(共22张PPT)
Integrated skills(Ⅱ)
Expressing your opinion about
plastic surgery
Book1Unit4 Looking good, feeling good
Learning aims
Learning aims
★ Summarize the features of the PRE structure;
★Write an argument essay to express your opinion on
“plastic surgery”;
★ Develop a right sense and value of beauty.
Lead-in
Recently, Jennifer’s class have had a heated discussion about whether teenagers should go on diets to lose weight. Laura, Jennifer’s classmates, wrote an article where she expressed her opinion about dieting.
In order to keep a slim figure and to be more attractive in appearance, some teenagers, especially girls,would like to lose weight by skipping meals. In my opinion,dieting is not good for them.
First,dieting is harmful to teenagers’ health. For example,if a teenage girl eats less than what her body needs, her metabolism will slow down because there is not so much food to be taken in each day. Second,dieting may affect our lives negatively. With much pressure from study,teenagers need to be very energetic to face severe competitions in their study. Dieting will surely reduce their energy and in turn affect their lives negatively.
As an old saying goes, ‘Health is priceless’.I believe that dieting is not advisable for teenagers.
Let’s explore
Is dieting good or bad
In order to keep a slim figure and to be more attractive in appearance, some teenagers, especially girls,would like to lose weight by skipping meals. In my opinion,dieting is not good for them.
Let’s explore
1. What is Laura’s opinion about dieting
1. 观点明确:不能模棱两可。
2. 时态:以一般现在时为主
3. 人称:第一人称或第三人称
1. 观点明确:不能模棱两可。
2. 时态:以一般现在时为主
3. 人称:第一人称或第三人称
First,dieting is harmful to teenagers’ health. For example,if a teenage girl eats less than what her body needs, her metabolism will slow down because there is not so much food to be taken in each day. Second,dieting may affect our lives negatively. With much pressure from study,teenagers need to be very energetic to face severe competitions in their study. Dieting will surely reduce their energy and in turn affect their lives negatively.
Let’s explore
2. Why is Laura against dieting
1. 观点明确:不能模棱两可。
2. 时态:以一般现在时为主
3. 人称:第一人称或第三人称
Linking words
(连接词)
First,dieting is harmful to teenagers’ health. For example,if a teenage girl eats less than what her body needs, her metabolism will slow down because there is not so much food to be taken in each day. Second,dieting may affect our lives negatively. With much pressure from study,teenagers need to be very energetic to face severe competitions in their study. Dieting will surely reduce their energy and in turn affect their lives negatively.
Let’s explore
3. How does Laura support (支持) her reasons
Evidence(论据)
A fact (事实)
An example (例子)
In order to keep a slim figure and to be more attractive in appearance, many people, especially girls,would like to lose weight by skipping meals. In my opinion,dieting is not good for most people.
First,dieting is harmful to people’s health,especiallyfor teenagers. . If a teenage girl eats less than what her body needs, her metabolism will slow down because there is not so much food to be taken in each day. Second,dieting may affect our lives negatively. In this modern society,people need to be very energetic to face severe competitions in their study or work. Dieting will surely reduce their energy and in turn affect their lives negatively.
As an old saying goes, ‘Health is priceless’.I believe that dieting is not advisable for teenagers.
Let’s explore
1. 观点明确:不能模棱两可。
2. 时态:以一般现在时为主
3. 人称:第一人称或第三人称
Structure(结构)
Beginning
Body
Ending
Main Point (观点)
≧2 Reasons (Facts/Example......)
Conclusion (总结)
PRE
Writing
目前整容变得日益流行,假如你是高一(1)班学生苏华,你们班就整容的话题进行了热烈的讨论,有的同学支持,有的同学反对。
请你以 “Plastic surgery”为题写一篇文章。
内容包括:
你对整容的看法,支持还是反对;
给出支持或反对的理由;
3.总结。
注意:词数100左右
Useful phrases
1.赞成
2.改善外表
3.做整形手术
4.治疗疤痕
5.回归正常生活
6.建立自信
7.获得更多机会
8.反对
9.浪费金钱
10.得不到满意的效果
11.动手术
12.对......有害
13.严重的健康风险
14.遭受健康问题困扰
15.副作用
16.对......上瘾
be for/in support of
improve appearance
take/have plastic surgery
treat burn marks
return to a normal life
build self-confidence
acquire more opportunities
be against/opposed to
a waste of money
can’t get satisfactory results
go under the knife
be harmful to
serious health risks
suffer health problems
side effect
get addicted to
Beginning(phenomenon+main point)
1.我们正生活在一个人们越来越关注容貌社会里。(定语从句)
We are living in a society ____________________________________________.
