词，如suggest,advise 等。具体写作时，可以按照以下四个步骤进行：审题立意，谋篇布局，组织语言，检查全文。
写作小贴士：
文章要覆盖所有的内容要点，并合理展开。
使用得体的交际用语，提供合理的建议。
恰当使用连接词以使文章衔接连贯。
范文赏析1
Dear Jim,
I'm delighted to know that you are launching a campaign with the theme of “Green Beijing” and I'm writing to offer you some suggestions.
Since you are the president of the Cycling Club,it's a great idea to organize a cycling trip to raise people's awareness of green travel. As for the route,you can start from Xidan and travel eastward to Sun Park, where you can stop and take a rest.Then you and your team members can showcase your carefully designed posters on the topic of “Green Beijing”. This can surely attract the attention of the tourists and encourage them to participate in the activity.
Hope these tips can be helpful and wish you every success for the event.
Yours sincerely;
Li Hua
亲爱的吉姆：
我很高兴了解到你正在发起一场以“绿色北京”为主题的活动，我写信是想给你一些建议。
考虑到你是自行车俱乐部的部长，组织一次骑行是个好主意，这可以增强人们关于绿色出行的意识。至于路线，你可以从西单出发，向东行进至朝阳公园，在那里你可以停下来休息。然后，你和团队成员可以展示你们精心设计的“绿色北京”主题海报。这肯定能吸引游客们的注意力，促使他们加入到活动中。
希望这些建议能对你有所帮助，并预祝活动圆满成功。
你真诚的，
李华
亮点词汇
launch v.发起
route n.路线
campaign n.(有计划的)活动
showcase v.展示
awareness n.意识
participate in 参与
范文赏析2
Dear Jim,
Knowing that you are launching an event named “Green Beijing”, I am more than pleased to offer you some advice.
Since everybody can play a part in helping Beijing go green, I suggest you start from your campus. You can collect original works of science and technology among your fellow students to help people transfer waste into treasure in their daily life. Then you can select some typical ones to display in the lecture hall with the banner “Green Beijing”. These brilliant works will surely inspire students and teachers to consider waste in a different light and take action to go green.
I wish the activity a great success and am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely;
Li Hua
亲爱的吉姆:
得知你正在发起一场以“绿色北京”为主题的活动，我非常乐意为你提供一些建议。
其实，每个人都可以为北京的绿色发展尽一份力，我建议你从你的校园开始。你可以收集同学们制作的有关科技的原创作品，帮助人们在日常生活中变废为宝。然后，你可以挑选出几个具有代表性的作品放在报告厅里进行展示，挂上“绿色北京”的横幅。 这些优秀的作品一定可以激励师生们从不同的角度看待废品，并采取行动走向绿色生活。
预祝活动圆满成功，期待你的早日回复。
你真诚的，
李华
亮点词汇
play a part in 发挥作用
original work 原创作品
transfer v. 转变
display v. 展示
consider v. 考虑
take action 采取行动
范文赏析3
Dear Jim,
Learning that you are planning an activity which is called “Green Beijing”, I am more than glad to offer you some suggestions on its organization.
To get as many students and teachers in school to know about the activity, you can set up a stand with the banner “Green Beijing" at the gate of the activity center. Students can get involved in the game by answering questions related to energy- saving and waste-disposal. Participants will be awarded a small prize as well as hands- on instructions and experience garbage sorting. You can also distribute brochures to passers-by, which inform people of the benefits of going green and give them tips for conserving resources.
Hope my advice can be of help and wish you success
Yours sincerely;
Li Hua
亲爱的吉姆：
得知你正在策划一场名为“绿色北京”的活动，我很乐意就活动的组织提出一些建议。
为了让更多师生了解这场活动，你可以在活动中心门口设立一个展台，挂上“绿色北京”的横幅。学生们可以通过回答与节能、废物处理有关的问题来参与游戏。参与者将获得小奖品，并得到实操指导，体验垃圾分类。你也可以向路人分发小册子，以宣传环保的益处，提供节约资源的建议。
希望我的建议能对你有所帮助，祝你成功!
你真诚的，
李华
亮点词汇
set up 建立
stand 摊位
get involved in 参加
related to 关于
disposal 处理
award 给予奖励
garbage sorting垃圾分类
brochure 小册子
inform sb.of sth.告知某人某事
conserve 保护
范文赏析4
Dear Jim,
I know that you are planning an event named “Green Bejjing” and I'd like to offer you some advice
To raise people's awareness of environmental protection, you can organize club members to pick up garbage in Sun Park. To attract more attention, you can uniformly wear T-Shirts with “Green Beijing” on them. I suggest you sick up garbage littered around the lake and put it into different types of trash cans so that they can be recycled quickly. Besides,you can try to persuade the tourists to remove their tents from the grassland to protect the landscape. These tasks may sound challenging, but they are really meaningful.
