牛津译林版（2019）必修 第二册Unit 3 Festivals and customs Integrated skills(2)书面表达讲评课件(共18张PPT)

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中国传统节日(春节/重阳节)介绍
Learning objectives:By the end of this section, students will be able to: ●analyze the compositions of the students; ●correct the mistakes they made in their compositions;
●take positive attitudes toward traditional Chinese culture;
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书面表达（15分）假定你是李华,你的笔友Alex对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣，给你发电子邮件请你介绍一个中国传统节日，请给他回复。内容包括: 1.节日的时间; 2.主要庆祝活动; 3.邀请他亲身体验。注意: 1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Dear Alex,
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Yours
LiHua
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典型错误
1.语篇结构
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2.句子结构
1).After that, people sit down together watch the Spring Festival Gala.
2).Children can get lucky money from their parents and relatives, this is the happiest time for them.
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3.谓语
3).It is aims to celebrate the ending of winter and the coming of spring.
4).I sincerely that you can come here in China to experience it for yourself.
5).It also help us remember our traditional culture.
6).You told me that you hope to learn more about traditional Chinese festivals.
7).So you can called it the Festival for the Elderly.
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4.单词拼写/词语搭配
8).I’m writing to introduce to you one of my favourite festival—the Spring Festival.
9).Double Ninth in Chinese means a long and health life.
10).I am so happy to know that you are interest in traditional Chinese festivals.
11).Many people climb mountains in this day.
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5.其他问题
12).When the Spring Festival comes, There will be all kinds of activities, such as......
13).The reason why I like the Spring Festival is that there are many activities. Such as cleaning up houses and putting up the Spring Festival couplets.
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（亮点与不足）
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佳句摘录
1.This is also a rare occasion for family reunion, which people look forward to during a year.(徐思菡)
2.Children can get lucky money from their parents and relatives, so this is the happiest time for them.(陈可心)
3.It is the happiest time that children recieve lucky money from parents and relatives.(王艳)
4.The whole family gather around the television to watch the Spring Festival Gala.(谭敏)
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他山之石
1.This is a time for family reunions, visiting relatives and friends and exchanging greetings for the coming New Year.
2.Dragon and lion dances are formed by a group of people, some of whom manage the "dragon" and the "lion", while some beat the drums.
3.It is on the eve of the New Year that decorations like red paper-cuttings, lanterns, or spring couplets are put up.
4.There are various festivities during the Double Ninth Festival,ranging from sightseeing,climbing a high mountain,appreciating chrysanthemums,planting zhuyu (a kind of plant),eating Chongyang cakes,to drinking chrysanthemum wine.
5.Activities, including autumn outings, sightseeing and mountain climbing, are organized during the festival for older, retired people so that they can enjoy nature.
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Homework
假定你是李华，你的加拿大笔友Dave想了解中国的传统节日端午节，请回复他的电子邮件，介绍端午节及并邀请对方一起过端午节。
1.端午节的时间及起源（农历五月初五）；
2.端午节的习俗；
3.邀请对方一起过端午节。
注意：1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯.
Dear Dave,
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Yours sincerely, Li Hua
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他山之石
1.This is a time for family reunions, visiting relatives and friends and exchanging greetings for the coming New Year.
2.Dragon and lion dances are formed by a group of people, some of whom manage the "dragon" and the "lion", while some beat the drums.
3.It is on the eve of the New Year that decorations like red paper-cuttings, lanterns, or spring couplets are put up.
4.There are various festivities during the Double Ninth Festival,ranging from sightseeing,climbing a high mountain,appreciating chrysanthemums,planting zhuyu (a kind of plant),eating Chongyang cakes,to drinking chrysanthemum wine.
5.Activities, including autumn outings, sightseeing and mountain climbing, are organized during the festival for older, retired people so that they can enjoy nature.
鉴
Inherit the Spring Festival,and carry forward Chinese culture.
传承春节 弘扬中华文化
Respect, reverence , cherish and care for the elderly.
尊老敬老爱老护老
Salute to the patriotic heroes.
向爱国英雄致敬
结
Thank you !