第一单元话题写作专项
【话题分析】
本单元的话题以旅行为主,主要涉及旅行计划、经历及景点介绍等。
【素材积累】
【词汇】
1.参观
2.乘飞机
3.在第一天
4.拍照
5.玩得开心
【开头句】
I will take a tour to... by plane with my parents.
【中间句】
We will stay there for three days.
On the first day, we will visit ...
We will take many photos there.
【结尾句】
I think I will have a good time in...
【写作典例】
假设你要到北京旅行,请你根据下列提示,以“My Plan for a Beijing Trip”为题写一个旅游计划。70词左右。
参考词汇:the Great Wall, Tian'anmen Square, the Palace Museum
提示:1.How do you get there
2.Where do you want to go
3.What do you think of the trip
My Plan for a Beijing Trip
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【写作点拨】
1.体裁: 文
2.人称:第 人称
3.时态: 时
【写作提纲】
【范文点评】
My Plan for a Beijing Trip ① I will take a tour to Beijing by plane with my parents.②We will stay there for three days. On the first day, we will visit my uncle and aunt. They live in Beijing. On the second day, we will go to the Great Wall with my uncle and aunt. On the third day, we will go to Tian'anmen Square and the Palace Museum. We will take many photos there. ③This is my plan. I think I will have a good time in Beijing. ①开门见山,写出了旅行的方式 ②去哪里是计划的关键内容,作者按三天写出了计划,逻辑通畅、思路清晰 ③直接点题,写出对假期的期盼
【拓展应用】
假如你是李明,下个月你的笔友Sam要到张家口旅游。请你根据下面表格的信息,给他写一封信,向他介绍河北著名的城市张家口。
张家口概况 位于河北省西北部,风景优美
历史悠久,有很多历史遗迹
北方的滑雪胜地,崇礼、赤城有华北地区最大的天然滑雪场
近年来变化巨大
注意:1.词数:70左右。短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数;
2.短文须包括所有要点,不要逐词翻译,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺;
3.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
参考词汇:historic sites历史遗迹;ski resort 滑雪场
Dear Sam,
I am glad to introduce Zhangjiakou to you. ________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Ming
参考答案
素材积累
1.take a tour
2.by plane
3.on the first day
4.take photos
5.have a good time
【写作点拨】
1.说明 2.一 3.一般将来
拓展应用
Dear Sam,
I am glad to introduce Zhangjiakou to you. Zhangjiakou is in the northwest of Hebei. It's a very beautiful city. It has a long history. There are many historic sites there. Chongli and Chicheng have the biggest ski resorts in North China. In winter, a lot of people will ski in those places. These years, there are a lot of changes in Zhangjiakou.I hope to see you in Zhangjiakou.
Yours,
Li Ming
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