Hope my suggestions can help you and look forward to your good news!
Yours sincerely;
Li Hua
亲爱的吉姆：
得知你正在策划一场名为“绿色北京”的活动，我想给你一些建议。
为了提高人们的环保意识，你可以组织俱乐部成员在朝阳公园捡垃圾。为了得到更多的关注，你们可以统一穿上印有“绿色北京”字样的T 恤。我建议你们捡起散落在湖边的垃圾，并把它们放入不同类型的垃圾桶，这样 它们就可以被快速回收利用。此外，你可以试着说服游客把帐篷从草地上移开，以保护景观。这些任务可能听起来很有挑战性，但它们确实很有意义。
希望我的建议能帮到你，期待你的好消息!
你真诚的，
李华
亮点词汇
raise one's awareness 提高某人的意识
pick up 捡起
uniformly 一致地
recycle 循环利用
remove 移走
范文赏析5
Dear Jim,
Great to hear from you. Organizing an activity called “Green Beijing” sounds wonderful and l happen to have a few ideas which hopefully can be of some help.
To reduce pollution, it is necessary for everyone to play our roles. Thus, giving a lecture on garbage
亲爱的吉姆：
很高兴收到你的来信。组织一场以“绿色北京”为主题的活动听起来很棒，我刚好有一些想法，希望能对你有所帮助。
为了减少污染，我们每个人都必须发挥自己的作用。因此，举办关于垃圾分类的讲座是增强学生环保意识的好方法。学生们学到的不仅是垃圾分类 的方法，
classification can be a great way to raise students’ awareness of environmental protection. Students will learn not only how to sort waste but also the logic behind garbage classification so that they can make better sense of it. After this lecture, a follow-up garbage sorting competition can be organized to boost their interest and encourage more students to participate.
I hope the above suggestion can offer you some inspiration and let me know if you need further help.
Yours,
Li Hua
还有垃圾分类背后的逻辑，这样他们才能更好地理解它。讲座结束 后，可以接着组织一场垃圾分类比赛，以提高学生们的兴趣，并鼓励更多的 学生参与进来。
我希望以上的建议能给你提供一些启发，如果你需要进一步的帮助，请告诉我。
你真诚的，
李华
亮点词汇
happen to 碰巧
garbage classification 垃圾分类
make better sense of...更好地理解……
boost one's interest 提高某人的兴趣
inspiration 启发
further help 进一步帮助
范文赏析6
Dear Jim,
It is my great pleasure to hear from you.
Thanks for sharing your idea of “Green Beijing”, and I have some suggestions for your reference. As you know, Beijing is half-surrounded by rolling mountains, hence some people call it “Green Beijing”,among which Lingshan is the highest, boasting magnificent views and rich biodiversity. It's suggested that you organize schoolmates to spend a weekend hiking and camping there. Not only can you do some exercise but have a close-up observation of nature. Besides, if you invite a biology teacher to make some on-site introductions, this trip could be educational as well. In the end,you will be able to contribute to a greener Beijing by collecting garbage along your way.
Can not wait to hear your feedback. Please write to me soon.
Yours sincerely;
Li Hua
亲爱的吉姆：
非常高兴收到你的来信。
感谢你分享关于“绿色北京”的想法，我有一些建议可供你参考。如你所知，北京有一半都被连绵起伏的山脉包围着，因此有人称之为“绿色北京”,其中灵山最高，以壮丽的景色和丰富的生物多样性出名。我建议你组织同学们去那里远足和露营。你们不仅可以锻炼身体，还可以近距离观察自然。此外，如果你邀请生物老师进行现场讲解，这次旅程也就有了教育意义。最后，你们还能通过沿途收集垃圾为绿色北京做贡献。
迫不及待地想听到你的反馈。请尽快给我写信。
你真诚的，
李华
亮点词汇
pleasure n. 高兴
reference n. 参考
hence 因此，所以
biodiversity 生物多样性
have a close-up observation 近距离观察
on-site 现场
contribute to 做贡献
feedback 反馈
优点英语
三年（2021-2024）年高考英语小作文真题全解全析
专题04 2023年北京卷
真题原文
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，
内容包括：(1)活动形式 (2)活动内容
注 意：(1)词数100左右 (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim，_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
真题解析
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生站在李华的角度思考可以给出哪些能帮助英国好友 Jim 策划好以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动的建议，并用英文回一封电子邮件。邮件的内容必须包括活动形式和活动内容。
具体来看，题目创设了贴近现实生活的交际情景，明确了交际人物的活动背景与交际对象的身份，旨在考查学生的语言运用能力与解决生活问题的能力。因此，在构思具体的写作内容时，考生要结合个人生活经历，针对策划活动展开思考，运用所学知识，重点从活动形式和活动内容这两方面提出合理的建议。可通过补充细节，达到有效交际的目的。
考生在回复邮件时，需牢记应用文的写作要求：涵盖所有要点，详略得当；语言准确、得体，句式灵活；条理清晰，行文连贯。
在表达上，要注意 用建议式的语句，关注开头和结尾的交际用语。此外，要准确运用到与“建议”有关的关键词，如suggest,advise 等。具体写作时，可以按照以下四个步骤进行：审题立意，谋篇布局，组织语言，检查全文。
写作小贴士：
文章要覆盖所有的内容要点，并合理展开。
使用得体的交际用语，提供合理的建议。
恰当使用连接词以使文章衔接连贯。
范文赏析1
Dear Jim,
I'm delighted to know that you are launching a campaign with the theme of “Green Beijing” and I'm writing to offer you some suggestions.
