Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes.话题写作专训 发表观点 分层作业 人教版九年级全一册（含答案）

第七单元话题写作专训——发表观点
【写作任务】
Parents drive their children into a forest and drop them off. The children have to find their way back home all by themselves. It's called “dropping(放生)”. It may sound crazy, but it is a tradition in the Netherlands. Does this sound like a good idea or a terrible idea
　　在本周末的英语活动课上,老师给出了以上这段文字,并要求大家就这个话题进行讨论。请你根据下列提示,选择其中一方的观点,写一篇发言稿,与同学们交流。
理由 ▲独自完成一次旅行是令人兴奋的; ▲沿途观赏花朵、小动物等是有趣的; ▲这是学习自己解决问题的好机会; ▲孩子们会变得独立、勇敢。 理由 ▲可能会迷路; ▲可能会遭到野生动物的攻击; ▲一些孩子会感到害怕,不利于心理健康; ▲学习应该是一个有趣或享受的过程。
写作要求:
1.发言稿须选择其中一方的观点,可作适当发挥;
2.条理清晰,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3.词数不少于80。
参考词汇:attack攻击;mental health心理健康
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【指点迷津】
审　　题
时态:一般现在时
人称:第一人称,第三人称
小贴士:家庭是我们的第一所学校,父母是我们的第一任老师。每对父母都有自己不同的教养方式。你有怎样的父母呢 是在各方面都将你照顾得无微不至的父母呢 还是既温和又权威地引导你健康、快乐成长的海豚式父母
点　　拨
　　该篇写作要求学生就某一现象,发表自己的看法,属于议论文。题目给了两方的观点,写作时只需要选择其中一方的观点(同意或是不同意)即可。议论文的结构通常可以安排为总——分——总或是总——分。
总:提出自己的观点、见解或立场,整篇文章都要围绕这一主题展开;
分:给出自己持有这一观点的理由;
总:最后进行总结(这部分可以视情况而省略)。
【谋篇布局】
以支持“放生”做法为例,我们给出以下思维导图,以供参考。
【语料储备】
Phrases
1.in one's opinion　　　 2.what's more
3.make one's own decision
4.on one's own 5.at risk
6.in trouble 7.in the difficult time
8.get lost 9.lose one's way
10.depend on 11.look after
12.take care of 13.grow up
14.be good for 15.get through
16.build/ develop one's independence
17.deal with
Sentences
表明观点:
1.In my opinion, ...
2.I totally agree...
3.I support this idea.
4.From my point of view, ...
5.To my mind, it is necessary...
6.It is a good idea to...
陈述理由:
1.It is enjoyable to...
2.Besides, it is a good chance for us to...
3.What's more, it can also teach us to...
4.Parents should allow children to...
5.It is good / bad for children's development.
6.The purpose / goal is to build their independence.
7.We should work out problems on our own.
8.It's important to learn how to deal with matters by ourselves.
【自我展示】
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参考答案
自我展示
Possible Version 1:
I strongly support the idea of “dropping”. I think it's exciting for us to manage a trip in the forest by ourselves. It will also be enjoyable to see different plants, flowers and cute animals along the way. Besides, trying a trip by ourselves is not only a good chance for us to learn to work out problems of our own, but also a good way to help us build independence. What's more, it can teach us to be brave in the hard time.
In my opinion, children should be educated not to depend on their parents too much. At the same time, parents should provide children with more chances to deal with different problems.
Possible Version 2:
I think “dropping” is a terrible idea, even if it does help us grow up. It's very dangerous for children to walk without parents in the forest. Wild animals may attack them and they may get lost. It would make them feel scared, so I don't think it is good for the mental health of young children. Learning should be a fun thing, not a scary thing. What's more, there are many ways for children to learn and grow up.
In my opinion, it's not necessary to put children at risk when there are many other ways to develop their independence.