第二单元话题写作专项
【话题分析】
本单元话题是“谈论有关旅行的见闻和感受”,写作任务主要是关于假期活动,写作时注意时态。
【素材积累】
【词汇】
1.去旅行
2.名胜
3.历史博物馆
4.了解
5.京剧
6.烤鸭
7.玩得开心
8.during the summer holiday
9.many ancient things
10.hope to do sth.
【开头句】
I went on a trip to Beijing with my parents during the summer holiday.
【中间句】
1.We visited many places of interest there.
2.And I learned a lot about the history and culture of our country.
3.It's really a Chinese treasure.
【结尾句】
We had a good time in Beijing.
【写作典例】
李明暑假和父母去北京旅行,他们参观了历史博物馆等名胜;看了中国的国粹——京剧;吃了北京的特产——北京烤鸭。假如你是李明,描述一下自己的北京之行。
要求:1.词数70左右;
2.根据所给信息可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。
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【写作点拨】
1.体裁: 文
2.人称:第 人称
3.时态: 时
【写作提纲】
【范文点评】
①I went on a trip to Beijing with my parents during the summer holiday.②We visited many places of interest there.For example, we visited the History Museum.I saw many ancient things.And I learned a lot about the history of our country. We went to see the Beijing Opera in the theater.It's really a Chinese treasure.I like the music and the colourful clothes.I also ate some delicious food.Beijing Duck is a kind of wonderful food.I hope to eat more next time. ③We had a good time in Beijing. ①写出了旅行的目的地,引入正题 ②运用了不同的短语和动词描述了北京之行,时态准确,逻辑思路清晰,并且适当发挥,使文章内容更充实 ③写出了自己的感受,对全文进行总结
【拓展应用】
上周末你是怎么度过的 和父母或朋友一起去短途旅行,或者……总之,一定过得很开心吧!请你根据下列提示,写一篇70词左右的短文。
提示:1.Where did you go last weekend When did you go there
2.Who did you go with What did you see there
3.How was your weekend
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参考答案
素材积累
1.go on a trip
2.places of interest
3.the History Museum
4.learn about
5.Beijing Opera
6.Beijing Duck/Peking Duck
7.had a good time
8.在暑假期间
9.很多古代的东西
10.希望做某事
【写作点拨】
1.记叙 2.一 3.一般过去
拓展应用
Last weekend, I went to Jiuhua Mountain with my parents.On Saturday morning, we went there by bus.About two hours later, we arrived at Jiuhua Mountain.Then we began to climb the mountain.On the way, I saw many visitors.They looked happy.And there were many tall trees.My weekend was great.I was very tired but happy.I hope to spend my weekend like this.It was fun and exciting.
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