Since you are the president of the Cycling Club,it's a great idea to organize a cycling trip to raise people's awareness of green travel. As for the route,you can start from Xidan and travel eastward to Sun Park, where you can stop and take a rest.Then you and your team members can showcase your carefully designed posters on the topic of “Green Beijing”. This can surely attract the attention of the tourists and encourage them to participate in the activity.
Hope these tips can be helpful and wish you every success for the event.
Yours sincerely;
Li Hua
亲爱的吉姆：
我很高兴了解到你正在发起一场以“绿色北京”为主题的活动，我写信是想给你一些建议。
考虑到你是自行车俱乐部的部长，组织一次骑行是个好主意，这可以增强人们关于绿色出行的意识。至于路线，你可以从西单出发，向东行进至朝阳公园，在那里你可以停下来休息。然后，你和团队成员可以展示你们精心设计的“绿色北京”主题海报。这肯定能吸引游客们的注意力，促使他们加入到活动中。
希望这些建议能对你有所帮助，并预祝活动圆满成功。
你真诚的，
李华
亮点词汇
launch v.发起
route n.路线
campaign n.(有计划的)活动
showcase v.展示
awareness n.意识
participate in 参与
范文赏析2
Dear Jim,
Knowing that you are launching an event named “Green Beijing”, I am more than pleased to offer you some advice.
Since everybody can play a part in helping Beijing go green, I suggest you start from your campus. You can collect original works of science and technology among your fellow students to help people transfer waste into treasure in their daily life. Then you can select some typical ones to display in the lecture hall with the banner “Green Beijing”. These brilliant works will surely inspire students and teachers to consider waste in a different light and take action to go green.
I wish the activity a great success and am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely;
Li Hua
亲爱的吉姆:
得知你正在发起一场以“绿色北京”为主题的活动，我非常乐意为你提供一些建议。
其实，每个人都可以为北京的绿色发展尽一份力，我建议你从你的校园开始。你可以收集同学们制作的有关科技的原创作品，帮助人们在日常生活中变废为宝。然后，你可以挑选出几个具有代表性的作品放在报告厅里进行展示，挂上“绿色北京”的横幅。 这些优秀的作品一定可以激励师生们从不同的角度看待废品，并采取行动走向绿色生活。
预祝活动圆满成功，期待你的早日回复。
你真诚的，
李华
亮点词汇
play a part in 发挥作用
original work 原创作品
transfer v. 转变
display v. 展示
consider v. 考虑
take action 采取行动
范文赏析3
Dear Jim,
Learning that you are planning an activity which is called “Green Beijing”, I am more than glad to offer you some suggestions on its organization.
To get as many students and teachers in school to know about the activity, you can set up a stand with the banner “Green Beijing" at the gate of the activity center. Students can get involved in the game by answering questions related to energy- saving and waste-disposal. Participants will be awarded a small prize as well as hands- on instructions and experience garbage sorting. You can also distribute brochures to passers-by, which inform people of the benefits of going green and give them tips for conserving resources.
Hope my advice can be of help and wish you success
Yours sincerely;
Li Hua
亲爱的吉姆：
得知你正在策划一场名为“绿色北京”的活动，我很乐意就活动的组织提出一些建议。
为了让更多师生了解这场活动，你可以在活动中心门口设立一个展台，挂上“绿色北京”的横幅。学生们可以通过回答与节能、废物处理有关的问题来参与游戏。参与者将获得小奖品，并得到实操指导，体验垃圾分类。你也可以向路人分发小册子，以宣传环保的益处，提供节约资源的建议。
希望我的建议能对你有所帮助，祝你成功!