2.如今,选择整形来改变容貌的人们的数量正在持续增加。(定语从句)
Nowadays, the number of people ____________________________________
______________________ is constantly increasing.
3.然而,在我看来,那样做不明智。(it做形式主语)
However, in my opinion, _____________________.
who choose to have plastic surgery to
change their appearance
it is unwise to do that
where people pay more and more attention to their
appearance
Reason1:
Plastic surgery is harmful to/does harm to health.
Example:
上个月, 据报道,一位著名的女明星整容手术失败后遭受严重的健康问题的困扰。(定语从句)
Last month,__________________ a famous female star
____________________________________ suffered serious health problems.
Body(reason+example&facts(data......))
who had failed plastic surgery operations
it was reported that
Last month, a famous female star was reported to have failed plastic surgery operations ,suffering serious health problems.
句式升级
Reason2:
Data:
根据一项调查,2021年,美国人在美容整形上的消费超过146亿美元。
According to a survey, Americans
_________________________on plastic surgery in 2021.
spent over 14.6 billion dollars
wallet-unfriendly
Body(reason+example&facts(data......))
Plastic surgery is very expensive.
devoted 14.6 billion dollars to
Reason3:
Plastic surgery is addictive(容易使人上瘾的).
who undergo plastic surgery once
人们对整容上瘾的原因是他们不能接受自己容貌上的不完美。(the reason why......is that...... )
The reason why _______________________________ is that ________________________________________________________.
经历一次整形的人们之后更可能会进行更多的手术来改变身体的其他部分。
People _____________________________are more likely to get more operations to change other parts of their body afterwards.
people are addicted to plastic surgery
they can’t accept any imperfection on their apperance.
Body(reason+example&facts(data......))
Facts:
There is a good chance that people undergoing/experiecing plastic surgery once will get more operations to change other parts of their body afterwards.
句式升级
Reason:
Plastic surgery can help people improve their appearance.
整形手术可以帮助那些有烧伤疤痕的或天生缺陷(birth defect)的人回归正常的生活。
Plastic surgery can help people
_______________________________ return a normal life.
who have burn marks or birth defect
Body(reason+example&facts(data......))
Conclusion
俗话说,不要以貌取人。
________________________________________________________________
我们应该培养好的内在品质,这比改变我们的容貌更重要。(which引导非限制性定语从句)
We should develop good internal qualities ,
________________________________________________________________
There is a saying that goes, ‘Don’t judge a book by its cover.’
(quotation)
which is more important than changing our physical appearance.
As a saying goes, ‘Don’t judge a book by its cover.’
We are supposed develop good internal qualities ,which outweigh our physical appearance .
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Writing
My opinion on plastic surgery
Your mainpoint:
Reason:
(choose one)
Facts&example......
Check
in terms of
Grammar
Spelling
Choice of words
handwriting
Structure
Writing
Let’s revise (修正)
Groupwork
Requirements (15 points) Self Check Peer Check (互评) Comments
(评价)
Structure (结构) (3 points)
Opinion(赞同还是不赞同) (1 point)
Reasons (至少2个理由) (3 points)
Evidence (论据) (3 points)
Language (Sentences & grammar) (句子&语法) (3 points)
Fluency &logic (流畅&逻辑) (2 points)
(总分) Total score: _____ (自评) ______(互评)
Share your writing with us!
Let’s revise (修正)
Groupwork
Requirements (15 points) Self Check Peer Check (互评) Comments
(评价)
Structure (结构) (3 points)
Opinion(赞同还是不赞同) (1 point)
Reasons (是否合理) (3 points)
Evidence (论据) (3 points)
Language (Sentences & grammar) (句子&语法) (3 points)
Fluency &logic (流畅&逻辑) (2 points)
(总分) Total score: _____/12 (自评) ______/12(互评)后出现
Homework
Finish your argument essay.