第十单元话题写作专项
【话题分析】
本单元以“做决定”为话题,要求能针对具体的情况进行假设并讨论事情的结果,给存在问题的人提供建议,帮助其解决问题等。与此相关的写作任务往往围绕提建议展开。写作时,注意if引导的条件状语从句及should/shouldn't等词的正确运用。
【写作典例】
生活是如此地美好,人生有无尽的欢乐,但也有诸多烦恼。作为中学生的你,最大的烦恼是什么 你打算如何去解决 请你以“My Biggest Problem”为题写一篇英语短文。
写作要求:
1.词数80左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可适当发挥,语言通顺,行文连贯;
3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。
【写作指导】
1.陈述自己的情况,描述自己最大的问题,总结解决问题的办法;
2.时态:以一般现在时和一般将来时为主;
3.注意事项:注意段落布局和恰当使用复合句、连接词来增加得分点。
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【写作提纲】
【写作范文】
My Biggest Problem As middle school students, we have a lot of happiness, but we also have many problems.We shouldn't keep them to ourselves.For me, my biggest problem is from my parents.These days, my parents argue and fight a lot because of the chores.I really want to run away. After thinking twice, I decide to solve this problem.Firstly, I'll tell my parents my feelings.Secondly, I'll try my best to do more housework so that they can have more time to relax.In the end, I will make them sit down to have a good talk. The worst thing is to do nothing.I'm sure my parents will get on well with each other soon if I do all these things. ①首先以“As middle school students...”来表明每位中学生都有快乐和烦恼。接着表明自己的观点“We shouldn't keep them to ourselves.”为第二段积极解决问题埋下伏笔。然后点题引出“我”最大的问题是什么。 ②运用Firstly、Secondly、In the end有条理地表达自己面对问题所采取的方法与措施。 ③总结。如果“我”采取了以上措施,问题就可以得以解决。
【拓展应用】
假设你是学生张磊,刚刚收到笔友Joe的求助信。请你根据来信内容给他提供一些帮助和建议。
Dear Zhang Lei,
I get into a new school and meet some problems.Can you help me
I'm too shy to make new friends.When I have difficulty with my homework, I don't know who I can ask for help.What should I do
Joe
要求:
1.语言通顺,行文连贯,内容充实;
2.80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Joe,
I'm happy that you talk to me about your problems.Here is my advice.
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Yours,
Zhang Lei