你真诚的，
李华
亮点词汇
set up 建立
stand 摊位
get involved in 参加
related to 关于
disposal 处理
award 给予奖励
garbage sorting垃圾分类
brochure 小册子
inform sb.of sth.告知某人某事
conserve 保护
范文赏析4
Dear Jim,
I know that you are planning an event named “Green Bejjing” and I'd like to offer you some advice
To raise people's awareness of environmental protection, you can organize club members to pick up garbage in Sun Park. To attract more attention, you can uniformly wear T-Shirts with “Green Beijing” on them. I suggest you sick up garbage littered around the lake and put it into different types of trash cans so that they can be recycled quickly. Besides,you can try to persuade the tourists to remove their tents from the grassland to protect the landscape. These tasks may sound challenging, but they are really meaningful.
Hope my suggestions can help you and look forward to your good news!
Yours sincerely;
Li Hua
亲爱的吉姆：
得知你正在策划一场名为“绿色北京”的活动，我想给你一些建议。
为了提高人们的环保意识，你可以组织俱乐部成员在朝阳公园捡垃圾。为了得到更多的关注，你们可以统一穿上印有“绿色北京”字样的T 恤。我建议你们捡起散落在湖边的垃圾，并把它们放入不同类型的垃圾桶，这样 它们就可以被快速回收利用。此外，你可以试着说服游客把帐篷从草地上移开，以保护景观。这些任务可能听起来很有挑战性，但它们确实很有意义。
希望我的建议能帮到你，期待你的好消息!
你真诚的，
李华
亮点词汇
raise one's awareness 提高某人的意识
pick up 捡起
uniformly 一致地
recycle 循环利用
remove 移走
范文赏析5
Dear Jim,
Great to hear from you. Organizing an activity called “Green Beijing” sounds wonderful and l happen to have a few ideas which hopefully can be of some help.
To reduce pollution, it is necessary for everyone to play our roles. Thus, giving a lecture on garbage
亲爱的吉姆：
很高兴收到你的来信。组织一场以“绿色北京”为主题的活动听起来很棒，我刚好有一些想法，希望能对你有所帮助。
为了减少污染，我们每个人都必须发挥自己的作用。因此，举办关于垃圾分类的讲座是增强学生环保意识的好方法。学生们学到的不仅是垃圾分类 的方法，
classification can be a great way to raise students’ awareness of environmental protection. Students will learn not only how to sort waste but also the logic behind garbage classification so that they can make better sense of it. After this lecture, a follow-up garbage sorting competition can be organized to boost their interest and encourage more students to participate.
I hope the above suggestion can offer you some inspiration and let me know if you need further help.
Yours,
Li Hua
还有垃圾分类背后的逻辑，这样他们才能更好地理解它。讲座结束 后，可以接着组织一场垃圾分类比赛，以提高学生们的兴趣，并鼓励更多的 学生参与进来。
我希望以上的建议能给你提供一些启发，如果你需要进一步的帮助，请告诉我。
你真诚的，
李华
亮点词汇
happen to 碰巧
garbage classification 垃圾分类
make better sense of...更好地理解……
boost one's interest 提高某人的兴趣
inspiration 启发
further help 进一步帮助
范文赏析6
Dear Jim,
It is my great pleasure to hear from you.
Thanks for sharing your idea of “Green Beijing”, and I have some suggestions for your reference. As you know, Beijing is half-surrounded by rolling mountains, hence some people call it “Green Beijing”,among which Lingshan is the highest, boasting magnificent views and rich biodiversity. It's suggested that you organize schoolmates to spend a weekend hiking and camping there. Not only can you do some exercise but have a close-up observation of nature. Besides, if you invite a biology teacher to make some on-site introductions, this trip could be educational as well. In the end,you will be able to contribute to a greener Beijing by collecting garbage along your way.
Can not wait to hear your feedback. Please write to me soon.
Yours sincerely;
Li Hua
亲爱的吉姆：
非常高兴收到你的来信。
感谢你分享关于“绿色北京”的想法，我有一些建议可供你参考。如你所知，北京有一半都被连绵起伏的山脉包围着，因此有人称之为“绿色北京”,其中灵山最高，以壮丽的景色和丰富的生物多样性出名。我建议你组织同学们去那里远足和露营。你们不仅可以锻炼身体，还可以近距离观察自然。此外，如果你邀请生物老师进行现场讲解，这次旅程也就有了教育意义。最后，你们还能通过沿途收集垃圾为绿色北京做贡献。
迫不及待地想听到你的反馈。请尽快给我写信。
你真诚的，
李华
亮点词汇
pleasure n. 高兴
reference n. 参考
hence 因此，所以
biodiversity 生物多样性
have a close-up observation 近距离观察
on-site 现场
contribute to 做贡献
feedback 反馈
优点英语